高一年级英语短文改错与书面表达练习题30题

高一年级英语短文改错与书面表达练习题30题
1. I have two book. I like read them.
- book 改为books。

错误类型为名词单复数错误。

book 是可数名词，前面有two 修饰，要用复数形式。

- read 改为reading。

错误类型为动词用法错误。

like doing sth 表示喜欢做某事。

2. She is very happy yesterday.
- is 改为was。

错误类型为动词时态错误。

yesterday 是过去的时间，要用一般过去时。

3. He run very fastly.
- fastly 改为fast。

错误类型为形容词副词误用。

fast 本身既可以作形容词也可以作副词，没有fastly 这种形式。

4. There are a lot of apple on the table.
- apple 改为apples。

错误类型为名词单复数错误。

apple 是可数名词，a lot of 修饰可数名词复数。

5. I am more taller than him.
- 去掉more。

错误类型为形容词比较级误用。

taller 已经是比较级形式，不需要再加more。

6. 书面表达：请以“My Hobbies”为题，介绍自己的兴趣爱好。

写作要点：（1）你的兴趣爱好有哪些；（2）你为什么喜欢这些兴趣爱好；（3）这些兴趣爱好给你带来了什么。

字数要求：100 词左右。

参考范文：My Hobbies
I have many hobbies. I like reading books because it can enrich my knowledge. I also like playing basketball. It makes me stronger and healthier. In addition, I enjoy listening to music. It helps me relax after a busy day. These hobbies bring me a lot of fun and make my life more colorful.
7. 书面表达：请介绍你最喜欢的一项运动。

写作要点：（1）这项运动是什么；（2）你为什么喜欢它；（3）你通常什么时候进行这项运动。

字数要求：80 词左右。

参考范文：My Favorite Sport
My favorite sport is swimming. I like it because it can make me feel cool in summer. I usually go swimming on weekends. Swimming is good for my health and it makes me happy.
8. 书面表达：请描述你的一次课外活动经历。

写作要点：（1）活动是什么；（2）你在活动中做了什么；（3）你从这次活动中学到了什么。

字数要求：120 词左右。

参考范文：An After-school Activity
Last week, I took part in a volunteer activity. We went to a nursing home to help the old people. We cleaned their rooms, talked with them and performed some shows for them. From this activity, I learned that we should respect and care for the old people. I also realized that helping others can bring us happiness.
9. 书面表达：请介绍你的一位好朋友。

写作要点：（1）你的好朋
友是谁；（2）他/她的外貌和性格特点；（3）你们经常一起做什么。

字数要求：100 词左右。

参考范文：My Good Friend
My good friend is Lily. She is a beautiful girl with long hair and big eyes. She is very kind and friendly. We often go shopping and study together. She always helps me when I am in trouble. I am very lucky to have such a good friend.
10. 书面表达：请谈谈你对高中生活的期望。

写作要点：（1）你期望在高中学习到什么；（2）你希望参加哪些课外活动；（3）你对未来的规划。

字数要求：120 词左右。

参考范文：My Expectations for High School Life
I expect to learn more knowledge and skills in high school. I hope to join some clubs and take part in various activities. For example, I want to join the English club to improve my English. In the future, I hope to go to
a good university and become a useful person.
11. I went to Paris in last summer.
- 去掉in。

“last/next/this/that+时间名词”前不用介词。

12. A book is an useful tool for learning.
- an 改为a。

“useful”是以辅音音素开头，应用“a”。

13. I enjoy read books in my free time.
- read 改为reading。

“enjoy doing sth”是固定用法。

14. Seen from the top of the mountain, the city looks beautiful.
- Seen 改为Seeing。

现在分词seeing 表示主动，句子主语the city 与see 是主动关系。

15. He is interested in play basketball.
- play 改为playing。

“be interested in doing sth”是固定用法。

16. 书面表达：请以“一次难忘的旅行”为题，写一篇短文。

描述你的旅行经历，包括旅行的地点、时间、和谁一起去的、做了什么以及你的感受。

字数要求100 词左右。

写作思路和结构要求：首先点明主题，介绍旅行的地点和时间。

然后描述和谁一起去以及在旅行中做了什么。

最后表达自己的感受。

参考范文：An Unforgettable Trip
I went to Beijing last summer vacation with my parents. We visited many famous places like the Great Wall and the Forbidden City. We took photos and tasted delicious local food. I was deeply impressed by the beauty and history of Beijing. This trip was really unforgettable.
17. 书面表达：以“一次文化交流活动”为题，写一篇短文。

讲述你参加的一次文化交流活动，包括活动的内容、你学到了什么以及你的体会。

字数要求120 词左右。

写作思路和结构要求：开头介绍文化交流活动的主题和时间。

接着详细描述活动内容。

最后阐述自己学到的东西和体会。

参考范文：A Cultural Exchange Activity
Last month, I took part in a cultural exchange activity. We showed our traditional handicrafts and introduced our culture to foreign friends. They
also shared their cultures with us. I learned a lot about different cultures and realized the importance of cultural exchanges. This activity was very meaningful.
18. 书面表达：请描述一次你难忘的经历，如参加比赛、帮助他人等。

包括事情的经过、你的感受和收获。

字数要求110 词左右。

写作思路和结构要求：先说明难忘的经历是什么。

然后具体描述事情经过。

最后表达自己的感受和收获。

参考范文：An Unforgettable Experience
I once took part in a volunteer activity. We went to an orphanage and helped the children there. We played games with them and gave them presents. I felt very happy to see their smiles. Through this activity, I learned the importance of helping others and gained a sense of satisfaction.
19. 书面表达：以“一次有趣的冒险”为题，写一篇短文。

叙述你的冒险经历，包括冒险的地点、遇到的挑战以及你的应对方法。

字数要求100 词左右。

写作思路和结构要求：开篇点明冒险的地点。

接着描述遇到的挑战。

最后说明自己的应对方法和感受。

参考范文：An Interesting Adventure
I went to a forest for an adventure. I met many difficulties such as getting lost and facing wild animals. But I kept calm and used my knowledge to find the way out. This adventure was very exciting and taught me to be brave.
20. 书面表达：描述一次你参加的学校活动，如运动会、文艺演出等。

包括活动的内容、你的表现以及你的感受。

字数要求120 词左右。

写作思路和结构要求：先介绍学校活动的名称和时间。

然后描述活动内容和自己的表现。

最后表达自己的感受。

参考范文：A School Activity
I took part in the school sports meeting last week. I participated in the long jump and did my best. There were many exciting events and all the students were very enthusiastic. I felt proud of myself and also learned the spirit of teamwork.
21. Although he is young, but he is very talented.
答案解析：这句话中“Although”和“but”不能同时使用，应去掉“but”。

22. The book which I bought it yesterday is very interesting.
答案解析：这句话中“bought”和“it”重复，应去掉“it”。

23. Neither he nor I are good at singing.
答案解析：“neither...nor...”连接两个主语时，谓语动词与靠近的主语一致，应将“are”改为“am”。

24. Each of the students have a book.
答案解析：“each of...”作主语时，谓语动词用单数，应将“have”改为“has”。

25. This is the factory where we visited last week.
答案解析：这句话中“where”应改为“that/which”，因为先行词“factory”在定语从句中作宾语。

26.书面表达：请以“对未来的展望”为主题，写一篇短文。

写作方向：可以从科技发展、环境保护、教育进步等方面展开想象，描述未来的生活。

语言表达建议：使用一些表示预测和展望的词汇和句型，如“in the future”“it is likely that”等。

参考范文：In the future, technology will develop at an astonishing speed. We will have more intelligent robots to help us with various tasks. In terms of environmental protection, people will pay more attention to it and take more effective measures. The air will be fresher and the water cleaner. Education will also make great progress. Students will be able to learn in a more personalized and efficient way. It is likely that we will live
a better life in the future.
27.书面表达：以“未来的交通”为主题，写一篇短文。

写作方向：想象未来的交通工具是什么样子，交通方式会有哪些变化。

语言表达建议：运用形容词比较级和最高级来描述未来交通的优势。

参考范文：In the future, transportation will be completely different. The vehicles will be more intelligent and energy-efficient. They may run on clean energy and produce no pollution. Compared with today's transportation, future transportation will be faster and more comfortable. The traffic system will be highly automated, reducing the occurrence of traffic accidents. In short, future transportation will bring us more
convenience.
28.书面表达：“未来的城市”为主题，写一篇短文。

写作方向：描述未来城市的面貌，包括建筑、公共设施等方面。

语言表达建议：使用一些现在分词和过去分词作定语，使文章更加生动。

参考范文：In the future, cities will be magnificent. The buildings will be taller and more beautiful. Some buildings will be designed with unique shapes, attracting people's attention. The public facilities will be more advanced and convenient. There will be more parks and green spaces, making the city more livable. Surrounded by green plants, people will enjoy a better life.
29.书面表达：以“未来的教育”为主题，写一篇短文。

写作方向：思考未来的教育模式会有哪些变化，学生如何学习。

语言表达建议：使用一些虚拟语气的句子来表达对未来教育的期望。

参考范文：In the future, education may change greatly. If students could choose their own learning methods and schedules, they would be more motivated. Teachers might become facilitators rather than traditional instructors. With the help of advanced technology, students could learn anywhere and anytime. It is hoped that future education will be more personalized and effective.
30.书面表达：以“未来的生活方式”为主题，写一篇短文。

写作方向：探讨未来人们的生活方式会有哪些不同，如工作、休闲等方面。

语言表达建议：使用一些连接词来使文章逻辑更加清晰，如
“however”“moreover”等。

参考范文：In the future, people's lifestyle will change significantly. People may work from home more often, which saves time and energy. Moreover, they will have more leisure time to pursue their hobbies. However, they will also face some challenges, such as the need to adapt to new technologies. In general, future life will be full of opportunities and challenges.。