(英语)初三英语书面表达试题类型及其解题技巧及解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·西安市铁一中学中考模拟）由于父母的溺爱，现在许多孩子基本不做学习以外的事情，导致独立生活能力不强。

请你根据以下建议；
自己的事情自己做；家里得事情帮着做；学校的事情抢着做，谈谈作为中学生，我们应该如何培养自己的独立能力。

要求；1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范2. 字数70 字左右（短文的开头已经给出，不计入总字数）
As middle school students, it's very important for us to independent. What should we do to make
us
independent?___________________________________________________________________【答案】As middle school students, it's very important for us to independent. What should we do to make us independent?
First, let's begin with our own things. It’s our job to clean our own rooms and make our beds. Second, help with housework. We can help cook or clean the house in our free time. Doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves. Third, learn actively. We should learn by ourselves and finish our homework on time. Finally, think about things by ourselves. We sometimes need to make plans or decisions alone. Don’t always depend on others.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈作为中学生，我们应该如何培养自己的独立能力。

【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：it's very important for us to……, It’s our job to……, We can….., We should……, We sometimes need to……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了作为中学生，独立很重要，接下来介绍我们应如何培养自己的独立能力，最后指出不要总是依靠其他人。

此处begin with, make one’s bed, help with, look after, on time, need to do sth, depend on等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

2．（·北京中考模拟）善待他人是中华民族的传统美德。

某英文网站正在开展以“团结友善”为
主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，说说你对善待
他人的看法，你曾经友善待人的经历，以及你的感受。

提示词语： important, help, happy
提示问题：● What do you think of being k ind to others?
● What did you do?
● How do you feel?
Being kind to others is a traditional virtue （美德）of Chinese people. ______
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【答案】Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. I think it’s very important for everyone. When I started middle school, my friend Peter failed in the
English exam last year. He was so sad that he wanted to give up. When I knew this, I encouraged him and gave him some advice. Every day we did homework together,
when he met some difficult English problems, I would help him to work them out.
Little by little, with my help, he improved his English skills. At the end of this term,
he made a great progress. He was very happy, I was also proud.
【解析】
试题分析：
本题要求谈谈对善待他人的看法，曾经友善待人的经历，以及你的感受。

短文要覆盖提示的所有要点，并适当发挥。

文中正确使用时态（过去时）来描述过去的经历以进行表达，使用第一人称形式进行写作。

但也要注意在总结自己的感受，谈论观点的时候要使用一般现在时表明看法。

写作亮点：
短文开始就引入话题；提出了善待别人是传统美德，借助动名词做主语（Being kind to others is…），之后介绍了一段自己的经历，表意清晰，中心明确，动词过去时使用正确。

有几个短语和结构的使用堪称亮点，如：so…that…; give up, give sb some advice, work out, little by little, with my help，丰富的短语交错使用，使得故事表达清晰具体，切合主题，主旨鲜明突出。

3．（·重庆中考模拟）书面表达
假设格林（Green）先生是你班的一位外籍教师，在他回国前夕，学校将为他举行欢送会。

请用英文写一篇欢送辞，内容要点如下：
1. 格林先生是澳大利亚人，三年前来到我校教英语；
2. 他与我们相处融洽，但对我们要求严格；
3. 这些年来，…… 我们深表感激；
4. 下星期他将离校回国，祝他一路顺风。

【答案】Ladies and Gentlemen,
First of all, allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. Mr. Green is from Australia. He came to teach English in our school three years ago. He is easy to get along with, but he's strict with us. All these years he's worked hard. He's tried his best to make his class lively and interesting. He's helped us a lot in our Englishi studies. We've improved our spoken English with his help. All of us feel grateful to him. Next week Mr. Green will leave for Australia. Let's wish him a pleasant journey.
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如Ladies and Gentlemen，first of all，thank you for doing，give me a chance，be from，three years ago，get along with，be strict with，try his best to do，leave for等。

而He came to teach English in our school three years ago./He is easy to get along with, but he's strict with us./ We've improved our spoken English with his help./ Next week Mr. Green will leave for Australia.等多种时态句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

4．（·江苏中考模拟）某英语报开展“How to deal with the exam stress?”征文比赛，请你根据表格中的提示内容，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。

注意：
1. 词数90左右，短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 表格最后一栏中省略部分须用1-2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥。

How to deal with the exam stress
Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us.
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【答案】How to Deal with the Exam Stress
Everyone may have the exam stress．A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us．If we have proper stress，we can think actively and work harder．Besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them．So we can pass the exams easily．
However，if we have too heavy stress，we can't sleep well at night and we may feel too tired．We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end．
In my opinion，to deal with stress，we'd better plan and prepare well．We should also form some good habits，such as enough exercise and healthy diets．Then we'll feel relaxed and do well in the exams．
【解析】
试题分析：本书面表达以“How to deal with the exam stress”为题写一篇作文。

在题目中给出了一张表格，需要用正确的英语将表格中的内容表达出来。

分析表格可以看到，这篇作文的内容主要有三个方面，第一个是适当的压力对我们是有好处的；第二个是过多的压力对我们有害；最后发表自己的看法，如何来应对压力。

因此这篇作文可以分为三段来写，这样可以使整个文章的结构有层次。

在每一段中加上具体的内容，使段落更加充实。

最后还要补充两点自己的观点。

全文需要使用一般现在时态，第一人称来写。

注意多使用一些好的句式、短语，增强文章的表现力。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的范文。

作者按照题目要求把表格中的内容完整的表达出来，并加上了自己的看法。

作者将整篇短文分成了三个部分，首先写的是适当的压力对我们有利。

这里作者主要使用的句型或短语有besides，还用到了一些复合句，如条件状语从句等；接下来作者写的是过多的压力的害处，段首先用however来进行转折，然后使用了一个复合句if we have too heavy stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired.虽然很短，但是意思很完整；最后作者发表了自己的观点，用了短语in my opinion，还用到了提建议时经常用的had better 和should。

整篇作文意思连贯，语言流畅，层次分明。

5．（·全国中考模拟）假如你叫李平，是一位成绩优秀的学生。

你班班主任在安排座位时，让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生同桌，这在学生中引起了反响，班会课上大家就此进行了讨论。

现在请你根据下表把讨论结果向班主任写一封信反映一下，并说出自己的观点。

注意：1. 词数：90字左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文需包括表中所有要点，内容可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3. 参考词汇：成绩差的学生 a slower student
Dear Mr. Zhang.
We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student.
Yours，
Li Ping
【答案】Dear Mr. Zhang,
We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with
a slower student.
70 percent of the students agree with you. Although they are not good at lessons, they might do well in sports or arts. So they can learn from each other, and they may develop a friendship. However, 30 percent of the students don’t agree. They think some slower students always talk in class instead of listening to the teachers carefully. On the other hand, slower students often ask questions and they may influence others.
I think I’d like to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each other. We can make progress together.
Yours
Li Ping
【解析】这是一篇图表，你班班主任在安排座位时，让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生同
桌，这在学生中引起了反响，班会课上大家就此进行了讨论。

现在请你根据表格把讨论结果向班主任写一封信反映一下，并说出自己的观点。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

agree with sb同意某人；be good at擅长； learn from each other互相学习
6．（·天津中考模拟）根据联合国教科文组织的统计显示，北欧国家国民每年读书24本左右,美国人年均阅读7 本书，.韩国人11本书，日本、法国国民每年读书数量为8.4本左右，而中国国民人均读书数量低于5本。

你的阅读量是多少？作为一名中学生，你应该怎么做？请根据下列表格中所给要点，写一篇英语短文。

要求:1.文中必须包含表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥；
2.条理淸晰,字迹工整，词数不少于80；
3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息：
4.开头和结尾部已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:身心健康：mental and physical health
Nowadays,reading is becoming more and more popular among us._____________________
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Let’s be active readers and enjoy reading.
【答案】Nowadays，reading is becoming more and more popular among us．People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world．But I don't think so．In my opinion，to read books is more valuable than anything else．The old saying"To open a book is always helpful"clearly tells us how good it is to read a book．Books are our friends．They introduce us different kinds of knowledge．They lead us down the road to success．Books are our teachers．They teach us troth，science，literature，and philosophy of life．Besides，they increase our knowledge，enlarge our experience，strengthen our character and do many other
things which we can not do without them．Books tell us what is good and what is evil．And only books can tell the good from the bad．Therefore to read more books is the best policy for our young students．
As a middle school student．I think we should read more books．Reading is good for our physical and mental health．
Let's be active readers and enjoy reading．
【解析】这是一篇材料作文，行文之前，把表格里的要点内容通读一遍，做出框架，开始写作时，把表格里所列内容全部表述到文章中，并且自己适当增加内容，注意人称、时态、单复数，词形的变化。

适当增加衔接词，使文章更出彩。

如对长句不好把握，就尽量使用短句。

7．（·广东中考模拟）近来，野生动物园发生了老虎伤人的事件。

我们作为游客应该如何避免受到野生动物的伤害呢？请根据下列提示写一篇短文。

提示：
1. 遵守动物园的各项规定；
2. 参观时不要单独行动；
3. 时刻提醒自己安全第一；
4. 遇到危险及时求助。

要求：
1.80词以上（开头己给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文章必须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。

It is reported that tigers hurt people in a zoo. As visitors, what should we do to avoid the hurt? Here are some tips.
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【答案】It is reported that tigers hurt people in a zoo. As visitors, what should we do to avoid the hurt? Here are some tips. Firstly, every zoo has its own rules. We must read them before visiting it. Then we will know what to do and what not to do. We must follow the rules while visiting the zoo. Secondly, we had better go anywhere with our parents or friends in the zoo. Thirdly, we should remember that safety comes first all the time. We neither go to the dangerous places nor do the dangerous things. Finally, we must ask for help as soon as possible when we are in danger.
I believe we will be safe in the zoo if we do so.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇提纲作文。

题干列出了四点内容，故第一段使用Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly和Finally进行分条陈述，使文章层次分明、逻辑性强，每点要适当增加内容，比如这样做的原因或好处等；第二段用一句话“I believe we will be safe in the zoo if we do so.”进行总结。

根据提示，使用到的单词和短语有rule，follow，come first，dangerous，ask for help，in danger
好单词：
rule 规则
follow 遵循
dangerous 危险的
好短语：
had better do sth. 最好做某事
come first 首先要考虑到的
ask for help 寻求帮助
as soon as possible 尽快
in danger 处于危险中
好句型：
We must read them before visiting it. 我们必须在参观它之前阅读它们。

before引导时间状语从句，当主从句主语一致而从句是进行时时，从句省略主语和be。

We must follow the rules while visiting the zoo. 参观动物园时我们必须遵守规定。

while引导时间状语从句，当主从句主语一致而从句是进行时时，从句省略主语和be。

We neither go to the dangerous places nor do the dangerous things. 我们既不去危险的地方，也不做危险的事情。

使用了“neither…nor… 既不……也不……”。

8．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
假设你是某英文报纸“Teenagers”栏目的编辑Betty，日前收到了Lucy的来信。

她在信中诉说了她的烦恼，请你根据Lucy的来信，用英语写一封90词左右的回信。

要求内容合理,信
的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.
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All the best!
Betty
【答案】Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.
In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.
However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.
In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but it's an useful product. I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.
All the best!
Betty
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in recent years，as a product of，live in，more and more，so…that，for example，do harm to，be harmful to，in my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。

同时For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的叙述很有条理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.
/ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

9．（·张家港市梁丰初级中学中考模拟）书面表达
假设你校英文社正在调查中学生在学习英语过程中会遇到的问题。

下面表格列举了最普遍的三个问题，请你根据这些问题及给出的合理建议，为报社写一份英文报告。

写作要求：
1. 报告须包含表格中所有信息，并适当增加细节，以使行文流畅、通顺；
2. 表格中省略号处请2-3句话作适当发挥,给出合理的建议；
3. 词数90左右，报告的开头已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇：本土人（native speaker）
Nowadays it’s important and necessary to learn English well but students are having problems learning English. Many students _____________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______
【答案】Nowadays it’s important and necessary to learn English well but students are having problems learning English. Many students are poor at reading skills. Reading English aloud is very important and necessary in improving reading skills. Reading can make you feel confident. Some other students feel difficult to remember new words. The best way to learn new words is through listening. You can listen to English radio programs or TV programs. At the same time, listen to or watch such programs as you can, which can help you understand what the native speakers say. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Practice reading and listening as much as possible, and you can be a good learner.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如have problem doing，be poor at，make you feel confident，some other students，the best way，listen to，at the same time，help sb. do，as much as possible等。

同时Reading English aloud is very important and necessary in improving reading skills./ The best way to learn new words is through listening.等非谓语动词结构和At the same time, listen to or watch such programs as you can, which can help you understand what the native speakers say.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化。

而三句As a…的运用，使短文很有条理，是本文的最大亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

10．（·宁夏银川二中中考模拟）假设你是李华。

上周末你和同班同学去绿色农场郊游,大家玩的很开心。

请你通过e-mail将此活动过程告知你的好友Tom，并简要谈谈你的感受。

要点如下：
参考词汇：get close to the nature（亲近大自然）
写作要求：1、词数60－80；（开头和结尾已给出）
2、文中不能出现真实的校名或人名；
3、所给的要点必须都用上；
4、紧扣主题，适当发挥。

Dear Tom,
How’s it g oing? Last weekend, I went to_______________
Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Tom
How’s it going?Last weekend ,I went to the Green Farm for a trip with my classmates.We set off at 8:00 in the morning on 22nd April.We came back at 5:00 in the afternoon.We met at the school gate.We went there by school bus . We had a picnic,picked tomatoes,flied kites and so on.The teacher told us not to swim in the river and do anything alone.We had a chance to get close to the nature.We had a good trip.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图表，要求介绍自己上周末和同班同学去绿色农场郊游,大家玩的很开心。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在
此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般过去时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

11．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达
每个人都有自己的梦想和理想，为了理想而努力可以成就一个人的事业。

请根据提示内容，以“My Dream”为题，写一篇英文短文，向同学们介绍一下自己的梦想。

要求：1.参考提内容，可适当发挥
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整
3. 文中不得出现任何真实（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。

（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

）
My Dream
Everybody has his dream. My dream is to
be________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
【答案】My Dream
Everybody has his dream. My dream is to be a writer when I grow up.I really like writing becauseit is amazing to share my thoughts and feelings with others.
To realize my drea m,I’m going to study Chinese hard. It’s very important for me.I am going to read a lot.There are so many great writers that I can always learn a lot from their works.What’s more,I plan to keep on writing so that I can improve my writing through practice.
All in all,I know it is not easy to realize my dream but I will try my best and never give up.
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇话题作文。

请根据提示内容，以“My Dream”为题，写一篇英文短文，向同学们介绍一下自己的梦想。

文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。

动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。

在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细
心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

12．（·广西中考模拟）近几年来，一些学校开设了一些兴趣班（interest classes）或特色课（special classes）, 诸如烹饪课、手工制作课以及传统戏曲课等。

你校校园网就你们学校开设此类课程的必要性广泛征求同学们的意见。

以下是你们班同学的观点和理由。

请就此并结合你自己的想法用英语写一篇短文，发表在校园网的英语论坛上。

提示语：develop one’s interests; get more knowledge; improve one’s life skills; a waste
of time; cause a lot of stress
要求：1. 短文应包括表格中的信息，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 词数80左右。

开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________
Thank you!【答案】Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.
Is it necessary to offer these classes? We had a discussion in our class. Some students think it’s really necessary to do it. Fir st, it’s good for students to develop their interests. And interests can make them get more knowledge. Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. These skills are useful for young students.
However, others have different opini ons. They don’t think it’s so necessary. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study. And these activities can cause a lot of stress for children.
In my opinion, it’s a good idea to offer these classes. They are not only good for o ur study but also for our growing.
Thank you!【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，并且已给出了内容提示，所以我们在写作时要围绕所给内容提示展开。

根据作文要求，可以确定文章的时态是一般现在时; 在表达观点时通常会用到例如：I think, in one’s opinion 等引出观点的词语。

另外，可以用到first, second, third, finally 等一一列出观点，使文章更有条理，次序。

【点睛】
这是一篇比较优秀的作文。

首先内容完整，第一段摆出事实，第二段说明别人的的观点，最后说出自己的观点，在表达观点时有条理有次序。

短文中使用了一些很好的词及短语，例如such as，and so on，However等使句子更有连贯性，及好的句型表达，例如：Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study等。

13．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，下周你们学校将要组织学生开展“父亲节活动计划”分享活动，你打算先分享给你们班交换生Peter，希望听听他的看法。

请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他你的计划是什么，你为什么这么做，并表达你渴望得到他建议的心情。

提示词语： gift, love, opinion
提示问题：● What’s your plan for Father’s Day? ● Why do you do so? ● What do you want Peter to do?
Dear Peter,
How is it going?
We will share the plan for Father’s Day next
week.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
How is it going?
We will share the plan for Father’s Day next week. I am going to do some meaningful things for my father. Firstly, I am going to buy a beautiful card for him. And then, I plan to cook him a big meal. Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help.
I will do this because I love my father deeply. He works very hard every day to support my family. Would you please give me some advice? I am eager to receive your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。

在写作时应承接短文开头；第二段写你为什么这么做；第三段表达你渴望得到他建议的心情。

例文点评：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人称来叙述父亲节计划；时态采用的是一般现在时为主，描述具体建议时，描写细致，条理清晰。

高分亮点：
短语：the plan for Father’s Day；some meaningful things；buy a beautiful card for him；give me some advice。

句型：Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help；I am eager to receive your early reply。

14．（·重庆中考模拟）书面表达。

职业生涯规划（career planning）一词源于1908年的美国，指的是对职业生涯乃至人生进行持续的系统的计划的过程。

作为即将毕业的初中学生，我们也是时候该思考我们的职业生涯规划了。

请以此为主题写一篇短文。

写作要求:
1.词数：80—120词；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考要点：
1. 职业选择及原因；
2. 现阶段的准备（学习、兴趣发展等）；
3. ……
My Career Planning
_____________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Career Planning
Everybody has his or her dream and career. Different person has different ideas in choosing their career. For me, my ideal career is to be a teacher.
When I was still a little child in the primary school, I found it was so great to be a teacher. In my heart I think the teachers can teach students a variety of knowledge. What's more, to be a teacher could contribute a lot both to their students and to the society.。