高考英语一轮总复习：专题15_短文改错

专题十五短文改错
2016～2012年各省市高考题
A卷全国卷
Passage 1(2016·全国Ⅰ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big，but the Restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some People even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead，he hopes that our business will grow steady.
答案
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to
that
where I live.Though not very
big，but the Restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at
meal times.Some people even had
have to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to
his success is honest
honesty.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables
or
and high
quality oil are using
used for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams of/about
becoming rich in the
a short period of time.Instead，he hopes that
our
his business will
grow
steady steadily.
1．that→where[考查宾语从句的连词用法。

由句子结构可知，介词to之后为宾语从句。

从句谓语是不及物动词live。

故用where引导。

]
2．去掉but[考查从属连词与并列连词。

从属连词though不可与并列连词but 连用。

]
3．had→have[考查语境中的时态运用。

根据上下文语境可知此处要用一般现在时。

]
4．honest→honesty[考查名词作表语。

由句意“他成功的关键是诚信”可知应当用名词形式。

]
5．or→and[考查并列连词的用法。

根据句意可知二者之间为并列关系而非选择关系。

]
6．using→used[考查固定短语的用法。

be used for“用来做”，为固定短语。

]
7．在dreams之后加上of或about[考查短语动词。

固定短语dream of/about (doing) sth.的意思是“梦想做某事”。

]
8．the→a[考查代词的用法。

in a short period of time为固定词组，意思是“短时间内”。

]
9．our→his[考查冠词的用法。

短文介绍了my uncle诚信经营餐馆的事情，故将our改为his。

]
10．steady→steadily[考查副词的用法。

修饰谓语动词用副词。

]
Passage 2 (2016·全国Ⅱ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case, we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.
答案
The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how what to
do during the holiday.We can chose choose between staying at home and take taking a trip.If
we stay at home, it is comfortable but and there is no need to spend money.But in that
case, we will learn little about the
world.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your our view and gain knowledges knowledge we can not get from books.Some classmates
suggest we can can /或should
go to places of interest nearby.I thought think that it is a good idea.It does not cost many much ， yet we can still learn a lot.
1．how →what [考查疑问词的用法。

我和同学正在谈论假期里做什么。

固定表达what to do ，如果用how 结构为how to do sth.]
2．chose→choose[考查动词形式。

根据语法知识可知，情态动词can后要用动词原形。

]
3．take→taking[考查非谓语动词的用法。

此处为between...and...结构，根据前面的staying at home可知，此处也要用动名词形式，与前面保持一致。

] 4．but→and[考查连词的用法。

如果呆在家里，感觉舒适，还不花钱。

根据句意可知，此处应是并列关系，而不是转折关系。

]
5．world前加the[考查定冠词的用法。

此处特指我们所生活的这个世界。

] 6．your→our[考查形容词性物主代词的用法。

根据前面的主语we可知，此处要用our，表示“我们能够开阔我们的视野”。

]
7．knowledges→knowledge[考查不可数名词的用法。

knowledge为不可数名词，没有复数形式。

]
8．去掉can或can→should[考查虚拟语气。

suggest表示“建议”，后面的宾语从句要用should do形式，should可以省略，故答案有两种改法。

] 9．thought→think[考查一般现在时的用法。

我认为这是一个好主意。

根据上下文可知，此处并不是过去的看法，而是现在的看法。

]
10．many→much[考查代词的用法。

这样不会花很多钱。

cost much花费很多。

此处也可理解为much money的省略。

]
Passage 3(2016·全国Ⅲ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first ，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However ，my parents didn ’t seem to think such.They always tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time ，I ever felt my parents couldn ’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last ，I will be on my own ，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
答案
The teenage year years from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were
also the best and worse worst years in my life.At the first ，I thought I knew everything
and could make decisions by yourself myself .However ，my parents didn ’t seem to think
such so .They always tell told
me what to do and how to do it.At one time ，I ever felt my parents couldn ’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely free from them.I showed
them I was independent by wear wearing strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to for
college.At last ，I will be on my own ，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I
need help. 【语篇导读】 本文主要讲述了青少与父母之间的关系。

1．year →years [此处指13～19 岁的年龄，故用复数。

]
2．worse →worst [与前面的best 并列，此处应用最高级。

]
3．去掉the [at first 固定短语。

]
4．yourself →myself [根据句意，此处指“我自己”。

]
5．such →so [so 指已经提到的事。

]
6．tell →told [此处应用过去时态。

]
7．freely →free [此处应用形容词作表语。

]
8．wear →wearing [此处用动名词作介词的宾语。

]
9．to →for [固定搭配 leave for 去……。

]
10．whenever 后加I [whenever 引导状语从句，从句缺少主语I 。

]
Passage 4 (2015·新课标全国Ⅰ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I was a child ，I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city ，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately ，on the development of industrialization ，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so ，we ’ll live to regret it.
答案
When I was a child ，I hoped to live in the city.I think thought I would be happy
there.Now I am living in a city ，but I miss my home in the countryside.There the
air is clean or and the mountains are green.Unfortunately ，on with the development of
industrialization ，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown
that global warming has already become a very seriously
serious problem.The
airs
air we
breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much
Many rare animals are dying out.We must
found
find ways to protect
your
our/the environment.If we fail to do so，we’ll live to regret
it.
1．think→thought[考查动词的时态。

根据前面一句可知，这是发生在小时候的事情，故用一般过去时态。

]
2．countryside前加the[考查冠词的用法。

in the countryside (在乡村)为固定短语。

]
3．or→and[考查并列词的用法。

那儿的空气洁净，群山葱绿。

由句意可知两个分句之间显然为并列关系，而非选择关系。

]
4．on→with[考查介词的用法。

with the development of...为一固定短语，意思是“随着……的发展”。

]
5．去掉been[考查被动语态的用法。

众多研究表明，全球变暖已经成为一个十分严重的问题。

由句意可知，studies和谓语show之间为主动关系，故要用主动语态。

]
6．seriously→serious[考查形容词的用法。

修饰名词problem应当用形容词。

] 7．airs→air[考查不可数名词的用法。

air作“空气”讲时为不可数名词。

] 8．Much→Many[考查代词的用法。

animals为可数名词复数，故用many。

] 9．found→find[考查情态动词的用法。

情态动词后面要接动词原形。

] 10．your→our/the[考查语境中代词的用法。

依据前后句的语境及逻辑关系可知your与上下文相悖，结合句意应当改为our/the才能使句意通顺。

] Passage 5(2015·新课标全国Ⅱ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下
作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

One day ，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time ，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later ，Tony saw parents.Mom said ，“How nice to see you again ！Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
答案
One day ，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent parents
.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on in a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly
walked into the shop.After looks looking at the toy for some time ，he turned around and
found where that 或where
his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun began to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling told him to wait outside a the shop.Five minutes
later ，Tony saw his
parents.Mom said ，“How nice to see you again ！Dad and I were terrible terribly worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
1．parent →parents [考查名词复数。

由第五句中的“his parents were missing.”可知此处应当用复数形式。

]
2．on →in [考查介词的用法。

玩具是摆放在商店的橱窗里面的，故用介词
in。

]
3．去掉very[考查固定句型的用法。

由语境可知，托尼非常喜欢这个玩具，于是快速走进商店。

so...that...为固定句型，意思是“如此……以至于……”，故去掉very。

]
4．looks→looking[考查省略的用法。

After之后省去了主语he，he与look at 之间为逻辑上的主谓关系，故应当用现在分词。

]
5．去掉where或where→that[考查宾语从句连接词的用法。

动词found之后为宾语从句，从句为系表结构，意思完整，故将where去掉或改为没有词义且不作成分的that。

]
6．begun→began[考查并列谓语的用法。

由句子结构可知，begin与was scared 并列，因此，要用一般过去时。

]
7．telling→told[考查并列谓语的用法。

有一位妇女看到他哭泣就告诉他去商店外面等。

由句意可知，tell这一动作是这个妇女发出的，应当与saw构成并列谓语。

故改用told。

]
8．a→the[考查冠词的用法。

表示谈话双方共知的名词前要用定冠词。

] 9．saw后加his[考查物主代词的用法。

根据句意及英语表达习惯，应当在parents前加上与主语相一致的物主代词。

]
10．terrible→terribly[考查副词的用法。

形容词worried之前要用副词来修饰。

]
Passage 6(2014·新课标全国Ⅰ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Nearly five years before，and with the help by our father，my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then—for all these year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self－seed where they please.As result，the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size，but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year，but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!
答案
Nearly five years before
ago，and with the help
by
of our father，my sister and I
planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then—for all these
year years—we had
have been allowing tomatoes to self－seed where they please.As a
result，the plants are growing somewhere
everywhere.The fruits are small in size，but juicy and
taste
tasty.There are so much
many that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we
allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year，
but
but或yet
we have
never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully wonderful
tomatoes at no cost!
1．before→ago[ago常与一般过去时连用；before常与完成时连用，这里谓语是planted，用的是过去式，故用ago。

]
2．by→of[with the help of...在……的帮助下。

]
3．year→years[由前面all these可知应用year的复数形式。

]
4．had→have[根据时间状语“since then”可知，主句应为现在完成时，所以把had变为have。

]
5．as后加a[as a result为固定搭配，译为“结果”。

]
6．somewhere→everywhere[因为种子落在哪里就在哪里生根发芽，所以这种植物长得到处都是。

everywhere到处；somewhere某处。

]
7．taste→tasty[are后面应用形容词，and连接形容词juicy和tasty。

] 8．much→many[根据谓语are可知后面应用修饰可数名词的many，而much 修饰不可数名词。

]
9．去掉but或改为yet[although引导让步状语从句，不可与but连用，但可以与yet连用。

]
10．wonderfully→wonderful[因tomatoes为名词应用形容词修饰，所以把副词改为形容词。

]
Passage 7(2014·新课标全国Ⅱ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My dream school starts at 8：30 a．m.and ends at 3：30 p．m.They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didn’t need to do so many homework.Therefore，we have more time with after－school activities.For example，we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest ，or sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
答案
My dream school starts at 8：30 a ．m.and ends at 3：30 p ．m..They There are three
lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didn't don't need to do so many much
homework.Therefore ，we have more time with for after －school activities.For
example ，we can do reading for one and a half hour hours and play sports for one hour
every day.
My dream school look looks like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and
trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest ，or sat sit by the
lake listening to music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully helpful
.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
1．They →There [考查固定句型。

There be 句型，表示“有”。

故把They 改为There 。

]
2．didn ’t →don ’t [考查动词时态。

此处叙述每天要做的事情。

应该用一般现在时，故把didn ’t 改为don ’t 。

]
3．many →much [homework 是不可数名词，故用much 修饰。

]
4．with →for [考查介词词义辨析。

此处句意是“为课外活动留出更多时间”。

]
5．hour →hours [考查名词单复数。

one and a half hours 为一个半小时。

]
6．look →looks [考查主谓一致。

school 为单数名词，故谓语用looks 。

]
7．去掉the[There be句型中的名词是泛指概念，故去掉the。

]
8．sat→sit[考查动词时态。

根据前句内容可知此处是接情态动词can，故用动词原形。

]
9．listening后面加to[考查固定短语。

listen to“听……”。

]
10．helpfully→helpful[此处and连接并列的两个形容词kind和helpful。

] Passage 8(2013·新课标全国Ⅰ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes away.She is just a distant memory for me now.
I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall，with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice，which set himself apart from others in our small town，he was strong and powerful.In a fact，he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.However，he was the gentlest man I have never known.
答案
I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding
hold me on her knees and
sing old songs.I was only four when she passes
passed away.She is just a distant memory
for me now.
I remember my grandfather very
much
well/clearly.He was tall，with broad
shoulder
shoulders and a beard that turned from black toward
to/into gray over the years.He had a
deep voice，which set himself
him apart from others in our small town，and
∧
he was
strong and powerful.In a fact，he even scared my classmates away during when they
came over to play or do homework with me.However，he was the gentlest man I
have never
ever known.
Passage 9(2013·新课标全国Ⅱ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800’s.Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner，that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night.This custom soon becomes another meal of day.Interesting，it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry.Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain，there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.
答案
The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have
started in the early 1800’s.
Have
Having tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge
between lunch and dinner，
that
which might not be served until 8 o’clock at night.This
custom soon becomes
became another meal of the
∧
day.
Interesting
Interestingly，it had a connection
by
with/to the British porcelain(瓷器) industry.Tea in China was traditionally drank drunk
from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain，there was a crying need
for good cup
cups with handles to suit British habits.This made for the
grow
growth in the
porcelain industry.
B卷地方卷
Passage 1(2016·四川)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It is Mother’s Day today.Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.
Mom has a full－time job，so she has to do most of the houseworks.She is a great mother.Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day.We get up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house，and then went on shopping.When he came back，I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritest.At dinner，we said to her，“Happy Mother’s Day！”Mom was grateful and moving.
答案
It is Mother’s Day today.Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.
Mom has a full－time job，so
but she has to do most of the
houseworks
housework.She is a
great mother.Both Dad
or
and I planned to do something on Mother’s Day.We
get
got
up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house ，and then went on shopping.When
he came back ，I found a bunch of flowers in her his hand.I asked Mom to stay in the
sitting room and I cooked in the kitchen.The dishes what which/that/what
I cooked were Mom ’s favoritest favorite .At dinner ，we said to her ，“Happy Mother ’s Day ！”Mom
was grateful and moving moved .
1．so →but [前后句之间为转折关系。

]
2．houseworks →housework [housework 是不可数名词。

]
3．or →and [both...and 是固定搭配。

]
4．get →got [这里说的是发生在过去的事情，因此用一般过去时。

]
5．去掉on [go shopping 去买东西。

]
6．her →his [爸爸去购物，从句主语是he ，因此物主代词形式用his 。

]
7．kitchen 前加the [上文虽未提及kitchen ，但听话者一定知其所指，因此，kitchen 前加定冠词。

]
8．what →which/that 或去掉what [引导定语从句，并在从句中作宾语，指物，用关系代词that/which ，也可省略。

]
9．favoritiest →favorite [favorite 为无等级形容词。

]
10．moving →moved [moving 多用来修饰事物，moved 用来指人。

] Passage 2 (2016·浙江)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I was a very young children，my father created a regular practice I remember well years late.Every time he arrived home at end of the day，we’d greet her at the door.He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us.Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers.While they chat，my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge.It was both excited and frightening to be up there!
My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.
答案
When I was a very young children
child，my father created a regular practice I
remember well years late
later.Every time he arrived home at the
end of the day，
we’d greet her
him at the door.He would ask who we
was
were and pretend not to
knowing
know us.Then he and my mother would have
had a drink while she prepared
dinner and they would talk about his day and hers.While they
chat
chatted，my father
would lift my sister and me up to sit in
on the top of the fridge.It was both
excited
exciting
and frightening to be up there!
My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.
1．children→child[因为前面有不定冠词a，所以这里用单数。

故children改成child。

]
2．late→later[late是形容词“迟的”，或副词“迟地”，但是“一段时间后面应该接later”，表示“……时间以后”。

故late改成later。

]
3．at后面加the[at the end of 为固定搭配。

]
4．her→him[根据上文可知我们每天在门口迎接爸爸。

用him指代my father，作greet的宾语。

故her改成him。

]
5．was→were[这句话的主语是we，谓语用复数，而且这篇文章是作者回忆小时候的事情，用一般过去时。

故was改成were。

]
6．knowing→know[pretend后面接不定式作宾语，这里是否定式pretend not to do。

故knowing改成know。

]
7．去掉had[would do 表示“过去常常做”。

]
8．chat→chatted[根据主句内容my father would lift my sister 可知while引导的时间状语从句用一般过去时。

故chat改成chatted。

]
9．in→on[on the top of...为固定搭配，意为“在……顶部”。

故in改成on。

] 10．excited→exciting[这句话的主语是形式主语it，真正的主语是to be up there，主语是物的时候，表语应该用现在分词形式的形容词。

故excited改成exciting。

]
Passage 3(2015·四川)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；
2．每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；
3．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Hi, Janice，
It’s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We’ve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It’s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a
time －wasting activity! In fact ，I don ’t like to go anymore, so I ’m afraid I ’ll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me ，would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
答案
Hi, Janice ，
It ’s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want
to
share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell told you last time, I made three new friend friends here.We hang out together
during lunch and after school.We ’ve been spending a lot of time sing singing in karaoke
bars.It ’s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many much .And I started to see
this as a time －wasting activity! In fact ，I don ’t like to go anymore, so but I ’m
afraid I ’ll lose their friendship.How What do you think I should do? If you are were me ，
would you talk to him them ？
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
1．want 后加to [考查动词want 的用法，want 后用不定式作状语，故加上to 。

]
2．tell →told [考查时态。

根据时间状语last time 可知，此句需用一般过去时，故把tell 改成told 。

句意：正如我上次告诉你的那样。

]
3．friend →friends [考查名词的复数。

名词friend 为可数名词，其前有three 修饰，需要用复数形式，故把friend 改成friends 。

句意：我在这儿交了三个新朋友。

]
4．sing →singing [考查动名词作宾语。

本句考查句型spend...(in)doing sth 结
构，故把sing改成singing。

]
5．many→much[考查代词。

根据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用much而非many。

句意：那真的花费很多。

]
6．so→but[考查连词。

上一分句句意：我不想再去；下一分句句意：我怕失去他们的友谊，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把so改成but。

]
7．How→What[考查疑问词的选择。

本句中do之后缺少宾语，故用what。

] 8．are→were[考查虚拟语气。

根据句意可知，此处为虚拟语气，与现在事实不符，故把are改成were。

句意：如果你是我，……。

]
9．him→them[考查代词。

根据上文可知，作者交了三个朋友，故用them。

句意：你会和他们说吗？]
10．去掉with[考查动词。

动词help为及物动词，其后接宾语时无需加介词，故去掉with。

句意：请帮帮我，给我一些建议。

]
Passage 4(2015·陕西)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线(____)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.。