第2讲 申请信

Lesson 2 申请信
问题层级图
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课前检测（5mins）
1. 我很高兴得知你们正在招募一些志愿者，我很感兴趣。

_________________________________________________________________________________. 2. 我写这封信是为了申请这个职位。

_________________________________________________________________________________. 3. 我认为我能胜任这个职位。

_________________________________________________________________________________. 4. 我流利的英语能帮助我更好地与外国人沟通。

_______________________________________________________________________.
5. 如果您能给我一个机会，我将非常感激。

_________________________________________________________________________________. 一、审题判断文章类型和要点LV2
【例题】审题填表并划出写作要点
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，你校正在招募志愿者，为春节期间中外学生交流活动做准备。

请根据下表提供的信息，用英语写一封e-mail，向学校外事办公室提出申请。

根据文章的人称、时态、体裁和题材在对应的方框内打“√”
【过关检测】（5mins）
审题填表并划出写作要点
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。

你得知故宫正在招聘暑期义务英文讲解员，请你给相关部门负责人写一封申请信，内容包括：
1. 介绍你的基本信息；
2. 说明你的优势；
3. 表示你希望被录用。

注意：1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

二、申请信相关词汇和短语LV1
基础：
apply for (申请)
volunteer n.（志愿者）
position n.（职位）
take part in （参加）
be qualified for（合格）
communicate with（与……交流）
be familiar with（对……熟悉）
out-going adj.（外向的）
offer v.（提供）
opportunity n.（机会）
grateful adj.（感激的）
look forward to（期待）
reply n.（回复）
提升：
participate in（参与）
admission n.（允许）
voluntary work（志愿者工作）
qualification n. (资格)
have a good command of (很好的掌握)
make every effort（竭尽全力）
have a passion for (对……热情)
be well acquainted with(对……熟悉)
take sb. into account / consideration (把……纳入考虑) broaden one’s horizon (拓展某人的眼界)
develop one’s ability (发展某人的能力)
【过关检测】（5mins）
1. 申请__________________
2. 胜任__________________
3. 提供v. __________________
4. 机会n. __________________
5. 感激的adj. __________________
6. 期待__________________
7. 回复n. __________________
8. 对……熟悉__________________
9. 对……热情__________________
10. 拓展某人的眼界__________________
三、申请信的功能句式
基础：
1. I am writing to apply for …（我写信是为了申请……。

）
2. Your advertised position … interests me, so I’m writing to apply for it.（我对你们的……的职位很感兴趣，所以写信来申请……。

）
3. I would like to apply for admission to your college.（我想申请就读于贵大学。

）
4. I think I am qualified for the position.（我想我能胜任这个职位。

）
5. I am a Senior 3 student in Hongxing Middle school.（我是来自红星中学高三的一名学生。

）
6. My fluent English will make it easy for me to communicate with foreigners.（我流利的英语会帮助我与外国人更容易的交流。

）
7. I have previous experience, so I believe I am the right person for taking part in the activity.（我有经验，所以我相信我是参加这个活动的合适人选。

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8. Thanks for considering my application and I am looking forward to your reply.（谢谢考虑我的申请，期待收到你们的回复。

）
9. I hope you will kindly send me an application form.（我真诚希望您能发送我一份申请表格。

）
10. If you need to know any more about me, please feel free to contact me.（如果你们想知道更多关于我的信息，
请随时联系我。

）
提升：
1. I am writing to apply for participating in … that … is offering.（我写信来是申请参加……提供的……。

）
2. In response to your advertisement, I am writing to apply for the volunteer…（鉴于您刊登的广告，我写信来是申请当志愿者……。

）
3. I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of the community.（我写这封信是为了自荐申请这份社区工作，我想我是个合格的应聘者。

）
4. I have a great passion for … and I think I am qualified for it for the following reasons.（我对……很感兴趣，我想我是合格的，理由如下。

）
5. The moment I saw your advertisement in the paper for ..., I felt it was just the kind of post, for which I have the qualifications and which I have been looking for some time.（当我一看到您发布在报纸上是招聘……广告，就觉得我能胜任这份工作，而且这也是我一直梦寐以求的工作。

）
6. I would like to further my studies in ...department of your university.（我想在贵大学……系继续学习深造。

）
7. The kind of work in which your company is engaged particularly interests me.（我对贵公司的这份工作非常感兴趣。

）
8. It seems to me that this experience, together with my education, has given me ideal preparation to assume the role of ... in a firm such as yours.（我想我的经验加上我的教育背景能让我很好地胜任得起贵公司提供的职位。

）
9. Under the influence of the courses I have taken, I have developed a special interest in …（受所学课程的影响，我对……非常感兴趣。

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10. Any favorable consideration of my application would be appreciated.（如果您能认可我的申请，我会非常感激。

）
【过关检测】（10mins ）
默写原句
1. 我写信申请这个职位。

_________________________________________________________________________________.
2. 我想我能胜任这个工作。

_________________________________________________________________________________.
3. 我有工作经验，所以我相信我是这个工作的合适人选。

_________________________________________________________________________________.
4. 我对……很有兴趣，我想我有资格参加因为如下原因。

_________________________________________________________________________________.
5. 非常感激您能考虑我的申请。

_________________________________________________________________________________. 四、申请信句式仿写LV3
【句式1】I am writing to apply for … that your … is offering.
仿写1：我写信来是申请参加我们学校提供的夏令营。

_________________________________________________________________________________.
仿写2：我写信来是申请贵公司提供的销售经理的职位。

______________________________________________________________________.
仿写3：我写信来想参加我们学校提供的志愿者活动。

_______________________________________________________________________.
【句式2】I have a great passion for … and I think I am qualified for it for the following reasons.
仿写1：我对这个活动非常感兴趣，我想我有资格参加这个活动，原因如下。

_______________________________________________________________________.
仿写2：我对这个职位非常感兴趣，我想我能胜任这份工作，原因如下。

_______________________________________________________________________.
仿写3：我对这份志愿者工作非常感兴趣，我想我能胜任，原因如下。

_______________________________________________________________________.
【句式3】Thanks for considering my application for … and I am looking forward to your early reply.仿写1：谢谢考虑对这个活动的申请，期待您的回复。

_______________________________________________________________________.
仿写2：谢谢考虑对我在贵校继续学习深造的申请，期待您的回复。

_______________________________________________________________________.
仿写3：谢谢考虑对我对这份志愿者工作的申请，期待您的回复。

____________________________________________________________________.
五、申请信写作要点和细节补充LV3
假定你是李华，从互联网(the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore) 举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。

请写一封电子邮件申请参加。

内容主要包括:
1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力)；
2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)；
3. 希望获准。

1. 定要点
要点1. 英语优势（I can speak fluent English.）
要点2. 介绍中国、了解其他国家（introduce Chinese traditions and know more about other countries.）要点3. 希望获准（Looking forward to your reply.）
2. 添细节
要点1. 英语优势（I can speak fluent English.）
【思路】要点拓展通常可以分为逻辑拓展与细节拓展。

这两种拓展都是为了让文章的逻辑性和连贯性更好。

这个要点可以加入一些细节和逻辑，比如学了英语很久了，而且好的英语能帮助我跟外国人更好的交流。

【成句】I've been learning English for 10 years, and my fluent English will make it easy for me to communicate with others.
要点2. 介绍中国、了解其他国家（introduce Chinese traditions and know more about other countries）【思路】这个要点可以增加一些细节，说明自己的优势（对中国的传统文化很熟悉），增强文章的连贯性；另外可以记性词汇和短语的加入和提升。

【成句】I am familiar with Chinese culture and traditions and I am willing to introduce Chinese traditions to all the other campers, and eager to know more about other countries as well.
要点3. 希望获准（Looking forward to your reply.）
【思路】此处可以加人一些语气委婉的交际性语言，也可以加入表达急切希望被录取的愿望词或短语。

【成句】I will be much grateful if you offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
【过关检测】（10mins）
1. 要点：英语功底扎实have a strong knowledge of English
加细节：______________________________________________________________________________.
2. 要点:了解中国历史文化know about Chinese history and culture
加细节：______________________________________________________________________________.
3. 要点：有类似经验have similar experience
加细节：_____________________________________________________________________________.
六、申请信写作结构和逻辑LV2
1. 申请信的结构
首段：得知招募信息+简单自我介绍+写作目的
中段：介绍自己的优势（有时候题目要求有应聘目的）
尾段：希望被录取+盼回复
2. 申请信模版：
（首段：得知招募信息+简单自我介绍+写作目的）I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Three. Learning that …, I’m writing to apply for the position.
(中段：介绍自己的优势（有时候题目要求有应聘目的）) I think I am qualified for being one of the volunteers. Firstly,(英语能力I've been learning English for 10 years, and my fluent English will make it easy for me to communicate with others…)… Besides, (性格特点I am patient and outgoing and I believe I can get along well wi th others…)… In addition,（了解中国文化I am familiar with Chinese culture and traditions…）… What’s more, (有类似经验I have similar experience…) …
(尾段：希望被录取+盼回复) I will be much grateful if you take my application into consideration. I am
looking forward to your early reply.
【过关检测】（10mins）
假设你是红星中学高三的学生李华，获悉美国某公益组织在北京的一家慈善基金会正在招聘实习生，主要负责翻译等工作。

请写一封自荐信，申请成为该慈善基金会的实习生。

信的内容包括：
1. 表达愿望；
2. 提供至少三条自荐理由（例如：扎实的英语功底）；
3. 恳请获准。

注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词：慈善基金会charitable foundation 实习生intern
Dear Sir or Madam,
_________________________________（我是来自红星中学高三一班的李华）. ________（得知）there is an intern recruitment in Charitable foundation, _____________________________（我写信来申请这个职位）.
_______________________________ （我想我能胜任这个职位）. __________（首先）, as an English lover, I am glad to seize every opportunity to challenge myself. During school life, never do I stop to participate in practice English so that I can speak English fluently. ____________（而且）, I am active and outgoing, which helps me get along with others well and conquer difficulties by myself. ________（另外）, the host in the broadcast station is my second role which make myself close to perfect step by step.
_____________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________（如果您能考虑我的申请我将非常感激。

期待您的回复）.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
课后练习
补救练习（15mins）
1. 写申请信的结构
首段：________________________________
中段：________________________________
尾段：________________________________
2.常用句式（翻译）
(1)我想申请参加这个活动。

_______________________________________________________________________.
(2) 我有类似的经验，所以我认为我是合适人选。

_______________________________________________________________________.
(3) 如果你们能考虑我的申请，我将感激不尽。

_______________________________________________________________________.
(4) 得知你们在招募志愿者我非常高兴。

_______________________________________________________________________.
(5) 期待尽早收到您的回复。

_______________________________________________________________________.
巩固练习（20mins）
写作
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，你校正在招募志愿者，为春节期间中外学生交流活动做准备。

请根据下表提供的信息，用英语写一封e-mail，向学校外事办公室提出申请。

注意：1. E-mail的开头和结尾已为你写好。

2. 词数不少于50。

首段：自我介绍+写作目的：
Dear Sir,
I am writing to ________________________(申请志愿者职位) for I am really interested in it. I’m Li Hua from Class 1 Senior 3.
中间段：介绍自己能胜任的原因（优势）：
I have a great passion for the position and I think________________________________________（我能胜任这个职位，原因如下）. First and foremost, ______________________（我英语能力很好）. There's no doubt ______________________________________（我能跟交换生很好地交流）. _____________（而且）, ______________________________________________（我有类似的经验）. I ________________________________________(去年参加过学校的志愿者俱乐部), so I know clearly what I should do in voluntary work. It is needless to say that I can offer some practical advice and tips to other volunteers. __________（另外）, I am outgoing and patient, so________________(我能跟别人相处很好). The reason why ______________(我努力申请这个职位) is that I'd like to_________________(拓宽视野和发展能力). I will try my best and make full use of my talents to make the activity a success.
尾段：盼回复
___________________________________________________________________________ (如果您能考虑我的申请我将非常感激)_________________________________(期待您的回复。

)
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
拔高练习（20mins）
写作
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，你校正在招募志愿者，为春节期间中外学生交流活动做准备。

请根据下表提供的信息，用英语写一封e-mail，向学校外事办公室提出申请。

注意：1. E-mail的开头和结尾已为你写好。

2. 词数不少于50。

Dear Sir,
首段：自我介绍+写作目的：
____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________.
中间段：介绍自己能胜任的原因（优势）：
____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________.
尾段：盼回复
____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
Lesson 2 申请信
课前检测（5mins）
1.
【答案】I am delighted to hear that you want some volunteers, and I have a great passion for the job.
【解析】很开心得知I am delighted to hear that，这是得知信息最常用的一个句式，后面是一个宾语从句；have
a great passion for，很感兴趣，比用interest词汇上更高级一些。

2.
【答案】I’m writing to apply for the position.
【解析】apply for 申请；position 职位，整个句子应该是说现在正在写信的目的是为了申请这个职位，所以用了现在进行时。

3.
【答案】I think I am qualified for the position.
【解析】be qualified for 胜任。

4.
【答案】My fluent English will make it easy for me to communicate with foreigners.
【解析】make it adj. for sb. to do，it做形式宾语，真正的宾语是后面的不定式to communicate with foreigners。

5.
【答案】I would be most grateful if you offer me an opportunity.
【解析】这个句子在文章结尾运用，用情态动词would是为了让语气更加委婉；grateful，感激的；offer sb. sth.给某人提供某物。

一、审题判断文章类型和要点LV2
【例题】审题填表并划出写作要点
【答案】人称：第一人称，第二人称
时态：一般现在时
体裁：申请信
题材：申请志愿者
【解析】申请信主要涉及第一和第二人称，本文主要涉及一般现在时，偶尔涉及一般将来时。

由“向学校外事办公室提出申请”可知本文是申请信。

题材为申请志愿者类。

【过关检测】（5mins）
审题填表并划出写作要点
【答案】人称：第一人称，第三人称
时态：一般现在时，一般将来时
体裁：申请信
题材：志愿者工作
【解析】申请信主要涉及第一和第二人称，本文主要涉及一般现在时，偶尔涉及一般将来时。

由“请你给相关部门负责人写一封申请信“可知本文是申请信。

题材为申请志愿者类。

二、申请信相关词汇和短语LV1
【过关检测】（5mins）
1. 申请__________________
2. 胜任__________________
3. 提供v. __________________
4. 机会n. __________________
5. 感激的adj. __________________
6. 期待__________________
7. 回复n. __________________
8. 对……熟悉__________________
9. 对……热情__________________
10. 拓展某人的眼界__________________
三、申请信的功能句式
【过关检测】（10mins ）
默写原句
1.
【答案】I am writing to apply for the position.
2.
【答案】I think I am qualified for the work.
3.
【答案】I have previous experience, so I believe I am the right person for the job.
4.
【答案】I have a great passion for … and I think I am qualified for taking part in i t for the following reasons.
5.
【答案】Any favorable consideration of my application would be appreciated.
四、申请信句式仿写LV3
【句式1】
仿写1：
【答案】I am writing to apply for participating in the Summer Camp that our school is offering.
【解析】此句用于申请信第一段，简单介绍自己之后引出写作目的。

仿写2：
【答案】I am writing to apply for the position of sales manager that your company is offering.
【解析】此句用于申请信第一段，简单介绍自己之后引出写作目的。

仿写3：
【答案】I am writing to apply for voluntary activity that our school is offering.
【解析】此句用于申请信第一段，简单介绍自己之后引出写作目的。

【句式2】
仿写1：
【答案】I have a great passion for the activity and I think I am qualified for it for the following reasons.
【解析】用于第二段开头，起承上启下作用。

仿写2：
【答案】I have a great passion for the position and I think I am qualified for it for the following reasons.
【解析】用于第二段开头，起承上启下作用。

仿写3：
【答案】I have a great passion for the voluntary job and I think I am qualified for it for the following reasons. 【解析】用于第二段开头，起承上启下作用。

【句式3】
仿写1：
【答案】Thanks for considering my application for the activity and I am looking forward to your early reply. 【解析】这是对活动申请的作文结尾，语言比较委婉，同时也表达了希望尽快得到回复的心情。

仿写2：
【答案】Thanks for considering my application for further study in your university and I am looking forward to your early reply.
【解析】这是对学习深造的申请作文结尾，语言比较委婉，同时也表达了希望尽快得到回复的心情。

仿写3：
【答案】Thanks for considering my application for the voluntary work and I am looking forward to your early reply.
【解析】这是对志愿者工作作文结尾，语言比较委婉，同时也表达了希望尽快得到回复的心情。

五、申请信写作要点和细节补充LV3
【过关检测】（10mins）
1.
【答案】I have a good command of English, and I served as the host of broadcast station for 2 years, reporting the latest news around school and country during campus life.
【解析】这个要点使用了逻辑拓展，说明了英语好的原因。

2.
【答案】In addition, I am familiar with our Chinese Culture. In my spare time, I like to engage myself in reading Chinese novels and I am willing to teach them the foreign students and spread our culture.
【解析】这个要点使用了细节拓展和逻辑拓展，可以阐述了解中国历史和文化的途径，以及表达能传播出去的愿望。

3.
【答案】I have similar experiences as a volunteer. I hosted some exchange students from America last year.
【解析】一般申请工作职位时如果能表达有类似经验的话，被录取机会肯定会更高一些，所以写作要求中如果没有提到这一点我们也可以进行补充。

六、申请信写作结构和逻辑LV2
【过关检测】（10mins）
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Three. Learning that there is an intern recruitment in Charitable foundation, I writing to apply for this position.
I think I am qualified for being one of the position. First of all, as an English lover, I am glad to seize every
opportunity to challenge myself. During school life, never do I stop to participate in practice English so that I can speak English fluently. What's more, I am active and outgoing, which helps me get along with others well and conquer difficulties by myself. Besides, the host in the broadcast station is my second role which make myself close to perfect step by step.
I will be much grateful if you take my application into consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply. Sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】这篇文章是一篇标准的申请信，可以使用我们的写作模板，即第一段得知信息表明目的，第二段介绍自己的优势，第三段希望能录取和盼回复。

我们在写这一类文章的时候一定要注意整篇文章的结构正确，要点齐全且合理扩充细节，中间有连接词连接让段落显得清晰有层次，同时也要注意交际用语的恰当使用。

课后练习
补救练习（15mins）
1.
【答案】首段：得知某活动，表示很感兴趣，表明写作目的；
中段：自我介绍，展示自己的优势；
尾段：希望得到回复。

2.
【答案】I would like to apply for taking part in the activity.
【解析】would like to 比用want to语气更加委婉; apply for, 申请信的最基本词汇。

(2)
【答案】I have similar experience，so I believe I am the right person for the position/ activity.
【解析】similar，相似的，类似的，right合适的用这两个词汇更有说服力。

(3)
【答案】I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
【解析】I’d appreciate it if you could… 如果您能……我将非常感激。

take… into consideration, 把……列入考虑。

(4)
【答案】With great delight, I learned that you are recruiting some volunteers.
【解析】词句用with表伴随状态的结构，并且用了较高级词汇recruit 招募。

(5)
【答案】I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
【解析】词句用了convenient的名词形式convenience, at your earliest convenience 尽早, 用了convenient 的名词形式convenience。

巩固练习（20mins）
【答案】
Dear Sir,
I am writing to apply for a position as a volunteer for I am really interested in it. I’m Li Hua from Class 1 Senior 3.
I have a great passion for the position and I think I am qualified for it for the following reasons. First and foremost，I have a good command of English. There's no doubt that I communicate with the exchange students fluently. Besides, I have similar experience. I participated in the school volunteer club last year, so I know clearly what I should do in voluntary work. It is needless to say that I can offer some practical advice and tips to other volunteers. What's more, I am outgoing and patient, so I can get on well with others. The reason why I seek to apply for the position is that I'd like to broaden my horizon and develop my ability. I will try my best and make full use of my talents to make the activity a success.
I would appreciate it if you take my application into consideration. I’m looking forward to your reply
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
apply for申请，这是首段必须要表达出来的写作目的；要点一中的英语能力很好直接写了比较高级的短语have a good command of English；communicate with, 与……交流，broaden my horizon and develop my ability 开阔视野发展自己的能力；文章中段用了First and foremost，Besides, What's more,首先，另外，而且，提升整篇文章的逻辑性和层次感；最后用了经典的申请信结尾。

拔高练习（20mins）
【答案】
Dear Sir,
I am writing to apply for a position as a volunteer for I am really interested in it. My name is Li Hua from
Hongxing Middle School. I am in Class 1, Senior 3.
I have a great passion for the position and I think I am qualified for it for the following reasons. Firstly, I have a good command of English. There's no doubt that I communicate with the exchange students fluently. What's more, I have similar experience. I participated in the school volunteer club last year, so I know clearly what I should do in voluntary work. It is needless to say that I can offer some practical advice and tips to other volunteers. Besides, I am outgoing and patient, so I can get on well with others.
The reason why I seek to apply for the position is that I'd like to broaden my horizon and develop my ability. I will try my best and make full use of my talents to make the activity a success.
I would appreciate it if you take my application into consideration. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇申请志愿者工作的申请信，首段写得知信息很高兴而且申请这个职位，中间段写自己能胜任这个职位的原因即自己的优势，文章中段用了First and foremost，Besides, What's more,首先，另外，而且，提升整篇文章的逻辑性和层次感，尾段用了模板句式，表达自己想要被录取的愿望。