云南省第一次统测(省一统)读后续写讲义-高考英语作文复习专项

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202403云南省第一次统测（省一统）
After several deliveries, I found it wasn't very efficient. S trained (使不堪承受;使紧张)by the weight of the catalogues and limited by the bike's capacity, I was pelled (迫使，使必须）to seek a better method.Collaborating with Dad, we devised a solution: constructing a small cart for towing （拖拉、牵引）behind my bike, a move that drastically expanded my delivery capabilities. 【我和爸爸一起动手，想出了一个好办法：我们制作了一个小型的拖车，可以挂在我的自行车后面，这样一来，我的配送范围就大大增加了。

】This innovation cut my delivery time in half and made the job less physically demanding. Witnessing my savings account grow, bolstered（改善；加强）by determination and familial support, transformed the catalogues from mere paper into tickets to my dream. Three and a half years later, I saved a massive $6,500, and Dad and I flew to Cairo, E gypt.Upon arrival, the realization of my dream was overwhelming. Confronted with the majestic pyramids（金字塔）, symbols of the ancient civilization I yearned（渴望；渴
求）to explore, the experience was surreal. As Dad and I wandered through the bustling streets of Cairo, the sights, sounds, and smells of the city were a stark (（指区别）明显的，鲜明的）contrast to where my journey began. This adventure, the fruit of longlasting saving, meticulous (细心的；小心翼翼的)planning, and relentless(不停的；持续强烈的）dreaming, stood as proof that perseverance and creativity can turn the loftiest（崇高的）dreams into reality.
续写题目：
It was July 2019 and my mum Rebecca was taking me on a 120km walking holiday from Portugal to Spain as a special treat for my 10th birthday. One day, while walking along the coastal path staring out at the Atlantic ocean, I chatted away to Mum.“When Lexi turns 10, are you going to take her on a trip like this?”I asked, referring to my sevenyearold sister. Mum said Lexi had already asked to go to Svalbard in the north of Norway because she was crazy about polar bears.
Although I was still on my first special trip, I'd been learning about ancient civilizations at school and knew I'd love to see some relics in the flesh. So I continued saying,“Why don't I go to Egypt while you're in Svalbard with Lexi?”, adding that my dad, Olaf, could take me there.“Great, but I'm not paying for it.”Mum replied, chuckling. “That's fine. I'll pay,”I said, “I'll save up my pocket money and get a job.”
So that's exactly what I did. Though I was too young to do any other paid work, I had my own solution. I started saving my $10aweek pocket money. Also, I washed my parents' car or mowed the lawn for extra cash.
In 2020, we moved to Perth. One day, I saw a pamphlet (小册子) in the letter box advertising a job delivering catalogues. When I told Mum I wanted to do it, she tried to put me off the idea, reminding me that the work was tiring and timeconsuming. But when seeing the determination in my eyes, she agreed to call them. Thankfully, my young age didn't bother them–I got the job. On a Monday, a mountain of catalogues were dropped off at our house, which shocked me a lot. I told myself to calm down and dedicated to work. It took me nine hours to sort through them. At first, I used my bike and carried the catalogues in my backpack to deliver them to 430 houses in my
area.
主要人物：我是这个故事的主角，一个因梦想而努力存钱的孩子；父亲Olaf，故事的最后，陪同我去埃及
主题：
坚持和创新：故事强调了面对挑战时坚持不懈的重要性以及使用创新来克服障碍的价值。

它展示了决心和创造性问题解决的方式如何能够实现一个人的梦想。

成长和成就：故事还涉及了通过努力和创新实现个人成长和目标达成的主题。

情节：
故事从我十岁生日时与母亲在葡萄牙到西班牙的徒步旅行开始，透露了我对埃及古文明的兴趣和决定为实现去埃及的梦想而存钱。

接着讲述了我如何通过做家务和分发小册子的工作来积累旅行基金。

最后，我和父亲实现了前往埃及的梦想，体验了那里的文化和古迹。

情节故事山：
开始：故事从我和母亲在我10岁生日时沿着葡萄牙到西班牙的海岸线徒步旅行开始。

我对古代文明的兴趣促使我想要去埃及看看那里的遗迹，而我妹妹Lexi 则梦想去挪威的斯瓦尔巴群岛看北极熊。

这标志了我决定为了实现自己的梦想而开始积攒钱的开始。

冲突：我意识到需要自己积攒足够的钱去埃及。

尽管开始时只能通过做家务来赚取额外的零用钱，但我没放弃，并决定通过分发小册子来赚更多的钱。

我面对的挑战包括母亲对我从事这份工作的担忧，工作本身的艰辛和时间消耗，以及最初使用自行车分发时的低效率和身体负担。

高潮：面对分发小册子的艰难，我终于通过某种方法大大减少了我的工作时间，使得任务变得不那么体力要求高，并且看到我的储蓄账户的增长，让我对实现
梦想充满了希望。

解决：通过几年的坚持不懈和创新努力，我最终积攒了足够的钱。

三年半后，我和父亲一起飞往了埃及，实现了我的梦想。

埃及之行不仅满足了我对古代文明的好奇心，也是我坚持和创造力的胜利。

结尾：在埃及的经历让我深刻体会到了我的梦想成真的喜悦，我从中学到了通过努力和创造性思维，可以实现看似不可能的目标。

这次旅行不仅是一个冒险，更是我成长过程中的一个重要里程碑，证明了持续努力的重要性和价值。