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雅思基础写作精讲班第1讲讲义基础写作基本框架Procedure of writing:How to distribute the time of 40 minutes一、议论文真题类型分类：练习题目：1. Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. Do you agree?2. To what extent is nuclear technology a danger to life on Earth? What are the benefits and risks associated with its use?3. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.4. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.5. Scientific and technological advances have changed our lives. But some scientists in some fields say that scientists are not able to find solutions to the problems they havecreated. To what extent do you agree or disagree?6. Intelligent machines such as robots are increasingly being used. They can do many things that used to be done by human. Discuss the benefits and dangers.7. In order to solve the problems of traffic jam and air pollution, government is determined to raise the price of petrol. Do you believe it isthe best way? What other methods can you recommend?确定关键词Procedure of writing:How to distribute the time of 40 minutes一、议论文真题类型分类：练习题目：1. Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. Do you agree?2. To what extent is nuclear technology a danger to life on Earth? What are the benefits and risks associated with its use?3. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.4. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug useby young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.5. Scientific and technological advances have changed our lives. But some scientists in some fields say that scientists are not able to find solutions to the problems they have created. To what extent do you agree or disagree?6. Intelligent machines such as robots are increasingly being used. They can do many things that used to be done by human. Discuss the benefits and dangers.7. In order to solve the problems of traffic jam and air pollution, government is determined to raise the price of petrol. Do you believe it is the best way? What other methods can you recommend?雅思基础写作精讲班第2讲讲义07年真题回顾2. 真题思路扩展brainstorming（1）specific: I. from abstract to personal: air travel, oneself study—group study, fast food-traditional food （2）general: economy, environment, efficiency, safety, pleasure, science and technology避开主题句错误类型3. 确定主题句：ascertain topic sentencesI. Some mistakes of the thesis statement or topic sentences:（1）The subject of this paper will be my parents.（2）My parents have been the most influential people in my life.（3）My parents had only one child.（4）My parents helped me grow in important ways, although in other respects I was limited.4. 开始动笔写作：1. format: block,2. pencil3. handwriting: clean and clear4. time control: 34m5. 装饰和改错：decoration and correction（1）After I cashed my paycheck. I treated myself to dinner.（2）The instructor told everyone in the room to be quiet his favorite show was on.（3）How you react to the incident reveal what side you stand on.（4）The crowd has surged forward, showing their excitement.（5）There are more and more people go abroad nowadays.（6）The student who had sat down quickly put on the headphones. 雅思基础写作精讲班第3讲讲义必备模板第二种模板形式(五段式）雅思基础写作精讲班第4讲讲义Mixed typesMethod:Successful introduction:1. “Knowledge is power,” wrote Francis Bacon long ago.Today college students are hard at study to acquire all kinds of skills, such as English, computer, and driving.People, however, cannot reach a general consensus on what subjects should be attached more importance to,academic or practical.( academic subjects Vs. practical subjects) (As the old saying goes)Art is long, life isshort;(Rudyard Kipling wrote) East is east, and West is west, and never the twain shall meet!; Experience is the father of wisdom and memory the mother; Knowledge isa treasure, but practice is the key to it; Knowledgeadvances by steps, not by leaps; Great works areperformed not by strength but by perseverance; Genius is nothing but labor and diligence.2. What can be done to solve the problem of watershortage? Surely, modern people frequently are plagued with this question. As for me, there are three methods as followings.（the problem of water shortage）3. Is the history of no avail to modern society? Recentdiscussions concerning the function of history haveraised some very real doubts in the minds ofcontemporary people. As far as I am concerned, we can benefit a lot form the past.(whether history is useful to cotemporary society)4. A recent survey reports that there were about one thirdof college graduates who could not find an ideal job in2005. This fact prompts us to make a thorough analysis of the root reason of this alarming phenomenon.(theissue of unemployment of graduates)5. It is generally agreed that the main responsibility ofteachers is to pass on knowledge to students. As a result, if students can do well in academic subjects, theirteachers are qualified enough. However, I assert thatassisting students in distinguishing right from wrong is more significant for teachers.(the relationship between students and teachers)6. With the development of computer technology, books, asa traditional medium, are more and more challenged.Many libraries are faced with such a dilemma, whether they should invest on computers or on books. With every aspect taken into consideration, I believe that to invest on computers would be a better choice.(investment inbooks or computers for a library)Successful body:1. One main reason for water shortage is lack of theawareness of water conservation. For example, moreoften than not we can come across such a phenomenon that a person turns a faucet on and forgets to turn it off.Precious water has been totally squandered. （theproblem of water shortage）2. Smoking should be banned without any hesitation for it israther detrimental to people’s health. Cigarette smokecontains nicotine, several cancer producing or irritatingsubstances and carbon monoxide gas. Damage to the lining of the bronchial tubes is much more among cigarettesmokers than non smokers, even when there is no obvious disease. Some of these changes are considered to bepre-cancerous. Lung function is generally reduced among cigarette smokers. Cigarette smoking is a greater hazard than other factors---such as community air pollution—in the causation of lung cancer and chronic bronchitis.(nosmoking)3 Due to great strides of modern technology, dramatictransformations have taken place in our life. In the past, if we were anxious to contact friends, we had to drop in on them in person, which was inconvenient andtime-consuming. Now, fashionable cell phones can be an efficient bridge between acquaintances.(the benefit of modern technology)4. There are a lot of benefits of raising dogs. First, dogscontribute to the health of their owners. Often theirdemands for walks and play improve their owner’sexercise routine. In fact, statistics show that dog owners get more regular exercise than non-dog owners do. Also, they enhance health simply be being around to bepetted. Second, they provide a means for parents toteach their children responsibility. When parents givechildren a dog, they provide them the opportunity tofulfill the responsibilities of walking, feeding, and caring for its other needs. Finally and most important of all,dogs enhance the well-being and emotional stability of families. Older people who live alone especially rely on dogs to give them enjoyment and company. Childrenalso find a great deal of comfort in their dogs. As anexample, a family dog helps a little boy adapt when his mother leaves him with a sitter and goes towork..(advantage of keeping pets)5.lot of advantages. Firstly, after three or four years ofschooling, students can undoubtedly acquire valuableexpertise, which is essential to their future jobs. As weknow, through compulsory and optional courses,students lay a solid foundation in a particular field andare confident to solve the relevant problemsconfronted.(benefits of college education)6. By contrast, the opponents argue that its drawbacksshould not be ignored. For one thing, some existingmajors are so out of date that they serve no purpose for the future job. In such a dilemma, there is no doubt that graduation means exactly unemployment. If whatstudents learn in colleges is only theoreticalargumentation definitely unconnected with reality, what is the point in wasting such prime time? (drawbacks of college education)Successful conclusion:1. The extinction of species, the shortage of lumber anddrug ingredients, the reduction of oxygen and theincrease of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere all signal that we cannot afford to lose any moreforests.(protection of forests)2. To stop losing more forests, we should educate people,especially those who have destroyed and who are going to destroy forests for one reason or another, in why forestsmust exist on the earth. (protection of forests)雅思基础写作精讲班第5讲讲义写作的素材素材Topics:1. If a five-year old commits a crime, should his/her parents have the responsibility and are punished? What is the age of a child when parents no longer bear the responsibility for children's behavior? /Unlike other countries, police in UK donot carry guns. Some think it leaves citizen unprotected, while others think it reduces the overall violence in our society. Discuss both the views.2. We know that university graduates should earn higher salary than less well-educated members, so in this way they should pay all the full cost. /Quality of people that we need in our society can’t be learned in universities and other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?3. International tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?/ Government should build new buildings in a traditional way in order to protect traditional culture.4. The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? / Billions of money is spent on the space research. Some people say that it should be spent on improving the living standard of the people on the earth. Do you agree or disagree?5. Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, and the protection is a waste of resource. Agree or disagree? /Some people think killing animals for food is cruel and unnecessary and some people think is essential for dairy diet. To what extent what do you think about the both issues?6. Nowadays motorized flight is considered as the most important and influential invention in the world. Not any other invention has such a significant impact on our lives. Agree?/ Maintaining public library is a waste of money, because computer technology has already replaced its function. Do you agree or disagree?7. Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories with their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?/ The environmental problem is so serious to most countries and individuals that it needs the international cooperation. Do you agree or disagree?8. Mass media have a significant influence on our life and this is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree?/ Do thenegative effects of some international media such as TV and magazine for example overweigh the positive effects?Topic Word:I.1. society: Society is flooded with unhealthy substance in the mass media, such as violence and pornography, therefore having inevitably downside effect on people, Citizens are preoccupied by money worship to make profits by hook or by crook; parents never discipline children strictly, divorce rate rockets, children are in need of solicitude, youngsters fall victim to prevalent domestic violence and are prone to aggressive impulse; students are heavily encumbered by knowledge acquisition, psychological education has been neglected, confronted with frustration, children have no efficient outlet to alleviate stress.素材（2）犯罪处罚2. Government should mount a crackdown on crime and bring criminals to justice, the aim is to reform those who have gone astray, offenders can turn over a new leaf and are endowed withproficiency in a particular line, inferiority complex and psychological shadow should be avoided, delinquents harbor vengeful sentiments against others and society as a whole, lawbreakers resume committing crimes or committing suicide.II.1. students can acquire academic qualification, learners can develop expertise, pupils have practical ability to apply what they have learned to society; campus and dormitory life instill discipline into students, living together can cultivate cooperation and strengthen the skill of interpersonal relationship, learners get tolerant of others, schooling can help students tell right from wrong2. course framework ought to be more flexible, such as more optional subjects rather than compulsory ones, interests can be aroused, subjects are practical and related to future jobs, learners should be more motivated, they have convenient access to relevant information of majors.III.1. advantage: cultures are mutually beneficial, theycan pool and share resources, the platform of exchange of ideas will assist diverse countries in comprehending actual state of affairs of distinct cultures, globalization will facilitate mutual understanding and dispel misunderstanding; disadvantage: the conflict between mainstream and marginal cultures will result in lesser-known cultures on the verge of extinction, the world is turned into a similar and monotonous entity.2. tradition is precious and unique, it symbolizes identity of a nation, people in the homeland are bristled with pride, for example, Forbidden City, fantastic buildings witness resplendent culture of feudalism, the Bastille, time-honored prison appreciates glorious history of French Revolution; peaceful coexistence between tradition and modernity should be guaranteed, tradition serves as places of tourist interests and boost the development of economy, we can invest money in the conservation of tradition and promote the education of protecting tradition.雅思基础写作精讲班第6讲讲义第四大主题1. the ultimate purpose of government is to serve the people, dispelling adverse substance is the obligation, authority should make overall planning and give consideration to the interests of all sides in adopting policies, it can exercise executive power if necessary.V.1. animals are in an unfavorable situation, they are entitled to the right of subsistence and deserve impartial treatment, it is unjustifiable to expropriate the right of living,2. humans enjoy the right of priority, in medical field, human beings can carry out clinical experiment on laboratory animals, they can achieve breakthrough in medical treatment, vivisection is justifiable.3. a reciprocal relationship is strongly recommended, equilibrium in biosphere and harmonious development can be beneficial to each other, they are indispensable to each other,1. white-hot technology transforms the life of drudgery into a convenient and comfortable one, entertainment at a finger’s click is not beyond our wildest dream, the means of communications, traffic, and information have been changed dramatically, humans are more confident about the future2. people adhere to hedonist philosophy and become indolent, declined ability is accompanying the progress; humans are heavily dependent on modern science, they become alienated, environment falls victim to advance of science and technology, environmental pollution has been aggravated.素材7VII.1. modern society are flooded with one-off products, such as chopsticks, shopping bags, and purified water bottles, some of them are non-biodegradable, industry, fossil fuel in industrial development is widely applied, petrol, coal, gas, the increase of carbon dioxide leads to global warming and air pollution, it will deplete ozone layer, farming, fertilizer andpesticide give rise to erosion of soil.2. government should pursue strict policy and popularize biodegradable packaging, coordination should be ensured among various countries, education will fire the masses with enthusiasm for environmental protection.VIII.1. Readers are thoroughly informed of current affairs, they can have access to up-to-date information and enjoy the right to know the truth, the freedom of speech will be guaranteed.2. Because of lack of professional ethics, shameless and unscrupulous journalists always carry gloomy news, such as murder, to promote circulation, paparazzo(singular), hordes of paparazzi(plural), invade privacy, chequebook journalism leads to sham news, the mass media follow the fashion and pander to the low taste, it encourages vulgar interests雅思基础写作精讲班第7讲讲义写作中必备的词汇和句式词汇和句式：第一:1.appalling/drug-related/commit/tackle crime, turn to crime: bored youngsters turn to crime. hardened criminal, teach criminals salutary lessons, unwilling victims, fall victim to,2.decent education, enter higher education, education authority, education resources, encyclopedic knowledge, broaden knowledge,3. alien/indigenous/dominant/mainstream culture, assimilate the culture, experience culture shock, a mutual exchange of ideas, facilitate communication, eco-friendly tourismernment agency/backing, guarantee equality, maximize efficiency, supplement meagre income,5.prove medically beneficial for human beings, endangered animals, laboratory animals, slaughter animals,6. white-hot technology, communication/telecommunications technology, treat the world with difference,7. safeguard the environment, damage the environment, environment issues/protection, pollution of the environment, fragile balance, sit in traffic jam, strike a balance8.tabloid journalism, fashion/literary/science journalism, the world of journalism, information bombard, create serious disturbance to people, accurate information, misleading advertisements, classified advertisements,第二：1. give rise to/lead to/arouse a heated discussion/perplexity; when it comes to.., it is commonly believed that…; one indisputable fact is that….;it goes without saying that…; it cannot be denied that…; recently, …has been brought into focus; with the rapid of development of…, …has gained an ever-increasing popularity in modern people’s life;…..is not strange to modern people.I assert…; in my opinion…; what I emphasize is that…;2. the reasons are multiple, it is manifest that…., it is conceded that…, in other words, that is to say, for example.3. from what has been discussed above…, taking into account all the points.., from the above-mentioned facts,.. I am convinced that..第四种词汇第三：alarming issue/ thorny problem, crucial reason/contributing factor, profound impact/ disruptive influence, charismatic culture/ time-honored tradition, beneficialinterest/spectacular result, persistent effort/genuine dilemma, pollution prevention/prevailing attitude, efficient solution/mass production, harmoniousrelationship/sustainable development, rosy picture/ monotonous routine, infallible methodology, severepenalty/impending crisis, draconian measure/appropriate punishment, widespread phenomenon/current situation, rampant corruption/petty crime, improperly undoubtedly, inevitably, indiscriminately, absolutely, responsibly第四：1.In addition/additionally: Computers provide efficient work. In addition, they make our life more colorful.Furthermore/further: This method can, furthermore, be used in environmental protection. Moreover: private cars are cheap and, moreover, it can improve our life. In other words: Killing live animals is cruel, a murder in other words.2． Hence: The cost of transport is a major expense for a person. Hence job location is an important consideration. Consequently: Globalization is a widespread phenomenon and consequently the domestic culture has been affected. Thereupon: Nature will revenge on humans. Thereupon people begin to realize the power of nature.3．Whereas: Smoking is something personal whereas it will affect others’ right. Conversely: S ome policemen prefer to carry guns when on duty; conversely others are reluctant to do that.4．Although/though: Although some young men really have no idea of what a new culture is, they absorb it without any reservation. Granted: Granted that the deed is not perfect, the disadvantages are outweighed by the advantages.5. for example, specifically: Specifically, the departmentwanted answers to the following questions.6. On condition that: Television enrich our lives a lot on condition that we are not addicted to it. Given that: Given that pets have become an indispensable part of some people’s life, the key is to coordinate the relationship between them.雅思基础写作精讲班第8讲讲义第六种词汇positive words:1. strive for a harmonious society/greater efficiency/striveto do something争取2. take suitable/timely steps to address this problem.采取合适/及时的措施3. top the central government's agenda.位于…最重要的位置4. assist sb in sth.在…方面帮助5. play an increasingly more integral role in wealthdistribution.起到越来越整体的作用6. contribute to sth/doing做出贡献7. implement the policy执行8. exert a positive/baneful effect on9. embark on reform and opening开始做…10. t ake initiative to eliminate negative effects.主动做…11. l aunch a spate of stringent measures发动，采取12. n avigate one’s way through the difficult situation.通过13. P roblems triggered by income composition are easy toresolve.解决/ muster enough resolve to quit smoking.鼓起勇气/Distribution of wealth is tainted and distorted by corruption must be redressed.纠正14. P roblems arising from development-based factors can berelieved and eased.减轻/ improve and ease减轻 thedifficulties and frustrations faced by travelers15. e liminate/ weed out 消除the structure of unscientificdesign.16. u tilize利用 their rich resources.17. i mprove/upgrade/optimize改善 the conditions18. f acilitate 推动the country's future sustainabledevelopment.19. b oost 推进the employment20. s houlder 承担起greater social responsibilities/bridge 消除，减少the cultural differences./ sth is mirrored by被反映21. m ake a difference有很重要的作用22. a vail oneself of something利用23. a bide by traffic rules遵守24. e nhance their job opportunities/enrich one’s life丰富，提高25. a spire to careers in finance/aspire to study abroad努力想要26. v oice their support for the movement表示了27. m ake efforts to do努力做事情28. h elp with 帮助weight loss and control; improve 改善fitness; reduce 减少stress, and of course save 节省money on petrol and parking.29. m inimize 减轻air and noise pollution, traffic accidents,oil consumption, road repairs and beautifies cities. 30. T hose measures, coupled with 与…一起advanced science andtechnology, will be taken without any delay.31. H ouse prices will start to calm down, saving the sector.下降32. T he current campaign to curb控制 the use of tobacco shouldbe stepped up.加速33. n urture/ cultivate a great number of learned people/培养，培育34. F igures released 公布on World No Tobacco Day serve as asource of frustration for everyone who wants to curb smokingin China.35. a slew of/a spate of/ a skyrocketing number of多数量第五：negative words:1. fail to do没能做…2. be a heache to…对于..是个难题3. pose a potential threat to residents' health.有潜在的威胁4. mean a formidable battle to do艰苦的斗争5. is now confronted with the same question that haunts/ beplagued with/be afflicted with (overpopulation/youth drug abuse/traffic accidents) 受到…问题的困扰6. be detrimental to sth对..有害7. focus attention on/bring something to somebody's attention引起…注意8. be blind to this point注意不到，忽视9. be of no avail没有用处10. crack down on(严厉的处罚) smoking in public places andpenalize(处罚) those who sell cigarettes to juveniles.11. exert a negative effect on sth有负面的影响12. exacerbate income disequilibrium/ The situation wascompounded by…加剧了13. squander natural resources浪费14. deprive sb of sth剥夺15. We believe that car tax should be scrapped.废除16. If it is hard to rein in控制17. The move has aroused controversy引起争论18. Apart from that, numerous factors are to blame for thecurrent situation. 责备19. We must stop pampering children纵容20. take various measures to tackle such malpractices处理玩忽职守21. Air pollution has turned into a major hazard affecting urbanresidents' quality of life. 巨大的危险影响了.22. an apparent total lack of明显的完全缺乏23. social and economic disequilibrium/ gauge(衡量) incomeinequality/disparity不平衡24. the severity of the pollution levels严重性25. lung damage and respiratory problems肺部损害以及呼吸问题26 be mind-boggling/ a problem of mind-boggling complexity令人难以置信的27. People cannot help but wonder why efforts to cut the numberof smokers have proven to be so futile. 没有效果的28. Smokers are six times more likely to be infertile（不生育的）and have a greater chance of becoming disabled,（残疾的） while women who smoke have a higher chance ofcontracting（得…病） breast cancer.29. looming environmental and public health disaster逐渐显现的30. leave others to the mercy of market forces受到..控制31. The abuse（滥用） of power for financial gain veils behind(隐藏)monopolies32. a hard nut to crack is that..困难是…33. Emissions from car exhausts have been found to be one ofthe major sources of urban air pollution. 尾气的排放34. carbon dioxide and carbon monoxide二氧化碳，一氧化碳35. We have no reason to be optimistic about the improvementof urban air quality. 对..不乐观第六：同义必备词：66. youth, teenager, minor, fledgling67. the old, elderly, grizzled, grey-headed68. conserve, preserve保存，如：We must conserve our waterresources for future generations.69. assure, ensure(insure), guarantee, pledge, avouch保证，如：Government should assure consumers of the quality of commodities. /It is important to insure that universities have enough funds to carry out important research inscience subjects./ The law guarantees equal rights for men and women./ The new government pledged to reduce crime./ Some criminals avouched that they themselves wereinnocent.70. Ideal, aspiration(beyond normal expectation), ambition(aparticular end)理想，雄心71. compare with/to, contrast, analogize(elaboration on thefunction of families in social life, sociologists like to analogists them to the cells of a human body.) 比较72. change, alter, modify(change of function), convert into,transform(appearance),改变73. argue, controversy(long-continued argument),dispute(angry manner), debate(formal argument)争论74. standard, criterion, gauge, yardstick标准75. inevitable, inescapable, unavoidable难免76. wealth, property, assets, fortune财富77. attend, take part in, participate in(formal), partake in,join in,参与。

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第一章第一章写作概述
60 分钟
Task 1 150w G: letter A:graph 1/3
Task 2 250w Essay
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评分标准（四要素作文法）
Task
Grganization
Idea
Language
第二章第二章议论文----概述
一、字数、时间 250-300 words 35-40m
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Those who strongly approve of the ban lay too much emphasis on the rights of nonsmokers. They ignore smokers’ rights. Smoking is just a personal hobby and amusement. It is a kind of lifestyle. It is a stress reliever and can bring great pleasure to smokers. Furthermore, for smokers, nothing seems more difficult and painful than giving up the habit.

雅思强化写作精讲班第1讲讲义

雅思强化写作精讲班第1讲讲义Timing时间安排难点：时间长，强度大;对策：练习时控制时间;Academic writing学术类写作文体的特殊要求1Some teachers don‘t know how to use computers to help the students Effectively.文体2Historic buildings attract lots of visitors and can improve the local economy.非正式词汇3The impact of tourism on these neighbourhoods should be analyzed.拼写4Children in wealthy families are more and more dependent on their parents.实词5Serious crimes harm people’s lives.实词6The advantages of stopping animal experiments are more than continuing them.实词7Today，advertisements are everywhere.There are many ways to do advertisements.句式8The environment is becoming worse.We must work together to deal with it.句式9So,we must take steps to deal with the environmental problems!色彩10We must be friendly to others because the Bible said,“Treat your neighbors as you would like to be treated.”文化背景Different tasks写作任务复杂Different tasks写作任务复杂写作任务task1图表题和task2议论文之间差异大Some people think criminals should get longer terms in prison while others think there are others ways to reduce the crime rate.Discuss.Many animals and plants are dying out today.What are the causes and what are your solutions?Some people believe that we should not use air transportation to carry fruits and vegetables.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people think the high sales of products reflect the power of advertisements instead of the demand of customers.To what extent do you agree?Today we can do some everyday tasks such as shopping,banking and business transactions without meeting each other face to face.What are the effectsof this phenomenon on individuals and society as a whole?Many people use emails and mobile phones today instead of writing letters.Some people think the skill of letter-writing will disappear completely.To what extent do you agree?Individual persons and countries cannot do anything about the environment. Environmental problems can only be solved by international effort.Do you agree？Some people think public libraries are useless today because we can use computer technology to get the information that we need.Do you agree? Some people think universities should only teach theories,not employment skills.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Health is a basic human need.Some people think medical care should not be provided by private profit-making companies.To what extent do you agree?Some people think the best way to solve environmental problems is to raise the price of fuel.Do you agree?Some people think we need more female leaders to create world peace and reduce violence.To what extent do you agree?Multi-cultured societies are mixtures of many ethnic groups.To what extent do you think the disadvantages of multi-cultured societies outweigh their advantages?When we learn a language,we should also learn the culture and lifestyle of that country.Do you agree?Some people think the purposes of museums should be to educate people while others think museums should be enjoyable places to attract and entertain people.Discuss.Some people think students should live with their parents instead of living at school.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people think the housing shortage in big cities can only be solved by the government.Do you agree or disagree?Today many young people cannot find a job after they graduate from university.What are the individual and social reasons for this phenomenon?There are many security measures in big cities today to reduce the crime rate.To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?Long-distance flight consumes natural resources and pollutes the air. Some people think it should be banned.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Technology and science have great influence on our lives.But some people think we should also value the work of artists such as musicians,painters and writers.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state.Do you agree or disagree?Some people think children who are brought up in families without a large amount of money are better prepared to solve the problems in their adult years than children brought up in wealthy families.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Many people are optimistic about the21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism?What changes would you like to be made in the new century?对策:考试之前至少全程练习一次task1和task2。

雅思作文第一讲

• Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.
动词不能做主语 Work 改为动名词 Working
• Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
Pay attention 搭配to Reason for… Solution to….
• The internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms.
• Instead of 可以是副词或连词，但不是动词。动词“替代”是replace 或者supplant 用replaced 或者 supplanted 代替 instead of
并列句主谓宾+主谓宾 and/or/but
• Poor students behaviour seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are responsible for this. • How these things interact is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a person’s life.
区分三种句子：简单句、并列句、复杂句
• 简单句只含主谓宾成分。而当谓语是不及物动词（只能单独使用，不可以接宾语的动词）的时候，简单句就是主语+谓语 • People hold different views on this issue. • The value of experiments is not limited to sciences. • 简单句在雅思作文里，常常用于TOPIC SENTENCE ，和分论点，简单明了，突出主题。

雅思基础写作第一讲解析

例如：

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages about this What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this issue?

第五类：综合类
题目中出现之前提到的两种文章组合
例如：
1）Arguments, Ideas and evidence: 内容切题，论据合理，论证充分。不要出现跑题。有的考生写离题了。
例：
Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. Do you agree or disagree? 如果考生不懂international tourism是什么意思的话，这道题是没法写的。
Assessment Criteria
IELTS 写作新评分标准：
GRA: Grammatical Range and Accuracy （语法范围与精确性)
语言能力
LR:Lexical Resource （词汇资源) CC: Coherence & Cohesion （内容连贯与篇章衔接）
思维能力
雅思大作文写作
考试考查点
有没有明确的中心观点有没有证明中心观点的论据能否充分展开论证
有没有明确的开头、正文和结尾段落是否有明确的主题句和论证句句子和句子之间，段落和段落之间是否有衔接

雅思写作第一课 task1导入

Lesson oneI.Teaching ObjectiveEnable students to master basic writing skills to fulfill task 1II.The points to be highlightedThe general format for writing academic writing task 1;Necessary vocabularyIII.Teaching approachesLecture; Q&AIV.Teaching procedures1.Lead-inAsk what they know about IELTS and the types of task one2.Specific contents2.1 Things you should know about Academic Writing Task 1小作文须知•You are asked to describe information presented in graph/ table/ chart/ diagram.•You have 20 minutes to finish the task and you have to write at least 150 words.•If you are asked to use the information presented in the graph you must be careful not to copy it.2.2 Assessment criteria 评分标准标准一：Task Achievement (任务完成情况）标准二：Coherence and Cohesion (连贯与衔接）标准三：Lexical Resources (词汇丰富程度）标准四：Grammatical Range and Accuracy (语法多样性及准确性)2.3 Attention注意事项TA：确认描述对象(一定要确定好图表里的数字代表什么）；一定要写总结和归纳段；注意总结图表里的主要信息和趋势（图表的最高值和最低值、数值之间的比较、上升或下降等趋势的归纳）CC：连接词（表示对比、比较、转折、相同趋势的一些连接词）；描述信息遵循合理的顺序（譬如从高值到低值，或者先总结上升幅度大的，然后说上升幅度小的)；分段恰当LR：词性的变化；灵活使用单词GRA：句子结构的多样性及准确性；没有错误的句子；时态正确2.4 The general format/ structure套路:Introduction + Basic/General Trends + Details Description + Conclusion.2.5 necessary vocabulary 必备词汇（课堂补充，课后记忆）2.5.1 introductionYou need to begin with one or two sentences that state what the IELTS writing task 1 shows. To doHere is an example for the above line graph:The line graph compares the fast food consumption of teenagers in Australia between 1975 and 2000, a period of 25 years.You can see this says the same thing as the title, but in a different way.2.5.2 General trendIt is recommended to write the general trend parts in the same paragraph with the introduction. The general trend part should focus the main point of the presentation and should not be too large with lots of information. However you should not give the specific figure, time, amount or data presented in the graph. You can use phrase like As is presented/ as is observed / in general / in common etc. to start this part.One thing that stands out in this graph is that one type of fast food fell over the period, whilst the other two increased, so this would be a good overview.Here is an example:Overall, the consumption of fish and chips declined over the period, whereas the amount of pizza and hamburgers that were eaten increased.This covers the main changes that took place over the whole period.You may sometimes see this overview as a conclusion. It does not matter if you put it in the conclusion or the introduction when you do an IELTS writing task 1, but you should provide an overview in one of these places.2.5.3 Detailed descriptionThe Detailed description part comes after the introduction and general trend and should be written in the second paragraph. When you give the detail in your body paragraphs in your IELTS writing task 1, you must make reference to the data.The key to organizing your body paragraphs for an IELTS writing task 1 is to group data together where there are patterns.To do this you need to identify any similarities and differences.Look at the graph –what things are similar and what things are different?As we have already identified in the overview, the consumption of fish and chips declined over theperiod, whereas the amount of pizza and hamburgers that were eaten increased.So it is clear that pizza and hamburgers were following a similar pattern, but fish and chips were different. On this basis, you can use these as your ‘groups’, and focus one paragraph on fish and chip and the other one on pizza and hamburgers.Here is an example of the first paragraph:I n 1975, the most popular fast food with Australian teenagers was fish and chips, being eaten 100 times a year. This was far higher than Pizza and hamburgers, which were consumed approximately 5 times a year. However, apart from a brief rise again from 1980 to 1985, the consumption of fish and chips gradually declined over the 25 year timescale to finish at just under 40.As you can see, the focus is on fish and chips. This does not mean you should not mention the other two foods, as you should still make comparisons of the data as the questions asks.The second body then focuses on the other foods:In sharp contrast to this, teenagers ate the other two fast foods at much higher levels. Pizza consumption increased gradually until it overtook the consumption of fish and chips in 1990. It then levelled off from 1995 to 2000. The biggest rise was seen in hamburgers as the occasions they were eaten increased sharply throughout the 1970’s and 1980’s, exceeding that of fish and chips in 1985. It finished at the same level that fish and chips began, with consumption at 100 times a year.The things you should follow in this part :» Use appropriate tense to describe the data.(基于以往的统计数据，常用一般过去式。

基础雅思写作.(课堂PPT)

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➢回应写作任务过程中始终呈现一个清晰
晰的行文推进发展贯穿全文
的观点
➢恰当地使用一
➢呈现、发展主要论点并就其进行论证，但有时出现过于一概
系列衔接手段，尽管有时使用不足或过多
及准确性
➢多数句子准确无误
➢对一使语定用体认不及识常搭见配词有汇，➢握少对较许语好错法，误及但标有点时符出号现掌
➢在选择用词、拼
1. 雅思写作Task 2 评分标准（7,6,5）
Band Task Response
Coherence and Cohesion
Lexical Resource
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
➢addresses all
➢logically organises ➢uses a sufficient ➢uses a variety of
写及/或构词方面
而论的倾向及/或论 ➢每个段落均有可能偶尔出现错
点缺乏重点的倾向一个清晰的中心误
主题
Band Task Response
Coherence and Cohesion
Lexical Resource
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
➢addresses all parts ➢arranges
作任务，但某些部点，总体来说，能清词汇开展写作与复杂句式
分的论证可能比其他部分更为充分
晰地推进行文发展任务 ➢有效地使用衔接手段，➢试图使用不
➢在语法及标点符号方面有一些错误，但
➢提出了一个切题但句内及/或句间的衔常用词汇，但这些错误很少影响交
的观点，尽管各种接有时有误或过于机有时使用不准流

雅思写作第一节课课堂讲义

雅思写作第一节课课堂讲义Unit 1 雅思IELTS 考试写作简介雅思考试写作部分在听力和阅读后进行，由两部分组成，TASK1和TASK2。

要求考生在60分钟内完成两篇文章的写作。

普通培训类和学术类考生在写作的考试内容上有一些区别。

两类写作TASK2题目类型基本相同，考试的结构和要求也大体相同，要求在40分钟完成250字左右的议论文。

类似英美国家学校里任课教师布置的课堂讨论作文。

一般要求考生根据自己的知识和经验就一个现象阐明自己的态度和见解，或就一个观点发表自己赞同或反对的观点。

学术类写作TASK 1（ACADEMIC TRAINING MODULE）要求考生对题目中给出的各类图表加以观察和分析，并根据已知的图表和资料写一篇不少于150字的小短文。

考得较多的有曲线图、柱状图、饼状图、表格、饼图等。

也有可能考到两种不同种类的图。

另外，流程图和示意图也偶尔考到。

时间20分钟。

普通培训类写作TASK1（GENERAL TRAINING MODULE）则要求考生就某个假设的场景写一封信. 到目前为止，出现较多的书信种类有投诉信、请求信、建议信、寻找失物信、邀请信等。

20分钟内完成150个字的文章。

总之，就题目的难度而言，GENERAL TRAINING MODULE 普通类写作比ACADEMIC TRAINING MODULE学术类写作稍微简单一些。

评分标准The examiner reads your answer and awards band score of between 1(did not answer the question) and 9 (native speaker-like ) according to these criteria: ? 1.T ask Response (i.e. how fully and appropriately the candidate has answered all parts of the task; the extent to which the candidate's ideas are relevant, developed and supported; the extent to which the candidate's position isclear and effective)2.Coherence and Cohesion (i.e. how well the information and ideas are organized and presented i.e. paragraphing; how well the information is linked) ?3.Lexical Resource (i.e. the range of vocabulary used, how accurately it is used and how appropriate it is for the task)4.Grammatical Range and Accuracy (i.e. the range of structures used, how accurately they are used and how appropriate they are for the task)The band scores are then added together divided by 3 and rounded to determine your band score for this task.Writing Overall Band = 1 / 3* Task1 + 2 / 3*Task2For example: Task1 =6Task2 =7Overall Band = 1 / 3* 6 + 2 / 3*7= 6.5Unit 2 曲线图1.描述上升的单词increase rise grow go up词汇升级：creep up ≤10edge up 10 ease up 20boom 30 surge 45 soar 60 swell 70 escalate 80 rocket 902．描述下降的单词decrease drop decline fall go down词汇升级：creep down ≤10edge down 10 ease down 20ebb 30 subside 45 slump 60 collapse 70 plunge 80 plummet 903．描述波动的单词fluctuate --- fluctuation go up and down rise and fall例：Sales of Computers 1995There was a slight growth in the sales of computers from Jan to Feb. However, they increased dramatically to a peak in the next month. After that, there was a downward trend in sales between Mar and Aug, which leveled off by the end of Dec.Task 1每部分的结构:例题分析example 1WRITING TASK 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe graph below shows the number of passengers in a London underground station at different times of the day.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting themain features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.Number of passengers at a London underground stationThe line graph illustrates the fluctuation in the number of people at a London underground station over the course of a day.开头段三种万能方法：①改单词②换句型③加信息The busiest time of the day is in the morning. There is a sharp increase between 06:00 and 08:00, with 400 people using the station at 8 o'clock. After this the numbers drop quickly to less than 200 at 10 o'clock. Between 11 am and 2 pm the number rises, with a plateau of just under 300 people using the station.In the afternoon, numbers decline, with less than 100 using the station at 4 pm. There is then a rapid rise to a peak of 380 at 6 pm. After 7 pm, numbers fall significantly, with only a slight increase again at 8pm, tailing off after 9 pm.Overall, the graph shows that the station is most crowded in the early morning (around 08:00) and early evening (around 18:00) periods.例题分析2:Sample 2WRITING TASK 1---“例2”You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe graph below shows the annual amount of fish caught in North America from 1972 to 2000.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.line graph with two linesThe graph reveals changes in fish catches for the US and Canada over the last 30 years.Between 1975 and 1981, US fish catches averaged between 2.5 and 2.75 million tons per year, while Canadian landings fluctuated between 600,000 and 900,000 tons. …In 1981, however, there was a significant increase in fish caught in the US, and this rise continued and peaked at 5.6 million tons in 1991. During the same period, Canada's catch went up from 1 million tons to 1.6 million tons, a growth of over 50%.From 1991 onwards, a sudden decline in fish catching was reported in both countries. US figures plummeted to 4 million tons in 2001, a drop of 28%, and Canadian catches plunged to 0.5 million tons, a decrease of 66%. In the following four years, US catches remained stable at 4 million tons, while Canadian catches rose and fell around the 0.5 million tons mark.In general, fish catches have declined drastically in both the US and Canada since the early 1990s. Although Canadian production was much lower, it echoed US figures, declining or increasing at thesame rate.习题③You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.The line chart illustrates changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb andchicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams) However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable.The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week.Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreasedover the period.★考试高分必备表 3——Phrase。

雅思写作讲座(新航道)lesson 1

Requirements
1. 认真阅读历年真题 2. 对应相应不太会写的内容做提纲训练 3. 写作文后自己修改（语法，词汇）-先质后量 4. 教师批改后自己再次修改 5. 在复习时候，应该针对话题然后按照题型训练
WRITING
雅思写作的训练方法
（1）精读（2）互译（3）改写
何为模板？
有用网站
一. TR（Task Response任务反应情况）二. CC（Coherence& Cohension连贯和衔接）
三. LR（Lexical Resources词汇资源）
四. GR&A（Grammatical Range& Accuracy语法范围和精确度）
WRITING
英文写作的特点：(第一条评分标准）
IELTS WRITING：TASK II
低于Band 5的六种技术情况：
1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 没有完成写作任务格式错误字迹模糊，难以辨认 Task 1和Task 2写反攻击考官
1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8.
不能缩写不能格式混乱不能使用口语化词语不能英式英语美式英语混用 while 的用法字迹模糊，难以辨认 Task 1和Task 2写反题型判断错误
IELTS WRITING：TASK II
三. LR（Lexical Resources词汇资源）正式，准确，多样四.
GR&A（Grammatical Range& Accuracy语法范围和精确度）准确，多样，时态，简单句+复杂句
四大问题
语法
注意!!!
词汇搭配
组织逻辑写作技巧
中式思维中式语序中式表达方式

雅思写作课程教案

雅思写作课程教案第一章：雅思写作简介1.1 课程目标让学生了解雅思写作考试的格式和要求帮助学生掌握雅思写作的基本技巧和策略1.2 教学内容雅思写作考试的评分标准雅思写作考试的格式和要求雅思写作的常见问题和错误1.3 教学活动介绍雅思写作考试的评分标准和格式要求分析雅思写作的常见问题和错误让学生进行一些练习题，以巩固所学的知识第二章：雅思写作Task 12.1 课程目标让学生掌握Task 1 的写作技巧和策略帮助学生提高Task 1 的写作速度和准确性2.2 教学内容Task 1 的写作格式和要求Task 1 的写作技巧和策略Task 1 的常见问题和错误2.3 教学活动介绍Task 1 的写作格式和要求分析Task 1 的写作技巧和策略让学生进行一些Task 1 的练习题，以巩固所学的知识第三章：雅思写作Task 23.1 课程目标让学生掌握Task 2 的写作技巧和策略帮助学生提高Task 2 的写作速度和准确性3.2 教学内容Task 2 的写作格式和要求Task 2 的写作技巧和策略Task 2 的常见问题和错误3.3 教学活动介绍Task 2 的写作格式和要求分析Task 2 的写作技巧和策略让学生进行一些Task 2 的练习题，以巩固所学的知识第四章：雅思写作Coherence and Cohesion4.1 课程目标让学生了解Coherence and Cohesion 在雅思写作中的重要性帮助学生掌握Coherence and Cohesion 的写作技巧和策略4.2 教学内容Coherence and Cohesion 的定义和作用Coherence and Cohesion 的写作技巧和策略Coherence and Cohesion 的常见问题和错误4.3 教学活动介绍Coherence and Cohesion 的定义和作用分析Coherence and Cohesion 的写作技巧和策略让学生进行一些关于Coherence and Cohesion 的练习题，以巩固所学的知识第五章：雅思写作Lexical Resource5.1 课程目标让学生了解Lexical Resource 在雅思写作中的重要性帮助学生扩大词汇量和提高词汇运用能力5.2 教学内容Lexical Resource 的定义和作用扩大词汇量的方法和技巧提高词汇运用能力的技巧和策略5.3 教学活动介绍Lexical Resource 的定义和作用分析扩大词汇量和提高词汇运用能力的技巧和策略让学生进行一些关于Lexical Resource 的练习题，以巩固所学的知识第六章：雅思写作Grammatical Range and Accuracy6.1 课程目标让学生了解Grammatical Range and Accuracy 在雅思写作中的重要性帮助学生掌握Grammatical Range and Accuracy 的写作技巧和策略6.2 教学内容Grammatical Range and Accuracy 的定义和作用Grammatical Range and Accuracy 的写作技巧和策略Grammatical Range and Accuracy 的常见问题和错误6.3 教学活动介绍Grammatical Range and Accuracy 的定义和作用分析Grammatical Range and Accuracy 的写作技巧和策略让学生进行一些关于Grammatical Range and Accuracy 的练习题，以巩固所学的知识第七章：雅思写作模拟测试与讲解7.1 课程目标让学生通过模拟测试检验自己的写作水平帮助学生通过讲解提高自己的写作技巧和策略7.2 教学内容设计一份接近真实雅思写作考试的模拟测试对学生的模拟测试作品进行讲解和评价针对学生的错误和不足提供针对性的建议和指导7.3 教学活动发放模拟测试题目，让学生进行限时写作对学生的作品进行评价和讲解根据学生的表现提供针对性的建议和指导第八章：雅思写作常见话题及范文解析8.1 课程目标让学生熟悉雅思写作的常见话题帮助学生通过分析范文提高自己的写作技巧和策略8.2 教学内容雅思写作的常见话题及其特点分析范文的结构、论点、论据和表达方式让学生模仿范文的写作风格和技巧8.3 教学活动介绍雅思写作的常见话题及其特点分析范文，讲解其结构、论点、论据和表达方式让学生模仿范文的写作风格和技巧，进行练习第九章：雅思写作策略与技巧9.1 课程目标让学生掌握雅思写作的策略与技巧帮助学生在写作过程中更高效地发挥自己的优势9.2 教学内容雅思写作的策略与技巧，如：审题、构思、时间管理等如何有效地应对雅思写作中的各种挑战，如：论点不足、时间紧张等让学生了解自己的写作风格和习惯，找到适合自己的写作策略和技巧9.3 教学活动介绍雅思写作的策略与技巧分析学生在写作过程中的困难和挑战，提供应对策略让学生进行实际操作，找到适合自己的写作策略和技巧第十章：雅思写作课程总结与提升10.1 课程目标让学生回顾整个课程的内容和收获帮助学生进一步提高自己的雅思写作能力10.2 教学内容回顾雅思写作的各个方面的技巧和策略分析学生在课程中的进步和不足，提供针对性的建议激发学生继续学习雅思写作的热情和信心10.3 教学活动学生分享自己在课程中的收获和感悟教师总结课程的重点和难点，提供针对性的建议鼓励学生持续学习，不断提高自己的雅思写作能力重点解析本文档为雅思写作课程的教案，共包含十个章节。

英语考试作文-雅思写作考试基础入门全讲解

英语考试作文雅思写作考试基础入门全讲解关于雅思写作考试，很多新手雅思考生不知道从何下手，首先要说明的是，雅思写作并不难。

跟着小站雅思君一起来理一理雅思写作考试的基础入门知识。

雅思写作写什么？雅思写作评分标准是什么？雅思写作高分需要注意的方面。

以及雅思写作题目如何分析等。

据说认真看完的考鸭都过雅思了呢。

雅思写作内容雅思写作分为两个部分，task1和task2，也就是俗称的小作文和大作文。

a类小作文考察的是对图表的描述，数据图(统称为chart或者graph，包括线图line graph，饼图pie chart，柱状图bar chart，表格table)和流程图diagram，地图maps。

大作文考察学生对一些社会经济问题的观点论证，大部分为议论文，也有报告类的report，涵盖话题主要是教育，社会，经济，政府，科技等。

雅思写作的评分标准写作任务回应情况、连贯与衔接、词汇丰富程度、语法多样性及准确性。

任务回应情况：这是第一个标准，其实也是最重要最基本的标准，简单一句话是，你至少得在规定时间内写完大小作文，没写完基本分数就是4.5分了，所以一定先要保证写完且字数够(小作文150字大作文250字)。

还有就是一定不要偏题跑题，你文章写得再好表达再精彩，偏题了跑题了分数怎么也不会高。

顺便说一句，偏题跑题现象反而在成绩较好或基础较好的学生中更常出现，因为这类学生反而容易想很多把简单的题目想复杂。

连贯与衔接：中文很多都是意会，不用直接说明逻辑关系也能读懂读者要表明的意思，但是英文是非常直接的，所以你要表达转折你就需要用到转折连接词but/however/nevertheless等，要表达对比就需要用到by contrast/ in contrast等，要表达并列或递进就要用到first of all/ moreover/ furthermore/in addition 等。

所以整个雅思写作要做到过渡自然流畅，论证有理有据。

雅思基础写作第一讲

❖ 1. Some research reports suggest that the majority of criminals who were sent to prison would commit crimes again when they are set free. What do you think of these reports? What can be done to solve this problem?
雅思大作文写作
考试考查点
有没有明确的中心观点有没有证明中心观点的论据能否充分展开论证
有没有明确的开头、正文和结尾段落是否有明确的主题句和论证句句子和句子之间，段落和段落之间是否有衔接
语法是否正确句法是否成熟选词是否得体、生动
❖ Newspapers have an enormous influence on people’s opinions and ideas. Why is this the case and do you think it is a positive or a negative situation? 2009年3月5日
例如：
❖ To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? what measures do you think can protect them? 说明+解决方案
❖ An increasing number of developing countries are expanding their tourist industry. Why do you think it is the case? And do you think it is positive?" 说明文+议论文

雅思基础可第一课讲义

雅思基础第一课学习方法与基础知识◆学习与复习技巧◆先词汇和语法，再学雅思解题思路和结构，最后大量时间和累积∙记单词（如何自己单词本)第一，见到一个新单词要先判断词的级别，按照相关性和场景记单词第二，按照词根和前缀后缀来扩展单词量第三，注意固定的搭配帮助记忆第四，在句子里背单词，会用单词第五，第一要大声念出来第六，要注意一词多义第七，要想办法找场景用单词第八，可以绘制图画或者表格帮助建立联系∙如何查字典第一，必须要先查英英词典，慢慢适应用英文解释英文对的能力，慢慢养成猜词义的能力第二，注意词性，发音第三，注意一词多义，用法，例句∙记笔记小技巧✓常见词性缩写：V. 动词； Vt. 及物动词; Vi. 不及物动词 ; Adj.形容词 ; Adv.副词 ; N. 名词 ; Prep. 介词 ; Conj. 连词;Syn.同义词 Opp. 反义词其他常见缩写Det. 限定词; Int. 疑问词; Inter.感叹词; Num.数词; Pron.代词; Pl.复数✓简写与符号：＝等同于（equal)≈大约（about)e.g．举例（for example) i.e．即是（that is)→结果（result)←原因（reason)esp．尤其（especially) p.s．附注（Postscript) ↑增加（increase)↓减少（reduce)NB 注意（NoteBene) ＋加、并且（plus) ＆和（and) ＊重点（keypoint)Q 问题（question)A 答案（answer)＞大于（more)＜小于（less)etc．等等（etcetera)△变成（become)abbr缩写w/o 没有（without)VS．对抗（versus)比较✓善用不同颜色的笔和不用颜色的高光笔：✓要边复习边整理，补充信息就在本上tie便利贴∙语法小技巧✓前检验再学习✓逐个攻破，大量练习✓在口语与写作中应用∙听力小技巧选择场景预料，先练语料库单词听写，然后练单句听写，最后练点听写∙口语小技巧✓找到适合的语聊进行模仿，反复听，跟读，最后读到语音语调和原音频完全相同为止。

IELTS 写作课程讲解(一)

IELTS 写作课程讲解（一）LESSON ONEG 类写作TASK 1：IELTS 写作部分测试要求写两篇文章。

测试时间是60分钟。

General training 写作的第一篇一般要求写一封英文信，字数不少于150个单词。

给定一个问题，要求写信咨询、抱怨、感谢、邀请、道歉、给出建议，或提出申请等等。

General training 写作的第二篇要求写一篇议论文，字数不少于250个单词。

Academic 写作第一篇一般要求对图表数据进行描述、解释和说明，字数不少于150个单词。

Academic 写作第二篇也要求写一篇议论文，字数不少于250个单词。

General training 信函的种类主要有以下几种：1、Requests ①Application②Advice③Suggestion2、Complaint3、Thanks4、Arrangement5、Invitation6、Apology7、Explain信函的基本格式有两种：即full-block; semi-block. 这一节主要介绍的是full-block.FULL-BLOCK:(１)．WRITER’S ADDRESS(２)．RECEIVER’S NAME AND ADDRESS(３)．DEAR SIR (S), /MADAM, /HI,(４)．BODY(５)．YOURS ┅ ┅，(６)．SIGNATURE.Letter of RequestParagraph 1: Explain why you write the letter, make simple requests. Paragraph 2: Introduction/Explanation Paragraph 3: Make requests in detailsParagraph 4: ComplimentaryGolden rules:PoliteUse transition words, phrasesAvoid repetitionAPPLICATION:SAMPLE LETTER 1Dear Sir,I’m writing to you to inquire about information from your university.My name is Li Ming and I graduated from Tsinghua University Beijing, China in 1995 and gained my Master’s degree in compute r science there. I would like to continue my study and research in Artificial Intelligence in your university so as to pursue my Doctor’s degree.Could you please send me materials concerning enrollment prerequisites, tuition and other fees? Also, I would like to know something about the teaching staff and the postgraduate students.If I had the opportunity to study in your university, I would prefer to live in the students’ dormitory because of the conven ience it presents. I wonder if you could tell me details about living on campus? How many people will share one dorm and how much will it cost? It would also be helpful if you could list the facilities in it.I would appreciate it very much if you could provide me with the relevant information by return mail.I’m looking forward to your kind reply.Yours truly,SAMPLE LETTER 2Dear Sir,I’m a student from China. I’m writing this letter to inquire about the entrance to your university because I wish to pursue m y Doctor’s degree there.I graduated from the Electrical Engineering Department of Wuhan University in 1995. In my job, I use computers very often and I find that I am very interested in Computer Science. Therefore, I wish to pursue my studies in this field. I have taken TOFEL and GRE tests and I’ve alr eady asked ETS to send the scores to your university.I want to know whether the computer department can supply a scholarship, because if I can not obtain a scholarship, it will be very hard for me study abroad. Would you please tell me the fees and cost for each year of study? Is it possible for me to live on campus? What is the rate? Would you be kind enough to send me an application package, which will inform me more about your university?I’m looking forward to your kind reply.Yours truly,Homework:You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Next month you are coming to Britain to study at a university in Scotland. On the way you have a two-day stopover in London. You need accommodation for one night and you would like to use this time to see as much as possible of London. You will need to use public transport. As a student you have a limited budget.TaskWrite a letter to the London Travel Information Center explaining your situation and asking for advice on accommodation,sight-seeing and transport facilities in London.You should write at least 150 words.You do not need to write addresses.Begin:The London Travel Information Center188 Regent StreetLondon W1English Dear Sir/Madam,。

雅思小作文起始段

雅思小作文起始段I can certainly help you generate a response for the given prompt. Here's an example of a possible response:Starting from the beginning, the IELTS writing task often begins with a small essay, which is usually a short piece of writing that requires you to express your opinion on a particular topic. This can be quite challenging for many test takers, as they are required to convey their thoughts and ideas in a concise and coherent manner within a limited time frame. Additionally, the topics can vary widely, ranging from social issues to environmental concerns, making it essential for candidates to be well-prepared and informed about various subjects.From the perspective of the test taker, one of the main challenges of the IELTS writing task is the time constraint. With only 40 minutes to complete the essay, candidates must carefully manage their time to ensure that they can plan, write, and revise their work effectively. This can be particularly daunting for individuals who are not accustomed to writing under pressure, as they may struggle to organize their thoughts and ideas in a coherent and logical manner within the given time frame. Furthermore, the pressure to perform well in this task can lead to anxiety and stress, which may further hinder their ability to express themselves effectively.Moreover, the IELTS writing task also requires candidates to demonstrate a high level of language proficiency, including a wide range of vocabulary, grammatical accuracy, and the ability to use complex sentence structures. For non-native English speakers, this can be a significant challenge, as they may struggle to find the right words to express their ideas or to use grammar and syntax accurately. Additionally, the task also requires candidates to be able to convey their ideas in a clear and coherent manner, which can be particularly challenging for those who are not used to expressing themselves in writing.On the other hand, from the perspective of the examiner, assessing the IELTS writing task can be a demanding and time-consuming process. Examiners are required to evaluate a large number of essays within a short period, and they must do so with accuracy and fairness. This requires them to carefully read and analyze each essay, taking into account various aspects such as content, coherence, and language use. Additionally, they must also be able to identify and assess the candidate's ability to present and support their ideas effectively, as well as their overall writing skills.In conclusion, the IELTS writing task presents a range of challenges for both test takers and examiners. From the test taker's perspective, the task requires them to express their thoughts and ideas effectively within a limited time frame, while also demonstrating a high level of language proficiency. On the other hand, from the examiner's perspective, assessing the task requires careful consideration and analysis of various aspects of the candidate's writing. Overall, the IELTS writing task serves as a comprehensive assessment of an individual's ability to communicate effectively in writing, and it is essential for candidates to be well-prepared and informed about the task's requirements in order to perform well.。