英语必修一Unit1 Writing 建议信写作
高一英语unit1建议信
高一英语unit1建议信Dear Principal,I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to suggest some improvements that could enhance our school environment and student experience.Firstly, I believe we should consider adding more extracurricular activities. Clubs related to science, art, and sports can help students discover their passions and develop new skills. This would not only make school life more enjoyable but also encourage teamwork and creativity.Secondly, I suggest improving the school library by increasing the number of new books and providing more comfortable reading spaces. A well-equipped library can inspire students to read more and enhance their learning experience.Lastly, organizing regular workshops or seminars on topics like mental health and study skills would greatly benefit students. These sessions can provide valuable insights and support for managing academic pressure.Thank you for considering my suggestions. I believethese changes will greatly enhance our school community.Sincerely,[Your Name].中文翻译：亲爱的校长：希望您一切安好。
人教版高中英语必修一 名师作文：Unit1 建议信的写作
名师作文：Unit1 建议信的写作建议信的写作：写作典例：假如你是李华，请根据下表内容，给你校校长写一封100词左右的建议信。
现状：吃饭时人太多，排队要花很长时间；还有不少同学占位，这使很多同学吃饭时没有座位可坐。
措施：禁止占位；各年级轮流吃饭，如可以让高年级的同学晚十分钟去吃饭；有条件的话，再建一个食堂。
要求：1. 可适当增加细节，以使文章连贯、通顺；2. 开头和结尾已写好，不计人总词数。
Dear Headmaster,I’m writing to make some suggestions for improving the dining conditions of our school.Yours,Li Hua 写作指导1. 命题分析(1) 建议信是写信人为了向收信人提出建议或忠告而写的信。
(2) 建议信有可能是写给个人，写信人就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法；也可能是写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。
(3) 建议信要写出写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。
理由要人情人理，语气一定要礼貌。
因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
写建议信时应注意两个问题。
第一，这类文章一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。
第二，这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
建议信开头常用句式（照应材料，表明写作意图）：After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that...I am very glad to hear that you want to...I know you have trouble in...after reading your letter.I am writing to you for the purpose of...I am writing to share some advice with you.过渡句：My suggestions are as follows.In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following actions.In my opinion, some effective measures must be taken to solve these problems. They can be listed as follows.This problem will be more serious unless we take some effective measures.结束语：I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into serious consideration.I’ll be very glad if you take my suggestions into consideration.2. 布局谋篇开头(beginning) ——开门见山，说明写信的理由主体(body) ——提出自己的建议结尾(ending) ——简单结束语，并希望对方采纳自己的建议必背短文模板：。
高中英语必修1 Unit 1 Writing—Write a letter of advice
Would you please have some special smart phones designed and produced f or the old?
Yours， Li Hua
本课结束
Unit 1 Teenage Life
Period Five Writing—Write a letter of advice
PART 1 技法点拨 PART 2 写作训练
Hale Waihona Puke PART 1技法点拨
◆写作指导
本单元的写作任务是写建议信。建议信是常用的书信形式之一，主要用来 针对收集的一方存在的某一问题提出自己的合理化建议，从而达到帮助对方解 决问题的目的。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
1.首段：表明写作意图。首先应该简单地就对方对自己的信任表示感谢， 亦可表明自己的诚意。建议信的开头必须指明建议的前提和事情的原委，对自 己的立场作解释。
2.主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对 具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是 提建议。
5.人口老龄化使得我们国家老年人越来越多。 The aging of the population makes our country have more and more old people. 6.老年人组成了一个庞大的消费群体。 Those old people make up a big consumer group.
◆组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词 左右的英语短文。
参考范文 Dear Sir/Madam， I’m a high school student and I’d like to make a proposal today. Smart phones become more and more popular with people but these smart phones are difficult for many old people to operate.So I wonder if your company could make some special smart phones that are easy to use for the old. Firstly，the aging of the population makes our country have more and more old people，who make up a big consumer group.Secondly，most old people are eager to catch up with the development of science and technology.A smart phone will be of great help in some way.Thus，old people need their own smart phones.
必修一unit1作文建议信
必修一ng的一封来信, 假借Miss Wang的口气
写一封回信。体裁属于劝说性写作（persuasive writing）范畴中的“建议信 （letter of advice）”。话题“无法融入班集体及交友的苦恼”是中学生成长过 程中经常碰到并感到困惑的问题, 题材贴近学生生活, 属于开放性的话题, 思 维空间相对较大, 有利于学生自由发挥, 运用自己的思维方式去解决问题。 这符合书面表达的要求, 即能够正确运用英语进行交际。
通过学习这篇写作指导，你掌握了如何写劝说性建议信的方法了吗？ 试着写一下吧，然后与范文加以对照，找出其中的不足并加以改进。
作文演练:
假设你是李华，你的英国朋友1Linda最 近在中国学习。她在信中向你诉说了她的 困扰: 不适应新的学习环境，想家，感到 焦虑。请你给他写一封信。
要点: 1.表示理解并给与安慰。 2.提出建议并给出理由。
【审题要素】 写作时应注意下面几点:
1. 确定文体: 这是一篇应用文，是学生熟悉的书信，写作中应注意书信的常 规格式。 2. 主体时态: 文章应以一般现在时为主。 3. 主体人称: 由于是给别人提出建议，所以人称应该以第二人称为主。 4. 内容要点: ①问题介绍；②建议一；③建议二；④建议三；⑤我的愿望。 5. 注意恰当使用连接词，使各个要点之间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。
必修一unit1 英语写作---如何写一封建议信 简易教案
从容说课This is the fifth teaching period of this unit.The emphasis of this period is laid on developing the students’ writing ability.As to the part writing the teacher should first get the students to read the brief description about how to write a suggestive letter Writing is a higher stage of language learning. The teacher should frequently give students some assignments of writing. Only in this way, can students use what they have learned more freely.教学重点Doevelop the students’ writing ability by writing a suggestive letter教学难点Get the students to learn how to write writing a suggestive letter教学方法1. Task-based teaching and learning2. Cooperative learning3. Discussion三维目标Knowledge aims:Ability aims:1. Develop the students’ writing ability.Emotional aims: Enable the students to form the good habit of readingUnit1 writing----How to write a suggestive letterLearning aims:Let the students know the form o f a suggestive letter.Important points and difficult points ：Develop students’ writing ability by imitatinga suggestive letter .Learning guides: 1. Task-based teaching and learning2. Cooperative learning3. DiscussionEmotional aims: Enable the students to form the good habit of readingTeaching Procedures：procedures:【Topics】Li Hua has received a letter from Wang Ping, He is also asking some advice about how to read books . Think carefully and help Li Hua answer it according to your reading experience.(120 words)Step1 Find general ideas of the writing (A)确定文体：这是一篇所以写作中应注意的常规格式。
【原创】湖北省高一人教版必修一：unit1如何写建议信(含步骤与范文)
如何写建议信一：审题立意1.应用文范畴2.常用一般现在时；以第二人称为主3. 三段式：首段：提出对方问题；使用过渡句，引出下文。
主体段：针对其问题提出自己的建议/忠告（以三个左右为宜）末段：总结建议、表达自己的祝愿。
二：经典模板句子1.首段：（起始句）I am sorry to hear that you have trouble /difficulty (in) doing sth(问题)。
（过渡句）However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. / I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.2.主体段：过渡词①first/firstly/first of all/to begin with②second/secondly/meanwhile/moreover/in addition/what’s more / furthermore③third/thirdly/finally/most important of all/last but not least3.末段①As long as you act as what is mentioned above, you will find the situation is not hard tosettle/resolve/solve/deal with.②They are only my personal suggestions. I hope they can do you a lot of good.③It’s only if you act as what is mentioned above and…….that you…….三：词汇积累1.对别人友好2有帮助的且忠实可信的全心全意地3乐于助人4.了解别人的喜好5.找到具有相同兴趣的朋友6参加讨论或更多的课后活动7不遗余力地帮助某人8患难见真情9万事开头难10按照上面所说的那样做11做某事有困难.12听取某人的建议13回以微笑14此外，另外15我认为关心别人胜过关心自己很重要16绝对不要根据外貌和衣着来看一个人17成为一个好的倾听者18不同意某人19做某事比作某事要好20众所周知21很重要22做某事没意义23这样做24处于麻烦之中25陪伴某人四：连词成句①如果你听取我的建议，这种状况是很容易改变的。
必修一-Unit1-Writing-交友建议信
What makes an excellent writing?
主谓宾 拼写检查 三段
谚语
刚学习的单词 语法句式 连接词
【Show Time】
假如你是李华，你的朋友Mary最近刚升入高一， 在英语学习方面遇到困难，询问你如何学好英 语。根据以下内容回信给她。
思考的问题
样题分析
第几人称？（person）
第二人称
文章的题材是什么？
一封信
要写的文章主题是什么 (topic)
怎样安排信息点的顺序？ (order)
好友Harry在交友过程中遇 到了困难，给其建议
说理逻辑性
动作是什么时候发生的？(时态) (when)
现在时
建议信篇章结构
⑴提出问题的原因； ⑵说明建议的内容； 注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方
Dear Mary
I am sorry to hear that___________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ _
2. 句式练习 一句多译
(3).在班级举行讨论的时候，你要积极参加，并且积极 表达自己的观点。
A.In a class discussion, you’d better actively take part in it and express your views/opinions actively.
C.I am sorry to hear that you are not good at communicating with others and often feel lonely. However, the situation is easy to change if/so long as you take/follow my advice.
人教版英语高一必修一Unit 1-Unit5 写作 Writing常用表达
①Please come and cheer for them.快来给他们加油吧。②All are warmly welcome.热烈欢迎各位。
③Catch the chance, or you will regret.抓住机会，不会后悔。
2．招聘广告类
①Would you like to be a volunteer?想成为志愿者吗？
②There is a piece of news that we'll hold a ... show/football match on July 16th.
有条消息就是我们将于七月十六日举行一次展览/足球赛。
③Our school is holding an English party at seven in the concert hall this evening.
If I were you, I would...如果我是你，我会...
Why not...?/How (what) about doing...?/You’d better do.../It’s better to...
You may consider doing...你可以考虑做...
As far as I am concerned / In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.
④Admission by tickets 10 yuan each. / Admission free.门票10元一张。/免费入场。
⑤Call Lily at 51542636 or email ...请致电莉莉51542636或发电邮……
英语必修一Unit1建议信
Suggestion
Writing skills
Students should write essays, letters, and other types of compositions in English regularly. They can also try to translate English texts into Chinese and vice versa to improve their language transfer skills.
Cultural understanding
Students should learn about English-speaking countries' culture, history, and traditions to better understand the language and its context. This cultural knowledge can also help them communicate more effectively with native speakers.
background if it is relevant to the purpose of your letter.
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Suggested content
Suggestion
Reading comprehension
It is recommended that students read a variety of English articles and short stories to improve their reading comprehension and vocabulary. They can choose materials from different genres, including news, fiction, and nonfiction.
人教版必修一Unit 1 写作
(Writing)
A letter of Advice
学习目标
1. 建议信的写作方法 2. 写建议信的注意点
Read the Xiao Dong’ letter and answer the following questions. (Page 7)
1. What is Xiao Dong’s tone in this letter? Is he angry, sad, happy, worried, or excited? Worried
The second part--- the main part
1. make a list of suggestions
2. give your own advice;
3. using proper words. 1. 花许多时间复习功课是个不错的想法。
理 21..你科不学仅安能排像、往复常习一功样课参；加体育锻炼，而且 清 还可以积极参加一些社会实践活动。 要 32..另积外极，参如加果体可育能锻，炼和与家社人会一实践块活旅动游；也是一个 点 很3好. 与的家度人假一方块式去。旅游。
2. What problems does Xiao Dong have? He is not good at communicating with people and can’t make good friends with them. 3. What is Xiao Dong’s purpose of writing the letter? He is asking for some advice to change the situation.
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
新人教版必修1高中英语Unit1FriendshipSectionⅤWriting—建议信
三、常用的结束语 1．I hope you will find these ideas useful.
希望你会发现这些办法有用。 2．As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to
make friends with you if you can follow the above. 如果你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加理解你， 会愿意和你交朋友的。 3．I believe, with your effort, you can manage to overcome these difficulties. 我相信，通过努力，你会克服这些困难的。
积“黄金”词句，写高分文章 一、常用的开头语 1．I know you are now having trouble communicating with others,
and you may often feel lonely. 我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到 孤独。 2．I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ... 很高兴收到你就……征求建议的来信。 3．Here are some tips to help you./Here are a few suggestions. 这里有帮助你的一些建议。 4．I think you can make it if you follow the advice below. 如果你听从以下建议，我认为你会做到的。
4．它能增加成功的机会。 ccess .
5．与别人交谈，要坦率、真诚。 Be direct and honest to those you talk to.
必修一Unit 1 Part ⅣWriting——建议信 课件(9张)
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【篇首句】说明写信目的。 1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面 的建议会有一些帮助。 2.1 have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you 我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国U。可能下面的建 议对你是有帮助的。 3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients (顾客）. 我给你写信?B说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多
Dear Su Ru， I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends.However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.Here are some tips to help you. To begin with, if you want to make friends，you should be a friend first. In addition, you should share happiness and sorrow with your friend. Just as a saying goes, a friend in need is a friend st but not least, wouldn’t it be a good idea if you put your heart into making friends? It is well known to us all that friendship calls for time and effort. I hope you will find these ideas useful. Yours， 13 Li Hua
高一Unit1 作文 建议信
6.友谊需要时间和投入.
Friendship___ca_l_ls_f_o_r/_n_e_e_d_s _ti_m_e_a_n_d__ef_fo_r_t.___________ _
改变主题时另起一段用 By the way, …
感谢客气不可少 期待回信成老套
如何写建议信
1、开头段写法：
（1）问候：
How are you doing?(生熟)
（2）自我介绍： I am Li Hua，a student in China
I am LiHua, a 17-year-old boy, currently studying/attending in XXX middle school/ in a senior high school, who is fond of/is crazy about…
假定你是李华，你的朋友苏茹在交友方面存 在着一些困难，请根据下面提示给她写一封信。
1、 要交朋友首先要成为一个朋友； 2、 要和朋友同甘共苦，患难之中的朋友才是 真正的朋友； 3、 友谊需要时间和投入(effort).
注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
三步作文法
• 第一步：审题构思 • 一、审题 • 1.确定体裁：本文为__建__议_信___; • 2.确定人称:本文的主要人称应用 _第__二_人__称__; • 3.确定时态:主要使用_一_般__现__在_时_; • 二、构思 • 第一段点出____写__信_的__目_的________; • 第二段正文列出___所__提_的__建_议_______; • 最后一段写出___写__信_的__希_望__________.
人教版必修一unit1 建议信写作
For example, you can remember ten words a day or talk with your friends ten munites a day.例如， 你可以一天记十个单词或和朋友谈论十分钟英语。
Last but not least, you should make full use of every opportunities to study English, only in this way can you get a good command of English.
最后，你应该充分利用每一个机会来学习英语，只有通过这种方式你才能掌握好英语。
From your letter, I know you are facing the problem on how to learn English well.
3.这是我极大的荣幸来给你提 一些建议。
It is my great pleasure to give you some advice.
主体段 建议：1.认真听老师上课 2.充实词汇量并且多用英文交流 3.看英文电影和听英文歌 4.充分利用每一个机会来学习英语
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. I also believe you will get over this problem and enjoy learning English.
Yours, Li Hua
连起来：Secondly, it's important for you to enrich your vocabulary and communicate with others in English. By doing this, your spoken English will improve a lot.
高中英语：Unit 1 Section Ⅴ Writing——建议信
Section ⅤWriting——建议信[文体指导]本单元的写作项目属于应用体类别中的“建议信”。
这种题目要求我们就有关问题进行分析，并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。
一、基本框架1．开头(beginning)——开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点(state your idea)。
2．主体(body)——对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)。
3．结尾(ending)——呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion)。
二、注意事项1．开门见山，直入主题。
在书信正文的开头找准话题的切入点，自然而然地引出自己想要谈的主题。
写信时要充分了解情况，有的放矢，以提高书信的针对性。
2．给出希望对方采取或者终止某种行为的理由。
在陈述理由的过程中要换位思考，尽量为对方考虑。
要用事实说话，以增强说服力。
3．语气要和缓，让对方考虑你的想法或者建议，以理服人是关键，不能把自己的想法强加于人。
4．给出合理建议，通过提建议让对方明确行动的方向，从而达到写信的最终目的。
[亮点句式]首段常用的句型：1．I'm sorry you have trouble in...2．I am writing to share some advice with you.3．You have asked me for my advice about...4．I am writing to express my views on/concerning...5．You have asked for some advice concerning...and I will try to give you my suggestion.提出建议时常用的句型：1．I think it would be a good idea if...2．In my opinion it would be wise to...3．I suggest that you should...4．In my opinion，you'd better...5．I advise you to...6．If I were you，I would...7．Why not...？/Why don't you...?8．How about...？/What about...?结尾段常用的句型：1．I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/tips practical/useful/helpful.2．I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in more details.3．I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.4．In the end，I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful/helpful.5．I hope you will take my advice into account.6．I will be glad if you will consider my tips.[写作任务]你叫张伟。
人教版英语必修一 Unit1 Writing 建议性写作优质课件
建议信结尾: These are only my personal suggestions / tips. I hope you will find them useful / helpful. I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in further detail. I’m willing to discuss this matter with you whenever ... I will highly appreciate your consideration of my advice / suggestions / tips. I hope ...
likes and dislikes with the same
interests
2. to join in
to get to know
discussions and show different people and
interest in other people’s ideas
let them see you are friendly
表达建议: I would like to suggest that ... If I were you, I would ... As far as I am concerned ... / In my opinion ... It seems better that ... Why not ...? It would be a good idea if ... For one thing ..., for another ... In the first place / Firstly / First ... Secondly / Second ... Last but not least (最后但不是最不 重要的) ...
人教版高中英语必修一 Unit 1 Section Ⅴ Writing——建议信
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4．In the end，I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful/helpful.
5．I hope you will take my advice into account. 6．I will be glad if you will consider my tips.
In a word，I do hope my tips will be of great help to you. Yours，
Zhang Wei
英美 文化
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【导读】 《狮子、女巫与魔衣橱》(The Lion，the Witch and the Wardrobe)是英国作家 C.S.路易斯所著的《纳尼亚传奇》系列奇幻儿 童文学小说的第二部(写作顺序是第一部)。
14 2．_W__it_h__fe_w___p_e_o_p_le__k_n_o_w_i_n_g_ how to communicate with others， you haven't got to be concerned about it too much. 因为很少人了解如何与他人交流，因此你没有必要对此太过于 担心。(with 的复合结构) 3．I find __i_t _n_e_c_e_s_sa_r_y__to__g_i_v_e__ you some tips on how to settle the problem. 我发现提供给你一些如何解决这个问题的方法很有必要。(it 作 形式宾语，不定式作真正宾语)
17 7．那就是为什么我想要提供给你一些如何解决这个问题技巧的 原因。(表语从句及动词升级) It's the reason why I want to give you some tips on how to settle the problem. →_T_h_a_t _i_s_w__h_y__I__w_a_n_t_t_o__g_i_v_e_y_o_u__s_o_m__e__ti_p_s__o_n__h_o_w__t_o__so_l_v_e _th_e__p_r_o_b_le_m__. 8．我希望我的建议对你有帮助。(be of＋n.) I hope my tips will be helpful to you. →_I__h_o_p_e__m_y___ti_p_s_w__il_l__b_e_o_f__g_r_e_at__h_e_lp__t_o__y_o_u_.__
人教版必修一Unit 1 Writing—Write a Letter of Advice
注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
审题谋篇
审题 1.确定文体：这是一篇建议信。写作时注意建议信的写作特点。 2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。 3.主体人称：由于是给对方提出建议，所以人称应该以第二人称为主。
谋篇 第一段：表明写信目的； 第二段：提出建议并阐述理由； 第三段：表达祝愿。
第一部分：引出话题； 第二部分：提出建议； 第三部分：表达祝愿。
常用表达
1.I am writing to express my views concerning... 2.I would like to suggest that... 3.You have asked for my advice with regard to...and I will try to make some suggestions. 4.Why don’t you buy a computer? 5.Have you considered doing...? 6.Maybe it would be better to... 7.There are several things we could do. 8.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
句式升级 1.用定语从句改写句1。 In fact，there is something (that) you can do to improve this situation . 2.根据要求连接句2和句3。 (1)Try to help your classmates when they are confused about their lessons and this will help you make more friends .(并列句) (2)Try to help your classmates when they are confused about their lessons， which will help you make more friends .(定语从句)
新人教高中英语必修一第一单元读写建议信reading for writing
Write a letter of advice
II. Listing persuasive reasons
Unit 1 Teenage Life
Write a letter of advice
建议信---提出有效建议和理由
高一 新人教英语必修一
Hello, I’m Abby Lee. Usually, many teenagers write letters to me to ask for advice when they have some problems. I am busy but delighted to help them by writing letters of advice.
Writing Assignment
Add persuasive reasons to your 3 suggestions to the girl, and polish it into a short text.
Firstly, suggestion 1 + reason 1 Secondly, suggestion 2 + reason 2 Lastly, suggestion 3 + reason 3
S1
suggestions
S2 S3
U s e f u l e x p r e s s i o n s Giving advice
Tip: 提建议时，语气应委婉，用could, would, should等更易接受。尽量不使用must等 强烈命令语气。
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必修一英语第一单元导学案 Unit 1 FriendshipTopic Writing: a letter concerning suggestions【写作前奏曲】1. Read Xiao Dong’s letter on page 7 and answer: Qs: What is Xiao Dong’s problem?He’s not good at ______________ ________p eople. He finds it ________ to make friends with his classmates.2. Read the instructions at the top of page 7 and find out what you are required to do ？3. Your advice for Xiao Dong : _____________________.①To ask people their likes and dislikes ②To join in discussions③To share his feelings with others ④To show interest in others’ ideas【建议信的写作要领】(1)陈述建议的语言必须中肯：慎用must 等命令词汇，这样才能使对方高兴地接受你的劝告或建议。
例如：You must stop your meaningless work at once. 可适当运用虚拟句“If I were you,…”表述自己的建议。
常见的此类表达有：maybe; perhaps; probably; in my opinion; You could/might/had better…; It seems better that …; Why not …;(2)陈述建议必须有说服性：要想提出好建议，必须具有充分的理由，展示出自己独特的见解。
常见的表达有：If you think it twice, you will find…; As is well known,…; It is necessary/ important/certain that…; in spite of; on the contrary; in other words 等。
【建议信时态】多用现在时态即可能用到一般现在时，现在进行时或现在完成时等【叙述所用关联词】Illustration (阐述) I think, I believe, I suggest, in my opinion…Addition （递进）secondly, and then, besides, in addition… Contrast （转折）bu t, however, on the other hand… Summary(总结) in short, in a word, therefore, so…建议信一般采取“三段式结构”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly 或to begin with, then, later 等依次陈述建议。
【建议信结构】首段：针对对方对自己的信任简单表示感谢，亦可表明自己的诚意。
中段：围绕对方的困惑、烦恼等问题，结构清晰、用语科学委婉地建议方法。
注意充分考虑到对方实际问题，表达时应选择得体用语。
切忌用语生硬强制，泛泛而谈。
尾段：简单予以希望。
希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助。
【建议信常用句式结构】A ．建议信开头常用句式 (回应原信,表明写作意图)1）.I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter 2）.I am writing to you for the purpose of -----3）. I am writing to share some advice with you.4）. You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestion5）. I have just received your letter of… I am writing to express my views on…6）. I am writing to express my views concerning ……….B. 表达建议（主体，阐述具体建议）1） .I think it would be more beneficial if you could …2）. I would like to suggest/recommend that…3）. You may consider doing… 4）. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.5）. I wonder if you have considered the following.6.） When it come to such a situation , I would like to suggest that you can…C. 结尾（归纳总结，突出主题）1）. I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.高一英语 编辑： 审核： 学案编号： 班2）. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.3）. I will be more than happy to see improvements in …..4）. I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions. 5）. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.【参考文章】Dear Xiaodong,Thank you for your faith in me. I am writing to express my views concerning how to communicate with others.As we know, some people like talking with others while some people are upset to do it．If you fall into the second group, it can be hard to make friends．Here are some of my suggestions for your reference.Firstly, you could ask yourself what you are interested in. If you like basketball, for example, you could talk with some of your classmates who like basketball．The simplest way to start talking to people is to find something you have in common．Secondly, it would be wise to consider concern yourself with their discussion instead of ignoring it when standing by a group of your classmates who are discussing a topic. What you can do is to speak your mind or share their opinion. Once you’re able to start a conversation with one person, communication becomes so e asy!As far as I’m concerned, it’s so important to find one person you have something in common with in order to start a talk. It’ll be a pleasure to see your improvements in communicating skills.Yours,Editor【英语写作各档次的给分范围和要求】不得分：(0分)第一档(差)：(1-5分)1. 未完成试题规定的任务。
2. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
6. 信息未能传达给读者。
第二档(较差)：(6-10分)1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第三档(适当)：(11-15分)1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好)：(16-20分)1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
第五档(很好);(21-25分)1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 覆盖所有内容要点。
3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。