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犯错改错作文

犯错改错作文

犯错改错作文Making mistakes is a common part of life that everyone experiences.犯错误是每个人都会经历的常见问题。

Mistakes can happen in many different areas of life, from school to work to personal relationships.错误可能发生在生活的许多不同领域,从学校到工作,再到个人关系。

It is important to recognize when you have made a mistake and take steps to make amends for it.重要的是要认识到你犯了错误,并采取措施来弥补它。

One perspective on making mistakes is that they provide an opportunity for growth and learning.对犯错误的一个观点是,它们提供了成长和学习的机会。

When you make a mistake, you have the chance to reflect on what went wrong and how you can avoid making the same mistake in the future.当你犯了错误,你有机会反思出了什么问题以及如何避免将来犯同样的错误。

It is through making mistakes that we gain a deeper understandingof ourselves and the world around us.正是通过犯错误,我们才能更深入地了解自己和周围的世界。

Another perspective on making mistakes is that they can lead to feelings of guilt and shame.另一个关于犯错误的观点是,它们可能导致内疚和羞愧的感觉。

高考英语真题 2019年全国卷2 改错与写作(含答案)

高考英语真题 2019年全国卷2  改错与写作(含答案)

文档说明:1. 本文档经过本人认真校对并排版,能力有限,难免有不良之处。

欢迎指出。

2.文档板式:中文字体是宋体五号;英文是Times New Roman 小四。

页眉有内容提要,页脚有页码。

3. 全国II卷适用地区:甘肃、青海、黑龙江、吉林、辽宁、宁夏、新疆、内蒙古、陕西、重庆2019年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(全国卷II)英语改错作文(含答案)第四部分写作(共两节,满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do.First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.第二节书面表达(满分25分)假定你是校排球队队长李华。

全国高考I卷II卷短文改错及答案

全国高考I卷II卷短文改错及答案

2015年全国卷I第一节短文改错(10分)When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.短文改错:第一行:think改为thought 第二行:in与countryside中间加the第二行:or改为and 第三行:on改为with 第四行去掉been第五行:seriously改为serious airs改为air Much改为Many第六行:found改为find your改为our/the2015年全国卷II四、改错One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later. Tony saw parents. Mom said,” How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.71. parent改为parents72. on改为in73. very去掉74. looks改为looking75. where改为that76. begun改为began77. telling改为told78. a改为the79. saw后加his80. terrible改为terribly2014年全国卷I第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

改错语文作文

改错语文作文

改错语文作文
《改错语文作文那些事儿》
哎呀呀,想起我之前改语文作文的一次经历,可真是好笑又好气呢!
有一次,老师布置了一篇作文,我那是信心满满地写呀,觉得自己写得可棒了。

等作文发下来一看,上面那红红的一片批改痕迹呀,可把我给惊到了。

我就开始仔细看老师的批注,这才发现自己好多错处。

就说其中有一句话,我写的是“太阳公公笑哈哈地挂在天上”,老师给我圈出来说表述太幼稚啦,要改得成熟点。

我就绞尽脑汁想啊想,最后改成了“太阳高悬于天空”,哎呀,这么一改感觉还挺得意呢。

还有个地方我写“我开心得像只小鸟”,老师又批注说太常见没新意,让我重新改。

我就琢磨着,那改成啥呢?想了好久,改成了“我开心得如同拥有了全世界的糖果”,自认为还挺有创意的呢。

然后我又发现自己有些错别字,“的”“地”“得”乱用一气,我就赶紧一个个改过来。

还有标点符号,逗号句号也用得乱七八糟,我又重新调整了一番。

这改作文的过程可真像一场战斗呀,和那些错误作斗争。

等我把所有的错误都改完了,再看看自己的作文,感觉都不像最初我写的那篇了,不过确实是比原来好多啦。

通过这次改错作文,我可知道了,写作文真不能马虎呀,得认真对待每一个字、每一个标点符号才行呢。

现在想想,改作文还真是挺有趣的一件事,让我不断进步呢!以后呀,我可得更加仔细,争取让错误远离我的语文作文哟!嘿嘿!。

知错能改善莫大焉高考作文5篇汇总

知错能改善莫大焉高考作文5篇汇总

知错能改善莫大焉高考作文5篇汇总士季说过:“知错能改,善莫大焉”。

犯了错不要紧,重要的是能认识自已的错误。

这里给大家分享一些以知错能改为话题的高中作文,希望对大家有所帮助。

以知错能改为话题的高中作文篇1王守仁有言:“不贵于无过,而贵于能改过。

”自古以来,不论是仁人志土,还是芸芸众生,每个人都不能避免犯错。

但正如王守仁所说,人的可贵精神不在于无错,而在于知错能改。

生而为人,错误是我们每个人都要面对的问题。

过错并不仅仅是过错,它更是一次经历、一个教训。

学会面对自己的过错本就需要勇气,如果犯错后勇于改错,那么这样的人在待人接物时也必定有几分真诚在其中。

阿拉伯有句谚语:“终身不病的人不能成个名医。

”这句话告诉我们,有些事情只有亲身经历过才能被我们所真正认识。

不生病的人体会不到生病时的痛苦和难熬,也不懂得身为病人最需要的是什么,这样的人自然不能为病人考虑得周全,因而也就不是一位好医生。

推而远之,终身不犯错的人不会有卓越的成就,这才是这句谚语蕴含的真正道理。

犯错是一次认清自己的机会,从错误中吸取经验,不断改正,完善自己,这样才能提升自己的人格与修养。

错误对不同的人的意义不同,对我们普通人来说,它是一次教训,但对于决策者,它或许就是一次灾难。

康熙帝曾说:“一事不谨,即贻四海之忧;一念不慎,即贻百年之患。

”越是位高权重的人肩负的责任越重大,皇帝就是如此,他的一言一行都关乎天下百姓的前途命运。

普通人犯错或许最多牵涉到身边的人,如若皇帝犯错,殃及的就是天下苍生了。

错误不能避免,但可以防范。

在前行的路途中,我们可以努力做得更好,尽力让事情朝着正确的方向发展,其实这就是一种防患于未然。

知错能改历来是中华民族的传统美德,没有人会看低犯错的人,让人嘲笑的一直都是那些犯错却仍我行我素的人。

错误不是禁地,犯错是人之常情,我们不仅要正确对待错误,还要正确对待犯错之人。

学会用自己的善念帮助他人,甚至引导他人不要误入歧途,这是每个人都应该做的事。

高考3500通过各题型:语法填空改错,阅读作文来记忆第6期.

高考3500通过各题型:语法填空改错,阅读作文来记忆第6期.

每日打卡一、核心词汇1、abroad/?'br??d/ad.到/在国外,到/在海外(同overseas)【拓展】get abroad岀去,出门①谣言)传出去,传开at home and abroad在国内夕卜go [travel] abroad 到外国,出洋from abroad从国外,从海外be all abroad茫然不解,离题太远be all abroad to do any thi ng with 对........ 一窍不通。

2、absent /??bs?nt /a.缺席的;心不在焉的【拓展】(be prese nt at 出席)be abse nt from ...未出席......... ,缺席.........abse nee from 缺席…duri ng/in on e's abse nee=during/in the absenee of sb在某人不在/缺席的时候abse nt-min ded = abse nee of mi nd 心不在焉的absenee of mi nd 心不在焉,精神恍惚in the absenee of由于缺乏;(物)不存在;缺少/席二、词性转换1、automation自动化automate v使自动化automatie自动的,无意识的automatieally 自动地2、awareness意识aware 意识至U的unaware未察觉的三、熟词生义1、aehe(熟义:v.&n.疼痛)He was aehing for home . (v .渴望)2、a et(熟义:v.&n.行动)It takes a eouple of minutes for the drug to aet . (vi. 起作用)The aet is passed by the Con gress fin ally. (n.法案)耳濡目染What is the text mai nly about?一、语法填空1、实战My sister was fond of traveli ng. Ever since graduati ng, she 1. _________ (determ ine) to orga nize a trip to anold temple. Since transporting fare was expensive, she decided 2. ___________________ (use) a bicycle to cycle there notcari ng about the disadva ntages. Her stubbor n attitude was always her shortco ming. Once she made up her mind to do someth ing, no one could persuade her3. ______ (cha nge) her mi nd. Fin ally, we gave in as usual though we4. ________ prefer) to take a train. After weprepared everyth ing, in cludi ng the schedule, 5. ___________ (rely) weather forecast and the in sura nee, we bega n ourtrip.Our journey was along a river flowing from a high altitude. Our pace was slow6. ____________ the river frequently had many sharp bends7. ___________ deep valleys, where the water seemed to boil.Just as I recorded in my journal, it was really 8. _____________ hard journey. But we also enjoyed great views. Onenight, I put my head on my pillow --a parcel 9. _____________ wool coats, and lay beneath the stars. When the flamein front of our cave went out at midni ght, I found the sky so10. __________________ (beauty)!2、总结反思①②③④二、短文改错1、实战My sister was fond of traveli ng. Ever since graduat ing, she had bee n determ ined to orga nize a trip to a old temple. Since tran sport ing fare was expe nsive, she decided to use a bicycle to cycle there not cared about the disadva ntages. Her stubbor n attitude waslways her shortco ming. Once she made up mind to do someth ing, no one could persuade her to cha nge her mind. Fin ally, we gave up as usual though we preferred to take a train. After we prepared everyth in g, in cluded the schedule, reliable weather forecast and the in sura nee, we bega n your trip.Our journey was along a river flowed from a high altitude. Our pace was slow because the river frequently had m any sharp bends through deep valleys, which the water seemed to boil. Just as I recorded in my jour nal, it was really a hard journ ey. But we also enjoyed great views. One ni ght, I put my head on my pillow —a parcel of wool coats, and lied ben eath the stars. W the flame in front of our cave went out at midni ght, I found sky so beautiful!2、总结反思B. tran sport ing fare was expe nsive D. She is very stubbor nB. reliable weather forecast D. the in sura nee 、阅读理解My sister was fond of traveling. Ever since graduating, she had been determined toorganize a trip to an old temple. Since transporting fare was expensive, she decided to use a bicycle to cycle there not cari ng about the disadva ntages. Her stubbor n attitude was always her shortco ming. Once she made up her mind to do somethi ng, no one could persuade her to cha nge her mi nd. Fi nally, we gave in as usual though we preferred to take a trai n. After we prepared everyth ing, in cludi ng the schedule, reliable weather forecast and the in sura nee, we bega n our trip.Our journey was along a river flowing from a high altitude. Our pace was slow becausethe river frequently had many sharp bends through deep valleys, where the water seemed to boil.Just as I recorded in my jour nal, it was really a hard journ ey. But we also enjoyed great views.One night, I put my head on my pillow --a parcel of wool coats, and lay beneath the stars. When the flame in front of our cave went out at mid ni ght, I found the sky so beautiful!1. Which is the best title?A. A Deep CaveB. A High AltitudeC. A Suitable ScheduleD. A Hard Trip2. From the first passage, we can infer that _____ .A. my sister was fond of travelingC. she usually gave in to us 3. We prepared everythi ng except ____ . A. the scheduleC. computers4. The author ' s attitude to the journey isA. happy but stubbor nB. tired but happyC. determ ined but tiredD. reliable stubbor n 5. What ' s the Chinese meaning of the word altitude in the second passage?A. 态度B. 保险C. 海拔D. 火焰逐句理解【英译汉】My sister was fond of traveling. Ever since graduating , she had been determined to organize a trip to an old temple. Since transport ing fare was expensive, she decided to use a bicycle to cycle there not caringabout the disadvantages. Her stubborn attitude was always her shortcoming . Once she made up her mind to do something, no one could persuade her to change her mind . Finally, we gave in as usual though we prefer red to take a train. After we prepared everyth ing, in clud ing the schedule, reliable weather forecast and theinsurance, we began our trip.Our journey was along a river flow ing from a high altitude . Our pace was slow because the river freque ntly had many sharp bends through deep valleys, where the water seemed toboil. Just as I recorded in my journal , it was really a hard journey. But we also enjoyed greatviews. One night, I put my head on my pillow --a parcel of wool coats, and lay beneath the stars. When the flame in front of our cave went out at midnight , I found the sky so beautiful!我的妹妹很喜欢旅行。

高考英语语法填空改错及阅读作文6

高考英语语法填空改错及阅读作文6

高考英语语法填空改错及阅读作文一、核心词汇1、adapt v. 使适应(同adjust);改编/写【延伸】adapt ...from ... `根据……改写/改编……adapt ...for ... 改(编)……为……之用adapt (oneself) to (doing) sth. 适应(做)某事2、act v. 表演,行动,n. 行动;【延伸】be in action在活动;在运转;在战斗be out of action失去作用,停止运行take action采取行动take an active part in积极参加act as 担任……职务,起……作用act on(upon)按照……而行事,对……起作用act out 把……表演出来;把……付诸行动act up to不辜负,遵照二、词性转换1、accordance依照;依据accord n条约v与…一致的accordingly因此2、accuracy,准确度accurate a.准确的Inaccurate错误的,不准确的accurately准确地,精确地三、熟词生义1、affect(熟义:vt.影响)The audience was deeply affected by his lecture. (vt.感动)Be careful not to be affected with Ebola. (vt.疾病侵袭)2、afford 熟义:担负得起费用生义:抽得出(时间)He can't afford an hour for lunch.耳濡目染What is the text mainly about?语法破译一、语法填空1、实战A Brave MaidA wooden vase from the Ming Dynasty at the entrance of the reception hall 1(amaze)everyone.The artists designed it 2 a rare style and selected 3(value)jewels to decorate it.People thought 4(high)of its fancy colour of honey and the beautiful paintings on it.The vase used to belong to a former castle. 5 when the country was at war,the enemy troops exploded the castle.Debates on how the vase 6 (survive)went on and on.In order to remove people's doubt,a team of no less than 20 people carried out aninformal 7(investigate).The evidence they found showed that a maid took the vase apart and asked a sailor to sink it in 8 local well.She never gave away the secret even under the cruel trial of the 9(enemy)who were in search of treasures.It is worth 10(give)this brave maid a fortune in return.2、总结反思①②③④二、语法改错1、实战A wooden vase from the Ming Dynasty at the entrance of the reception hall amazed everyone.The artists design it in a rare style and selected valuable jewels to decorate it.People thought high of it fancy colour of honey but the beautiful paintings on it.The vase used to belong to a former castle.But when the country was at war,the enemy troopsexploded castle.Debates on how the vase survived went on and on.In order to remove people'sdoubt.a team of no less than 20 people carried in an informal investigation.The evidence what they found showed that a maid took the vase apart and asked a sailor for sink it in a local well.She never gave away the secret even under the cruel trial of the enemy who were in search of treasures.It is worth give this brave maid a fortune in return.2、总结反思①②③④找出为准一、阅读理解A wooden vase from the Ming Dynasty at the entrance of the reception hall amazed everyone. The artists designed it in a rare style and selected valuable jewels to decorate it. People thought highly of its fancy colour of honey and the beautiful paintings on it.The vase used to belong to a former castle. But when the country was at war, the enemy troops exploded the castle.Debates on how the vase survived went on and on. In order to remove people’s doubt, a team of no less than20 people carried out an informal investigation. The evidences they found showed that a maid took the vase apart and asked a sailor to sink it in a local well. She never gave away the secret even under the cruel trial of the enemies who were in search of treasures.It is worth giving this brave maid a fortune in return.1、When does this vase date back to?2、What are the special character of this vase?3、How does people decorate it?4、What does the evidence found by the team show?逐句理解一、英汉互译A Brave MaidA wooden vase from the Ming Dynasty at the entrance of the reception hall amaze d everyone. The artist s design ed it in a rare style and select ed valuable jewel s to decorate it. People thought highly of its fancy colour of honey and the beautiful painting s on it.The vase used to belong to a former castle. But when the country was at war, the enemy troop s explode d the castle. Debate s on how the vase survive d went on and on. In order to remove people’s doubt, a team of no less than 20 people carried out an informal investigation. The evidences they found showed that a maid took the vase apart and asked a sailor to sink it in a local well. She never gave away the secret even under the cruel trial of the enemies who were in search of treasures.It is worth giving this brave maid a fortune in return.接待大厅入口处的明朝木制花瓶使每个人都惊奇不已。

《改错》作文素材摘抄大全

《改错》作文素材摘抄大全

《改错》作文素材摘抄大全在那个阳光明媚的午后,我坐在教室里,手里拿着一张试卷,上面满是红叉叉,犹如一片红色的海洋。

老师的声音在耳边回荡:“同学们,这是你们的错误,也是你们的机会,改错是学习的一部分。

”我看着那些红叉叉,心里不禁有些小激动。

改错,不就是把错误变成正确吗?这简直就是我的强项。

我可是个改错大师,专门把错误变成美丽的风景线。

首先,我拿出了我的改错法宝——橡皮擦。

这可不是普通的橡皮擦,它可是我精心挑选的,有着超强的擦除力。

我轻轻地擦去那些错误,仿佛在给试卷做一次美容SPA,让它焕然一新。

然后,我拿出了我的改错神笔——2B铅笔。

这铅笔可是我的得力助手,它的笔芯软硬适中,写起来流畅无比。

我在试卷上轻轻一划,那些错误就消失得无影无踪,仿佛从未存在过。

但是,改错不仅仅是擦掉错误那么简单。

我还需要用我的火眼金睛,找出错误的原因。

是粗心大意,还是知识盲点?我一一分析,然后对症下药,把那些隐藏在试卷深处的错误一网打尽。

改错的过程中,我还不忘加入一些幽默元素。

比如,当我看到一个“的”字用错时,我会自言自语:“这个‘的’字真是个调皮鬼,老是乱跑,看我不把你捉回来!”最后,当我把所有的错误都改正过来,我满意地看着那张试卷,它已经从一片红色的海洋变成了一片蓝色的海洋。

我仿佛看到了老师满意的笑容,听到了同学们的赞叹声。

改错,不仅仅是一种技能,更是一种态度。

它教会我们面对错误,勇于改正,不断进步。

而我,作为改错大师,将会继续在这条道路上,越走越远。

(注:以上内容纯属虚构,如有雷同,纯属巧合。

)。

高考英语语法填空改错及阅读作文4

高考英语语法填空改错及阅读作文4

高考英语语法填空改错及阅读作文一、核心词汇1、absorb/əb'zɔːb; -'sɔːb/ v. 吸收(同take in);吸引【拓展】(1)absorb/attract/draw one's attention吸引某人的注意力be absorbed by/into为……所吸收;被……吞并(吸引)(2)absorbed adj. 全神贯注的,专注的(be) absorbed in ... 全神贯注于……(3)absorbing adj. 十分吸引人的,引人入胜的2、access/'ækses/ n. 通道;进入;方法,途径;v. 到达,进入;访问,获取(计算机数据)【拓展】(1)access to ... ……的通路;……的权利have/get/gain/obtain access to ...得以接近/会见/进入……be easy [hard, difficult] of access 容易[难]接近的;容易[难]进去的;容易[难]会见的within easy access of 容易去到……的地方(2)accessible adj. 可进入的;可使用的be accessible to 可进入;可用二、词性转换1、awe n敬畏awesome令人惊叹的;awesomely极其2、absence缺席;不在absent a缺席的;心不在焉的absently心不在焉地三、熟词生义1、account(熟义:n.账目)(2015·高考福建卷)It is said that body language accounts for 55 per cent of a first impression while what you say just 7 per cent.vi.(在数量、比例方面)占There are several accounts of the story in the newspaper. (n.报道,叙述)2、accommodate(熟义:vt.住宿,留宿)This hotel can accommodate more than 500 guests. (vt.容纳)耳濡目染What is the text mainly about?语法破译一、语法填空1、实战Dirty water rose in wells and canals 1. the earthquake. But no one judged that2. earthquake was coming. Suddenly, everything shook. It seemed as3. the world was at an end. Millions of brick houses and a number of dams4. (destroy). Railway tracks became5. (use) bars. Pipes in mines burst and let out6. (smell) steam. Huge cracks trapped cyclists everywhere.The next day, this event was the headline or main title of all newspapers. 7. the reporters giving an outline of the disaster, the whole nation was shocked by the damage and the victim’s extreme suffering. People were moved when they read that the survivors comforted each other by saying “8 (congratulate)! You survived!”. So they not only expressed their sympathy sincerely, but also organized together to help the victims right away. 9. injured were rescued and the dead were buried. The frightened survivors were dug out from under the ruins and were offered shelter, fresh water and electricity. Thanks 10. people’s help, the loss was minimized.2、总结反思①②③④二、短文改错2、实战Dirty water rose in wells and canals before the earthquake. And no one judged that an earthquake was come. Suddenly, everything shook. It seemed as if the world was at the end. Millions of brick houses and a number of dams were destroyed. Railway tracks became useless bars. Pipes in mines burst and let out smelly steam. Huge cracks trap cyclists everywhere.The next day, this event was the headline or main title of all newspapers. With the reporters given an outline of the disaster, the whole nation was shocking by the damage and the victim’s extreme suffering. People were moved when they read that the survivors comforted each other by said “Congratulations! You survived!”. So they not only expressed their sympathy sincerely, but also organized together to help the victims right away. The injured were rescued and the death were buried. The frightened survivors were dug out from under the ruin and were offered shelter, fresh water and electricity. Thanks for people’s help, the loss was minimized.2、总结反思①②③④找出为准一、阅读理解Dirty water rose in wells and canals before the earthquake. But no one judged that an earthquake was coming. Suddenly, everything shook. It seemed as if the world was at an end. Millions of brick houses and a number of dams were destroyed. Railway tracks became useless bars. Pipes in mines burst and let out smelly steam. Huge cracks trapped cyclists everywhere.The next day, this event was the headline or main title of all newspapers. With the reporters giving an outline of the disaster, the whole nation was shocked by the damage and the victim’s extremesuffering. People were moved when they read that the survivors comforted each other by saying “Congratulations! You survived!”. So they not only expressed their sympathy sincerely, but also organized together to help the victims right away. The injured were rescued and the dead were buried. The frightened survivors were dug out from under the ruins and were offered shelter, fresh water and electricity. Thanks to people’s help, the loss was minimized.1. Which is the best title?A. An outline of the disasterB. An endC. A Horrible EarthquakeD. An event2、From the first passage, we can infer that .A. pipes in mines burst and let out smelly steamB. the earthquake was horribleC. no one judged that an earthquake was comingD. huge cracks trapped cyclists everywhere3. Many things were greatly destroyed in the earthquake except .A. millions of brick housesB. a number of damsC. railway tracksD. the victims’ optimism4. The survivors’ attitude to the earthquake is .A. shockedB. frightenedC. optimisticD. pessimistic5. What’s the Chinese meaning of the word minimized in the second passage?A. 最小化B. 拯救C. 避开D. 挖掘逐句理解一、英汉互译Dirty water rose in well s and canal s before the earthquake. But no one judge d that an earthquake was coming. Suddenly, everything shook. It seemed as if the world was at an end. Millions of brick houses and a number of dam s were destroy ed. Railway track s became useless bar s. Pipe s in mine s burst and let out smelly steam. Huge crack s trap ped cyclist s everywhere.The next day, this event was the headline or main title of all newspapers. With the reporter s giving an outline of the disaster, the whole nation was shock ed by the damage and the victim’s extreme suffering. People were moved when they read that the survivors comforted each other by saying “Congratulations! You survived!”. So they not only express ed their sympathy sincerely, but also organized together to help the victims right away. The injure d were rescue d and the dead were buried. The frighten ed survivors were dug out from under the ruin s and were offered shelter, fresh water and electricity. Thanks to people’s help, the loss was minimized.地震前,水井和运河里的污水都涨涌起来。

卷子改错诚实的作文

卷子改错诚实的作文

卷子改错诚实的作文
《一张卷子引发的诚实故事》
哎呀呀,今天我要跟你们讲讲发生在我身上的一件超搞笑的事儿。

那是一次考试之后,老师把卷子发下来了,我满心期待地拿到手。

不看不知道,一看吓一跳,我竟然错了一道超级简单的题。

当时我那个悔啊,怎么就这么粗心呢。

可我再仔细一看,咦?老师好像改错了,这道题应该是我对了呀。

我心里就开始纠结了,这要是告诉老师,老师改过来,那我的分数就高几分呢,说不定还能得到老师的表扬。

可要是不说,这心里又总觉得不太对劲。

我就在那纠结来纠结去,一会儿想着就这么算了,一会儿又觉得不行,我得诚实。

最后,我一咬牙,决定去找老师。

我带着卷子,慢吞吞地走到老师跟前,那腿都跟灌了铅似的。

我小心翼翼地对老师说:“老师,您看这道题好像改错了。

”老师拿过卷子看了看,还真的是改错了。

老师笑着对我说:“不错不错,很诚实嘛。

”哎呀,那一刻我心里那个轻松啊,感觉比考了满分还高兴呢。

通过这件事我算是明白了,诚实可真是太重要了。

咱不能为了那几分就把诚实丢一边呀,得做个坦坦荡荡的人。

就像这次,如果我没去找老师改正错误,那我心里肯定会一直别扭,也不会有现在这么踏实的感觉。

所以说呀,诚实才是最重要的财富呢!以后我也一定会继续这么诚实地面对每一件事啦,哈哈!。

22年高考英语作文全国乙卷改错

22年高考英语作文全国乙卷改错

22年高考英语作文全国乙卷改错全文共6篇示例,供读者参考篇1Title: My Bestest FriendHi! My name is Tommy and I'm 8 years old. I go to Sunnyville Elementary School and I'm in 3rd grade. My techer Ms. Johnson told us to rite an essay about are best frend for are English exam. So here goes!My bestest friend in the whole wide world is Billy. We have ben friends since we were babys in the same playgroup. Are moms are best friends too so we've knowen each other forever!Billy is so fun to play with. We love play video games and makebelieve we are superheroes or space explores. Sometimes we get into fikts but we always make up after because Billy is the funnest kid I know.One time me and Billy raned away from are houses just for a litle while. We were pretending to go on a seckret mission in the forest behined my house. Billy brofht his toy walkie-talkies and we were talking in ckode like real spys."Alfa Bravo Charlie, the ennemy is near!" Billy said into his walkie-talkie in a whisper voice."What's are mission, Delta Foxtrott?" I whisppered back.Suddenly, Billy's walkie-talkie made a loud BEEEEP sound! We imbreeched and realized the battries were dying. It turnd out that was my mom calling to make sure we were okay. She wasnt to happy we had sneeked out without telling her. We got ixtra chores for a week but it was soooo worth the adventure!Other times me and Billy just chill and wach TV togeher or look at memes on his mom's fone. Billy is a realy good artust too. He can draw the most wonderfull picturs of superheroes and monsters. Someday I think he will be a famouse artust or mayby a comic book maker.The best thing about Billy is that even thogh we get into troble alot, he always has your back and never rats you out, not even to teachers. And if someone bullys me or is meen, Billy sticks up for me. He may be little but hes not skeered of anyone!One time these mean older kids from a diffrent skool were bughing us on the playgrounde. They made fun of Billy's hare because he has a little bnad that holds his hare out of his facewhen he plays sports. I don't know why but for some resin they thowt that was hillarrious and laffed at him.Well Billy wasant putting up with that! He maked a funny face at them and said "Aw did the bullys run out of good jokes?" And then he just laffed along with them like he thoght they were being silly on purpoise! The bullies diddnt know what to do, they wernt expeckting that! Eventuly they just kind of shlunked away. Billy's confidence realy confusded them!My favrit memryswith Billy are when we go campping with are familys in the woodsneer town. We get to start the campfires (with grown-up helpers) and eat smors and go hikning and make forts out of blankets and branch's. Its like one big endless sleepover! Sumtimes the raindears come at nite and its so spoooooky.Billy never gets skeered thogh. He just lafffs at the raindears and dairs them to try and scare us! Hes like a fearles explores. Mayby that can be his back-up plan if he dusnt become a artust. I dont think ill ever be as brave as Billy.At skool we are in differant classes this year sinse 3rd grade has three sections. Sumtimes I dont get to see him as much as I want to. But we still have recess and lunch period togeher so we make the most of it. Were guna be in the same 4th grade classnext year thogh so we can be partners every day agen! I cant wate!In conklusyon, Billy is my bestest friend because he is fun, brav, talented, and allways got my back. Were gunna be frends forever, I just know it! Kids need someone they can count on like Billy. He makes me laff every day and thats what frends are for!篇2It's Time for Summer Vacation!Hi everyone! My name is Lily and I am 8 years old. I can't wait to tell you about my plans for the summer. I have so many fun things I want to do when school is out.First of all, I'm going to sleep in as late as I want every single day! No more waking up at 6am to catch the bus. During the school year, my parents is always nagging me to get out of bed. But in the summer, I get to stay up late watching TV and playing videogames. Then I can sleep until noon if I feel like it. Isn't that awesome?My family has big vacation plans too. We're going to driving to Florida to visit my grandparents. The drive takes like 15 hours, but it's worth it because my grandma makes the best chocolatechip cookies. She always lets me lick the batter from the bowl when she bakes. Yum!In Florida we'll go to the beach every day. I love making sandcastles and burying my brother in the sand up to his head. He get so mad but I think it's hilarious! We go deep into the ocean too. The waves are huge and they splash me right in the face. It feels like being in a washing machine, haha.One time a crab pinched me on the toe at the beach. It was so painfully! I cried for like an hour. But my dad says it's just part of the fun at the ocean. Maybe I'll see another crab this summer and get pinched again. As long as it's not on the toe area, I'll be OK.My absolute favorite thing is going to waterparks though. Tennessee has some really cool ones with loopy waterslides that are crazy high up. I've rode them all! I get a little scared at first, but then it's a blast zipping down the slides at top speed. You get completely drenched from the water splashing everywhere. Sometimes I drink some of the water by accident and it makes me burp lol.There's also fun games and prizes at the parks. If you toss a ring around a bottle, you win a stuffed animal. I have like 20 ofthem now from past summers. This year I'm going for the giant panda...it's super adorable!I could go on forever about summer, but I better stop here. School will be over in just 2 more weeks. Then the fun can began! Goodbye math, spelling and homework. Hello waterparks, beaches and cookies. This is gonna be the best summer ever!篇3My Name is Tommy and I am 10 Years old. I am in the 5th Grade. Today I have to write an Essay correcting Mistakes from a Gaokao English Exam last Year. The Gaokao is a very important Test that older Students take to get into Universities in China. Even though I'm just a Kid, My Teacher wants me to practice correcting Writing because it will help me get better at English.The Gaokao Essay was about Environmental Protection. It had some Grammar and Word Choice errors that I need to fix. Here is the original Essay with my Corrections:Title: Environmental Protection: A Shared Responsibility (No changes needed)In the face of environmental deterioration, We as residents on this planet should bear our inescapable responsibility toprotect our Mother Earth. (I changed "We as residents on this planet" to "We as residents of this planet")To begin with, every individual counts in environmental protection. The environment we live in is like a (mirror) mirror reflecting how we treat it. (I added "mirror" because it was missing) If we don't take good care of it, the environmental problems such as air and water pollution, shortage of resources and global warming will become more and more severe. However, if every one of us acts in an environmentally friendly way, the Earth will certainly become a better place to live in. (No changes needed)For example, we can try our best to save energy and reduce waste in our daily life. Turn off the lights, computers, or other electric appliances when not in use. Reuse the plastic bags when we go shopping. And sort the domestic litter into different categories to make recycling easier. These small deeds, if put into practice by every family, will make a big difference. (I changed "And" to "Also" at the start of the last sentence)In addition, each of us as a citizen should learn to monitor companies and government agencies' behaviors regardingenvironmental protection. We should resolutely fight against those companies making a profit at the cost of damaging the environment through producing harmful industrial emissions or discharging untreated waste water. Meanwhile, we should keep a close eye on whether relevant government agencies enforce strict environmental regulations and make sure that corporate polluters pay the corresponding price for their misbehaviors. (I changed "misbehaviors" to "misdeeds" at the end)What's more, we ought to raise public awareness of environmental protection by setting good examples for others, especially the young generation. Parents should teach kids to love nature from an early age through various ways such as taking them to parks, zoos or botanical gardens frequently. Many environmentally-friendly habits like putting litters into dustbins and not wasting food and water can thus be cultivated since childhood. If the awareness of environmental protection is promoted among the general public through setting good examples, our beautiful homeland will definitely be better off. (No changes needed)Last but not least, advanced science and technology should be applied to protect the environment more effectively. Developing renewable and clean energy like solar and windpower will help reduce our dependence on those environmentally unfriendly energy sources like coal and oil. Launching more artificial satellites for better monitoring and researching the Earth's environment is also needed to find solutions to increasingly serious environmental issues. (I changed "Launching" to "We should launch" at the start of the last sentence)In a word, protecting our living environment is not only the responsibility of government and environmental organizations, but also the due obligation of every global citizen, including you and me. If we could make concerted and unremitting efforts, our green dream of human harmony with nature will ultimately come true. (No changes needed)Those were all the mistakes I found and fixed in the Gaokao Essay. Environmental protection is very important for the future of the planet. We must all do our part, no matter how small, to take care of the Earth. Even kids like me can help by developing good habits early on. I hope that by reviewing this Essay, you also learned some things about how to improve your English writing skills! Please let me know if you need any other essays corrected.篇4Title: My Bestest Friend BuddyHi there! My name is Timmy and I'm going to tell you about my bestest friend in the whole wide world - Buddy the dog!Buddy is a big golden retriver that my parents got for me when I was 6 years old. He have long golden fur that is so soft and floppy ears that I love to pet. His tail never stop wagging which means he is always happy to see me. Isn't that the cutest thing ever?I remember the first day Buddy came to live with us. I was so exsited but also a little scared because he was bigger than me! But Buddy ran right over and started licking my face with his warm wet tongue. I laughed so hard and from than on we were best buds.Every morning Buddy wake me up by gently pawing at my bedroom door. Then we go downstairs for breakfest together. Buddy's favorite foods are bacon and skrimp! No matter what I'm eating, he always beg me for a bite with his big brown puppy dog eyes. I can't resist that face so I usually sneak him a little treat. Shhh, don't tell Mom and Dad!After we eat, Buddy and me head outside to play. We have so much fun chassing each other around the yard and playingfetch. I'm a pretty good frisbee thrower for a kid! Sometimes Buddy catch the frisbee right out of the air. His tongue is always hanging out because he gets tried from running so much.In the afternoon when I'm at school, Buddy has to stay home alone. But don't fell too bad for him - he gets to nap on the couch all day long! I'm kind of jealous actually. When I get home from school, Buddy greets me at the door tail wagging like crazy. No matter what kind of day I had, seeing Buddy's happiness cheers me up.At night after dinner, the whole family lays on the carpet to watch a movies together. Buddy always squeezes right in the middle, putting his head in someone's lap for pets. I'm usually that someone! Petting Buddy's soft fur is so calming and cuddly.My favorite times are when Mom and Dad say Buddy can sleep in my room. He snuggles up next to me under the covers and I can feel his steady breathing. Buddy's warmth makes me feel so safe and cozy. I fall right to sleep snuggled next to my best friend.Buddy has been my best friend for life for as long as I can remember. We've gone on so many adventures and made so many amazing memories together. Like the time he dug under the fence and I had to go chase him down the street! Or when wetried to sneak Buddy into a restaurant but he barked really loud and gave us away. Haha!I just love Buddy so much. He's not only my pet, he's a member of my family. When I'm feeling sad, Buddy always cheers me up by licking my face or snuggling up to me. When I tell him my problems like I'm having trouble with math homework or got in an argument with a friend, it's like he really understands and wants to make me feel better. Dogs are the most loyal friends ever!I know Buddy won't be around forever since dogs lives are shorter than humans. That makes me really sad to think about. But I'm going to soak up every minute of friendship and love that I can while he's still here. Buddy is показвать одного из a kind dog who has been by my side through my whole childhood so far. I bet when I'm an adult, I'll look back and Buddy will still be my favorite, bestest friend ever. We're just two pals having the adventure of a lifetime together!篇5My Best FriendHi everyone! My name is Lily, and I want to tell you about my best friend, Lucy. We have been friends since we were in kindergarten. Lucy is the best friend anyone could have!Firstly, Lucy is really smart. She always helps me with my homework and explains things to me when I don't understand. Last week, we had a math test, and I was really worried about it. But Lucy tutored me every day after school and helped me practice. Thanks to her, I got an A+ on the test! I am so lucky to have such a smart friend like Lucy.Secondly, Lucy is super kind and caring. Whenever I am feeling sad or upset, she knows exactly how to cheer me up. One time, I had a bad day at school because I forgot my lunch. Lucy shared her lunch with me without hesitation. She even made funny faces to make me laugh! That's the kind of friend she is - always thinking about others before herself.Moreover, Lucy is a great athlete. She is always active and loves to play sports. We often have PE classes together, and she encourages me to do my best. Last month, we participated in a school relay race. I was nervous, but Lucy motivated me and ran the last lap so fast that we won the race! I am grateful to have a friend who pushes me to be better.Lastly, Lucy is a talented artist. She loves drawing and painting. Whenever we have art class, she comes up with the most creative ideas. She even made a beautiful painting for my birthday last year. It was a picture of us playing in the park, and it made me so happy. I treasure that painting and the memories we share.In conclusion, Lucy is not just my best friend, but also an amazing person. She is smart, kind, athletic, and artistic. I feel grateful every day for having her in my life. True friendship is a precious gift, and I am lucky to have found it in Lucy.Remember, it's important to cherish and appreciate our friends. They make our lives brighter and happier. So, let's celebrate friendship and be the best friends we can be!That's the end of my essay. Thank you for listening, everyone!篇6My Name Is Timmy and I'm 9 Years OldHi there! My name is Timmy and I'm 9 years old. I'm in 4th grade and I love reading, playing video games, and hanging out with my friends. Today I want to talk about the 2022 nationalEnglish exam essay that all the big kids had to write. My older sister Jessica is in 12th grade and she had to take that test. I looked over her essay after she was done and I have some thoughts!First of all, the prompt for the essay was "What role should artificial intelligence play in our daily lives?" That's a pretty deep question if you ask me. AI is those robot things that can think and learn like humans. My dad works at a tech company that makes AI so he talks about it a lot. I think AI could be really cool and help us with lots of stuff, but I can also see how it could be scary if the robots get too smart and take over!Anyway, here are some of the errors I noticed in Jessica's essay:In her introduction paragraph, she wrote "Artificial intelligence has become more prominent and ubiquitous in our modern society." Uhh, no it hasn't Jessie! Sure, maybe some smart robot vacuum cleaners, but AI definitely isn't ubiquitous yet. I don't see robots everywhere I go. I think she meant to say AI is becoming more prominent, not that it already is ubiquitous. Words mean things!Then she said "While AI undoubtedly offers significant benefits, we must be circumspect about its widespreadadoption." What does circumspect mean? I looked it up and it means being cautious and watching out for potential risks. Using fancy words doesn't make you sound smarter if nobody knows what they mean! Just say "we need to be careful about adopting AI everywhere."Her next paragraph was all about how AI could make our lives more efficient and convenient by automating tasks. She gave an example about AI assistants that can schedule appointments, answer questions, and manage your calendar. That's all true, but she failed to mention the potential downsides, like AI assistants losing your private data or scheduling the wrong things if they make mistakes. An essay should look at multiple perspectives.Later on, she talked about AI being used in medicine to diagnose diseases and recommend treatments. She wrote "An AI system's analysis is completely unbigotted and infaliable." Two mistakes there! First, she meant to say unbiased, not unbigotted. Bigotted means being opinionated against certain groups. Second, infaliable isn't even a real word! I think she meant infallible, which means incapable of making mistakes. Though even that isn't true - AI can definitely make mistakes since it's programmed by fallible humans.In her conclusion paragraph, she stated "As AI becomes more omnipresent in the comeing years, we must proactively shape guidelines and policies to protect sociatal wellbeing." Yikes, those are some bad spelling and grammar errors for a 12th grader! It should be "coming" not "comeing", "societal" not "sociatal", and omnipresent is another one of those fancy words that doesn't really make sense in this context since AI won't actually be everywhere in a few years.Overall, while I give Jessica's essay points for addressing some of the potential benefits and risks of AI, she made several errors in word choice, spelling, grammar, factual accuracy, and presenting a one-sided perspective. An essay on AI should more thoroughly explore both the advantages and disadvantages through concrete examples.Those are my thoughts! For a 4th grader, I think I did a pretty good job analyzing and critiquing Jessica's essay. I would probably get a better score than her on the exam based on my excellent English skills. What do you think? Let me know if you need any other essays proofread - I'll be sure to charge a lot less than those fancy editing services!。

新高考短文改错答题技巧

新高考短文改错答题技巧

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关于改错作文的论据

关于改错作文的论据

关于改错作文的论据
关于改错作文这事儿,咱得说实话,谁还没在写作时犯过点错呢?不论你是刚开始动笔的小学生,还是写了半辈子文章的“老笔头”,有时候一不留神,错误就悄悄溜进了你的文章里。

可能是个语法小错误,或者是逻辑上的一点儿小漏洞,甚至可能是某个事实没查清楚就写上去了。

所以啊,改错作文真的很重要,它就像个放大镜,帮你找出那些藏得深深的小问题。

说到改错作文的好处,那可真是多得数不清。

当你开始修改自己的文章时,你会发现那些之前没注意到的小问题,然后一个个把它们揪出来改掉。

这个过程就像是在给文章“洗澡”,让它变得更干净、更整洁。

而且啊,每改完一次,你都能感觉到自己的写作水平又上了一个台阶,那种成就感真的很棒!
在学校里,老师总是强调改错作文的重要性。

为啥呢?因为这不仅能帮助我们提高写作水平,还能培养我们的批判性思维和自主学习能力。

每次改错都是一次锻炼,让我们学会如何发现问题、如何分析问题、如何解决问题。

这种能力可不仅仅在写作上有用,在日常生活和工作中也是必不可少的。

还有啊,现在信息这么发达,谁都能在网上发表自己的观点和文章。

但是啊,如果文章里有错误,那可就是个大问题了。

因为一旦发出去,那些错误信息就像长了翅膀一样,到处飞。

所以啊,改错作文这事儿真的很重要,它能让我们的文章更准确、更可靠,避免误导别人。

在这个信息爆炸的时代里,我们每个人都有责任确保自己传播出去的信息是真实可靠的。

知错能改善莫大焉高考作文5篇汇总

知错能改善莫大焉高考作文5篇汇总

知错能改善莫大焉高考作文5篇汇总士季说过:“知错能改,善莫大焉”。

犯了错不要紧,重要的是能认识自已的错误。

这里给大家分享一些以知错能改为话题的高中作文,希望对大家有所帮助。

以知错能改为话题的高中作文篇1王守仁有言:“不贵于无过,而贵于能改过。

”自古以来,不论是仁人志土,还是芸芸众生,每个人都不能避免犯错。

但正如王守仁所说,人的可贵精神不在于无错,而在于知错能改。

生而为人,错误是我们每个人都要面对的问题。

过错并不仅仅是过错,它更是一次经历、一个教训。

学会面对自己的过错本就需要勇气,如果犯错后勇于改错,那么这样的人在待人接物时也必定有几分真诚在其中。

阿拉伯有句谚语:“终身不病的人不能成个名医。

”这句话告诉我们,有些事情只有亲身经历过才能被我们所真正认识。

不生病的人体会不到生病时的痛苦和难熬,也不懂得身为病人最需要的是什么,这样的人自然不能为病人考虑得周全,因而也就不是一位好医生。

推而远之,终身不犯错的人不会有卓越的成就,这才是这句谚语蕴含的真正道理。

犯错是一次认清自己的机会,从错误中吸取经验,不断改正,完善自己,这样才能提升自己的人格与修养。

错误对不同的人的意义不同,对我们普通人来说,它是一次教训,但对于决策者,它或许就是一次灾难。

康熙帝曾说:“一事不谨,即贻四海之忧;一念不慎,即贻百年之患。

”越是位高权重的人肩负的责任越重大,皇帝就是如此,他的一言一行都关乎天下百姓的前途命运。

普通人犯错或许最多牵涉到身边的人,如若皇帝犯错,殃及的就是天下苍生了。

错误不能避免,但可以防范。

在前行的路途中,我们可以努力做得更好,尽力让事情朝着正确的方向发展,其实这就是一种防患于未然。

知错能改历来是中华民族的传统美德,没有人会看低犯错的人,让人嘲笑的一直都是那些犯错却仍我行我素的人。

错误不是禁地,犯错是人之常情,我们不仅要正确对待错误,还要正确对待犯错之人。

学会用自己的善念帮助他人,甚至引导他人不要误入歧途,这是每个人都应该做的事。

高考英语语法填空改错及阅读作文5

高考英语语法填空改错及阅读作文5

高考英语语法填空改错及阅读作文一、核心词汇1、accept /əkˈsept/ vt. 接受;承认;同意;接纳【拓展】accept…as…把……认作为……acceptance n. 接受;接纳;赞同acceptable adj. 可接受的2、accident /'æksɪdənt/n. 事故;偶然/意外的事【拓展】by accident偶然地,意外地(同by chance)(反by design, on purpose)meet with an accident 遭不测without accident 平安,无恙accidental a. 偶然/意外的accidentally ad. 意外地,偶然地二、词性转换1、acceptance接受accept v接受acceptable可接受的accepted adj.普遍接受的,一般公认的acceptant adj.愿接受的,开放的acceptably可接受地2、access n进入;通道accessibility可达性accessible易接近的;可到达的accessibly 可接近地,可亲近地三、熟词生义1、acknowledge(熟义:vt.承认;道谢)He acknowledged me by lifting his hat.vt.向……打招呼2、admit(熟义:v.承认;允许进入)(1)准许进入This ticket admits two people to the football match. 这张票可供两人入场看足球赛。

be admitted to /into Beijing University被北京大学录取(2)接[容]纳;容许The cinema admits about 2000 people.这座电影院大约可坐2000人。

The rules and regulations admit of(容许) no other explanation.这些规章制度不容许有其他解释。

知错能改高考作文800字5篇汇总

知错能改高考作文800字5篇汇总

知错能改高考作文800字5篇汇总过而能改是岁月的溪,清澈灵动,汩汩绕青山。

过而能改是流年路,蜿蜒曲折,悠悠抵天际。

这里给大家分享一些以知错能改为话题的高中作文,希望对大家有所帮助。

以知错能改为话题的高中作文篇1最近看到一则新闻:邓女士昏迷在家,被入室行窃的小偷救治。

后来那个小偷再次入狱,邓女士为他送新衣,谆谆教导他走上正路。

并在其服刑期间,为她熬鸡汤,织毛衣,小偷被彻底感化,浪子回头,回归社会。

人的一生,在犯错、改正、再犯错、再改正中度过。

没有人敢说自己从来不犯错误,圣人也不过只是少犯错而已。

然而,如今的社会出现的一些新情况、新变化,却令我们面对犯错的人时,无所适从,处境尴尬。

那就是有的人错了,仍然不知悔改,一条道,走到黑,典型的不撞南墙不回头。

对待她这样执迷不悟的犯错者,我们似乎束手无策了,要说教育吧,她已经年事已高,根本不会听从劝告;要说法律制裁吧,毕竟事情太小了;而且她已经是风烛残年,经不起这些折腾。

因此我们应该区分清楚犯错的性质、危害性等,按区别对待。

对于那些明知故犯、不思悔改的人,我们决不能姑息,否则就是对善良的人们的惩罚;而对于那些知错能改的人,我们仍以宽容心对待,促其悔改。

他虽然曾经是一名小偷,只能活在社会的阴暗角落中,甚至可以说是人人喊打的过街老鼠,但是他在邓女士爱心的感召下,看清了自己的人生,找到了方向,并走回了正路,他的行为值得我们为他点赞。

犯错误是无可避免的,但问题关键是犯了错误之后,能及时认识到自己所犯的错误,并及时加以改正。

因此我们经常说,对于生活中那些犯了错的人,我们不能歧视他们,应该尊重他们,给他们你人格上了尊重,用我们的爱心和温情,去感化他们。

据新闻报道:一位老奶奶,屡次在公交车司机停车,旅客正在上下车时候,装作跌倒公交车前面的公路上。

被扶起后,趴在公交车前面,说自己被公交车撞倒了。

这位老奶奶早已过了花甲之年,可是他的行为,让我们既好笑又好气,同时也引发了我们深深的思考。

因为英语成绩而改错的作文

因为英语成绩而改错的作文

因为英语成绩而改错的作文
English:
Despite my lower English proficiency, I have been working hard to improve my language skills by attending extra classes, practicing grammar exercises, and reading English books regularly. Unfortunately, my recent essay was still full of mistakes due to my lack of vocabulary and grammatical knowledge. I understand the importance of English in our globalized world, and I am committed to continuing my efforts to enhance my language proficiency in order to avoid making similar mistakes in the future.
中文翻译:
尽管我的英语水平较低,但我一直努力通过参加额外的课程、练习语法习题和定期阅读英文书籍来提高语言能力。

不幸的是,最近的一篇作文仍然充满了错误,这是由于我词汇量和语法知识的不足所致。

我明白在全球化的世界中,英语的重要性,我决心继续努力提高语言水平,以避免将来再犯类似的错误。

高考英语复习作文改错集锦讲义

高考英语复习作文改错集锦讲义

作文错误分类集锦英语作文扣分除了审题错误、布局不合理、要点不全面以外,还有很多表达错误。

下面是一线老师常年搜集整理的学生作文中的表达错误,然后进行归类,易引起学生的注意。

一、中国式英语1. 我是我们英语老师的小助手I am a little/small hand of my English teacher.2. 一天,我打着一把伞在雨中行走突然看到一个小女孩湿漉漉地在路边。

One day, I was beating an umbrella, walked in the rain when a girl stood by the roadside, wet throughout.3. 我有一个好身体/我身体很好。

I have a good health/I have a healthy body. My body is very good/healthy.4. 我到了广场,结果那里人山人海。

I arrived at the square, where there are people mountains, people sea.5. 滴水之恩当涌泉相报You di da di da me, I hua la hua la you6.努力学习后,我的英语取得了很大进步。

After I studied hard, my English has made great progresses.7.我们学校发生了很大变化。

Our school has taken place great changes.8.作为高三学生,他的压力很大。

As a senior three student, his stress/pressure is very big/great.9.我想知道你是否方便在飞机场接我叔叔。

I wonder if you are convenient to meet my uncle at the airport.10.这个餐馆吃的人很多。

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It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as wc arc often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’clock. That is too much for us. considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.三(2014陕西卷)My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!四(2014四川卷)Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.五(2014新课标I)Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!六(2014浙江卷)I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.2015全国高考英语汇编改错题(2015全国1)When I was a child, I hoped to live in the ciyt. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city ,but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways t o protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .(2015全国2)One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telking him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later.Tony saw parents.Mom said,”How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this woul d never happen again.On Children's Day last year, our city held an interested activity, in which children and their parents play the rich and the poor. In the dinner, the rich could have more delicious food, but the poor could only have breads with porridge(粥). Parents both hoped to have the dinner for the poor with the children. They hoped that their children could be taught the lesson from the dinner. Now many people on earth don't have enough food and clothes. Every day only one half the world could enjoy enough food. The activity was held make the families understand the differences from the poor and the rich and also make the parents know that too much material life won't always do good to the children.(34)We'll never forget the day which my classmates and I paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week. It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers. It looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers, grass and trees anywhere. We also visited some workshops and saw workers worked very hard. We talked with them and learned a lot of. We understood them further. On the way home we felt tiring. We all thought that we had a very good day. We real hoped that we could get more chances of leave the school and learn social experience.(35)One morning Mrs Jenkins went to department store to buy a coat. There was not shop assistant in the store before she got there. She had to wait. Then a fat lady came into. She went to Mrs Jenkins and asked her to serve for her. She told Mrs Jenkins that she wanted to buy a coat. Mrs Jenkins said that she couldn't do. The fat lady got angrily. She didn't let Mrs Jenkins explain anything but insisted that Mrs Jenkins would do that right away because it was her job. At last Mrs Jenkins has to tell her that she was a customer herself and wanted to buy a coat, too.I used to going to the countryside to draw animals and plants. One day I was walking across a field look for rabbits to draw. Losing in thought, I hadn’t noticed a bull to running towards me. About 100 meters ahead was a tree under that I would sit and draw. Suddenly, I heard the noise behind me. I turned and saw the bull. Knowing a bull can run more faster than a man, I quickly reached the tree and climb up. From there I saw the bull kicking my food bag by its feet. It kept done this for 15 minutes and moved away. But I was quite nervous in the tree.(45)You can speak to people on other side of the earth over the telephone with help of a satellite. They can help to take photos on the earth and produce maps. Some pictures taking by satellites show us the exact place wheredifferent metals can be found. They can also tell the differences between healthy plants or poor ones. This is a great help to the scientists work in forestry and in agriculture. Satellites benefit by out daily life. For example, satellites for broadcasting are used to sending radio and TV programmes from one part of the world to other. It is the satellites to make our world seem smaller.I'd like to tell you why I learn English. I often read English aloud and try learn something important by hearts, which helps me remember it easily and form into the good habit of thinking in English.I listen to a lot and talk with others in English.In this way, I was improved both my hearing and my spoken English.I keep a diary in English every day but my spoken English is becoming better and better.I also try my best to master the necessary grammar knowledge. By this means, I can express itself in English correct. That's the way I have been learning English. I hope it will be useful to you.That's all. Thank you.(26)I went to see film after supper. On my way to the cinema, I met an old English woman, she had lost her way. I gave up the chance to see the film, walking towards her and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her great change had taken place in the past few years and she told me anything about Britain and her family. 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