江苏省南京市六校联合体2020届高三期初测试英语试题

【题文】
A Chinese boy is reported to have spent about 2 million yuan in studying in New Zealand but failed to get any diploma. He even could not take care of himself and his grandmother had to feed him.
The man in the case is a so-called adult baby, because his deeds make him almost the same as a baby. He cannot take care of himself. He is unable to go to school, let alone finish studies. He even relies on his grandmother to feed him.
However, he burns money faster than any normal student. He spent about 2 million yuan in two years overseas, but could not finish even the preparatory courses. We do not mean to judge his choice, but someone who lacks the basic ability to survive has little chance of success in any modern society.
In a later interview, the mother of the boy was in tears and said she regretted not having taught her son well.She also told the story about how she “educated” her son: meeting all his demands, even the unreasonable ones. When he did not perform well in school, she simply spent money in sending him overseas; she would buy whatever he wanted. That was bad for her and bad for him.
【写作内容】
1. 以约30个单词概括文章大意；
2. 谈谈你如何看待“巨婴”现象，然后用2～3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 不必写标题。

【评分标准】内容完整、语言规范、语篇连贯、词数适当。

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【答案】
A Chinese boy consumed a large sum of money in two years overseas. What's worse, he couldn't live on himself and didn't get a diploma eventually.
The phenomenon sets me thinking. The boy depicted in the passage is not the single case, resulting from several factors. First and foremost, there exist some parents spoiling the young and giving whatever their children want, even though their demands are irrational occasionally.
In the second place, some parents focus more on children's academic performances, ignoring the education of survival skills. Last but not least, some young people are self-centered and take it for granted that others serve them.
From where I stand, it's high time that we took some measures to cope with this problem. To begin with, parents should strike a balance between discipline and love, letting their children try something themselves. Additionally, the young should establish proper values and communicate more with others.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文写作。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，要求写一篇议论文；要求为：1. 以约30个单词概括文章大意；2. 谈谈你如何看待“巨婴”现象，然后用2～3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：single case个别案例；First and foremost 首要的是；irrational不合理的；academic performances学校表现；education of survival skills 生存技能教育；Last but not least最后也是最重要的；self-centered自我中心的；take it for granted理所当然；cope with处理；establish proper values树立合适的价值观。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如The boy depicted in the passage is not the single case, resulting from several factors.使用了现在分词的使用以丰富句式；First and foremost, there exist some parents spoiling the
young and giving whatever their children want, even though their demands are irrational occasionally. 同时运用宾语从句和状语从句，全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

【标题】江苏省南京市六校联合体2020届高三期初测试英语试题
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