扬州市四星级高中第7届优质课赛课---作文专项技能课件

走近高考范文
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（2011 江苏） 1.意识到妈妈工作了一天一定很累时，小女孩帮妈 妈卸下了肩上的包。 Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day's work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. 2.这一切使我想起了我的妈妈。她做了她力所能及的 一切来满足我。 All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best.
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My uncle experienced a bad accident yesterday. It all began last night when my uncle and his friends had great dinner together. It was not until late at night that my uncle started to drive back home. It is obvious that He was drunk, but by no means would (意愿) he admit it and insisted on driving home himself. My uncle was so drunk that he soon found the car out of his control and he was not capable of seeing the road clearly. What was worse, alcohol made him lose sense of danger. As a result, his car knocked into a tree along the road , seriously damaged.
was__________________________________. (1’)
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with结构 1. 有这么多衣服要洗，今天我不能和你去看 电影了。
With so many clothes to wash can't go _________________________________________,I to the cinema with you.
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小试牛刀
请根据下面四幅图画内容，写一篇短文，记述昨天发生在你叔叔身上的事。 注意：1.词数150左右。2.参考词汇：吊销驾照revoke a license
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My uncle experienced a bad accident yesterday. my uncle and his friends had great dinner together last night. My uncle didn’t drive back home until late at night. He was obviously drunk ,but he didn’t admit it and insisted on driving home himself. My uncle soon found he couldn’t control his car and he could not see the road clearly. Then he lose sense of danger and he drove into a tree along the road and got seriously injured. Luckily enough, Uncle was sent to the nearest hospital quickly. He woke on the hospital bed, and found a policeman was waiting for him. He told my uncle that his driving license would be revoked. The dangerous driving after drinking almost killed him! I hope public should obey the traffic rules .
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他花5块钱买了那本书。 一句多译 ①He paid _________________________________. (1’) 5 yuan for that book
5 yuan on that book ②He spent__________________________________.
(A) The businessmen from over the world were
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present at the meeting. Present at the meeting were the businessmen (B) from over the world.
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概括总结
What are good sentences： 1.高级词汇：所学词块和短语 2.变换句式：三类从句（定语从句、 名词性从句、状语从句）祈使句，倒装句， 省略句，强调句，虚拟句及其他句式。
走近高考范文
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（2009 山东） 1.______________ (众所周知）that China is a country It is well known with a long history. 2._________________________________ (随着春节的 With the Spring Festival drawing near 临近），people will hold all varieties of activities. It has been a long time since I saw Mr. Smith 3. ___________________________________________ (自从我见过史密斯先生已经好久了）and I miss him a lot.
3.非谓语动词
熟能生巧
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1. 通过使用网络与家人联系是很方便的。
It is convenient to keep in touch with your family by using the Internet.
2.我们所需要做的是冷静下来,反思我们的学习方法。 What we need to do is to calm down and reflect our learning method.
What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. (名词性从句)
(A) I passed the English exam because of your help.
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I would have passed the English exam but for (B) your help. （虚拟语气）
2. 这件事情一解决我们就打的回家了。
With the matter settled ___________________,we went home by taxi.
With the problem solved
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用强调句型翻译 今天下午钟老师在我们班上一堂公开课。 陈述句：________________________________ Mr. Zhong are delivering a public
2.强调地点状语 It is in our class that Mr. Zhong are delivering a public lesson this afternoon. _______________________________________
3. 强调谓语怎么办？ 根据时态变化用did、 do 、does。 _________________________________
As is shown in the picture, love is like a lamp in the dark.
7. 我要去购物，大约五点才回来。 I am going out shopping, and won’t be back until 5:00 o’clock. 8. 他建议学校孩子要避免过度用眼，多做户外活动。 He suggests that school children avoid overusing their eyes and do more outdoor activities. 9.这一天如此美好，我们永远不会忘记 It was such a beautiful day that we would remember it forever.
(1’)③He bought book with 5 yuan that
cost him 5 yuan ________________________________. (1’)④The charged 5 yuan for that book. book_______________________________. (1’) ⑤He
行文逻辑科学，条理性好； 巧用过渡词汇，逻辑性强；
巧用高级词汇和复杂句式，文章品味高；
妙用变通式表达，文章错落有致； 书写规范工整，整体效果好。
火眼金睛 1.
Which one is better? Why?
(A) She always sings while doing her work. （状从省略） (B) She always sings when she does her work.
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前置性补偿
What does a good composition consist of ?
Good composition
Lead in
前置性补偿
What does a good composition consist of ?
Good composition
近年高考英语写作高分卷的五大特点
3. 只有以这种方式， 我们才能进步。 Only in this way, can we make progress.
4.我们对自己的态度才是最关键的。 It is our attitude to ourselves that matters. 5.坐在一盘子粽子前，这个男孩不知道如何打开他们。 （unwrap) Sitting before a plate of zongzi, the boy didn’t know how to unwrap them. 6.正如图中所示，爱就像黑暗中的一盏灯。
lesson in our class this afternoon. _______________________________________
1. 强调宾语 It is a public lesson that Mr. Zhong
are delivering in our class this afternoon. ______________________________________
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用it做形式宾语：
★我们发现提高作文并不难，只要你掌握 王老师教给我们的词汇和句型。
We will find it not difficult to improve our composition, if we master the vocabulary and sentence patterns.
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用倒装句和定语从句翻译句子(2’)
出席这次会议的是王教授，他将做一个可再
生资源的讲座。
Present at the meeting is Mr. Wang, who will ______________________________________
give us a report about the renewable resoures _______________________________________
(A) I lost a book . Its cover is red. (with复合结构) 定语从句
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(B) I lost a book whose cover is red.
(A) To his surprise, the little girl knows so many
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things.
After everything was finished, they began to (A) chat with the elderly people.
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With everything finished, they began to chat (B) with the elderly people.