【讲义】刘洪波雅思写作真经班(1)

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刘洪波雅思写作真经班 Grammatical Range and Accuracy
7 • uses a variety of complex structures • produces frequent error-free sentences • uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms • makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce communication • uses only a limited range of structures • attempts complex sentences but these tend to be less accurate than simple sentences • errors can cause some difficulty for the reader
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Exercise 3: Some people said the government should not spend money on building theaters and sports stadiums. Instead, it should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?
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刘洪波雅思写作真经班 雅思作文四大评分标准
Task Response （任务回应） Coherence and Cohesion（一致与连接） Lexical Resource（词汇资源） Grammatical Range and Accuracy（语法范围与正确性）
洞察本质联系立意高远
抽象具体同义替换
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12-12-08 More men and women decide to have children later in life. Why is it happening? What influences does it have on society and family life?
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• uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task • attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy • uses a limited range of vocabulary, but this is minimally adequate for the task • may make noticeable errors in spelling and/or word formation that may cause some difficulty for the reader
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Exercise 2: Some industrialised countries have serious environmental problems. The damage to the environment is an inevitable result when a country tends to improve the standard of living. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Coherence and Cohesion
7 • uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use • presents a clear central topic within each paragraph • uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical • may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately
以学为贵
Treasure Study Glorify Future
贵学教育
旗下
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IELTS Writing Lecture 1
刘洪波
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Lecture 1 : Lecture 2 : Lecture 3 : Lecture 2 :
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Why aim for 7 not 9
9 Coherence and Cohesion uses cohesion in such a way that it attracts no attention
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uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use makes inadequate, inaccurate or over-use of cohesive devices
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Argumentation 2
• In order to learn a language well, we should learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it. • To what extent do you agree or disagree?
总纲，大作文相关，审题，首段 大作文相关，15句，语法句型 小作文相关 说明文，考前预测，高分论句准备
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学以致用 中西合璧 评分标准 循序渐进 读写互通 自成风格
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Exercise 4: In the last century when a human astronaut first arrived on the Moon he said “it is a big step for mankind” but some people think it makes little difference to our daily life. To what extent to you agree or disagree?
Mean band score for the most frequent countries or regions of origin
Listening China Libya Reading Writing Speaking Overall
5.7 5.2
5.9 5.1
5.2 5.1
5.3 5.8
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按考题内容分类
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雅思学术写作七大注意事项
写作流（审题） I, My, We, You 缩写 数字 标点 拼写 格式
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审题-赢在起跑线 正确判断题目重心 紧扣核心词汇拓展论据
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Lexical Resource
7 • uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision • uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation
5.6 5.4
Kuwait
Oman Saudi Arabia United Arab Emirates
5.3 5.1
5.0 5.0
5.0 5.0
4.9 4.8
4.9 4.9
4.7 4.7
5.7 5.6
5.7 5.4
5.3 5.2
5.1 5.1
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考卷构成
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刘洪波雅思写作真经班 Report 3 (Causes Vs. Effects, Solutions)
Today, there are more images of disasters and violence in the media. What are the causes and what are your solutions?
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Report 4
Happiness is very important to individuals but it is very hard to define.
Why is happiness hard to define? What is your definition of happiness?
类别 官方建议时间 字数 题材
学术类 Task 1
培训类 Task 1 学术类／普 通类Task 2
20分钟
150字以 上
150字以 上 250字以 上
图表作文
20分钟
书信作文
40分钟
议论文 或 报告
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Argumentation 1
• Some people think it is acceptable to use animals for the benefit of humans. Other people think it is wrong to exploit animals for human purposes. • Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
原因1.现代人均寿命增长，生育期相应延后； 2.社会竞争压力大，选择事业收入稳定后生孩子。 影响1.父母与孩子的年龄差会变大，交流中代沟会明显； 2.会出现劳动力缺口，老龄化社会。
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Exercise 1: In order to learn a language well, we should learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?