浙江高考英语短文改错

浙江高考英语短文改错
篇一：浙江高考英语5年改错真题及答案
浙江高考英语5年改错真题及答案（2009-2013）
(2009年)
One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop
besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a plete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.
【答案】friend-friends
【解析】考查名词数。

one of 后受one of影响必须用名词复数形式，应改为friends.
【答案】besides----beside
【解析】考查介词用法。

按句意是在商店旁边，用beside.
【答案】a----an
【解析】考查冠词用法。

由umbrella 的发音可知，元音前应使用冠词an .
【答案】去掉believe后的in
【解析】考查动词用法。

believe 为及物动词。

【答案】is----was
【解析】考查动词时态。

此处要把握全文时态，应用过去时来叙述过去发生的事实。

【答案】gratefull---gratefully
【解析】考查副词用法。

副词修饰动词accept.
【答案】and---but
【解析】考查连词用法。

按照句意前后构成转折关系，用but.
【答案】everyone---someone/somebody
【解析】考查不定代词用法。

everyone else 错误说法，每个人，就不可能再有别人；"别人"应表示为someone/somebody else。

【答案】possible后面用to
【解析】考查固定句型。

此处用 It is/was possible to do sth.句型。

【答案】expect----expecting
【解析】动名词用法。

介词后应该用动名词形式。

(2010年)
After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch. I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They are
silently, and it was clearly that things were not going well. As we left, Mother stopped on their table. “ Excuse me, ” she said, put her arm around the unhappy old woman. “ You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug ” ( 拥抱) you? ” T he woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. After we left, I said, “ That was very nice of you, Mother. So I didn’t think she looked like Grandma. ” “ Neither did me. ” said Mother cheerfully.
7. 第5句：many→much。

【解析】句意：你使我想起来很多关于我的母亲。

此处表示泛指很多，故用so much修饰。

8. 第6句：划掉to。

【解析】accept“接受”，是及物动词，后直接加宾语。

9. 第7句：So→ But。

【解析】句意：妈妈，你真是太好了。

但是我并不认为她像祖母。

由句意可知此处表示转折关系，故用but。

10. 第8句：me→I。

【解析】此处表示“我也这样认为”，表示情况和上句一样，且表示的是否定含义时，用“neither+助动词+主语”结构。

（2011年）
I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than
I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted.
I put into my pocket when he wasn’t loo king. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my
cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had
happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
答案cousin –cousin’srich – richeron --- input ---put it/thatenjoy to --- enjoy Faced --- faceLate --- Laterslow --- slowlyknows --- knewever --- never
（2012年）
Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and 1 rented
for a car. Unfortunate, 1 had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so 1 did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how 1 was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.
答案：before-agofor去掉Unfortunate-Unfortunately week-weeks so-but will-wouldmyself-me farther-far interested-interestingtruth 前加the
（2013年）
Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep.
Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.
Yours,
Rosemary
答案：Dear Diary, know why
last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find one.” His
movedanother in the
classmates and
Tomorrow
worse
is ∧ the / my tired asleep
only friend.
are
Yours,
Rosemary
篇二：2014浙江高考英语短文改错20篇短文改错(学生版)
01
Manager,
I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.
First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I
could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety hazards. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.
As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in
the hope that you can consider on these problems and make more improvements.
02
This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An oldYours faithfully, Li Hua man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked
him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in
all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back th
e money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot o
f nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!
03
Years of school life has taught me a lot of thing, of which teamwork is the most important for me. In fact, I didn't realize its importance until I was chosen the monitor of my class in my senior middle school. At first, I did most of the duties myself when other students cared little about class activities. As result, I was tired out and depressing. Then I turned to his teacher and he advised me to cooperate to others. Thus I began to recognize the strengths of my classmates and had everyone do their part in class. It is working in teams instead of on my own who has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficiently.
04
The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick. Living on my own is a total different
experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. Because of I’m on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices. In the other hand, I can make my own future plan. I have made rules for me to follow.
05 I just e back from Britain last week. I was luckily enough to be one of the student from different countries to visit the UK from Feb.16 to 28. We paid a visit to many places, like London, Oxford or the Lake District. I learned much about British culture and history in London, where was my favorite. I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much more old buildings. The Lake District was beautiful, but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there. The most excited thing
for me in the Britain was that I made a lot of friends there.
06
Dear Jim,
I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6, which was a
fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-metre race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. We can’t speak too high of him. To my great joy, my class was rewarded first
prize. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.
Looking forward to receiving your letter.
Yours,
Li Ping
07
As a teenager, I remember Dad get home lately every night. He already had a great work and loved by his students. He took years to finish that he wanted. And now, decades later, I see myself for him. I go to work throughout the week and then came the weekend. I go to class for six hours on Sunday so I can finish my degree that I started twenty years ago. It took me the long time to figure out that what I wanted. I want to do for student what my father did for students. In my opinion, my father is my real hero.
08
College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in
and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As for me, I will let
my parents pay half of their fees because they are
rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students maths, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship. 09
I went to a shop to buy a jacket one Sunday. It is famous one where there are a variety of clothes. I looked all around and finally find an attractive jacket. When I was asked the price, the assistant said, "Seventy dollars." He added that if I paid by cash, he would give me a discount – ten percent off the fixing price. I thought it was so expensive and started to leave. As I was left, he grabbed me and said, "Okay. Forty-five dollars." Delighting, I bought the jacket. However, when I got home and tried on my new jacket, I realized that anything was wrong with it. It had a pocket where wouldn't open. I was speechless and
looked at it in amazement.
10
I am very much glad to receive a letter from you. You know, in China we call people born between 1990 and 1999 the post – 90s. I am a boy belong to this group. For our generation, life is getting more difficult
than for the old generation. The job market is tough. The house is too expensive to afford. Now many girls would like marry a man who own a house and a car. I don’t think love built on houses and cars was true
love. And this is the social reality that they have to face. Because situations are tough today, we post –
90s are making great effort to live a good life. We think we will make life better and better in the future.
11 In recent years many flowers shops have been appeared in our small town. It is mon for people to buy flowers when they go to a gathering, visiting a sick friend, or attend a wedding or birthday party. I still remember clear one day last year when Tom, a disabled student, presented some flowers to his mother to express his gratitude for her. He owing his entire life to his mother’s kind and care. With her he would not have had the confidence or the courage to fight his disability. As a result the great effort he has made, he was finally admitted to a key university.
12
Thanksgiving Day is one of the most important family holiday in America. All the members of a family, no matter where far away they are, will try to get together in that day. The first Thanksgiving in America takes place in October 1621. In 1620, the group of Englishmen sailed to Massachusetts .They were looking for a freely place to live in as they chose. So they experienced a hard winter. Half of them starved death. The next spring, they began farming. With the help of local Indians, they learned to be plant corn and raise animals. In the fall, the fields produced a good harvest. Filling with joy and thanks
to God, they held a celebration. In 1863, it became a national holiday.
13
Three years ago, I became a student in a ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I find the teachers patient but considerate．Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class．I decided to make the best use for it. I worked hardly and got along well my teachers and classmates．Whenever I had difficulties, they were always helpful. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence
篇三：2014-2015年高考英语真题_短文改错2015带解析
短文改错
1.【2015·陕西】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor
after I was packing them up.
At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might
have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
【答案】
76.去掉in
77.anything 改为something
78.better改成best
79.decide改成decided
80.step 改为steps
81.well改成good
82.after改成when/while
83.a改为the
84.just后加to
85.enjoy改为enjoying
【考点定位】考查短文改错
【名师点睛】这篇短文改错是记叙文，短文的内容和学生的日常生活有关。

错误之处的设置都是平常学生容易错的地方。

考查点比较全面，各种词性都考查到了，也涉及到一些语法知识的考查，如：非谓语动词，时态等。

2.【2015·四川】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，共15分）
Hi, Janice,
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the
problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and
after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing
in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays
now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting act ivity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
【答案】
61.加上to
62. tell--told
63. friend--friends
64.sing--singing
65. many--much
66.so--but
67. How--What
68. are--were
69. him--them
70. 去掉with
【解析】
试题分析：文章主要通过一封求助信，写出了写信人的困扰。

交了三个新朋友，经常一起去卡拉OK唱歌，但其实并不喜欢这样，他想知道自己该怎么做才不会失去这段友谊。

61.加上to 考查动词want的用法，want用不定式担当状语，故加上to。

句意为：我真地很想和你分享一下我经历的问题。

62. tell—told 考查时态。

根据时间状语last time可知，此句需要用一般过去时，故把tell改成told。

句意为正如我上次告诉你的那样。

63. friend—friends 考查名词的复数。

名词friend为可数名词，其前有three修饰，需要用复数形式，故把friend改成friends。

句意为：我在这儿交了三个新朋友。

64.sing—singing 考查动名词担当宾语。

本句考查句型spend?（in）doing sth结构，故把sing改成singing。

65. many—much 考查代词。

根据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用much而非many。

句意为：那真的花费很多。

66.so--but考查连词。

上一分句意为：我不想再去；下一分句意为：我怕失去他们的友谊，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把so改成but。

67. How—What 考查疑问词的选择。

本句中do之后缺少宾语，表示事情，故用what而非how。

注意首字母要大写。

68. are—were 考查虚拟语气。

根据句子可知，此处为虚拟语气，与现在事实不相符，故把are改成were。

句意为：如果
你是我,?。

69. him—them 考查代词。

根据上文可知，交了三个朋友，故用them而非him。

句意为：你会和他们说吗？
70. 去掉with 考查动词。

动词help为及物动词，其后接宾
语时无需加介词，故去掉with。

句意为：请帮帮我，给我一
些建议。

【考点定位】考查短文纠错
【名师点睛】本篇文章考查学生的短文纠错能力。

短文纠错能力考查的范围较广，如各类词类用法和各种语法知识。

本篇文章中既考查了词类用法如：61、63、65、66、69、70题，也
考查了学生的语法知识如：62、64、67、68，涉及多种语法知识。

要求考生要通读全文，把握大意，还要逐读各句才能找出错误所在。

3.【2015·浙江】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.
Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side
of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.
【答案】
side-sides from-to sit-sitting easy-easily is-was them-it not 删除 in hurry- in a hurry felt-feel If-Although/Though
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇介绍教室的文章。

side-sides 考查名词的单复数。

根据前面的three，此处应
该使用复数形式 from-to考查介词搭配 make of与make from两者都常用在被动语态中,表示“某物由.构成的”. make of 的原材料是看的到的,即平常我们说的物理现象,比如The chair is made of wood.椅子是有木头做成的。

而make from的原材料是看不到的,比如Paper is made from the trees. 纸张是由木材做成的.是一种化学变化,从纸上是看不出一棵树滴.
sit-sitting考查动名词动词enjoy后接 ing形式。

easy-easily考查副词此处的副词修饰动词see is-was考查动词
的谓语时态根据前后句的谓语时态都是使用过去的，所以这里面也需要用过去时态。