bec高级武大培训班—写作第一讲

Band 3: 基本完成试题规定的任务，对目标读者基本产生了预期的效果，给 读者的印象较好。 (Reasonable achievement of the task set; Satisfactory effect on the reader) 覆盖了重要的信息点，但有小的疏漏(All major content points included; some minor omissions)； 比较规范，尽管在进行一些大胆尝试时有一些并不妨碍作者与读者之间交 流的语言错误(Reasonable control, although a more ambitious attempt at the task may lead to a number of non-impeding errors)； 掌握了一定的词汇与语法结构(Adequate range of structure and vocabulary)； 文章的结构与连贯性令人满意(Organization and cohesion is satisfactory)； 语域与格式的使用尚可，尽管不完全成功(Register and format reasonable, although not entirely successful)。
Time limit: 70 minutes(30 points) 2 Genuine Writing Tasks: • Part One: Concise Writing Graph Writing: (120 -140 words), 10 points • Part Two: Extended Writing Business Letter, Business Report, or Business Proposal (200 – 250 words), 20 points
II.Writing Test Assessment
• An impression mark is awarded to each piece of writing. • The General Impression Mark Scheme used in conjunction with a Task-specific Mark Scheme, which focuses on criteria specific to each task including the content, organization, register, format and target reader indicated in the task. • Accepted performance at BEC higher is represented by a Band 3.
Band 2: 未能按要求完成试题规定的任务，给读者的印象不好。 (Inadequate attempt at the task set; Negative effect on the reader) 遗漏了一些主要的信息点或处理不当，可能有些不切题(Some major content points omitted or inadequately dealt with; possibly some irrelevance)； 文章中的错误妨碍交流，且错误多(Errors sometimes obscure communication and are likely to be numerous)； 语言结构和词汇量有限；语言针对这个级别来说太初级(Limited range of structure and vocabulary;language is too elementary for this level)； 内容组织条理不清(Content is not clearly organized)； 语域与格式不正确(Unsuccessful attempt at appropriate register and format)。
• three options: a report, a proposal or a piece of business correspondence. • the rubric provides an authentic reason for writing, and indicates for whom the piece of writing is being produced. It is more detailed and specific, with up to 120 words in length for each option. • For this task the candidate has to produce an extended piece of writing, presented either as a letter or as a report.
BEC Writing Higher
Lecture One
A General Introduction to BEC Writing Higher
I. Description II. Assessment III. Golden Rules IV. Language Guide
I.Description
. Why you are dissatisfied with both the product and the aftersales service . A reminder of business done with them in the past . What you expect in response to your complaint
Scoring Criteria
Band 5: 很好地完成试题规定的任务，对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果，给 读者的印象颇佳。 (Full realization of the task set; Very positive effect on the reader) 内容覆盖了所有要求的信息点(All content points included)； 语言自然流畅，错误极少(Controlled, natural use of language;minimal errors)； 语法结构和词汇表达丰富多变(Wide range of structure and vocabulary)； 文章结构完整连贯，层次清晰(Effectively organized, with appropriate use of cohesive devices)； 语域与格式使用正确(Register and format consistently appropriate)。
Part One Description
• produces a brief(120-140 words) report, translating information shown graphically into written form. • provides a realistic situation in which it is necessary to analyze some graphic input and express the information it conveys in words as a report. • The rubric acts to amplify and clarify the situation, making clear what the task involves. It is about 50-60 words long.
Band 4: 较好地完成试题规定的任务，对目标读者产生了预期的效果， 给读者的印象良好。(Good realization of the task set;Positive effect on the reader) 信息点完整，覆盖了所有要求的信息点，可能有少的遗漏(All major content points included;possibly minor omissions)； 语言自然，在使用复杂语言时才出现一些错误(Natural use of language;errors only when complex language is attempted)； 语法结构和词汇表达较为丰富(Good range of structure and vocabulary)； 文章结构较为完整，连贯性好(Generally well organized, with attention paid to cohesion)； 语域与格式使用基本正确(Register and format on the whole appropriate)。
Test paper(writing part1)
QuestioBiblioteka 1• The three charts show a company’s operating profit(in $ million), turnover(in $ million) and unit sales(i.e.number of products sold) in the three years 2001-2003. • Using the information from the charts, write a short report describing the company’s performance in the three years. • Write 120-140 words in the space provided on page 3.
Part Two description
Test paper(writing part 2)
Part two: write an answer to one of the questions 2-4 in this part. Write your answer in 200-500 words on page 5 and 6. Question 2: • You work for a supermarket chain and have been asked by the board of directors to write a report on a site where the company is considering building a new supermarket. • Write your report for the board, including the following information:
Question 2: • A company you already do business with has recently created a new product line. Your department placed an order for the new product but found that the product did not fulfil your requirements and that the after-sales service was poor. Your head of department has asked you to write a letter to the company informing them of your dissatisfaction. • Write your letter, including the following information: . What the order was for and when it was placed
. a description of the site, including its location . the advantage and disadvantages of the site . your opinion as to whether the site is suitable
Test paper(writing part2)