四级作文评分标准及样卷1满分15分2分5等2分条理不清思路

四级作文评分标准及样卷 1．满分15分 2．分5等 2
分：条理不清，思路
四级作文评分标准及样卷
1(满分15分.
2(分5等
2分:条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或绝大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分:基本切题。

思想表达不清楚，连贯性差。

有较多的严重的语言错误。

8分:基本切题。

思想表达比较清楚，文字尚连贯;但语言错误较多，其中有一些是严重
错误。

11分:切题。

思想表达清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分:切题。

思想表达清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误或仅有个别小错。

注:如题目中给出主题句、起始句和结束句，均不得计入所写字数。

样卷分析:
Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?
1. 名校校园正成为旅游新热点
2. 校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同
3. 我认为。

1(
Currently, campuses of many famous universities are becoming one of the popular tourist attractions. It is reported that more and more
people enjoy their holidays by visiting famous universities, such as Tsinghua University and Peking University.
This phenomenon has exerted heated debates concerning whether university campus should be open to tourists. They indicate that people’s opinions vary in a big way. Some people
believe that it is a good thing to open university campuses to tourists while others argue that it is not.
Personally speaking, I’m in favor of campus tourism. For one thing, tourists may derive lots of enjoyment from the beautiful scenes of famous universities. For another, the strong academic atmosphere may motivate tourists, particularly students, to work hard persevere with their dreams. Moreover, for famous universities, being open to tourists may serve as an effective approach to attract talents from all over the country. In short, campus tourism will not only benefit tourists but also develop the universities.
2.
At present, a large number of people choose to visit famous universities, such as Tsinghua University and Peking University. As a result, famous universities campuses have become one of the tourist destinations.
But should the university campus be open to tourists? As to this question, people have different opinions. Some people think that university campuses should be open to tourists since tourists can learn
a lot of knowledge from them. Others think that they should not be open because universities are places for studying instead of touring.
I’m one of the members who object to opening university campuses to tourists. First, if university campuses are open to tourists, the environment of the universities will possibly become dirty. Besides, many bad people will enter into the campuses and that will bring danger.
3.
Famous universities campuses are now becoming the touring places.
Lots of people visit famous universities in their holidays. So should
the university campus be open to tourists?
Different people have different ideas. For example, some people
think university campus should be open to tourists. Others think they should not be.
How do I think of this question? I think university campus should be open to tourists. Universities are not only the places for their own students and teachers. They are public sources, too. So people should have the right to visit them. Many university campuses are beautiful. Tourists will enjoy them. Return back from the universities, students work hard to go into the universities. So I think universities should be open to tourists.
4.
Now people like visit famous universities. So famous university campuses becomes the
tourists’ hot places.
Should the university campus be open to tourists? Person does not have same ideas. Some
people think the university campus should be open to tourists. Some people think they should not be open to.
I think the university campus should not open to tourists. Because tourists will make the environment of campus bad. They harm students studying. Some have bad purpose, they do bad
things. Though some tourists can learn something from the university campus, but I don’t think
that is the point. So I think it is not good to be open to tourists.
真题作文分类解析
一、原因分析型
第一段:描述现象;
第二段:解释这种现象产生或存在的原因;
第三段:提出解决问题的建议或总结观点。

模板一
Nowadays/Recently, __________. As a result/Thus, __________.
There are various reasons accounting/responsible for __________. For one thing, __________. For another, __________. In addition to,
__________.
As far as I am concerned, __________. On the one hand, __________. On the other hand, __________. In a word. __________.
模板二
As is known to all/everybody knows, __________. People seem to get accustomed to __________. In fact/As a matter of fact, __________.
The reason of __________ lies in several aspects. Firstly,
__________. Secondly, __________. Thirdly, __________.
As to me/In my opinion, __________. First of all, __________. Besides, __________. Therefore, __________.
真题范文2010.6
Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling
1. 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写
2. 出现这种现象的原因是。

3. 为了改变这种现状，我认为。

Nowadays, an increasing number of students seem to attach less importance to spelling in English learning. Thus, numerous misspelling appear in their papers, and what’s worse, a
well-organize essay is therefore totally impossible.
There are various reasons responsible for this embarrassing situation. For one thing, much
more students give priorities to oral English at the cost of doing less spelling exercises, let alone
, many teachers put so much emphasis on reflect on what they learned the other day. For another
communication and grammar in teaching that they seldom highlight spelling, and occasionally worse still, they themselves are caught in spelling.
To change this situation, I hold to the belief that students and teachers should work together.
On the one hand, students should stop complaining about spellings, and they should realize correct spelling is a must in learning English. On the other hand, teachers should pay more
attention to spelling in teaching, for example, focusing on pronunciation and word formation. Only via joint effort can students gain much ground in spelling.
二、对比选择型
第一段:提出要讨论的主题，说明人们对此看法不一;
第二段:分别论述人们对此事物或现象的看法及原因;
第三段:表明自己的观点并给出理由。

模板一
Nowadays, there is a hot debate on __________. As for such question, different people hold different views.
Some people believe that __________ mainly because __________. While others argue that __________. For instance, __________.
As for me, I am in favor of __________. For one thing, __________. For another, __________.
模板二
In recent years, when it comes to __________. People’s opinions vary from person to
person.
Some people believe /think __________ mostly because __________. However, other people argue that __________. First of all, __________. Second, __________. In addition, __________.
As far as I am concerned, I give my support to __________. On the one hand, __________. On the other hand, __________.
2008.6
Recreational Activities
1( 娱乐活动多种多样
2( 娱乐活动可以使人们受益，也可能带来危害
3( 作为大学生，我认为。

Abundant recreational activities are available for people to release their strain and stress, ranging from sports to online activities. There is a hot debate arguing whether they are good for
the public or not, especially for college students.
As for such a question, different people hold different views. Some believe that recreation is
helpful if we want to keep healthy physically and mentally. While there also sounds an opposite voice, which claims activities bring many problems meanwhile. For example, some young people are easily addicted to the virtual world online, which affects their study badly and may lead to worse consequences as well.
As for me, I hold a belief that recreational activities do more good than harm. They do give us a good chance to relax and build good personal relationships with others, too. As long as we can
arrange our time reasonably, they will definitely provide more benefits for us.
三、观点论证型
第一段:引出话题，表明观点;
第二段:给出论据，解释观点;
第三段:提出建议或重申观点。

模板一
During recent years, __________ has aroused widely/considerably public attention. Undoubtedly, /There is no doubt that __________ As we all know, __________ plays an important role in __________. For one thing, __________. For another, __________. Meanwhile,
__________.
Considering the above situation, measures should be taken to
__________. First of all/In the first place, __________. Furthermore, __________. Only in this way can we __________.
模板二
Nowadays, still many people think that __________ mainly because __________. However, I believe that __________. The following reasons can support the argument.
In the first place, __________. What’s more/Moreover, __________. For example,
__________. In addition/Besides, __________.
All mentioned above tell us that __________. Therefore, we should __________.
真题范文2009.12
Creating a Green Campus
1( 建设绿色校园十分重要
2( 绿色校园不仅是指绿色的环境。

3( 为了建设绿色校园，我们应该。

During recent years, the topic of a green campus, which has aroused widely public attention, is becoming more and more popular. Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for
the development of college students, has a profound impact on both individuals and society, for its significance cannot be neglected.
A green environment, rather than anything else, plays a decisive
role in the growth of college students. Meanwhile, it should also be mentioned that a green campus includes not only the
places where the students live, but also the mental environment. Without green surrounding, the soul of students would be not as pure as we wish. In that case, in no place other than campus
should we attempt to make a green atmosphere.
Due to the seriousness of the situation, it is crucial for us to
take effective measure to create a green campus. In the first place,
it’s essential that law and regulations sh ould be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities. Furthermore, it is high time that we enhanced
the awareness of the students themselves. Only in this way can we
get satisfactory results. With
these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that a
green campus will be achieved in the near future.
四、说明利弊型
第一段:说明某现象或实物带来的好处/弊端;
第二段:说明该现象或事物可能会带来的问题/利益;
第三段:阐述自己的看法或建议。

模板一
Nowadays/Recently, __________. By doing so, it/they can help
__________ and __________.
However, some people believe/view that __________. For one thing,
__________. For another, __________. In addition, __________.
As for me/As far as I am concerned, __________. The reason lies in
the fact that __________. Moreover/ What’s more, __________. I
hope/expect to see __________.
模板二
In recent years, __________ has/have become rather common. It has brought great benefits/harm to __________. Firstly, __________. Secondly, __________. Furthermore, __________.
But every coin has two sides. The disadvantages/advantages cannot be ignored. For one thing, __________. For another, __________.
Through above analysis, I believe that the advantages/positive
aspects outweigh the disadvantages/negative aspects. Therefore, we
should __________.
真题范文2009.6
Free Admissions to Museums?
1( 越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放，目的是。

2( 有人认为这样做会带来一些问题
3( 在我看来。

Recently, more and more museums are open to the public free of charge. By doing so, they
can attract more visitors, and offer the visitors more opportunities to explore and get easy access to the world of history, culture and knowledge.
However, some people view that the practice also brings problems and concerns. They are right in a sense. For one thing, their main concern
is that with more visitors, it is possible that objects exhibited can get damaged more easily. For another, it becomes a huge economic burden for museums to run as usual without any profits from the visitors.
As for me, I am absolutely in favor of this practice. The reason
lies in the belief that the government should provide more opportunities for citizens to explore and get access to the knowledge world. Moreover, kids and teenagers can acquire knowledge in a more vivid way in the museums. I hope all the people can share the same national treasures in more free museums.
五、问题解决型
第一段:描述现象，提出问题;
第二段:分析问题可能产生的后果;
第三段:提出解决问题的方法或建议。

模板一
It is beyond reproach(无可非议) that __________. However, it may go too far to
__________.
It is not unusual to witness that __________. Consequently,
__________. What’s worse,
__________. Therefore, it is high time that we took action to
__________.
In my opinion, on the one hand, __________. On the other hand,
__________. In addition, __________. Only through these ways can we
__________.
模板二
Nowadays/In recent years, __________ becomes more and more of a problem in __________. What’s worse, __________.
As everyone knows, __________ is/are bringing damage/harm to
__________. Moreover, __________. Therefore, effective measures should be taken to __________.
I think several measures as follows should be taken immediately. Firstly, __________. Secondly, __________. In addition/Besides,
__________. All in all, __________.
真题范文2010.12
How should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
1( 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2( 为了让孩子独立，父母应该。

It is beyond reproach that children are always considered the apple of parents’ eyes, which is
especially true in single-child families. However, many parents go
so far as to take over
everything for their prince or princess, from their life and study even to their future.
It is not unusually to witness that an increasing number of children are accompanied by parents on their first day in college. I declare in no uncertain terms that it will end up with the
children’s lack of independence. In such a world full of fierce competition, being independent becomes essential for a would-be success. Thus, what should parents do?
In my humble opinion, on the one hand, parents should raise children in a free-ranging way instead of being “helicopter” parents, w ho always seem to hover over their children; on the other hand, parents should teach children to be responsible for their own behaviors instead of monopolizing everything. I cling to the belief that only when parents realize what is best for their
children and care them in a right way, can they help children develop independence.。