新教材2023_2024学年高中英语Unit3写作指导课件牛津译林版选择性必修第一册

【妙笔成篇】
When walking in the local park or on campus,we often find colourful fallen leaves.Have you ever thought about collecting them and making them into a piece of artwork? Depending on the colours,shapes and sizes of the leaves you find,you can create various pictures.We are going to make a unique picture showing beautiful goldfish swimming in a pond with colourful water plants in it!
fins and tails of the fish .
⑦如果叶子的形状不对,就用剪刀剪。 用剩下的叶子做水草。
If the leaves are not the right shape, cut them with scissors
.Use the
rest of the leaves as water plants. ⑧把你的叶子排列在一张纸上,创造金鱼在五颜六色的水生植物中游泳的 形象。把叶子粘在纸上。
Arrange your leaves on a piece of paper to create the image of goldfish
swimming among the colourful water plants .Glue the leaves to the paper.
(2)句式升级 ⑨用状语从句的省略改写句① When walking in the local park or on campus,we often find colourful fallen leaves. ⑩用分词短语作定语改写句④ We are going to make a unique picture showing beautiful goldfish swimming in a pond with colourful water plants in it!
some of the other red leaves to make the eyes of the goldfish
.
⑥找到合适的叶子,最好是黄色的,来制作鱼的身体、鳍和尾巴。
Find appropriate leaves,preferably yellow in colour,___to__m_a_k_e__th_e_b_o_d_i_e_s_, ___
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】 假如你是李华,请你用英语写一篇“如何用树叶做一幅小金鱼画”的小短文, 步骤如下: 首先收集各种形状和大小的红、黄、绿树叶。选择小红叶做金鱼的嘴唇, 然后从其他红叶上剪下小圈做金鱼的眼睛。用黄叶制作鱼的身体、鳍和 尾巴。用剪刀剪需要的形状,用剩下的叶子做水草。把叶子排列在一张纸 上,创造金鱼在五彩的水中植物中游泳的形象。把叶子粘在纸上。 注意:词数80左右。
How to make a unique picture with leaves Materials and tools: ◆Leaves of different colours,shapes and sizes ◆Scissors ◆Glue ◆A piece of A4-size paper Procedures: Step 1:Collect red,yellow and green leaves of various shapes and sizes. Step 2:Select small red leaves to be the lips of the fish and then cut small circles from some of the other red leaves to make the eyes of the goldfish.
感知文体常识
如何制作一件艺术作品 写如何制作一件艺术作品属于说明文,语言要简练明确。首先要清晰地说 明你需要的材料,然后列出制作步骤。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇 1.tool n.工具 2.material n.材料,素材 3.arrange v.安排;整理;布置 4.procedure n.步骤;程序 5.a piece of一片,一块;一张 6.firstly/to begin with/to start with首先 7.the next step下一步 8.finally/lastly/in the end最后,终于
swimming in a pond with colourful water plants in it !
⑤选择小红叶做金鱼的嘴唇,然后从其他红叶上剪下小圈做金鱼的眼睛。
Select small red leaves to be the lips of the fish and then cut small circles from
(二)精彩句型 1.Have you ever tried to make art out of wood? 你试过用木头做艺术品吗? 2.Follow the steps below to make it. 按照下面的步骤来做。 3.There are endless possibilities for the works you create. 你创作的作品有无限的可能性。 4.Cut them into pieces. 把它们切成小块。 5.Decide what image you want to create. 决定你想要创造什么样的形像。 6.Display your work on the wall.把你的作品挂在墙上。
Step 3:Find appropriate leaves,preferably yellow in colour,to make the bodies, fins and tails of the fish.If the leaves are not the right shape,cut them with e the rest of the leaves as water plants. Step 4:Arrange your leaves on a piece of paper to create the image of goldfish swimming among the colourful water plants. Step 5:Glue the leaves to the paper. Once everything is dry,show your unique masterpiece to your classmates!
or on campus . ②你有没有想过把它们收集起来做成一件艺术品? Have you ever thought about ___c_o_l_le_c_t_in_g__th_e_m__a_n_d__m_a_k_in_g__t_h_em__i_n_t_o_a_____
piece of artwork ? ③根据你找到的树叶的颜色、形状和大小,你可以创建各种各样的图片。
Depending on the colours ,shapes and sizes of the leaves you find , you can create various pictures.
④我们要作一张独特的图片,展示美丽的金鱼在池塘里游泳,里面有五颜六
色的水草!
We are going to make a unique picture _t_o_s_h_o_w__b_e_a_u_ti_f_u_l _g_o_ld_f_i_sh__w_h_i_c_h_i_s__
针对训练 假如你是李华,请你用英语写一篇“如何做水果沙拉”的小短文,步骤如下: 首先把三根香蕉、三个苹果和三个梨切成块,接着把水果放到一个碗中,然 后在碗中放入两勺沙拉,最后,把所有的东西搅拌一下,一盘美味的水果沙 拉就做好了。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.题目已为你写好。
How to Make Fruit Salad _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________
(4) glue
n.胶水 v.粘贴
(5) various
adj.各种各样的
(6) select
v.选择
(7) app arrange
v.安排;布置
(9) masterpiece n.杰作
2.句式 (1)要点翻译 ①当我们在当地的公园或校园里散步时,我们经常会看到五颜六色的落叶。 We often find colourful fallen leaves ___w__h_e_n_w__e_w__al_k_i_n__th_e_l_o_c_a_l_p_a_rk______
How to Make Fruit Salad Fruit salad is many people’s favourite because it is not only easy to make but tastes delicious. Things you need: ◆Three bananas,three apples and three pears ◆Salad ◆A bowl ◆A knife ◆A plate
【审题谋篇】
体裁 人称 时态 话题
框架
说明文 第二人称 一般现在时 如何制作一件艺术作品 第一段 说明要制作的作品 第二段 需要的材料和步骤 第三段 如何处理制作好的作品
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1)a piece of artwork 一件艺术品
(2) pond
n.池塘
(3) scissors
n.剪刀
Procedures: Step 1:Wash the fruit and cut them into pieces. Step 2:Put all the pieces of fruit into a bowl and add two spoons of salad to them. Step 3:Mix the fruit and salad in the bowl. Step 4:Pour the fruit salad in a plate. Now you can eat it.But before you do,make sure you take a photo of it.That way,you will enjoy your work later.