【英语备考】译林版中考英语书面表达热门话题经典
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一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1.(·江苏中考模拟)书面表达
无锡被评为内地最宜居城市。
假设你班对此进行了一次班级讨论,请你根据讨论主题并结合所给信息,以“Be a Beautiful City”为题写一份发言稿,号召广大学生为建设美好城市作贡献。
内容提示如下:
1.政府修建了很多新路、大桥,甚至还有地铁;
2.新添了很多露天开放公园,每到周末和节假日,人们常常去那里野餐,游玩;
3.私家车越来越多,停车已成了大问题;
4.城市变化有利有弊;
5.你的希望:……
注意事项:
1.发言稿须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2.第5个要点须用2至3句话展开合理想象。
作适当发挥;
3.词数90左右,发言稿的开头已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
4.发言稿内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Be a Beautiful City
There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Be a Beautiful City
There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years.The government has built lots of new roads, bridges and even undergrounds.There have been a number of open parks.People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays.More and more people have their own cars and it's becoming difficult to park cars.The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages.I hope the government can deal with the problem.Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future.
【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。
文中使用了大量短语,例如in the past few years,lots of,a number of,open parks,have a picnic,have fun,on weekends and holidays,more and more,both …and,deal with the problem,in the future等。
而More and more people have their own cars and it's becoming difficult to park cars./ Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future.等多种more and more句式结构的运用,使本文内容丰富,表达流畅,是短文的亮点。
点睛:这是一篇材料作文,根据提示内容可知用现在完成时和一般现在时,可把提示内容结合实际展开合理的想象,把它们拓展成一个个英文句子。
还要注意在行文中使用一些常见的短语,会给习作增色。
2.(·安徽中考模拟)书面表达
假如你是李华,你们学校打算举办一场以“感恩老师”为主题的活动。
请根据以下要点,给你的美国笔友Mike 写一封邮件,介绍这次的活动。
时间:5月30号
活动内容: 1. 给老师献花致敬;
2. 把写满感谢祝福话语的卡片贴在墙上;
3. 为老师表演节目(put on performances)
你的感触:……
注意: 1. 词数80-100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________
What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers on May 30. On the day we will give our teachers some flowers to show our thanks and respect. We thank them for helping us when we are in trouble.We will put up the thank-notes on the wall.After that we put on performances for our teachers.
What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文,介绍以“感恩老师”为主题的活动。
结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:Our school will hold……,On the day we will……,We thank them for……,I am……等句式的应用。
写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。
写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。
开头介绍了我们学校举行了一个感恩老师的活动,接下来介绍我们的活动内容,最后表达我的感触。
此处give sth to sb, thank sb for doing sth, be in trouble, put up, put on, look forward to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
3.(·全国中考模拟)三年的初中生活接近尾声,回首过去你充满依恋,展望未来你豪情满怀。
请以The happy life为题写一篇90词左右的短文。
要点如下:
1. 校园生活丰富多彩,在宽敞明亮的教室里学习,老师和同学们都很友好,相处融洽,同学们互相帮助,互相学习,虽然作业多,但一起学习很快乐。
课余还经常一起打球唱歌。
2. 希望将来从事一份喜欢的工作,和父母分享成功,也为社会(society)多做有意义的事情。
3. 现在必须努力学习,使梦想成真。
【答案】The happy life
My school life is rich and colourful. We have a lot of fun studying in the classroom with our lovely classmates. All my teachers and classmates are friendly and helpful. We get on well with each other. We often help each other and learn from each other. Though sometimes there is too much homework, with their help, we always finish it happily. During our free time, We play ball games and sing songs together.
I wish to have a job I like and I will share my success with my parents. I also hope that I can do a lot of meaningful work for the society in the future.
At present, I must study hard to make my dream come true.
【解析】英语作文写出的句子要达意,完整,语法正确,合乎习惯,特别是句式,谓语动词形式要有根有据,选用比较有把握的词汇,用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。
英语作文要注意人称和时态,注意提供的观点、材料,要注意句子的完整性,谓语动词的正确形式,句子之间的衔接和过渡。
英语作文,要忠实于材料,不必扩展,注意用好连词,多用非谓语,慎用较难的句型,一定不能写错句。
get on well with相处融洽;help each other and learn from each other互相帮助,互相学习;with one’s help在某人的帮助下;in the future. 在未来;come true.(梦想)成真
4.(·全国中考模拟)书面表达
越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活,改善了我们的生活,但同时也带来了很多问题,如塞车和车祸,给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。
作为中学生,我们应该怎样做呢?
请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(100字左右)
内容提示:
1、遵守交通规则,如走人行道/过斑马线。
2、别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。
3、劝父母不能酒后驾车。
你可以适当增加内容,让短文通顺,过渡自然。
参考词汇:sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and
traffic accidents。
Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra –crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc。
We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks。
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文,写一篇有关交通安全的短文, 介绍作为中学生我们应该怎么做,结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:we are happy that……,it has also brought…….,Traffic safety is……,we must……,we can……,等句式的应用。
写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。
写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。
开头介绍了现在有很多交通问题,接下来介绍我们应遵守的交通规则,最后指出人人认为交通安全是自己的事,我们才能在路上安全行驶。
此处come into, such as, for example, tell sb not to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
5.(·江苏省运河中学中考模拟)书面表达。
根据下列图画,写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示词:bucket n. 水桶,tap n. 水龙头
_______________________________________________________________________________ ____
【答案】A little boy saw an old woman carrying a bucket to fetch water. He rushed forward to help Grandma fetch water, but he was so short that he could not reach the tap. At this time, a big sister saw that he helped him turn on the water pipe and fill the water. The little boy took the water to Grandma. Grandma was very grateful to the little boy. We should also learn from that little boy.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇看图作文,考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。
注意文章文体、人称和时态。
要求介绍。
同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。
温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【点睛】
这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语,可见该生英语功底扎实。
如At this time, a big sister saw
that he helped him turn on the water pipe and fill the water给文章增色不少。
6.(·西安市铁一中学中考模拟)假如你是李华,上周末你和几个同学一起去了青龙寺(Qing Long Temple)游玩,请根据以下提示内容,写一篇游记,介绍一下你愉快的周末。
内容: 1 天气:晴朗;2 交通:公交车; 3时间:早上9点到达,下午4点离开;4,活动:赏花,放风筝,野餐.......5 感想。
要求:1 参考提示内容,可适当发挥2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息4. 字数:不少于70字
【答案】Last weekend I went to Qing Long Temple with some classmates. It was sunny on Sunday. We went there by bus at 7:00 a.m. On the bus we talked and laughed, we were so happy. At 9 a.m. we arrived there. We enjoyed flowers, took many pictures and flew kites in the morning. At noon we had picnic at the foot of the hill. In the afternoon we climbed the mountain. At 4:00 p.m. we left Qing Long Temple and at 6:00 p.m. got home. We were so happy, though we were tired.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文,话题是假如你是李华,上周末你和几个同学一起去了青龙寺(Qing Long Temple)游玩,请根据以下提示内容,写一篇游记,介绍一下你愉快的周末。
时态主要是一般过去时,注意表达的顺序。
认为阅读材料,认真审题,确定主题,认真阅读所给提示,所给提示就是本文的提纲要点,根据要点适当发挥,列出提纲。
短文必须包含提示内容,条理清楚,注意使用表达顺序词。
要运用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有连贯性。
写完以后,注意再读一遍,看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误(时态、主谓一致等)。
本文提纲:
上周末我和几个同学去了青龙寺。
星期天天气晴朗。
我们早上7点乘公共汽车去了那里。
在公共汽车上我们谈笑风生,我们很高兴。
上午9点我们到了那里。
上午我们赏花,拍照,放风筝。
中午我们在山脚下野餐。
下午我们去爬山。
下午4点,我们离开青龙寺,下午6点回到家。
虽然我们很累,但我们还是很高兴。
【点睛】
书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。
考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
要学以致用。
像We were so happy, though we were tired.(1)学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
(2)列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。
(3)切忌堆砌词语、句子,注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。
注意表达的顺序。
(4)注意书写的规范:大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。
(5)注意检查:单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
7.(·山东中考模拟)假如你是学生会主席,你校学生会打算以“保护环境”为主题搞一次社会实践。
请你根据下列提示用英语写一封倡议书。
要点如下:1.少开汽,多走路。
2.停止向河内排放废水。
3.少用餐巾纸,塑料袋。
4.节约水电,多植树。
要求:1词数:80--100;2.请结合实际增加细节,适当发挥。
3.倡议书的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
【答案】Dear classmates,
As we all know,the earth is in trouble because of the way we are polluting it.Each one of us must do something to help save our plante.Firstly,transportation is the main factor of air pollution.So we should walk more instead of driving.Secondly,industrial pollution is serious.Waste water from factories is poured into rivers and lakes and this causes water pollution.Thirdly,we should stop using plastic bags when we go shopping.Finally,remember to turn off the lights and taps whenever we’re not using them and we should plant more trees to protect our earth.
The Students’ Union
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇要求假如你是学生会主席,你校学生会打算以“保护环境”为主题搞一次社会实践。
请你根据下列提示用英语写一封倡议书。
动笔前先要认真阅读要点,围绕要点组织材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。
根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。
注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
8.(·山东中考模拟)如今,很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车(bike-sharing),它因环保、便捷而备受青睐,但同时也引发了一些问题。
请你根据提示以"Bike-sharing"为题写一篇英语短文,表达自己的看法和建议。
要点提示:
注意:
1. 短文应包括以上要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名;
3. 词数:80-100(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Bike-sharing
Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It's known that it has many advantages. So it's enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, it's helpful to people's health.(优势)However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.(难题)
In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】(建议)
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文内容丰富,表达了所有要点,语言表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。
在短文中使用了大量的复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语,为文章增色不少,.如: It's known that it has many advantages.,First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.,Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。
【点睛】
本文要求以“Bike-sharing”为题,根据表格的内容提示,写一篇短文,表达自己对共享单车的看法和建议。
写作时,考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点:首先,阐述共享单车的优点;其次,列举共享单车带来的问题;最后,根据问题给出个人建议。
9.(·广东中考模拟)学校将举行“给学弟学妹的一封信”的英语征文活动。
你打算投稿,请根据以下内容提示写一篇短文。
要求包含以下内容并适当发挥。
1.形成良好的学习习惯:听讲、复习;
2.保持健康的生活方式:饮食、起居;
3.处理好跟他人的关系:友善、分享;
4.其他建议......(至少2条建议)
注意:
(1)词数80个左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入词数)
(2)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分
Dear fellow schoolmates,
Now we will leave our school and enter a senior middle school. I have some personal suggestions to share with you. …
【答案】First, I suggest you form a good habit of studying. Listen to teachers carefully in class and hand in your homework in time .Whenever you have difficulty, please ask your classmates or teachers for help.
More importantly, good health is important for success in the exams. You need to get up early and go to bed early to get enough sleep. Besides, you’d bette r have a balanced diet and avoid eating junk food.
As we all know, a good relationship can make us happy and comfortable. Be friendly to others and help those who are in trouble. We should share sorrow and happiness with others.
Last but not the least , it is necessary for us to relax. You can do some sports such as walking or playing balls. Listening to music and seeing movies are also good ways to relax.
Hopefully you can enjoy your school life and have a bright future.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇书信作文,也是提纲类作文。
学校将举行“给学弟学妹的一封信”的英语征文活动。
你打算投稿,请根据以下内容提示写一篇短文。
结合所给材料可知本文时态是一般现在时。
使用的句型主要有祈使句和建议性句型(You should,we should, you can,you’d better 等)。
认真阅读提示,审清主题,根据提示要点,列出本文的写作提纲,要包含所给的所有内容并适当发挥。
写作中可适当使用连词,注意表达顺序,表达要有条理性,语句通顺,意思连贯,要符合逻辑关系,字数要在80词以上,不要写的太少。
写完以后,注意再读一遍,看看有无拼写、语法错误(时态、主谓一致等)。
本文提纲:首先,我建议你养成良好的学习习惯。
上课认真听讲,及时交作业,遇到困难请向同学或老师寻求帮助。
更重要的是,良好的健康是考试成功的重要因素。
你需要早起早睡以获得充足的睡眠。
此外,你最好均衡饮食,避免吃垃圾食品。
众所周知,良好的人际关系可以使我们快乐和舒适。
善待他人,帮助有困难的人。
我们应该和别人分享悲伤和快乐。
最后但并非最不重要的是,我们有必要放松。
你可以做一些运动,如散步或玩球。
听音乐和看电影也是放松的好方法。
希望你能享受你的学校生活,有一个光明的未来。
【点睛】
本书面表达是给学弟学妹的一封信,给他们提出学习建议。
这篇文章语言规范,叙事清楚,时态运用正确,叙述清楚条里,语句通顺,意思连贯,特别适用了表示先后顺序的词(First, More importantly, As we all know, Last but not the least ,)使文章更具条理性,思维缜密。
(1)学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
(2)列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。
(3)切忌堆砌词语、句子,注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。
注意表达的顺序。
(4)注意书写的规范:大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。
(5)注意检查:单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
10.(·北京初三)题目1:
假如你是李华,你们班打算去“希望之家(Hope House)”孤儿院做志愿服务,你打算邀请你们学校的留学生Peter参加这次活动。
请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,告诉他集合的时间和地点,你们将在孤儿院做什么,以及他可以做什么准备。
提示词语:gate,play,tell stories,gift
提示问题:
.When and where will you meet?
.What will you do there?
.What do you advise Peter to prepare for the activity
【答案】例文How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity at the Hope House. We will meet at the school gate at eight this Sunday morning. We will play games with the children and tell them some interesting stories.
We will also give them some gifts. Would you like to tell the children something about your hometown? You can prepare some photos and videos to show.
I am sure we will have an unforgettable time at the Hope House.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇邀请信,注意邀请信的格式,开头问候,中间部分说正事,最后询问他的回答。
本材料给的提示比较多,学生可以按照提示,进行问题的回答即可。
注意把相关内容用连接词连接起来,使文章通顺。
【详解】
文章为邀请信,开头问候,点明写信内容,写信是为了邀请你和我们一起参加希望之家的
志愿活动。
我们将会在周日8点在校门口集合,主要活动有和孩子们玩耍,讲故事,赠送礼物等。
同时,建议对方做一些事情,可以向孩子们展示一下你的家乡。
希望你能和我们一起参加。
【点睛】
本书面表达:这篇文章语言规范,叙事清楚,时态运用正确,叙述清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,文章具有条理性,思维缜密。
(1)学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
(2)列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。
(3)切忌堆砌词语、句子,注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。
注意表达的顺序。
(4)注意书写的规范:大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。
(5)注意检查:单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
11.(·宁夏中考模拟)书面表达
难忘的初中生活即将结束。
你们班计划举行“告别初中生活”的主题班会。
假如你是班长,根据以下提示,用英语写一则通知。
要点如下:
1. 时间:6月26日下午3:00.
2. 地点:六楼会议室
3. 活动内容:
1)对老师用话语表达谢意;2)与同学交流自己的将来的梦想;3)师生合影,互赠留言等等。
参考词汇:look back at , say goodbye to, express thanks to , talk about, take photos..
备注:词数100左右,通知开头已拟好,不计入总数。
Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end._______________________
【答案】Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.
We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we may give our wishes to each other.
Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如In order to,look back at,be going to,have a class meeting,say goodbye to,talk about,the dreams of,take some photos,in the end,each other,be late等。
而复杂单句结构In order to keep the happy
times in our hearts forever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week./ To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers.和Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates.的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。
在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。
它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。
所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
12.(·阜宁县新世纪实验中学中考模拟)书面表达
初中的生活美好而短暂。
临近中考,压力骤增,父母的唠叨,老师的殷殷期望,自己的学业与梦想……倾诉是一副良方。
请给七月的你写一封信,谈谈你身边存在的问题,你打算如何解决,鼓励自己生活还有诗和远方。
请根据以下提示写一封给自己的信。
要求:1.表达清楚,语法正确,语句通顺,上下文连贯;
2.必须包括思维导图中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;
3.词数:100词左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
Dear Future Me,
It is pleasant to spare my free time to communicate with you.I am so worried that …
Your sincerely
【答案】It is pleasant to spare my free time to communicate with you.I am so worried that I can’t deal with all the problems present, which are mainly caused by two aspects.First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation .With the price of houses rising, they always work hard. However, they are more worried about their children’s exam as the final exam is approaching. Second, there is endless homework and tests every day. Therefore, I need change myself.
In order to adapt to the situation better, I should develop good life habits to keep healthy. Then making friends and communicating with them can make me happier. What’s more, there exist dreams and beautiful future waiting for us. I should not be pessimistic (悲观的). So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily. I believe I deserve having success.
【解析】
【详解】
本文写给未来的自己,目的在于倾诉压力,寻求方法,并重拾信心。
第一段指出导致压力的两个方面First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation . Second, there is endless homework and tests every day.用First, Second点出。
第二自然段提到释放压力的方法,应用In order to表目的。
用What’s more表递进结构。
并用祈使句So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily点题呼吁。
整篇文章层次分明,结构紧凑。
13.(·江苏中考模拟)假如你是李明,将参加今年暑期的澳大利亚悉尼新南威尔士语言学校的游学活动(study tour), 该项目的负责人Mike给你发来了封电子邮件征询你对此次游学活动的想法和建议。
请阅读以下信息,并回复一封电子邮件。
注意事项:
1. 文章所写内容必须包括邮件中的问题所涉及的所有信息。
2. 文章要求语意通顺,条理清楚,书写规范,不能出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
3. 文章词数在100词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m glad to receive your email and I have read it carefully. I have decided to live in
_______________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____
I’m really looking forward to this study tour!
Many thanks,
Li Ming
【答案】例文:Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m glad to receive your email and I have read it carefully. I have decided to live i n the Green family. The old couple have no children but two dogs, so they will have more time to communicate with me in English and I can play with their pets as well. Their flat is in the centre of Sydney, so it’s easy for me to go around. I can also use the Wi-fi to keep in touch with my parents. My family can afford the cost of 350 pounds.
I’m lucky to have a buddy during my stay at your school. I expect him/her to help me with my problems in my study. I can chat with him/her in English to improve my speaking skills.
I love history so I want to visit some places of interest at the weekend. I’m also curious about the local food and I want to have a taste.
I’m really looking forward to this study tour!
Many thanks,
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇应用作文,邮件内容要回答邮件中的三个问题,可分为三个段落进行回答。
好单词:
afford 负担得起
好短语:
communicate with 和……交流
as well 也
keep in touch with 与……保持联系
expect sb. to do sth. 期望某人做某事
help sb. with sth. 在某方面帮助某人
chat with 和……聊天
place of interest 名胜古迹
be curious about 对……感到好奇
have a taste 尝一尝
好句式:
Their flat is in the centre of Sydney, so it's easy for me to go around. 他们的公寓在悉尼市中心,所以对我来说,到处走走很容易。
(It is adj. for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说做某事是……,it是形式主语,不定式短语是真正的主语)。