高中英语作文公开课-高中 PPT 课件

❖ B. Given the chance, I will try my best .
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❖ Tip 4分词结构不能少 ❖ 口诀：一去，二看，三改。 ❖ 一去：去连词； ❖ 二看：看主语； ❖ 三改：改分词。 ❖ 1.童年的纸飞机 现在终于飞回我手里,带来甜蜜的回
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❖ Back flies the paper-airplane abnrdinitgbirninggs me
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❖ Group 3
❖ A. We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.
❖ B. At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days.
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❖ It _____me smile. ❖ Those _____ such happy times and not
so long ago. ❖ How I wondered where they ________. ❖ But they're back again just like a long
watching television.
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❖ Group 2
❖ A. This village built a school in 2008.
❖ B. Not until 2008 did this village begin to have its own school.
❖ Tip 2 陈述不如倒装妙 ❖ Eg. 我从来不买日货
the fragrant memory of my childhood.
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❖ Tips to beautify your sentence ❖ 1.高分词汇是首要 ❖ 2. 陈述不如倒装妙 ❖ 3. 主动不如被动巧 ❖ 4.分词结构不能少
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Task I Rewrite the sentences
and developed into a sport only in the late 19th
century.( 用分词结构) （08广东）
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❖ 1. In order to achieve this goal, no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places.
❖ Tip 3 主动不如被动巧 ❖ Eg.最近学校就“谁是你的偶像”进行了一
次调查。（07广东）
❖ Recently a survey has been done on “ Who is you idol?” in our school .
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❖ Group 4
❖ A. If I am given the chance , I will try my best .
❖ A.I will never buy any products made in Japan.
❖ B. Never will I buy any products made in Japan.
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❖ 天空中繁星点点 . ❖ In the sky hang little stars. ❖ 河岸上有很多花 . ❖ On the bank grow lots of flowers.
lost friend.
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❖ When I was young I_l_is_t_e_n_e_d_ (listen) to the radio waiting for my favorite songs. When they _p_la_y_e_d_(play) I'd sing along.
❖ It _m__ad__e_(make) me smile. Those _w_e_r_e_(be) such happy times and not so long ago. How I wondered where they _h_a_d__g_o_n_e___(go).
❖ 3.The survey shows that half of the girls choose
film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys choose sports stars. （06广东）
❖ 4．Shooting was originated as a means of survival
Beautify your sentences (闪亮你的句子）
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步骤
❖1.好句赏析 ❖2.技巧指导 ❖3.巩固提高
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Enjoy a song
❖ When I was young I________ to the radio waiting for my favorite songs. When they ______ I'd sing along.
avoid overuse of their eyes ❖ 2. 近视原因很复杂没有哪一种药物能治愈
近视。 （09广东） ❖ So complicated are the causes of short-
sightedness that no medicine can cure short-sightedness.
❖ But they're back again just like a long lost friend.
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❖ 思考： ❖ What is a beautiful sentence?

❖ Translation
❖ 郭靖是个爷们。他智商不太高。他娶了IQ很高 的黄蓉做媳妇。黄是桃花岛集团（THD Group） 总裁黄药师的女儿。
❖ 4. Shooting, originated as a means of survival ,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.
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❖ Task 2 Translation ❖ 1.他建议学生不要过度用眼（09广东） ❖ He suggested that school children
❖ Guo Jing is a man. He is not very clever. He married Huan Rong with a very high IQ. Huang is the daughter of Huangyaoshi,the president of TaoHuaDao Group . ❖Guo Jing, a not very intelligent man, married a girl named Huang Rong with an extremely high IQ, who is the daughter of Huangyaoshi,the president of THD Group.6
❖ Tip 1 高分词汇是首要
❖ 高分词汇原则
❖ 1.后、高、长（后学的、较高级、较长词汇）
❖ good
❖ very
❖ 2.词组优先
❖ try to do
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❖ 3.避免重复 ❖ A. I like reading while my brother likes
watching television. ❖ B. I like reading while my brother enjoys
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❖ 3. 1968年第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛 （08广东）
❖ Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968.
❖ 4. 约5. 4亿人受二手烟影响，死亡人数超过 10万／年 。（10广东）
❖ Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke, causing 100,000 deaths a year.
❖ 2. According to Professor Wang, slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted, ranking the first in the world.
❖ 3. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys prefer sports stars.
❖ Read the followings and make your wise choice!
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❖ Group 1
❖ A. We have much homework to do .
❖ B. We have endless homework to do .
❖ C We are burdened with endless homework.
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❖ 1. In order to reach this goal, we will put up nosmoking signs in all indoor public places.（用被动 结构）（10广东）
❖ 2. According to Professor Wang, slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted, which is number 1 in the world. （09广东）