高中英语建议信课件
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高中教育英语必修第一册人教版《1.5 Writing——建议信》教学课件
第二段：对所提问题进行分析， 提出建议与改进措施并说明理由。 1．First(ly), why not join a club? If you do this, you can make friends. 首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部呢？你如果这样做的话，就会交到 朋友。 2．Second(ly), you should/can try to talk with others.其次，你应该/可 以尽量与他人交谈。 3．Third(ly), it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to
like to give you some advice. Firstly, I recommend you ________________ (建议一). Besides, you'd
better ________________ (建议二), so __________________ (说明理由). What's more, it would be a good idea __________________ (建议三). By doing so, ________________ (理由).
Hope my advice will be of some help to y作规范 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友安娜(Anna)最近来中国某中学交换学 习，她来信说不知道如何跟新同学相处。请你给她回一封信，内容包 括： 1.写信目的； 2.你的建议及理由； 3.表达祝愿。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
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2019高中英语作文写作指导-- 建议信(共34张) PPT课件 图文
S1: I _q_u_a_rr_e_ll_ed__w_it_h my parents and I
feel they only care about my __s_tu_d_y__
S2: __M_y__w_e_i_g_h_t _keeps increasing and My classmates often_l_a_u_g_h_t_a_t me.
4.建议信结尾常用句式：
1. I hope that my suggestions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact me for more questions.
2. I am looking forwards to your consideration about my proposals / suggestions. I will be more than happy to see improvements later.
Complimentary close(结束语), Signature
Yours sincerely, Robert
实际操练
假如你是某英文周报“PLEASE TELL ME” 专栏的 编辑Robert。南县一中高三年级学生Xu Meili因最 近感觉学习压力大，成绩下降，和父母经常吵架而 写信向你求助。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1、对该同学存在的问题表示理解 2、提出建议并给出理由 注意： 1. 词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
You should not only concentrate on your study but also you are supposed to pay attention to doing sports. Not only should you concentrate on your study but also you are supposed to pay attention to doing sports.
(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
...
talk in English
Brainstorming
read English books
ways to improve English
watch English films
have a good attitude
listen carefully
Step4: organize your writing（组织语言）
to sum up 观点 in my opinion, as far as I'm concerned, from
my perspective
Write a draft(草稿） by groups.
Step5: write a draft（草稿）
para1：Purposes and Problems
2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua, ————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————
Best wishes.
Yours,
xxx
Step1：analyze (审题)
Writing
Suggestion Letter
建议信
Free talk
As a new student in senior one, do you have some problems?
在此输入您的封面副标题
chemistry
math physics
English
假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信 中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很 苦恼。请写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学 习。 注意： 1. 词数100左右；
高中英语写好建议信课件
第一步：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但 审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题： 思考的问题 第几人称？（person） 文章的题材是什么？ 要写的文章主题是什么 (topic) 样题分析 第一人称 建议信
建议原因 建议内容
怎样安排信息点的顺序？ (order) 动作是什么时候发生的？(时态) (when)
Next to a primary school stands our school, faced with / facing a main street. 倒装
•高峰期交通繁忙…..
traffic…. during the rush hours
It’s crammed with cars during the rush hours.
During the rush hours, there is a lot of traffic. so…. that… During the rush hours, there are so many cars and buses going on the road that… with结构 With so many cars and buses going on the road, …
Our district is well-known for paper-cutting and the people are very skilled at it. ---1. skill of workers At the moment these people do not have anywhere to display the variety and skill of their craftsmanship. ---2. no other gallery If the skill is lost, there may be no record of it. ---3. there may be no record 1 、2、3点强调建艺术馆的必要性 The gallery would provide them with an opportunity to preserve this skill. ---4. preserve the skill If you were to allow them to display their expertise here, I believe we could make our district famous and encourage more tourists to come here.---5. famous &more tourists 4、5点强调建艺术馆的益处
高中英语必修1 writing 建议信 共15张PPT
罗列观点：
• Firstly/ First of all / To begin with/ In the first place/on the one hand/ For one thing…
• Secondly/ Besides/ What’s more/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/ on the other hand/ For another/ Next…
Sentence patterns（句型） Body: give your advice & reasons
1. It’s helpful/important to…… 2. It would be a good idea to…… 3. I would like to suggest that…..sb (should) do sth.
1. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.
2. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. 3. I’m sure if you take my advice, you will…
join join in take part in
join 加组织，成为其中一员 join in 加入活动(小），游戏 join sb. in doing sth. 加入某人做某事的队伍中 take part in 参加活动（大） eg. ____jo_i_n___ the army ____jo_i_n___ me in playing football __jo_i_n__i_n_ the game
高中英语如何写建议信课件
Clear structure and logical rigor: The suggestion letter needs to have a clear theme and logical structure, with coherent paragraphs and each paragraph revolving around the theme.
Appropriate Language Use
The letter employees apply language and vocabulary, reflecting a high level of English proficiency
Common Error Analysis
Vague Content
Some letters lake specific suggestions or ideas, making them difficult to understand or act upon
Informal Tone
Some letters use inappropriate language or colloquialisms, which can understand the letter's authority and credibility
Using official language
Use formal language
Suggestion letters usually require the use of formal and professional language to express respect and importance towards the other party.
高中英语写作建议信完整ppt课件
2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could ... 3.I would like to sugges.t/recommend that...
• 4.If I were you, I would .... • 5.When it comes to such a situation,
I would like to suggest that you should ... • 6.As to..., I suggest that you should....
.
建议信结尾常用句式
1. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 2. 2. I hope what’s mentioned above might be
步
骤 Step3. Form a passage and polish
.
范文讲解：
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。 假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类 图书(popular science books)和文学类图 (literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个 词的信，推荐这类书，并分别说明推荐理由。
need any help.
.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；
整
暗示性
体
三 2. Body
部 分
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
小结；呼应主题 .
书面表达如何写？ 三 Step 1 List the key points
• 4.If I were you, I would .... • 5.When it comes to such a situation,
I would like to suggest that you should ... • 6.As to..., I suggest that you should....
.
建议信结尾常用句式
1. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 2. 2. I hope what’s mentioned above might be
步
骤 Step3. Form a passage and polish
.
范文讲解：
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。 假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类 图书(popular science books)和文学类图 (literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个 词的信，推荐这类书，并分别说明推荐理由。
need any help.
.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；
整
暗示性
体
三 2. Body
部 分
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
小结；呼应主题 .
书面表达如何写？ 三 Step 1 List the key points
人教高中英语必修1Unit1建议信(共25张PPT)
A letter of
giving advice
建议信
1.基本框架： 开头（beginning）---- 开门见山，向 对方陈述自己的观点。(state your idea)
主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行 分析并说明理由，并提出自己的建议。 (reasons and evidence)
5. As far as I’m concerned/In my opinion/As for me, it would be wise to take the following action. 6. I wonder if you have considered the following tips. 7. When it come to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you (should) do …
连接词
• First • Second • Besides • The last but not the least
• 注意衔接词使用: 表先后次序： • First, second, third….Finally • Firstly, secondly，…eventually • to begin/start with, at last
• ⑦Only by practicing more can we learn English better. Only when you try your best will
you have a good command of English. ⑧ It is a wide vocabulary that helps you improve your Engleter来信中得知，他一直因为自己 身体太胖而苦恼，请你用英文给他 写一封Email，提出你的建议。
giving advice
建议信
1.基本框架： 开头（beginning）---- 开门见山，向 对方陈述自己的观点。(state your idea)
主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行 分析并说明理由，并提出自己的建议。 (reasons and evidence)
5. As far as I’m concerned/In my opinion/As for me, it would be wise to take the following action. 6. I wonder if you have considered the following tips. 7. When it come to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you (should) do …
连接词
• First • Second • Besides • The last but not the least
• 注意衔接词使用: 表先后次序： • First, second, third….Finally • Firstly, secondly，…eventually • to begin/start with, at last
• ⑦Only by practicing more can we learn English better. Only when you try your best will
you have a good command of English. ⑧ It is a wide vocabulary that helps you improve your Engleter来信中得知，他一直因为自己 身体太胖而苦恼，请你用英文给他 写一封Email，提出你的建议。
高中英语建议信写作 PPT课件 图文
2. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn Chinese well.
3. I have received your letter saying that you hope to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you. / Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问Байду номын сангаас是 很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
【篇中句】介绍详情、提出具体建议。
（可参考课本P7, part 2写作指导）
1. I'd like to suggest that 我想要建议……
2. It would be a good idea to do sth. / Doing sth. will also help to... 做某事是不错的主意。/ 做某事也有 帮助于……
高一写作专题一： 建议信
一、文体概述
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让 对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有 关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要 合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建 议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合 理性和说服力。
建议信的写作步骤：
首段：表明写信意图。陈述事由，简 单介绍自己，注意语气。
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
高中英语 建议信A letter of advice课件
③结尾-呼应开头，表达愿望，希望建议给对方以帮助。
1.写建议信要符合英文信件的基本格式。
2.文章中的时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
3.建议信要简明扼要,同时所提出的建议要合理,有说 服力,语气要诚恳、有礼貌,慎用命令性词汇。
4.建议的角度要多样化、避免重复,可从政治、经济、文 化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议,因此要注意各 个建议之间的衔接。
I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 如果你能考虑我的建议我会感激不尽的。
These are my personal suggestions,but I do hope that they will be of some help. 这些只是我个人的建议，但是我确实希望会对你有帮助。
In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful. 最后，如果你发现我的建议很有用我会很高兴的。
Success grows out of struggles to overcome difficulties. 成功来自于克服困难的斗争! （有志者事竟成!）
写作模板
Dear_______，
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on how to______(引出问题).I am more than glad to share some of my advice/views with you.
...is a good/great idea. .....是一个好想法.
You may consider doing... 你可以考虑(做)......
1.写建议信要符合英文信件的基本格式。
2.文章中的时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
3.建议信要简明扼要,同时所提出的建议要合理,有说 服力,语气要诚恳、有礼貌,慎用命令性词汇。
4.建议的角度要多样化、避免重复,可从政治、经济、文 化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议,因此要注意各 个建议之间的衔接。
I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 如果你能考虑我的建议我会感激不尽的。
These are my personal suggestions,but I do hope that they will be of some help. 这些只是我个人的建议，但是我确实希望会对你有帮助。
In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful. 最后，如果你发现我的建议很有用我会很高兴的。
Success grows out of struggles to overcome difficulties. 成功来自于克服困难的斗争! （有志者事竟成!）
写作模板
Dear_______，
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on how to______(引出问题).I am more than glad to share some of my advice/views with you.
...is a good/great idea. .....是一个好想法.
You may consider doing... 你可以考虑(做)......
高中英语建议信(共10张PPT)
❖ 有用词汇： 平台 Platform 开阔眼界 broaden
Third, it is a good way to enrich school culture as well.
one’s horizons 丰富 enrich －有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。
画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的平台，开阔学生视野、丰富校园文化。 —单词、句子没有拼写、语法错误 practical writing (应用文). 有用词汇： 平台 Platform 开阔眼界 broaden one’s horizons 丰富 enrich I hope that you take my suggestions into consideration. correct grammar structures
4. nice handwriting
…
A good piece of writing
Accuracy （准确性）
—准确无误地表达作者意图 —覆盖要求的所有要点 —单词、句子没有拼写、语法错误
Excellence
（优良性）
－应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复 杂）语言地道
Second, It can also help to broaden students’ horizons .Third, it is a good way to enrich school culture as well.
❖ Thanks for reading my letter. I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration.
文), ending(结束语)and signature(签名). 3. tense :present / future 4. three paragraphs
Third, it is a good way to enrich school culture as well.
one’s horizons 丰富 enrich －有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。
画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的平台，开阔学生视野、丰富校园文化。 —单词、句子没有拼写、语法错误 practical writing (应用文). 有用词汇： 平台 Platform 开阔眼界 broaden one’s horizons 丰富 enrich I hope that you take my suggestions into consideration. correct grammar structures
4. nice handwriting
…
A good piece of writing
Accuracy （准确性）
—准确无误地表达作者意图 —覆盖要求的所有要点 —单词、句子没有拼写、语法错误
Excellence
（优良性）
－应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复 杂）语言地道
Second, It can also help to broaden students’ horizons .Third, it is a good way to enrich school culture as well.
❖ Thanks for reading my letter. I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration.
文), ending(结束语)and signature(签名). 3. tense :present / future 4. three paragraphs
高中英语必修1 writing 建议信 共15张PPT
假如你是李华，你的朋友Nathan将来你的 城市做一项调查研究，写信询问你相关注 意事项。请你回信，内容包括：
1. 天气情况 2. 食物 3. 交通
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Dear Nathan, Glad to hear from you. You said in your letter you would come to
my city to do a research. To make you stay here safe and comfortable, I’d like to offer you some advice.
First, it can be quite cold here in winter, so it’s better for you to wear heavy clothes when you are out. Second, Chinese food may appear strange to foreigners like you, so you are supposed to learn to adapt to the food here and gradually you will find it delicious. What is the most important is the traffic. In China, we drive on the right— different from the usual practice in your country. So be sure to have it in your mind when you have a chance to drive.
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Sentence patterns（句型） Body: give your advice & reasons 1. It’s helpful/important to…… 2. It would be a good idea to…… 3. I would like to suggest that…..sb (should) do sth.
1. 天气情况 2. 食物 3. 交通
1
Dear Nathan, Glad to hear from you. You said in your letter you would come to
my city to do a research. To make you stay here safe and comfortable, I’d like to offer you some advice.
First, it can be quite cold here in winter, so it’s better for you to wear heavy clothes when you are out. Second, Chinese food may appear strange to foreigners like you, so you are supposed to learn to adapt to the food here and gradually you will find it delicious. What is the most important is the traffic. In China, we drive on the right— different from the usual practice in your country. So be sure to have it in your mind when you have a chance to drive.
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Sentence patterns（句型） Body: give your advice & reasons 1. It’s helpful/important to…… 2. It would be a good idea to…… 3. I would like to suggest that…..sb (should) do sth.
(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
Enjoy one possible version from your classmate.
a good composition
structure contents language
beauty
be attractive, finished in a limited time!
Homework
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句） _It__ is reading English books _t_h_a_t _ helps a lot.
4.I hope my suggetions will be of great help.(改为强 调句） I_d_o__hope my suggestions will be of great help.
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
5. In this way, you can make great progress in English.(改为倒装句） _O__n_ly_ in this way, _c_a_n_ you make great progress in English.
Step6. polish your writing（润色）
How to polish your writing？
Polish your composition by improving your handwriting（书写）
Polish your composition by improving your language
高中英语建议信模版PPT课件
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So would you publish more instructive articles on this topic first. Then, some activities such as holding debates or seeing movies about the phenomenon will help students get aware of the harm of wasting and realize the importance of saving. Do you agree with me?
_________________________________ _____________________________
I am looking forward to your reply.
yours sincerely,
Lihua
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Dear Editors,
I am a student in class 17, Grade Three. My name is Lihua. Recently, I have found that the waste on our campus is getting serious, such as the waste of water, food and electrical energy.
建议信的写作指导
建议信是就某一问题给对方提出建议或者 忠告。建议信可以写给某个组织或机构， 也可以写给某个人。
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1.合理安排建议信的内容结构
写信的目的（包括背景，现状和存在的问 题）；建议的内容；表达希望（希望自己 的建议能够对对方有所帮助）
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高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句） _It__ is reading English books _t_h_a_t _ helps a lot.
4.I hope my suggetions will be of great help.(改为强 调句） I_d_o__hope my suggestions will be of great help.
Step4: organize your writing（组织语言）
transition words（过渡词）
转折 however, but, on the contrary 因果 so, therefore, for this reason, as a result,
as a consequence 结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in conclusion,
problems which person(第几人称) what type(什么体裁） what topic(什么主题）
what tense （写作时态）
conclusion first person
suggestion letter suggetions of learning English
simple present tense
Writing
Suggestion Letter
建议信
---江西省寻乌中学 卢文华
Free talk
As a new student in senior one, do you have some problems?
高中英语选修7-1建议信 PPT课件 图文
I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration. Yours faithfully, Li Hua
谢谢！ 学妹给我打电话，说她又换工作了，这次是销售。电话里，她絮絮叨叨说着一年多来工作上的不如意，她说工作一点都不开心，找不到半点成就感。 末了，她问我：学姐，为什么想 找一份 自己热 爱的工 作这么 难呢？ 我问她上一份工作干了多久，她 说不到 三个月 ，做的 还是行 政助理 的工作 ，工作 内容枯 燥乏味 不说， 还特别 容易得 罪人， 实在不 是自己 的理想 型。 我又问了她前几份工作辞职的原 因，结 果都是 大同小 异，不 是因为 工作乏 味，就 是同事 不好相 处，再 者就是 薪水太 低，发 展前景 堪忧。 粗略估计，这姑娘毕业不到一年 ，工作 却已经 换了四 五份， 还跨了 三个行 业。 但即使如此频繁的跳槽，她也仍 然没有 找不到 自己满 意的工 作。 2 我问她，心目中理想型的工作是 什么样 子的。 她说， 姐，你 知道苏 明玉吗 ？就是 《都挺 好》电 视剧里 的女老 大，我 就喜欢 她样子 的工作 ，有挑 战有成 就感， 有钱有 权，生 活自由 ，如果 给我那 样的工 作，我 会投入 我全部 的热情 。 听她说完，我尴尬的笑了笑。 其实每一个人都向往这样的成功 ，但这 姑娘却 本末倒 置了， 并不是 有了钱 有了权 有了成 就以后 才全力 以赴的 工作， 而是全 力以赴 工作， 投入了 自己的 全部以 后，才 有了地 位名望 钱财。 你要先投入，才会有收获，当你 真正投 入做一 件事后 ，会明 白两件 事：首 先你会 明白， 把一件 事认认 真真做 好，所 获得的 收益远 大于同 时做很 多事； 你会明白，有人风风火火做各种 事仍未 有回报 ，是因 为他们 从未投 入过。 从“做 了”到 “做” ，正如 “知
谢谢！ 学妹给我打电话，说她又换工作了，这次是销售。电话里，她絮絮叨叨说着一年多来工作上的不如意，她说工作一点都不开心，找不到半点成就感。 末了，她问我：学姐，为什么想 找一份 自己热 爱的工 作这么 难呢？ 我问她上一份工作干了多久，她 说不到 三个月 ，做的 还是行 政助理 的工作 ，工作 内容枯 燥乏味 不说， 还特别 容易得 罪人， 实在不 是自己 的理想 型。 我又问了她前几份工作辞职的原 因，结 果都是 大同小 异，不 是因为 工作乏 味，就 是同事 不好相 处，再 者就是 薪水太 低，发 展前景 堪忧。 粗略估计，这姑娘毕业不到一年 ，工作 却已经 换了四 五份， 还跨了 三个行 业。 但即使如此频繁的跳槽，她也仍 然没有 找不到 自己满 意的工 作。 2 我问她，心目中理想型的工作是 什么样 子的。 她说， 姐，你 知道苏 明玉吗 ？就是 《都挺 好》电 视剧里 的女老 大，我 就喜欢 她样子 的工作 ，有挑 战有成 就感， 有钱有 权，生 活自由 ，如果 给我那 样的工 作，我 会投入 我全部 的热情 。 听她说完，我尴尬的笑了笑。 其实每一个人都向往这样的成功 ，但这 姑娘却 本末倒 置了， 并不是 有了钱 有了权 有了成 就以后 才全力 以赴的 工作， 而是全 力以赴 工作， 投入了 自己的 全部以 后，才 有了地 位名望 钱财。 你要先投入，才会有收获，当你 真正投 入做一 件事后 ，会明 白两件 事：首 先你会 明白， 把一件 事认认 真真做 好，所 获得的 收益远 大于同 时做很 多事； 你会明白，有人风风火火做各种 事仍未 有回报 ，是因 为他们 从未投 入过。 从“做 了”到 “做” ，正如 “知
【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
Step5: write a draft（草稿）
para3：hopes and wishes
1. I believe you will take my advice into consideration. 2. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 3. I hope you will find these suggestions useful/ helpful. 4. I do hope that my ideas will work.
problems which person(第几人称) what type(什么体裁） what topic(什么主题）
what tense （写作时态）
conclusion first person
suggestion letter suggetions of learning English
simple present tense
1.I’m glad to receive your letter, asking for my advice on how to ...
2.My suggestions are as follows. 3.I've received your letter, saying... 4.Here are some suggestions for you. 5.You have asked me for my advice on how to…
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句） _It__ is reading English books _t_h_a_t _ helps a lot.
人教版高中英语建议信写作技巧课件(共12张)
will also be happy to see you again. I am sure you will enjoy every minute of your stay here. I know you are fond of swimming. A river lies not far from my home. We can go swimming
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I am writing in reply to... I am writing to express my views concerning... I am writing with my suggestion/ proposal about... I would like to suggest that... You have asked me for my advice with regard to. and I will try to make some conductive suggestions... You have asked me for some advice on how to improve. I will try to give some useful suggestions... You asked for advice concerning (with regard to). and I will try to make some suggestions... I have received your letter saying. I recommend that...
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I am writing in reply to... I am writing to express my views concerning... I am writing with my suggestion/ proposal about... I would like to suggest that... You have asked me for my advice with regard to. and I will try to make some conductive suggestions... You have asked me for some advice on how to improve. I will try to give some useful suggestions... You asked for advice concerning (with regard to). and I will try to make some suggestions... I have received your letter saying. I recommend that...
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making the traffic heavier可意译为： making the situation more serious. making 可替换为： causing, leading to, resulting in “send…fetch…” 可替换为短语： pick up
学生过街在车辆中穿行危险 thread one’s way，when doing
通拥挤的状况
要写的文章主题是什么 (topic) 建议政府采取措施舒缓交
怎样安排信息点的顺序？ (order) 动作是什么时候发生的？(时态) (when)
说理逻辑性 一般现在时
第二步：搜索相关词组或句型 问题 建议
学校和一所小学毗 政府应采取措施 , 邻，对着大街，高 如修天桥等。 峰期交通繁忙；加 之孩子小 , 家长接 送。交通更拥挤； 学生过街在车辆中 穿行危险。
学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街
stand next to… primary… face/be faced with… the main street… 推荐句型：There be+并列句 There’s a primary school near our school, and both schools face the main street. 非谓语结构 Our school stands next to a primary school, faced with/facing the main street. Standing next to a primary school, our school is faced with/faces the main street.
政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。
suggest/suggestion, take steps/ measures/ action to do… such as
简单句 I suggest that the government should take steps such as building an overpass. 表语从句 My suggestion is that the government should… 固定句型 It is high time that…(虚拟语气) It is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like building…
2．I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter
3. You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions.
建议信写作的注意事项： a．这类文章一定要符合英 语信件的基本格式。 b．这类文章的基本时态多 用一般现在时和一般将来时。 c.语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及 对方感受。
常用套语
A．建议信开头常用句式
to know that …
(开门见山,表明写作意图)
1．After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry
send…to…, fetch…. ,
, which….
Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier.
非谓语结构….
Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, making the traffic heavier.
C.建议信结尾（希望对 方采纳建议） 1. I believe you will take my advice into
account/consideration.
2. I do hope you will find these proposals/suggestions
practical/useful/helpful.
将介词短语提前（全倒装） Next to a primary school stands/lies/is our school
, faced with / facing a main street.
润色小建议
可将stand next to替换为高级词汇/短语 be located next to (near/beside/by) border/adjoin vt. be adjacent to与…毗邻 在…对面 be opposite to
学校和一所小学毗邻，对着 政 府应采取措施 , 大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加 如修天桥等。 之孩子小 , 家长接送。交通 更拥挤；学 天桥 overpass
第一步：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但 审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题： 思考的问题 第几人称？（person） 文章的题材是什么？ 样题分析 第一人称 一封信
写作攻略 1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建 议和忠告。 2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个 问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给 某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或 忠告。 3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提 出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语 气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明 扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
润色小建议
A. 适当添加一些意思（过渡句）
1. In order to release the stress of traffic problems, … 3. Seeing these matters, never will I stop urging our government to take some measures. For the sake of improving the quality of traffic, it is significant to build…
B. 语义的意译
2. Aimed at solving these problems, the government should…
•The government should pay more attention to it and try to solve it.
C. 添加形容词和副词
I strongly suggest…, active/effective measures
润色小建议
“高峰期”可意译: at peak time， a large current of cars and people “交通繁忙”可译为: traffic jam congestion 交通堵塞 be choke up with
be crammed with 被…堵塞/塞满
加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤
加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤 What’s more, … pick up…. make…. To make things worse/ what’s worse, many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more crowded. In addition/ Additionally, many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier. What’s more, parents often attend their kids to school, resulting in more serious traffic jams. What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age.
B. 表达建议（body 分析问题，提出建议）
1.first，firstly，secondly…．then，after that，in the end．finally．Meanwhile, what’s more．．． 2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could … 3. If I were you, I would… 4 In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 5. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can…
•高峰期交通繁忙…..
traffic…. during the rush hours The traffic is busy during the rush hours. During the rush hours, there is a lot of traffic. so…. that… During the rush hours, there are so many cars and buses going on the road that… with结构 With so many cars and buses going on the road, …
so…. that….=too…to
The children are so young that parents have to send them to school and fetch them home, which makes/making the traffic heavier.
学生过街在车辆中穿行危险 thread one’s way，when doing
通拥挤的状况
要写的文章主题是什么 (topic) 建议政府采取措施舒缓交
怎样安排信息点的顺序？ (order) 动作是什么时候发生的？(时态) (when)
说理逻辑性 一般现在时
第二步：搜索相关词组或句型 问题 建议
学校和一所小学毗 政府应采取措施 , 邻，对着大街，高 如修天桥等。 峰期交通繁忙；加 之孩子小 , 家长接 送。交通更拥挤； 学生过街在车辆中 穿行危险。
学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街
stand next to… primary… face/be faced with… the main street… 推荐句型：There be+并列句 There’s a primary school near our school, and both schools face the main street. 非谓语结构 Our school stands next to a primary school, faced with/facing the main street. Standing next to a primary school, our school is faced with/faces the main street.
政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。
suggest/suggestion, take steps/ measures/ action to do… such as
简单句 I suggest that the government should take steps such as building an overpass. 表语从句 My suggestion is that the government should… 固定句型 It is high time that…(虚拟语气) It is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like building…
2．I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter
3. You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions.
建议信写作的注意事项： a．这类文章一定要符合英 语信件的基本格式。 b．这类文章的基本时态多 用一般现在时和一般将来时。 c.语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及 对方感受。
常用套语
A．建议信开头常用句式
to know that …
(开门见山,表明写作意图)
1．After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry
send…to…, fetch…. ,
, which….
Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier.
非谓语结构….
Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, making the traffic heavier.
C.建议信结尾（希望对 方采纳建议） 1. I believe you will take my advice into
account/consideration.
2. I do hope you will find these proposals/suggestions
practical/useful/helpful.
将介词短语提前（全倒装） Next to a primary school stands/lies/is our school
, faced with / facing a main street.
润色小建议
可将stand next to替换为高级词汇/短语 be located next to (near/beside/by) border/adjoin vt. be adjacent to与…毗邻 在…对面 be opposite to
学校和一所小学毗邻，对着 政 府应采取措施 , 大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加 如修天桥等。 之孩子小 , 家长接送。交通 更拥挤；学 天桥 overpass
第一步：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但 审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题： 思考的问题 第几人称？（person） 文章的题材是什么？ 样题分析 第一人称 一封信
写作攻略 1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建 议和忠告。 2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个 问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给 某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或 忠告。 3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提 出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语 气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明 扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
润色小建议
A. 适当添加一些意思（过渡句）
1. In order to release the stress of traffic problems, … 3. Seeing these matters, never will I stop urging our government to take some measures. For the sake of improving the quality of traffic, it is significant to build…
B. 语义的意译
2. Aimed at solving these problems, the government should…
•The government should pay more attention to it and try to solve it.
C. 添加形容词和副词
I strongly suggest…, active/effective measures
润色小建议
“高峰期”可意译: at peak time， a large current of cars and people “交通繁忙”可译为: traffic jam congestion 交通堵塞 be choke up with
be crammed with 被…堵塞/塞满
加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤
加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤 What’s more, … pick up…. make…. To make things worse/ what’s worse, many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more crowded. In addition/ Additionally, many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier. What’s more, parents often attend their kids to school, resulting in more serious traffic jams. What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age.
B. 表达建议（body 分析问题，提出建议）
1.first，firstly，secondly…．then，after that，in the end．finally．Meanwhile, what’s more．．． 2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could … 3. If I were you, I would… 4 In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 5. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can…
•高峰期交通繁忙…..
traffic…. during the rush hours The traffic is busy during the rush hours. During the rush hours, there is a lot of traffic. so…. that… During the rush hours, there are so many cars and buses going on the road that… with结构 With so many cars and buses going on the road, …
so…. that….=too…to
The children are so young that parents have to send them to school and fetch them home, which makes/making the traffic heavier.