王泉网校六级写作讲义2

大学英语六级写作讲义主讲：王泉目录第一段写法 (2)第一句评价图画 (2)第二句描述图画 (2)【版本一】常规描述 (2)【版本二】寓意描述 (3)第二段写法 (6)【版本一】分析原因法 (6)【版本二】观点对比论证法 (8)【版本三】引用谚语法 (8)【版本四】分析解决问题法 (10)【版本五】意义阐释 (11)【版本六】举例论证 (17)【版本七】建议评论 (19)第三段写法 (20)【附录】图例 (24)第一段写法：第一句评价图画1. 消极类图画This is a pathetic and heart-rending scene!这是一个令人触目惊心的可悲的景象！2. 中性类图画The intended meaning of the compelling photo above is far-reaching and affords much food for thought !上面这幅引人注目的图画所反映的现象是深远且耐人寻味的！3. 讽刺类图画The extraordinary picture being rich with irony expresses drawer‟s feelings by metaphor, which mirrors a kind of people/phenomenon/thing.这幅充满了讽刺意味的特别的图画借物寓事，反映了当今的一类人/一种现象/一类事。

第二句描述图画【版本一】常规描述四要素——引出句.非谓语动词.提示语翻译.句尾套话1. 引出句1) The satirical sketch graphically portrays a scene in which there is/are ...这幅具有讽刺性的图画生动地描述了一个场景：...2) One cannot help but be moved by the scene as illustrated in the caricature, where there is/are ...人们不禁为漫画中说描述的场景所动容：...3) This cartoon humorously presents a scene of a critical moment, in which there is/are ...这幅漫画幽默地展示了一个场景的关键瞬间：...4) As the exaggerative and enlightening drawing vividly describes, there is/are ...正如这幅夸张且具有启发性的图画所生动地描述：...2. 非谓语动词There is/are + 主体+ 非谓语动词①（次要动作），非谓语动词②（主要动作）.There is a henholding a piece of paper in her hand, selling eggs.There is a oil lampsmiling at his face in full bloom (笑颜在脸上绽放), burning himself to lit up the world.in full bloom, wearing the traditional Chinese costume.There is a flowerthriving in the greenhouse, exposed into the storm and fading.There is a young boy just ending a race, beginning the next.There is an aged manshrinking(缩成) into himself, being kicked around by his sons daughters.There is a young mansitting in a barbershop and looking at the photo of Beck ham, spending 300 Yuan on the hair style of his idol.There is a nervous soccer forwardstanding by the penalty spot and facing up with a goalkeeper, imagining his opponent as an immense obstacle and considering the chances of shooting in are rather slim.There are two persons both having just one leg, supporting each other with their powerful hands and running forwards rapidly.There are many peoplesitting within narrow spaces, working or playing on computers to communicate with each other via the Internet.There is a hot potcontaining various cultural symbols, standing for the cultural integration.There are two touristsenjoying a landscape of lakes and mountains(湖光山色), littering up in the scenic region. There is a personhaving seen the drink spills out, falling into despair and sighing“All screwed up”, while the to lift up the bottle, smiling as he feels so lucky still to have something left in the bottle. There are many studentsgraduating from college, confronted with a variety of choices after graduation.daughter by the hand, supported by her grown kid 30 years later. There are a group of juvenilessitting around the dinner table, playing thier cellphones respectively without saying a word with each other.There is a fathersitting in front of a television and smoking before his son, not caring about his kid at all.3. 提示语翻译4. 句尾套话（十一罗汉）1) Given its profound social implication, the thought-provoking phenomenon is well worth our endeavor to explore.2) Simple as the image seems to be, the intended/ implied meaning goes far deeper.3) Odd and funny as it appears to be, such happenings/ cases are so pervasive/ widespread that we cannot afford to ignore/ disregard them.4) Odd and funny as the above image seems to be, the drawer obviously intends for deeper meanings than what is shown superficially.5) Simply designed as the pictures are/the picture is, the symbolic meaning that they convey are/is rather deep and profound.6) The primary purpose of this picture lies in the criticism of the moral degradation.7) The drawer‟s intention seems to be highly self-evident and the meaning causes us to be in deep meditation.8) After careful thinking, it seems that what is conveyed in the drawing is quite realistic and most meaningful.9) Casting a closer look and reflection upon this picture provides us with a better sense of its deep implications.10) There is no doubt that this cartoon‟s symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.11) By carefully examining this picture, we find a deeper social message is transmitted to us.【版本二】寓意描述1. 描述图画长版：As is vividly depicted in the picture which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking onsecond thoughts,there be 句型.短版：如何描述图画？（1）There be句型法There is/are + 主语in the cartoon/picture/drawing, which/who symbolizes/refers to/stands for + 主题词，同位语+ 非谓语+定语从句.（2）完全倒装句In the middle of the cartoon/picture/drawing stands + 主语，which/who symbolizes/refers to/stands for+ 主题词，同位语+非谓语+ 定语从句.主语主题词+ 动词1 + 动词2.同位语例子：1) mobile phonedinner party while each one of them is checking messages in their mobile phones without saying a word to onethe era of mobile phone.2) Support our parentsis the responsibility of the sons and daughters of the Chinese people, which we cannot shirk.3) The choice after graduatingThere are a crowd of people in the cartoon, which symbolize college graduates, the generation after the1990owning dreams, passions, and ambitions, who is confronted with various choices at the crossroads,namely, hunting for jobs, pursuing further study, going abroad, starting a business and so forth.4) Negative attitudes and positive ones5) the culture "hot pot"6) Internetwith each other and understand more about the world, which separates people who communicate with one another on net instead of face to face.7) Youth Development2.描述文字1) Furthermore, there is a/an (ironic) caption under these two pictures/the drawing, which reads “...”2) Moreover, at the bottom of the picture are + 基数词+huge characters, meaning “...”3.寓意引申1)The picture intends to convey to us this message: ...2)The picture further points out that ...例子：1. It is absurd to spend so much money on haircut.花这么多钱理发是荒谬的。