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雅思写作 大作文范文赏析

雅思写作 大作文范文赏析

雅思写作大作文范文赏析题目:In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour.What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest?话题和题型分类教育类,原因对策型题目分析许多国家的学校在管理学生表现方面存在严重问题思路提示原因:文化习俗,传统习惯欠缺正确的教育理论学校利益与学生追求不一致学生的叛逆心理对策:教育者对学生的心理能够科学掌握校方积极听取学生诉求通过社会和传统文化来约束Sample AnswerPoor student behaviour seems to be an increasingly widespread problem. Many experts insist that it is because of the students’individual qualities, but others advocate that it is not so simple like that. As I see it, domestic education, classmates in school and the whole education environment are factors that contribute to this problem.(首段摆明观点: 学生不良行为的原因包括家庭教育、学校同学以及整个教育制度的影响)One very strong argument is that domestic education is not enough to regulate student behaviour. Many people are convinced that family is the first teacher for a child. A person’s temperament forms when he or she is young and the families’behaviour can be learnt by children easily. Thus if their families behave horribly, they may do so. One of the solution to theproblem lies with the families, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling their children. Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do raise their children to be considerate of others and responsible individuals.(文章第二段论述导致学生不良行为的第一个原因)Another factor which must be taken into consideration is that school is also an environment for students to learn from each other. If a student always communicates and studies with his classmates, he can learn others’behaviours in a short time, including bad performance. Consequently, school environment cannot be neglected. High quality elementary schools could be established that would support families more in terms of raising the next generation.(文章第三段论述导致学生不良行为的第二个原因)Last but not least, the whole education environment of a nation is also crucial for student behaviour. Some students under great pressure may behave terribly. If education department lays a too heavy burden on students, they may be stressed out, give up studying and thus do something harmful. To solve this problem, the government should publish some guidance for students’school work which specifies students’leaning objectives and make some changes to alleviate burdens on students.(文章第四段,论述导致学生不良行为的第三个原因)From the above views, I hold the opinion that the terrible behaviour of the students is not only the responsibility of themselves, but also of other factors including family, classmates and education environment.(全文总结再次重申观点)满分要素剖析:语言表达本文没有刻意用长难句,使用动词不定式等使得语言更简洁明了,客观清晰的地表达了作者的观点。

2023年8月19日雅思写作真题解析

2023年8月19日雅思写作真题解析

2023年8月19日雅思写作真题解析一、小作文混合图:线图+表格欧洲一个国家每周不同工作时长的人数,以及带薪休假日的天数。

二、大作文Some people think it is more important to spend public money on roads and motorways than on public transport system such as railways and trams. To what extent do you agree or disagree?你是否同意:有些人认为公共资金更应该投入到道路和高速公路的建设,而不是公共交通系统,比如铁路和轨道交通?题目解读:Agree or Disagree的关于政府交通投资的话题,对比道路建设和公共交通建设,而道路交通更多对应的是私家车,所以实质上是政府更应该投资建设私人交通还是公共交通的问题。

那么很显然,从环保、交通效率、收益人群的角度来看,都是公共交通更占优势。

推荐思路:tend to disagree理由1: 政府投资建设公共交通可以提升城市内和城市间的交通效率。

现如今很多城市都面临着交通拥堵的问题,尤其是在上下班高峰期时,比如在上海的早高峰时期,市中心10公里路程往往要开1小时左右。

因此,更完善的公共交通能够吸引更多的人放弃开车或者打车,乘坐比如地铁、轻轨、公交等公共交通工具来通勤,道路拥堵可以得到缓解。

并且,在城市间的通勤效率来看,火车高铁所消耗的时间也大大少于公路开车的时间。

理由2:更完善的公共交通网络能够减少私家车的使用,从而减少温室气体的排放。

路面上通行的燃油私家车数量是公共交通的数倍,现在很多城市的公共交通是以新能源车为主,而地铁、轻轨、火车等也没有汽车尾气排放的问题。

因此当私家车使用量减少时,二氧化碳的排放也会大幅减少,对环境有益。

理由3:公共交通能够辐射到的人群更多。

道路建设的提高更多的是使那些拥有私家车的人受益,但拥有私家车的人群本身就是一小部分,然而公共交通的投资建设能够使更多的人受益。

雅思大作文真题范文解析

雅思大作文真题范文解析

雅思大作文真题范文解析今天小编和大家分享雅思大作文真题范文解析,希望能够帮助到大家,下面小编就和大家分享,来欣赏一下吧。

2018年9月28日雅思大作文真题范文解析:团队精神范文解析这道题属于议论文,主要讨论相比于个体活动,是否团队活动能教给人们更加重要的技能。

在回答时可以两边都涉及到,这样既降低写作难度,又显得观点更加合理。

雅思写作大作文范文In this highly competitive world, acquiring a variety of skills has become far more important than ever before. It is argued that people gain more necessary abilities through participating in a variety of group work, compared with the individual one. From my perspective, skills gained from both types of activities are equally essential.在这个竞争激烈的世界里,获得各种技能已经变得比以往任何时候都重要得多。

有人认为,与个体相比,人们通过参与各种群体工作获得了更多必要的能力。

从我的角度来看,从这两种活动中获得的技能都是同等重要的。

On the one hand, what people are able to learn by teamwork is meaningful. Firstly, by cooperating and working together with other participators, people are able to gain a better understanding of how to collaborate with others, an important quality that can facilitate to achieve career success. Another essential ability people can develop from group activities is communication skill. Whatever the group work is, playing football, basketball or doing a scientific research, it requires participants to communicate and socialize with others from diverse backgrounds especially when they hold different perspectives. People with strong social skills can adapt to a new environment more quickly and are more likely to access good resources from their friends wherever they are.一方面,人们能够通过团队合作学习是有意义的。

2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解,附高分范文

2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解,附高分范文

2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解,附高分范文6.10雅思大作文真题解析+高分范文话题:社会话题—人们是否应该交税题目:Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay taxes to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?写作思路:公民纳税是合理合法的事情。

政府需要用税收的钱来维持社会的正常运转,比如建设和维护基础设施,提供各种公共服务。

此外,税收制度也是一种财富再分配的机制,高收入群体缴纳的税收比例更高。

政府将用税收资助弱势群体,建立社会保障体系,促进了社会的稳定和发展。

所以,除了部分低收入、困难的免税群体,大部分人都需要缴税。

雅思写作真题范文Taxes play a vital role in funding public services andensuring societal well-being. While some people arguefor keeping all the money earned and question thenecessity of paying taxes to the state, I disagree with thisopinion.Admittedly,individuals with low ines can retain allthe money they earn, which is a mon policy adoptedby many countries worldwide. This is to ensure everymember of society has the money to meet their basicsurvival needs.However, when a person s inesurpasses a certain threshold, they should fulfill theirobligation of paying taxes to the state.One primary reason for paying taxes is that governmentsneed money to maintain criticalinfrastructure andprovide public services. Education, healthcare.transportation, and public safety are all supported by taxrevenue. Without adequate funds, these essentialservices would suffer, affecting people' s lives andhindering societal progress. By contributing a portion oftheir earnings through taxes, individuals activelyparticipate in building a well-functioning society.真题范文Moreover, taxation serves as a mechanism forredistribution of wealth and the promotion of socialstability.In most tax systems, individuals with higherines contribute a larger proportion of their earningsThis policy can help address socioeconomic disparitiesand provide a safety net for the vulnerable members ofsociety. lf people were allowed to keep all the moneythey earn, it would widen the gap between the rich andthe poor, leading to various social problems, such asresentment towards the wealthy or even an increase inviolent crimes.In conclusion,I disagree with the idea of keeping all themoney people earn without paying taxes, as it fails toacknowledge the crucial role that taxation plays insustaining and advancing society重点词汇与语料fund提供资金necessity必要性retain保留surpass超过threshold门槛obligation义务infrastructure基础设施revenue收入adequate足够的hinder阻碍well-functioning 运转良好的mechanism机制重点词汇与语料redistribution重新分配disparity差距safety net安全保障vulnerable弱势的resentment憎恨sustain维持以上就是关于《2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解,附高分范文》介绍。

雅思写作之真题解析

雅思写作之真题解析

雅思写作之真题解析当拿到一道大作文题目去分析时,我们不仅仅需要去读懂题目本身的意思,同时还得了解到题目所涉及的是哪一类话题,它所考察的是一个什么能力,题目中是否有一些关键词需要格外注意以及对于这道题目所能想到的一些观点论证。

本文中,文都国际教育老师将和大家一起探讨两道典型的教育类话题。

As part of education, students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?审题:题目翻译:作为教育的一部分,学生应该要花一段时间去海外学习和生活来学习当地的语言和文化。

你在多大程度上同意或者不同意?能力考查:这个教育类话题是同意不同意的考试指令,考查考生对于考官所呈现的社会现象或所表达的观点是否能够清晰地给出自己的想法并加以有效论证。

一般来讲,碰到这种指令,理论上是可以写完全支持或者反对的,但是还是建议大家尽量尝试用折中的写法,即部分同意部分反对。

这种一分为二的思考方式可以在考场上帮助你快速想出观点并进行有效作答,另外这种答题模式也不太会发生偏题的情况。

框架构造:Partly agree1. 开头段(用于引出题目背景,并且表明自己的态度)2. 论证出国学习和生活对于学习语言和文化的重要性3. 但是,反面论证这种做法对于部分学生是不现实的4. 结尾(再次重申自己的观点,并且可以给出自己的建议)Sample answer:Going abroad for further study has become more of a trend as large numbers of students participate in international language tests, such as IELTS or TOEFL. Some academics advocate that an experience of learning in foreign countries is a necessary part of education for language betterment and language acquisition. As for me, however, such practice should be considered with discretion.Admittedly, studying and living in another country can be an effective way to achieve the mentioned purposes. Compared with second-hand experience, living in the native environment can provide students with many opportunities to use the language to communicate with local people. Such language ability can make them be more competitive in the future job market. Meanwhile, living experiences can help students to have a deep insight into local life, including history, culture as well as religious belief.However, it would be unrealistic if all students are encouraged to participate in it. First of all, considering students themselves, those who lack learning and adaptive ability may find it hard to integrate into local life and sometimes they will feel disappointed or even depressed because of culture shocks and language barriers. Tuition fees and life expenses can be another problem. Different from rich students, those who come from working-class families or needy families cannot afford such a big cost to study overseas. For example, studying in UK for one year may cost one student nearly 300 thousand, which is far from affordability.To sum up, an experience of studying and living overseas can help students to speak good language and understand the local culture well. However, it is not a practical way for most ordinary families unless they make full preparations.思路分析:Introduction:Going abroad for further study has become more of a trend as large numbers of students participate in international language tests, such as IELTS or TOEFL.(用最熟悉的事件引出背景)Some academics advocate that an experience of learning in foreign countries is a necessary part of education for language betterment and language acquisition.(对于题目的改写)As for me, however, such practice should be considered with discretion.(在段落的最后,用一句话表明出自己的观点)Body 1:主题句:Admittedly, studying and living in another country can be an effective way to achieve the mentioned purposes.(其中mentioned purposes指的是题目中的掌握语言和文化,为了避免重复,改用其他方式来表达)支撑论点部分:Compared with second-hand experience, (用了对比论证手法,强调国外生活与学习的好处)living in the native environment can provide students with many opportunities to use the language to communicate with local people. Such language ability can make them be more competitive in the future job market.(凸显对于语言的好处,使用了因果论证来说明语言的重要性) Meanwhile,(论点之间的连接词) living experiences can help students to have a deep insight into local life, including history, culture as well as religious belief. (论证了对于文化的帮助,使用including来举出文化的一些典型表现)。

雅思写作真题解析与答案

雅思写作真题解析与答案

雅思写作真题解析与答案雅思写作是雅思考试中其中一个重要的部分,对于考生来说,熟悉并掌握雅思写作的技巧和方法十分关键。

本文将为你提供一些雅思写作真题的解析与答案,帮助你更好地应对雅思写作考试。

1. 题目:In many countries, people are living longer and the populationis getting older. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?(在许多国家,人们的寿命越来越长,人口越来越老。

这一趋势有哪些优点和缺点?)解析:这个题目要求我们探讨人口老龄化的优势和劣势。

我们可以分段来讨论。

1. 优点:首先,人口老龄化可以带来更多的经验和智慧。

老年人经历丰富,拥有许多宝贵的人生经验和知识,他们可以为社会提供更多的指导和启发。

其次,老龄人口的增加可以促进医疗保健的发展。

随着人口老龄化,对医疗保健的需求也会增加,这将刺激医疗和生物技术的研究和发展,进一步提高医疗水平和生活质量。

最后,老年人口的增加也可以提供更多的就业机会。

随着老年人口的增加,相关行业,如养老院、康复中心和护理机构等,将需要更多的员工来满足需求,从而创造更多的就业机会。

2. 缺点:首先,人口老龄化会增加养老负担。

随着老年人口的增加,社会养老保障制度将面临更大的压力,政府需要投入更多的资源来支持养老金和医疗保健等服务,这会给财政带来压力。

其次,人口老龄化可能导致劳动力短缺。

随着年龄的增长,老年人无法继续从事劳动力工作,这将导致劳动力市场供应不足,并对经济发展产生不利影响。

最后,人口老龄化还可能引发社会问题。

老年人口的增加可能导致社会孤立和心理健康问题的增加,需要社会和家庭给予更多的关爱和支持。

答案:综上所述,人口老龄化带来了一些优势,如经验和智慧的积累、医疗保健的发展和就业机会的增加,但也存在一些劣势,如养老负担的增加、劳动力短缺和社会问题。

2024年度雅思大作文考题详解课件

2024年度雅思大作文考题详解课件

考题要求
考生需要在规定的时间内(通常为40分钟)完成一篇至少250个单词的文章。 文章需要结构清晰、观点明确、论证充分、语言流畅。同时,考生需要注意避 免抄袭和语法错误等问题。
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雅思大作文的评分标准主要包括任务响应、连贯与衔接、词汇丰富程度、语法多样性和 准确性四个方面。考官会根据这四个方面对考生的文章进行综合评分,最终得出一个总
深度思考
考题往往要求考生对某一话题进行深 入思考和分析,提出有见地的观点和 解决方案,而非仅仅停留在表面现象 的描述上。
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随着人工智能技术的不断进步和应用领域的不断拓展,这一话题将持续成为雅思大作文的 重点考察内容。考生需要关注人工智能的最新发展动态,思考其对社会、经济、伦理等方 面的影响和挑战。
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雅思(International English Language Testing System, 简称IELTS)大作文是考察考生英语写作能力的重要部分,要 求考生在限定时间内完成一篇有深度的议论文或说明文。
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雅思大作文真题分析1

雅思大作文真题分析1

写作Task 2Some groups, such as poor people or people from rural areas find it is difficult to access the university education. University should make it especially easy for the students come from the rural areas get an access to the university.To what extent do you agree or disagree?审题:大学应不应该给贫困地区的学生录取优惠政策?确定观点:进行双方论点头脑风暴Brainstorming......应该不应该1.(社会方面):有利于贫困,农村地区的经济发展1.(学生个人方面):学业,同学竞争的压力2.(社会方面):不利于社会和科学持续发展“不应该”一方我们能想出两个分论,“应该”一方只有一个,因此我们的观点选择是“不应该”。

(有其它双方不同论点的同学可以写留言回复进行讨论)文章结构提纲I.开头段(背景引入+转述话题+自己的观点)II.立论1段:peer pressure, academic challengeIII.立论2段:depress social and scientific developmentIV.驳论段:boost the economy in rural and underdeveloped areasV.结尾:重申观点,概括驳论立论段例文:立论1段To begin with, students from rural areas will suffer form huge peer pressure and academic challenge after they are admitted by universities who give them easier access to higher education. Universities, especially those of international reputation, are full of talented students in every field, and academic achievement is a crucial evaluation criteria of a student. So, a mediocre student from rural regions will find it hard to compete with their outstanding classmates with better education background in urban areas, and some of them may even have difficulty to graduate. For example, in China, some high school students form underdeveloped provinces can get “bonus scores” in the College Entrance Examinations. Unfortunately, most of these “unqualified students” have to drop out university because their poor academic performance.驳论段例文Admittedly, affording students in poor areas easier access to university may help develop the local economy, as some of these students who are benefited from this policy may be willing to devote themselves to the development of their underdeveloped hometowns. Thus, the gap between rural and urban areas may be narrowed to some extent. However, the advantage of this policy is quite limited, since most of the university graduates will choose to stay in big cities for a more promising career development.。

大学英语作文-雅思写作大作文真题解析

大学英语作文-雅思写作大作文真题解析

雅思写作大作文真题解析雅思写作大作文真题解析,今天小编就给大家带来了雅思写作大作文真题解析,希望能够帮助到大家,下面小编就和大家分享,来欣赏一下吧。

雅思写作大作文真题解析:报纸是获知新闻的最佳途径吗?。

题目:Some people believe that newspaper is the best way to learn aboutnews,while others believe that more effective way is through other media. Discussboth views and give youropinion.有些人认为报纸是了解新闻的最好方式,而另一些人则认为更有效的方式是通过其他媒介。

讨论两种观点并给出你的意见。

雅思写作真题解析及审题本周考题虽然在近些年没有出现,但烤鸭们应该感到很开心,因为这实在是个太熟悉的话题了,也许我们经常讨论这个话题,尤其是在我们所处的互联网时代。

2012年6月9日曾经考过一个有关“新闻”的题目,原题如下:Some people think news has no connection topeople's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news on the newspaper andwatch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?这个题目要求我们讨论的观点是:新闻与我们的生活无关,因此阅读报纸或看电视新闻节目是浪费时间。

就这个题目而言,我们完全可以反驳其前提条件去论证新闻与我们的生活息息相关,因此阅读报刊和看电视新闻是非常重要的。

回到本次考题,我们发现题目要求与2012年6月9日不同,这次问的是关于获知新闻的方式:阅读报纸是不是获知新闻的最好方式?是否还有其他更好的方式?这种提问方式我们也不陌生,2018年3月3日和3月10日两次考试就是这种提问方式,其中3月3日问的是监狱是不是解决犯罪问题的最好方式,3月10日问的则是提高车价和油价是不是解决交通和污染问题的最好方式。

2023年8月18日雅思大作文题目及写作解析

2023年8月18日雅思大作文题目及写作解析

2023年8月18日雅思大作文题目及写作解析一、2023年8月18日雅思大作文题目Some people think more public money should be spent on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?一些人认为应该把更多的公共资金花在公路和高速公路上,而不是公共交通系统上。

你在多大程度上同意或不同意?二、2023年8月18日雅思大作文范文及解析IntroductionNowadays, a panorama of traffic-laden roadways appears to stretch into infinity, with a high correlation to road injuries and even fatalities. To solve this conundrum, a simple investment in upgrading road networks and highways should be viewed as a long shot, while combined efforts with access to a well-integrated public transportation system should1be emphasized for more desirable upshots.解析如今,在城市和农村地区,交通拥挤的道路全景似乎延伸到无限,与道路伤害甚至死亡高度相关。

为应对这一难题,改善公路网和高速公路进行简单的投资应被视为是一种可能性很小的尝试,而应强调联合努力并利用一个综合良好的公共交通系统,以获得更理想的结果。

panorama 全景n.traffic-laden 交通拥挤的adj.stretch into infinity 延伸到无限fatalities 死亡n.conundrum 难题n.upgrade 改善v.a long shot 冒险尝试,指可能性很小的尝试或冒险well-integrated 综合良好的adj.desirable upshots 理想的结果2Body 1Those who cling to the notion of road-oriented policy may take it for granted that nifty public works, be multi-layered flyovers or expressways linking two counties, could enhance traffic capacity in car-dependent metropolitan regions with an ever-expanding vehicle ownership. Besides, optimization of non-motor vehicle lane in CBD might be beneficial in dealing with increased complexity in road traffic due to the growing popularity of e-scooters and e-bikes. Nevertheless, the afore-mentioned antidotes are plainly futile attempts to catch up with soaring use of either petrol-fueled or electricity-fueled mobilities; an oblivion of either forthcoming autonomous automobiles or shrinking parking space is unlikely lift a city out of the congestion limbo.解析那些坚持道路导向政策的人可能理所当然地认为,漂亮的公共工程,无论是多层立交桥还是连接两个县的高速公路,都可以在汽车拥有量不断增加的情况下提高依赖汽车的大都市地区的交通能力。

9月雅思写作真题解析

9月雅思写作真题解析

9月雅思写作真题解析题目:In many countries nowadays, more and more women have full-time jobs as men, so it is logical that they should share the housework tasks equally. To what extent do you agree or disagree?现在越来越多的女性跟男性一样有着全职工作,所以男女双方在家应该共同分担家务。

同意与否?思路拓展Agree:1.男性做家务有其必要性。

随着女性社会地位的提升,越来越多的女性能够在社会上有一席之地,甚至在某些家庭中女性事业强于男性,在这样的情况下,家务就不再应该仅仅是女性的职责;并且有些家务活是在女性能力范围之外的,比如修电器,移动家具等,做这些事情男性更有体力优势。

2.男女双方分担家务也有利于家庭生活的和谐幸福。

一方面,在做家务的过程中加强了夫妻之间的交流,有利于缓和家庭生活中的矛盾;另一方面,父母双方一起做家务也能更好的教育孩子,从小培养孩子的独立意识与责任心。

Disagree:在一些传统观念的家庭中,男女双方平等分担家务可能会对男性造成心理和生理的共同压力。

一方面,现代有很多男性从小是在女性做家务的环境中长大的,所以做家务对他们来说意味着家庭地位的丧失;另一方面,尽管现如今很多女性也有着全职工作,但大部分家庭的主要劳动力还是男性,所以在外面需要辛苦工作的男性回家后继续要做家务对他们来说压力太大了。

必要性necessity of doing sth社会地位提升rising social status被要求做大部分家务be required to do most of the housework 社会竞争力social competitiveness超出女性能力范围be beyond the female capacities修电器fix electronic appliances移动家具move furniture家庭和谐幸福wellbeing and harmony of families良好的家庭关系sound family relationship加强家庭纽带strengthen family bond缓和矛盾ease conflicts培养独立意识cultivate aware of independence承担责任take up duty家庭地位的丧失the loss of family identity主要劳动力breadwinner家务琐事household chores压力过大over burden以上就是9月份雅思写作考试真题讲解,希望对同学们有所帮助。

雅思考试大作文范文高分详解

雅思考试大作文范文高分详解

雅思考试大作文范文高分详解分析:此题为2022.6.19号雅思原题重复,总体来讲比较简单。

此题需将对个人和社会的影响都点到才算回答问题完整。

三种结构可供选择:利大于弊,弊大于利或利弊相当。

换工作和居住地的对个人和社会好处:1friendhip--给一个人一个很好地机会去meetmorefriendmanagement/fle某ibility/adaptability—所有这一切都会conducivetoone’peronaldevelopment3ociety—change—nothingendurebutchange—积极改变是推动社会不断向前发展的动力,而换工作和改变居住地一般是良性改变。

--符合社会发展趋势。

自由流动会在全社会形成帕累托(pareto)最优状态,即达到资源整体效用的最大化。

换工作和居住地对个人和社会的弊端:1preure—如果不能适应新工作和新居住地,压力山大。

2peronaldevelopment—有时对个人发展也有弊端—uncertainty/intability/inecurity/canhardlycoreachievement/worry/ fear/depreion等负面情绪都会阻碍个人发展。

3ociety—对社会的弊端主要是两条:job-hopping可能让一些企业垮掉,从而影响ocialeconomy而更换居住地使得ocialmanagement变得困难。

结论:诚如黑格尔所言:Whatirationaliactualandwhatiactualirational.也许,whatreallymatter不仅仅判断其到底是福是祸,更应该是倡导有序和理性的人才和人口流动。

附录:跳槽的利与弊(一)对企业来说,人才跳槽的弊大于利。

1、跳槽对企业的正面影响:首先,如果跳槽的人属于低素质的员工,那么他的离去对于企业是有利的。

其次,跳槽者的离去、新员工的加入,使企业可以输入新鲜的血液,带来新知识、新观念、新的工作方法和技能等,从而改进企业的工作效率。

英语雅思大作文考题详解

英语雅思大作文考题详解
(2015年4月18日)
分析
教育话题历来被认为是最容易的话题,但 今天这个题目不但新,而且论述起来有一 定的难度。
今年第三次考到教育话题,也是教育话题 里面相对比较难的题目。难点仍然是在扣 题。
这个题稍微有一点抽象,是一个纯粹的说 理的题目。如果你懂得如何灵活运用之前 的一些题目素材,那么很多素材和词汇都 可以转化到这个题目中来。
offer more affordable houses for the needy
the society more become more stable
strike a balance:
depending on specific factors, governments of all levels should have their own approaches and take many factors into consideration: population density/ the severity of the environment problem For example, in some metropolitan cities in China, like Shanghai and Beijing, it is absurd to expect the municipal governments to build an equal number of trees.
例文
With enough housing for locals to live, trees are needed to cool down the cities and towns. Many cities have to heavily reply on air-conditioning to decrease the indoor temperature during summer. With more trees planted, the outside temperature can be adjusted to a lower level. As a benefit, it will be cooler in people's homes.

雅思写作真题范文详解

雅思写作真题范文详解

以下是为⼤家整理的关于雅思考试的⽂章,供⼤家学习参考!话题: Some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local custom and behaviors. Some people disagree, they think the host country should welcome culture different. Discuss the two views, and give your own opinion. 有⼈觉得到其他国家旅游应该效仿当地的风俗习惯。

有些⼈则不同意此观点,他们觉得东道国应该欢迎那些⽂化差异。

讨论此两种观点,并发表⾃⼰的看法。

抛砖: 观点⼀:到国外旅游⾸先应该尊重当地⼈的⽣活习惯以及风俗⽂化。

了解当地⽂化可以使游客迅速融⼊当地⽣活。

⽽且可以减少外来⽂化对本⼟⽂化的冲击。

但不对对当地风俗习惯进⾏评判,或是盲⽬效仿。

观点⼆:东道国应该⼴泛接受外来⽂化,丰富本⼟⽂化艺术。

外来⽂化可以带来⼀些新的思想,有助于加强本⼟的改⾰建设。

外来⽂化可以增强本⼟⼈民对于其他国家和地区的了解,对本国发展有利。

个⼈观点:应该辩证的看待外来⽂化这⼀新事物。

绝不能封闭锁国,也不能⼀味吸收。

适当的接受,取其精华去其糟粕。

范⽂: Nowadays, tourism is developing flourishingly and more and more people travel abroad. When people visit others countries, facing the local customs and behaviors, should imitate it or not, there is a hot debate. Some people hold that we should imitate the local customs and behaviors of the foreign country. First of all, respect is one of the most important factors while we visit others countries. Understanding and following their way of life shows our respect for the local people and thus makes it easier to establish good relationship with them. Secondly, many embarrassments and conflicts are results of differences in custom and traditions between the tourists and the locals, the solution to which would be for the visitors to appreciated and imitate local culture and behaviors. If we don’t experience their customs and behaviors by ourselves, it is hard to understand the local people and culture. By doing things according to their custom, we can better understand them and become more tolerant toward differences, the very quality that enable us to live in harmony. Thirdly, the foreign custom and traditional always seems fascinating to visitors from other parts of the world, the imitating of which makes the travelers life more colorful. On the other side, however, those who oppose the above viewpoint believe that the host country should welcome culture different. In the first place, as a kind of unofficial ambassadors, travelers bring different culture to the destination country, which not only enriches their lives but promote mutual-understanding as well. Besides, imitating is not the best or the only way to understand the local customs and behaviors well. The understanding of the foreign culture also can be through careful observing and intently perceiving. What’s more, for any nation to preserve its unique culture heritages, she has to first embrace cultural difference in order to increase the awareness of its own culture for its citizens. In addition, it is unrealistic to expect visitors coming after to readily pick up the local custom for their own culture and deep-tooted and dearest to them. And we are experiencing a kind of cultural integration, whose advantages far outweigh its disadvantages. People of both sides have their own sound reason to support their opinions. Taking all the above into consideration, to be honest, it is difficult for me to make a decision and I have to hold a balance point of view. It is need not to imitate the foreign customs and behaviors completely, and at the same time, understanding the local culture through this kind of way is not a bad way.。

雅思考试大作文真题范例讲解

雅思考试大作文真题范例讲解

我的托福雅思必过雅思考试大作文真题范例讲解例题如下:The number of people choosing to live by themselves has increased rapidly in recent years. Why is this? And is it a positive or negative development for society?Personal space is always what some people are in pursuit of after suffering from tiredness from work or stress from study, and naturally a growing number of people begin to live alone, and hereby they believe the inner peace can be easily reached.由于这个题目是混合提问,因此在首段笔者只是介绍了背景,并没有点题。

这个写法多少有些冒险,但是只要后文的逻辑给力,也倒无妨。

Primarily, our unprecedentedly noisy living environment is bothering most of people nowadays. There is no gainsaying that our life is surrounded by increasing noise, gradually resulting in huge mental stress to us. Besides, the fast-paced lifestyle makes people live under huge stress and high-tech devices push people into situation where they can be interrupted by all kinds of information moment by moment. Struggling in all those, some people consequently find out a way to escape from all those adversities, a shelter that only belongs to themselves.本段自然是答复以下问题一,也就是述说一下行程这个现象的原因。

2023年9月23日雅思写作试题及解析

2023年9月23日雅思写作试题及解析

2023年9月23日雅思写作试题及解析一、小作文折线图1980年-2010年不同年龄段人群去博物馆一年一次及以上的百分比。

二、大作文Extreme sports such as sky diving and rock climbing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?极限运动比如跳伞和攀岩是很危险的,并且应该被禁止。

你从何种程度上同意或不同意?题目解读:本题讨论极限运动的危险性以及是否应该被禁止。

很多同学在写作中可能会把extreme sports are very dangerous当作是这道题的背景,因此会忽略这部分的论证和回应,导致文章出现了偏题。

实际上,本题应该拆分为两个部分来讨论:1.extreme sports是否危险?2.extreme sports是否应该被禁止?题目问的是agree or disagree,那么回应时可以进行一边倒或者让步转折的方式。

推荐思路:tend to disagree主体段1:极限运动并没有很多人想象中那么危险。

1.参加极限运动人通常都需要接受适当的训练,以尽量减少危险。

实际上,所有运动都涉及一些风险因素,都应始终有明确的规定和安全程序,以减少发生事故的可能性,而极限运动的相关规定和要求只会更多更严格。

例如,任何想尝试跳伞的人都需要在注册俱乐部注册课程,初学者不允许独自跳伞,必须由经验丰富的专业人员陪同。

2. 极限运动中所使用的防护设备和技术也会提高该项目的安全性,比如赛车、登山等各项极限运动中都需要用到非常专业且高质量的装备和安全保护设施。

所有这些都能够最大程度保障极限运动的安全性。

主体段2:极限运动不应该被禁止。

1. 每个人都应该自由决定如何度过闲暇时间,只要在选择极限运动之前能够充分了解风险,政客们不应该阻止个体享受自由运动的权利。

2023年雅思写作真题解析

2023年雅思写作真题解析

2023年雅思写作真题解析2023年的雅思写作真题相比以往有着一些新的变化和特点。

本文将对这些真题进行解析,并提供一些写作技巧,帮助考生更好地应对雅思写作考试。

题目一:媒体对个人隐私的侵犯这道题目要求考生讨论媒体对个人隐私的侵犯,并提出自己的观点。

在回答这道题目时,可以采用议论文的格式进行写作。

首先,可以在引言部分引入这个社会问题的背景和重要性,指出媒体在当今社会的广泛影响力和对个人隐私的潜在威胁。

随后,在正文部分分段叙述不同方面的观点和理由。

例如,人们普遍认为媒体的报道应该遵循道德伦理,尊重个人隐私权;然而,也有人觉得媒体的压力和自由表达权需要被平衡考虑。

在最后一段对各个观点进行总结,并明确表达自己的立场。

题目二:维持健康的重要性这道题目要求考生讨论维持健康的重要性,并提出自己的观点。

在回答这道题目时,可以采用说明文的格式进行写作。

首先,可以在引言部分强调健康的重要性,包括身体健康和心理健康,并列举一些数据或事实来支持这一观点。

随后,在正文部分分段叙述各个方面的原因和方法,如健康饮食、定期锻炼、保持良好的睡眠质量等。

在最后一段对各个措施进行总结,并强调个人在维持健康中的责任和积极性。

题目三:城市化带来的挑战和机遇这道题目要求考生讨论城市化带来的挑战和机遇,并提出自己的观点。

在回答这道题目时,可以采用叙述文的格式进行写作。

首先,可以在引言部分简要描述城市化的发展趋势和其带来的影响,包括人口增长、环境问题和社会变革等。

随后,在正文部分分段叙述城市化的挑战和机遇,如交通拥堵、资源分配和经济发展等。

可以用例子和数据来支持自己的观点。

在最后一段对各个观点进行总结,并明确表达自己对城市化的态度和看法。

通过以上的例子,可以看出,根据不同的题目需求,我们可以采用不同的写作格式。

这不仅使文章具备了逻辑性和连贯性,还能更好地满足读者的阅读需求。

在备考雅思写作时,考生可以根据题目的要求,选择合适的写作格式,并充分发挥自己的想象力和表达能力。

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年月至月雅思写作大作文真题解析————————————————————————————————作者:————————————————————————————————日期:题目类别教育与科技提问方式利弊判断考试题目Some people say that playing computer games is bad for children in every aspect. Others say that playing computer games can have positive effects on the way children develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.分析:教育与科技、教育与媒体可谓是雅思考试的热点,而且这些话题跟广大考生们息息相关。

平时对生活多一些思考,备考期间针对话题词汇和句型多写多练,这些都是理想分数的保障。

文章结构:4段首段:导入话题,表达立场。

主题段1:玩电脑游戏对孩子的各方面有害。

主题段2:玩电脑游戏对孩子的成长有利。

结尾段:总结上文,重申立场。

In recent years, the prevalence of computer games has exerted a significant effect on children’s life. As to whether they affect children negatively, there is an endless debate.Despite the fact that playing computer games is an effective way to relieve pressure, the problems associated with study and health cannot be neglected.Clearly, playing computer games is regarded as a main factor leading to poor academic performance. With the entertaining nature, computer games will easily distract children from their studious pursuits. With the passage of time, children will probably fall behind their peers in academic development. In addition, when children spend too much time playing computer games, they are less likely to participate in physical activities, which is one reason why many children suffer from obesity. As a result, these overweight children’s confidence may be undermined and their health may be negatively influence as well.Despite these disadvantages, the advantages can still not be ignored. First of all, the latest research shows that game-playing helps children to home their communication and interpersonal skills. In many cases, players work together in teams to achieve goals, competing against other players. Therefore, their social skills and teamwork spirit are put to the test. Also, computer games can have positive and therapeutic effects on players. Games provide an opportunity for children to decompress and tune out of strains and stresses of everyday life. Giving their time to rest is critical for emotional and mental well-being.In conclusion, it is not advisable for children to play computer games, for the reasons that it not only has a negative impact on their study, but also makes them lose confidence, although computer games provide a form of relaxation.题目类别政府提问方式A/D考试题目Some people think governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree?分析:题目的类型属于单一观点的讨论。

话题类型属于政府投资类。

这道题题干中提出了影响疾病的两个方面:住房和环境。

这两个方面在正文中都要提到是如何影响人们健康的。

范文主体思路分析:主体段一:环境问题和住房条件确实会影响人们健康,需要政府关注和投资主体段二:政府充当的只是组织协调者,人们自己也需要对自己的健康负责,养成良好的生活方式。

There is no doubt that people’s health will be influenced directly or indirectly by the environment and housing condition. Whether governments should focus more on the environment and estate has triggered a controversy. I feel that individuals should take more responsibility for their well-being other than governments’increasing attention.Indeed, the environmental problems and housing conditions are two main sources for illness and diseases. In many large cities in northern China, haze weather has become a daily killer, especially causing respiratory diseases in winter. Also, populace will easily access to viruses and bacteria if they live in a poor housing condition without any advanced sanitation. Therefore, governments should give more attention and higher investment in these two areas.Compared to individuals, governments have more power to arrange a wide range of social resources to address severe issues; however, it does not mean that addressing this problem totally depends on governments. The state is an organizer or a coordinator in our society instead of a responsibility taker. Although governments can claim people to enhance the awareness of environment protection, make policy to strengthen the environment management and invest estate where they need, public health condition is still a personal problem to some degree. People have the obligation to form and keep a healthy and positive lifestyle, or they will still face the threat of illness and diseases even the environment and housing condition getting better.In conclusion, people also need to take responsibility of their well-being as governments only hold a position as organizer and coordinator. The most feasible solution may be that governments provide a fine setting on one hand and public should pursue a healthy lifestyle for themselves on the other hand.题目类别教育类提问方式观点类考试题目In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a genera education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today’s world?分析:这次考试的题目还是老题,在历史上多次出现。

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