2015-2016中考一模西城写作样篇

2016 中考模拟西城一模写作样篇
1. I’m Li Hua from Class 1. Our class is planning a field trip to Yunmingyuan this Friday. We’d be so glad if you could be able to join us.
There’s going to be a lot of interesting activities. Yuanmingyuan is one of the most renowned historical sites in Beijing, so it would be a great chance for us to get to know the long history and glorious culture by visiting the relics there. We really hope you’d be there to learn with us. Apart from visiting historic relics in there, we’re also planning to enjoy the gorgeous view there. As a famous scenic spot, it is also well-known for its bea utiful scenery. Won’t is be brilliant to stroll around the lakes? It’ll be our great pleasure i f you can come.
If you’re free to come, a good preparation will be necessary. Bring some water and wear a pair of comfortable shoes. I guess we’re going to walk for quite a long time. Also, you may bring a camera if you wish.
You can write back if you need further information. I’d be glad if I can answer your questions.
2. I’m sure you will have a good time if you can join our trip to the city park, which will be held at 9 o’clock next Sunday by our class. Now let me tell you more about that.
Everyone in our class believes that the trip will be full of fun, for there’ll be a lot of interesting activities w e can enjoy in the park. We’re going to have a boat ride in the lake, and you can even go fishing on the boat if you like. Then we will climb the hill in the park together. Gasping at the wonderful view from the top of the hill, I’m sure you will be relaxed and excited. At noon, we‘re going to have a picnic on the grass, where we can share home-made food and chat or laugh together. It’s fun, isn’t it? Therefore, you have to prepare something necessary for the trip if you join us. Food and drinks are the must, and if you like, you can take a camera with you to record the happy moment. I hope you can join us.
3. I’m Li Hua from Class 1. Our class is going to the Summer Palace this Sunday morning. As you are interested in Chinese culture, maybe you would like to visit this grand park with us.
There will be plenty of things to see and to do in the Summer Palace. On arriving there, we will walk along the famous Long Corridor, admiring the paintings and listening to the guide telling stories about them. After that, we are going to climb Wanshou Mountain, which is not very high. At the top of it, we can enjoy a bird’s eye view of the whole park. The most exciting part of the visit will be the boat ride on Kunming Lake. We can appreciate the picturesque scenery and enjoy our meals at the same time. Our pleasant journey will end at 4 in the afternoon.
Sounds attractive, doesn’t it? But I have to remind you that you’d better wear a pair of comfortable sneakers as there must be a lot of walking. By the way, don’t forget your camera!
The Summer Palace never fails to attract visitors. Come and join us!
Making corrections:
1.On Friday’s morning, on the morning of this Saturday
2.Our class will held a field trip on next Sunday.
3.We’ll gather together in front of our school gate around 8 o’clock.
4.It will be really excited to feed elephants and giraffes.
5.We’ll have our lunch in the park nearby, where have a wonderful view.
6.We’ll fishing around the lake for about one and half hours.
7.Our class plan to have a trip to climb the mountain.
8.I’d like to remind you some necessary preparation.
9.Remembering to take some foods so that we can share together.
10.We will have a picnic beside the lake.
11.Here have some advice for you.
12.Wear a comfortable trainers for the field trip.
13.Every groups have the same tasks.
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