2014届高三英语名师点拨专题课件书面表达

主题相符, 即要“扣题”。同时要具有典型性, 能充分说明问
题。在有多个例证的段落中, 还要注意各个例证之间的连贯性。
3. 写作素材
1)常用句式
(1)开头常用句式
①We had a heated discussion about/on. . . ②With the development of. . . ③At present, there is a widespread concern that. . . ④Modern technology has many advantages. ⑤I’m very glad to have the chance to speak here. ⑥It is often said that. . .
(2)考查形式以书信 (电子邮件)、通知、日记、报道等为主, 但
体裁多变, 记叙文、议论文、应用文都会牵涉到, 且题材多贴近
学生生活。 (3)写作内容以提纲的形式分割成独立的信息块 , 所给的提纲既 是独立的要点, 又体现了文章的层次, 是全文写作的思路。
2. 解题关键 (1)认真审题和分析所给的提纲 , 认清题目和提纲之间的关系, 然后确定文章的主题、内容以及文体。 (2)每一个提纲可以作为文章的一个段落层次 , 段落的展开围
(3)结尾常用句式
①Taking all these into account/consideration, we may safely
reach the conclusion that. . . ②So we must take measures to. . .
2)黄金模板(分析原因, 提出建议型) Nowadays, there are more and more XX in some big cities. It is estimated that 用具体数据说明XX现象. Why have there been so many XX? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.
men's 5000-meter race at their sports meets due to students’
poor physical condition. It aroused heated debate about young
students’ health.
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2. 养成一个好的习惯很重要。我非常愿意介绍一种好的学习
习惯。
a: (一般表达)Cultivating a good habit is very important. And
I would like to introduce one kind of good learninghabit. b: (用so. . . that. . . 合并句子)Cultivating a good habit is so important that I would like to introduce one kind of good learning habit.
决这个问题
【炼句】 1. 有一个谚语“好的习惯会带来好的结果。”这句话表明了
习
惯的重要性。 a: (一般表达)There’s a famous saying that good habits lead to good endings. This saying shows the importance of habits. b: ( 用 定 语 从 句 连 接 两 句 话 )As a famous saying goes, goodhabits lead to good endings, which shows the importance ofhabits.
learning habits can help us gain great learning results
including high scores and abundant knowledge.
As middle school students, learning habits form our ways of thinking and attitudes towards the content of our learning. Obviously, a good habit can help us to speed up to reach our destinations. As we can see, cultivating a good habit is so important that I would like to introduce one kind of good
(2)衔接常用句式
①The main reason why. . . is that. . .
②The reasons are as follows.
③Take. . . for example. ④Besides, we should not neglect that. . . ⑤Wonderful as. . . is, however, it has its own disadvantages as well. ⑥As far as I’m concerned, I’m in favor of the first/second view.
The first one is that 原因一. Besides, 原因二. The third
reason is 原因三. To sum up, the main cause of XX is due to 指
出主要原因.
It is high time that something should be done upon it. On the one hand, 解决建议一. On the other hand, 解决建议二. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of XX.
注意: 1. 词数120个左右, 开头语已为你写好; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.
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一家英文报社投稿, 并谈谈你的看法。
注意: 1. 词数: 120个左右(开头已为你写好, 不计入总词数); 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Whether long-distance running should be cancelled Recently, many schools in cities such as Beijing and Wuhan have cancelled the women's 3000-meter race and the
problem by making more effort on concentration practice.
I believe that through constant efforts, good learning habits will lead me to greater success.
gradually we can gain this good learning habit and benefit from it.
To be honest, I also find that I still have some bad learning habits. For example, I can just concentrate on reading for a short time. It does no good to study. So I will conquer this
【成篇】 It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. As a famous saying goes, good habits lead to good endings, which shows the importance of habits. The proverb“An apple a day keeps the doctor away. ”also shows how a healthy everyday habit helps to build up our body. In the same way, good
【高考现场】 (2013· 四川高考) 某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏, 讨论学习习惯问题。请你 结合自身学习实际, 按以下提示, 用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。 1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系;
2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议;
3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进 措施。
【审题】 时态 人称 一般现在时为主, 一般将来时为辅 第三人称和第一人称 学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系 →介绍一种好的 结构 学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议 →自己在学习 习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施 1. 好的学习习惯是获得好的学习效果的前提; 信息 2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯以及养成该习惯的方法; 3. 自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题 , 如何解
书面表达
四川三年考情分析 年 份 2013 2012 2011
体
裁
议论文
介绍学习习 惯 提纲类
应用文
议论文
介绍学习情况, 并 介绍学校课外
向 老 师 提 出 教 学 活动情况及提 建议 提纲类 出建议 提纲类
题
材
写作类型
热点考向 1 提纲作文 【写作策略】 1. 命题特点
(1)命题常以短文提示、要点提示和表格提示三种形式呈现。
learning habit—keeping a learning diary every day. We can
start the habit by writing learning summary and recording
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something impressive and meaningful. Keep it in mind, and
【阅卷专家如是说】
文章要点齐全, 写作层次清楚。全文句式多变, 灵活运用 祈使句、并列句、定语从句等, 长短句结合得准确自然。语言 流畅, 一气呵成。还运用了谚语、cultivate等高级词汇, 体现 了扎实而丰富的语言功底。
【跟踪演练】 最近 , 北京、武汉等多所大学、中学校运动会取消女子 3 000米、男子5 000米长跑项目, 同学们对此各抒己见。请你 以Whether long-distance running should be cancelled为题, 向
绕提纲的中心内容, 不能偏离, 也不能任意增减。
(3)提纲只是对文章的提示和概括 , 不是主题句。这需要根据 提纲的性质, 写出完整的、体现提纲主旨的句子, 使之成为主 题句。然后围绕主题句进行扩展。
(4)收集材料支持主题句。材料可以是事实、例证、亲身经历、 名人名言、谚语警句等。应当注意的是, 所选材料要与文章的