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新标准大学英语3(第二版)(综合教程)参考答案
Unit 1Active reading 1First reading Task 1CFirst reading Task 2BCCDCAReading in detail: Vocabulary exercises Task 11.attendance2.ambitious3.productive4.resistance5.script6.acceptanceReading in detail: Vocabulary exercises Task 21.mortgage2.deck3.surf4.(1)coastal (2) defy5.clamped6.criticized7.hauled8.precedingReading in detail: Vocabulary exercises Task 3 BABBB BABBActive reading 2First reading TaskReading in detail: Vocabulary exercises Task 1 1. (1)elapsed (2) cemetery2. (1)rear (2) crammed3triple4. (1)budding (2) biography5.finite6.dwellers7.invest8.skip9.inevitableReading in detail: Vocabulary exercises Task 2 ABAAA BAAAB BAABB BAGuided writingWriting Task 11-b,2-c,3-aWriting Task 21-c,2-a,3-bUnit testPart I: Vocabulary and StructureSection A1.ingenious2.promotion3.surf4.provisiona5.Chronologically6.ambitious7.Inevitably8.skip9.impromptu10.resistance11.untimely12.defy13.permanently14.attendance15.prologue16.allot17.acceptance18.uncertainty19.productive20.humiliationSection B21.on22.out23.for24.to25.about26.in27.of28.at29.out30.underPart II: Banked Cloze31.promotion32.transition33.sidelines34.lengthy35.rear36.dwellers37.mortgage38.finite39.budding40.coastalPart III: Reading ComprehensionCBDDAUnit 2Active reading 1First reading Task 11.The parents couldn't afford to give the children expensivepresents,so they would buy presents after Christmas at a reduced price.2. Other children's parents told them that their presents were left by Santa Claus and made in the North Pole.In fact,the presentswere made in Japan and left by the parents.3.They celebrated Christmas about a week later,because at that time they could get Christmas trees,wrapping paper,decorations,andpresents more cheaply,or even for free.4.One child went into the desert with the father each time.5.They went to see the stars because the father wanted to"give" eachchild a star or planet.He said that these were their Christmas presens.6.According to the father,the stars didn't belong to anyone,sothey could be claimed by the children.7.Betelgeuse and Rigel are stars,while Venus is a planet,not a star.Venus is smaller than a star and doesn't make its own light.8.The stars last much longer than toys.The father says that whenthe toys are all broken and forgotten,the stars will still exist.First reading Task 2CReading in detail: Vocabulary exercises Task 11.twinkle2.horizon3.deceiveyer5.descendants6.magneticReading in detail: Vocabulary exercises Task 21.marbles2.junkbel4.mythical5.logicalReading in detail: Vocabulary exercises Task 3B A B B A A AActive reading 2First reading Task 11.expected to be good and industrious2.developing a process of acquiring thought,reason and understanding3.regularly beaten and told off by parents and older siblings until they develop social competence,seen as being very naughty.4.trcated with great care and reverence,believed that they arein contact with the spirit world.5.seen as incompetent and irresponsible; playing not working,going to school not labouring,consumption instead of productionpetent and responsible; expected to workpetent and responsible; girls expected to work from a young age,be married and have children at 12 or 13; boys have fewerresponsibilities and get married laterFirst reading Task 2DABDCCReading in detail: Vocabulary exercises Task 11.contact2.harsh3.consumers4.knitting5.colonies6.take exception to7.impose8.perspect ive9.interveneReading in detail: Vocabulary exercises Task 21.continual2.dependent on3.ethnic5.outsiders6.reluctance7.externalReading in detail: Vocabulary exercises Task 3A A AB A B B ALanguage in useTask 11.The star ofthe play is a Hollywood actor.2.I couldn't refuse his offer.3.Columbus claimed America in the name of Queen Isabella.4.He touched the hot dish and burmed his fingers.5.We laughed about all the kids who believed in Santa.6.Our ideas about childhood have undergone changes over the years.7.Our view about children is that they are incompetent and dependent.8.Social anthropologists have questions about the role of childhood in the community.1.irreplaceable2.irrational3.unacceptable4.ineffcient5.inaccurate6.unlikelyTask 3The clauses that usually follow rather than are main clauses,subordinate clauses and-ing form clauses.Note: Nouns can also come after rather than.Task 41.Rather than celebrating Christmas on December 25,they waiteda week.2.Her father offered her the planet Venus,rather than traditional Christmas present.3.Venus is a planet,rather than a star.4.Rather than broken junk,they would always have their stars.5.Rather than work,a child's li fe today is characterized by play.6.Parents treat their children with leniency, rather than reasoning with them.1.core competence2.(1)imposes (2)ban3.tight-knit4.(1)knit (2 )brows5.(1)knit (2) jumper /hat6.energy consumptionTask 6在西方,做父母的非常了解受父母过度保护的孩子的弱点:这些孩子害怕冒险,缺乏决断力,缺少在现实生活中获得成功的手段; 上大学时,许多人无法较好地适应大学生活的严苛,退学是常有的事。
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答案 1.One of the reasons ;too ;to 2.Another reason; think it useless 3.A third reason;are not interested in
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Now in the countryside, there are many children out of school . I think one of the reasons is that their families are too poor to afford their schooling .As a result ,they have to stay at home to work to support their families .Another reason is that many parents think it useless for the girls to study and they would not like them to go to school .
3.还有一个原因就是部分儿童对功课不感 兴趣,不愿上学。 _______is that some children ______their lessons ,and would not like to go to school.
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1.be too poor to afford the schooling/can’t afford the schooling 2.make money/make a living 3. support one’s family 4. think it useless to do sth 5.be not interested in… 6.have the chance to do sth 7.pay attention to/focus one’s attention on 8.play a role in…
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Identification
Look at the sentences from the passage in Reading across cultures. Decide which ways of expressing possibility and certainty they show. 1 Reading books is one of the most popular leisure activities, with approximately 100,000 books a year published. Adverb showing more or less exact information. 2 The weekend newspapers generally contain hundreds of pages... Adverb showing more or less exact information.
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Say what many Chinese people enjoy doing most in their free time. There are many ways in which the Chinese fill their free time. It's undoubtedly true that many Chinese people enjoy physical exercise, such as jogging, taijiquan, table tennis, and swimming.
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Adverbs showing more or less exact information to show how information, especially numbers, can be more or less exact. About 15 years ago, readers of The Independent, a daily national newspaper, were asked by its travel correspondent... Adverbs of frequency to show how often something happens. In many cases newspapers have a word games section, such as a "Words within Words" competition...
GUIDED WRITING事理说明文
说明文事理说明文(二) 事理说明文【考例再现】假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。
请你根据下列要点写封回信。
要点 1. 参加中文学习班;2. 看中文书刊、电视;3. 学唱中文歌曲;4. 交中国朋友。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头语已为你写好。
June 8, 2008Dear Peter,I’m glad t o receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.【范文展示】June 8, 2008Dear Peter,I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions. First, it is importantto ta ke a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try and write me in Chinese next time.Best wishes,Li Hua (2008全国卷Ⅱ)【范文赏析】★文体分析本文为书信格式,主体部分体裁是事理说明文。
英语:三种英语写作教学法
英语:三种英语写作教学法一、成果教学法成果教学法是目前国内占统治地位的一种英语教学法,国内大多数英语写作教材也是按这种教学法设计的。
虽然成果教学法在具体实施中还存在着多样性,但总体来讲,这种教学法注重语言知识的运用,强调文章中要使用适当的词汇、句法和衔接手段(Pincas,1982)。
对于段落来讲,强调主题句、段落的组织与结构,即通过所谓的模式来展开段落,常见的模式有:事情发展过程、对比与比较、因果关系、分类、下定义等。
成果教学法一般把写作分为四个环节。
1.熟悉范文(familiarization)。
在这个阶段,教师选取一篇范文进行讲解,分析其修辞选择模式和结构模式,并介绍修辞特点和语言特点。
2.控制性练习(controlled writing)。
在这个阶段,教师就范文中所体现的相关常见的句式要求学生进行替换练习,并在教师的指导下渐渐过渡到段落写作。
3.指导性练习(guided writing)。
在这个阶段,学生模仿范文,使用经过训练的句式尝试写出相似类型的文章。
4.自由写作(free writing)。
在这个阶段,学生可以自由发挥,使得写作技能成为自身技能的一部分,并用于现实写作中。
比如说,在写作课开始时,教师可以先分析一篇有关描写房屋的文章(这样的范文通常为了教学需要进行过适当的修改,以便使得结构和语言特征更为明显),并突出描写房屋常见的表达法,如介词、房屋各部分的名称、各类房屋的名称以及常用句型等,然后要求学生进行替换练习,造出一些相关的简单句。
接着教师可以出示一张房屋的图片,要求学生模仿范文写出一篇描写房屋的段落或短文,教师进行仔细批改后,帮助学生找出其语言和结构上的问题,并督促改正。
之后可以要求学生自由发挥,描述自己家的房屋。
成果教学法以行为主义理论为依据,认为教学过程是一个教师提供刺激,学生做出反应,再进行强化的过程。
鼓励对输入信息(input)的模仿和再创造,并且由教师支配并控制着整个教学过程,学生没有太多自由发挥的空间,最后写出的作文是评价学习成果的惟一依据。
历届上海高考英语作文范文[1]
2013高考上海卷英语作文谈论II. Guided WritingDirections: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展,现就展出场所(博物馆仍是社区图书室)搜集民众建议,假定你是王敏,给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。
你的信一定知足以下要求:1.简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;2.说明你的原由(从便利性,专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对照)Dear Sir/ Madam,I ’ve just learned that Shanghai Museum is to hold a famous painting exhibition and you ’ re collectingpublic suggestions about which location to hold it . I’ m writing this letter to share with you my opinions. As far as I’m concerned, it is more reasonableto hold the painting exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.On the one hand, it is more convenient for people to reach Shanghai Museum, located in the center of the city. Visitors can go there by subway and bus and so on. What’smore, Shanghai Museum is much more extensive than community libraries, providing visitors with a more comfortable environment to appreciate the famous paintings.On the other hand, Shanghai Museum, a well-known and distinguished museumat home and abroad, is more professional in holding painting exhibitions. What ’s of great significance is that not only does it provide advanced facilities and high-tech monitors but also offers professional security guards to protect those famouspaintings from being damaged or stolen in the process of exhibition.Consequently, I strongly propose that the painting exhibition is to be held inthe Shanghai Museum.Yours,Wang Min 赏析:今年上海市的高考英语作文话题切近学生的生活实质,用书信的载体表现,让考生对画展感觉到有话能够说,可是想要达到A 类作文,不单需要有扎实语言功底,还需要对博物馆和社区图书室及画展等生活类的语言应用熟练,更需要学生从专业一点的角度,深入剖析其选择的原由,这个层面好多学生很难用专业的语言区描绘,学平生常学习时间紧张,没有时间到社会上参加一些社会活动,并且在紧张的时间里,更别提用一些复杂的语言构造区展现自己的原由,因此学生写到高分不是很简单,大多数学生获取 15/16 分是没有问题的。
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GUIDED WRITING文体介绍电子邮件(electronic mail,常缩略为E-mail,e-mail或e-mail),是一种不用纸张的电子信函,通过网络发送,是一种非常便利的交流方式。
格式特点通常,电子邮件也包括一般信件的几个组成部分:信头、正文和结尾。
但它是一种非正式的文体,因此称呼前常常不用Dear,对同辈朋友,可以直呼其名,如:Mike;但对长辈最好使用头衔和姓,如:Mr. Smith。
一般来说,电子邮件通常由开头称呼语、正文、结尾敬语及署名构成,但有时只有正文而把称呼语、结尾敬语及署名都省略掉。
文字特点简洁明了。
为了便于阅读,E-mail通常比较简短,如果内容很多,常常以附件的形式发出。
语言精练,信尾客套话也很简单。
常用表达1. Now, let me introduce you something about ...2. I’m glad to have a chance to be your pen friend.3. I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about ...4. I learned from the newspaper that your company wanted to hire ... I want to get this job very much.5. If you agree with me, please write a letter to me or phone me. I live at ... My telephone number / My address / My Email address is...6. Wish you a pleasant journey.7. I hope you come and see for yourself one day.8. I expect to hear from you soon.活学活用假如你是李华,请在Email中向你的朋友Tom (Tom@)讲述你的一次旅游经历。
新标准大学英语,综合教程3,第二版Guided Writingppt课件
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Write a short essay to describe a rite of passage in China.
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2017-2020上海春考秋考英语真题作文 含答案
2017 春考英语作文VI. Guided WritingDirections: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假设你是明启中学的学生王磊,你的好友李宏今年暑假将赴英国参加为期两个月的海外交流活动。
如果选择主办方安排的住宿,他需要额外支付较高的费用。
但他也可以通过为当地社区养老院提供每月三十小时的义工服务,获得在养老院免费住宿的机会,李宏通过邮件向你征求意见。
写一封回信,内容须包括:1.你对此事的明确态度;2.你的理由。
Writing 1:Dear LiHong,Hearing that you have access to participate in an overseas communication activity in Britain which will last two months, I'm now writing to extend a helping hand, hoping that my suggestions that you should choose working as a volunteer thirty hours every month for the local community nursing home to gain an opportunity to stay in it for free may be beneficial to you to some extent.There are three main reasons accounting for my proposal. First and foremost, only by working as a volunteer can you attain a free stay. Apparently, in contrast with the accommodation arranged by the host, you can save a substantial amount of money. In addition, staying at a community nursing home, not only can you be exposed more to real life in society and enhance your social experiences, thus helping you to get more mature, but your arrival will add colors to the atmosphere and reduce the burdens there as well. Last but not least, there is no denying that the interaction with the elderly can polish up your socializing skills as well as raise your awareness to cooperate with strangers, which will contribute to your comprehensive and coordinated development. As an old saying goes, 'We can gain both things at the same time.' So why not choose it?I genuinely hope that you will take my suggestions into consideration. Best wishes that you will have a good time there. It is a golden chance that you will gain in summer vacation. In short, Enjoy yourself.Yours sincerely,WangLeiWriting 2:Dear Li Hong,Ifs good news to learn that you are going to participate in the 2-month overseas exchange program in Britain. And I have also learnt you are hesitating over the choice of accommodation between the two, one arranged by the organizer, for which you need to pay extra high cost and one provided by the nursing home free of charge as long as you do the volunteer job for 30 hours every month there.From my perspective, it will be of great benefit to you if you choose the latter and my reasons are as follows. The first that immediately comes to my mind is that you can have a better understanding of Britain. By doing the voluntary work, you have direct contact with the old people there, thus exposed more to local culture and people, let alone improving your spoken English. Moreover, it is a golden chance for you to be in contact with society to accumulate social experience, helping you get more mature and experienced in the future campus and work life. Of course, it is self-evident that you can save a substantial amount of money, relieving the burden of your parents.My dear fellow, really hope that you will take my suggestions into account and meantime enjoy your stay there. Do share your photos and keep me posted about your life there!2017 上海秋考英语作文VI. Guided Writing:Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你是明启中学的李华,你校学生会即将组织一次徒步活动,己在校园网发布方案,征求师生的修改意见。
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When taking notes from any source: Take notes only on those issues which are
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Types of text (a) essay (b) narrative (c) opinion
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2013高考英语上海卷作文范文及详细解析
2013高考英语上海卷作文范文及详细解析II. Guided WritingDirections: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展,现就展出场所(博物馆还是社区图书馆)征集公众意见,假设你是王敏,给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。
你的信必须满足以下要求:1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;2. 说明你的理由(从便利性,专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比)To whom it may concern:I’ve learned that an art exhibition is to be held and that you’re collecting suggestions on its location. I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions.In my opinion, it is more advisable to hold the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.On one hand, it is more convenient for people to get to Shanghai Museum which is located in the center of the city. And the museum is much more spacious than community libraries, which provides visitors with a more comfortable environment for appreciating art.On the other hand, as a well-known museum, Shanghai Museum is more professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions. Its professional security guards and advanced facilities can betterprotect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen. Therefore, I suggest the exhibition be held in the museum.Wang Min解析:总评:本次高考题目以书信的方式考查观点论述的表达,属于常见题型。
指导性作文英语作文
指导性作文英语作文Guided Writing: How to be a Successful Student。
Being a successful student is the goal of every student. However, not everyone knows how to achieve this goal. Inthis article, I will give you some tips on how to be a successful student.Firstly, you need to set clear goals for yourself. You should know what you want to achieve and what you need todo to achieve it. Setting clear goals will help you stay focused and motivated.Secondly, you should develop good study habits. This includes creating a study schedule, taking good notes, and reviewing your notes regularly. By developing good study habits, you will be able to learn more efficiently and effectively.Thirdly, you should participate in class. This meansactively listening to the teacher, asking questions, and contributing to class discussions. By participating in class, you will be able to learn more and understand the material better.Fourthly, you should manage your time wisely. This means prioritizing your tasks and making sure you have enough time to complete them. Time management is crucialfor success in school and in life.Fifthly, you should seek help when you need it. This means asking your teacher or classmates for help when you don't understand something. Don't be afraid to ask for help, as it is a sign of strength, not weakness.Sixthly, you should take care of your health. This means getting enough sleep, eating healthy foods, and exercising regularly. Your physical and mental health are important for your academic success.In conclusion, being a successful student requires hard work, dedication, and a willingness to learn. By settingclear goals, developing good study habits, participating in class, managing your time wisely, seeking help when you need it, and taking care of your health, you can achieve academic success and reach your full potential.。
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Using time adverbials SemiSemi-controlled practice Sample Assignment
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Using time adverbials
Time adverbials and their functions in narrative
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Structure your personal experience about a meeting with a stranger. Organize your idea this way.
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Time adverbials and their functions
Underline the time adverbials used in the final paragraph of Reading across culture and then identify their functions.
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Guided Writing:1.你们学校下个月要举办一个慈善义卖会。
你准备向你们的年级组长提交一份设置个人义卖摊位的计划。
要求:说明你准备开设什么摊位,卖什么或开展什么活动。
说明你准备如何应付一些潜在的问题或麻烦。
说明你准备如何开展宣传,以便让更多的人知道你的摊位。
说明你准备如何收费,以及最后的收入准备用作何处。
(去年期末考试作文题)Sample answerI wish to submit a plan for the charity fair next month. I would like to set up a coconut stall.My friend Sarah will help me run the stall. Customers will be given three tennis balls, and will throw these at coconuts on stands five meters away. If they knock a coconut down, they will get a prize.We will need to prepare some prizes, and buy some coconuts and tennis balls. We will make the coconut stands ourselves. We plan to charge five yuan for each throw. We think we can make at least one thousand yuan, but we hope to make a lot more.If there is bad weather, we will move our coconut stall inside the school hall. If we have difficult customers, we will let them have one extra tennis ball for free. We will also make posters to advertise our stall, and put them up around our school. If no one comes to our stall at first, Sarah will encourage the crowd using a loudspeaker.All proceeds from our stall will go to the Red Cross. We chose the Red Cross because of all the good work it did to help the people suffering from the effects of the tsunami.Thank you for considering our submission.2.Next week, your class will organize an arts camp for the children in an orphanage. You mustsubmit a plan to your head teacher and your plan must outline the activities at the camp.(练习册p9)Sample writingI wish to submit a plan for the arts camp next week. The arts camp will give the children atthe orphanage the chance to use their talents and have fun at the same time.The activities will include sketching and painting, different kinds of crafts, and dancing.Each activity will have a director and an assistant in charge of the activity, stimulating the children‟s interests and helping them enjoy themselves at the camp.The children will be divided into groups to take turns participating in the activities.Finally, our camp will end with a grand art exhibition and performance, with everyone participating.In order to carry out the activities smoothly, we will select6 the directors and assistants for each activity based on their special talents. We will also need to prepare some prizes. Every child will get a prize for their efforts at the camp.3.The local government should pay women a salary if they choose to stay at home to look aftertheir houses and raise their children.Write a debate speech about the above proposition.Sample writing:I am speaking against this proposition because I think it is dangerous. I wish to give three reasons why it is dangerous and harmful to society. First, it would attract too many women away from real jobs. Second, we do not need this suggestion because families have always managed to do well in the past. Third, it would be extremely expensive for governments and would endanger our prosperity.My first point is that thousands of women would leave their present jobs if the local government paid them a salary for staying at home. There would be a labour shortage. Then we would need to have more people from other places to fill these jobs. As a result, the population would increase and this would bring big problems. Also, this suggestion would encourage more women to give up their careers. It would not help women develop themselves and use all of their abilities. Instead of helping women, it would keep them in their homes.Second, although I agree that it is difficult for women to bring up a family and have a career, most women manage to do it. They can also get help from other family members, especially grandparents. Even husbands can help sometimes! So, I feel no need to change the present system. Finally, I estimate that about half a million women would accept this scheme if it were introduced. All of the local government‟s money comes from the taxpayers. How can we suddenly afford to pay half a million new salaries? The local government would need to raise taxes a lot. Then we would all suffer, and businesses would need to raise taxes a lot. Then we would all suffer, and businesses would not come to our city.Therefore, I feel this suggestion would harm some women. It is unnecessary and would damage our economy. I ask you to vote against the proposition.4.Single-sex schools are better than co-educational schools.(练习册p18)Write a speech to oppose the motion.Sample writingChairperson and fellow studentsI am speaking against this motion.My first point is that life in co-educational schools is more like the real world. In the real world there are both males and females. If students are kept in a same-sex environment, when they leave school they will not know how to deal with the opposite sex.Second, boys and girls can often learn from each other. Faced with a task , girls and boys usually have different approaches. Neither of these approaches is right; neither is wrong. Both can be productive. Boy-girl pairs can be one way of getting boys and girls to learn from each other.Finally, education has an important task – preparing students for life as adults. When you are older you need to communicate with people of the opposite sex. You won‟t be able to gain thatskill unless you were brought up around people of the opposite sex.For these reasons, I believe students can benefit more form studying I co-educational schools than in single-sex schools. I ask you to vote against this motion. Thank you.5.Write about any celebration you have attended.(练习册p37)Sample writing:Last Saturday, I attended my cousin Jane‟s wedding ceremony. The wedding was held in Hilton Hotel. When we arrived the bride and the groom were standing outside the banquet hall, receiving guests. The couple looked very happy.We signed our names in a red book, and took a photo with the couple. Then, we were led to our table.The banquet hall was beautifully decorated. All the tables were covered with pink table cloths and had a bunch of red roses and a candle. After we were seated, the hostess announced the start of the ceremony. Then came the music ‟Here comes the bride‟. Jane and her father appeared arm in arm. She was smiling beautifully. They walked down the red carpet to the stage, where the groom was waiting. It was very romantic.During the ceremony, we ate a wonderful dinner while the couple proposed a toast at every table.6.请你以学生会的名义写一份广告,告知所有学生学生会现在成立了一个慈善基金小组,定期专门组织各类慈善活动,筹集资金,捐赠给有关机构,或去孤老院等地方进行爱心活动,主要目的是帮助他人、奉献社会。
英语语法-“GUIDED WRITING
GUIDED WRITING人类能否在月球上生存?——解决问题类作文的写作指导文体介绍解决问题类作文的写作首先是提出问题,然后确定问题产生的原因、想出解决问题的办法。
在分析问题的过程中要多方论证,支持你的结论。
注意要语言客观,逻辑严谨,过渡自然。
问题分析人类能否在月球上生存需考虑以下因素:1. 地球上人类生存的条件:1)有适合人类生存的氧气和水;2)有大气层的保护,温度适宜;3)宇宙射线和陨石较少。
2. 月球上的生存环境:1)没有氧气、水和大气层;2)引力是地球的1/6,紫外线过于强烈;3)昼夜温差大。
3. 需要解决的问题:1)发明大容量、高速度的航天器,才能实现月球移民和能源补给;2)建造人类生存环境,解决引力、氧气、水、温差等问题;3)需要大量资金,进行长期的建设。
4. 结论:综上所述,人类在月球上生存目前看来还做不到。
但月球是人类去过的唯一外星球,而且是距离地球最近的星球,所以月球是最佳的开发选择。
常用词汇范文欣赏Can we live on the moon?For centuries, humans have been wondering whether we can live on the moon.Firstly, we must be aware of what is fundamental to the development of life. The earth provides necessary oxygen and water for human beings. Protected by the atmosphere, people are living in stable temperatures and rarely influenced by cosmic rays and aerolites.However, there is no oxygen, water and atmosphere on the moon. In that case, life on the moon will be exposed to strong ultraviolet radiation and endure the sharp change of temperature between day and night. And the gravity on the moon is just one sixth of that on the earth. Just image: Who can live jumping up and down rather than walking steadily on the ground?To solve these problems, first of all, we should build some space vehicle large and fast enough to make it possible to immigrate to the moon and maintain the supply from the earth. And of course, we should create some sort of living environment similar to the earth. But, the two of the projects will surely take a long time at great expense.To sum up, it seems still a dream for humans to live on the moon. However, the moon, as the nearest and first planet we step onto outside the earth, is the best choice to explore in the universe.。
高二英语教师用书:UnitSectionⅤGuidedWriting含解析
建议信错误!建议信大多要求我们根据所给的材料给出有针对性的解决办法或者提出合理建议.一、基本结构建议信一般采取“三段式结构”。
首段:表明写作意图,陈述事由,简单介绍自己的观点,注意语气.主体段落:根据具体情况提出有针对性的建议或忠告.结尾段:对提出的建议进行总结,要注意表达方式,使对方容易接受。
二、注意事项1.注意结构.通常以“三段式"结构行文。
2.客观地提出建议,针对对方的问题,给出你的观点。
3.语言要委婉、精炼,同时要简洁,表达清楚。
[亮点句式]1.建议信首段常用句式I am writing to express my views about/concerning...You have asked me for my advice on...,and I will try to make some suggestions.It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on...2.建议信中段常用句式I would like to suggest/recommend that...In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following actions.I think it would be more beneficial if you could...As to...I suggest that you should...As far as I am concerned.../In my opinion...For one thing...for another...To begin with...Besides...Last but not least...3.建议信尾段常用句式In the end,I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.Should you have any more problems,please feel free to contact me at any time.错误!假定你是李华,你的朋友张柯发了一封e。
高二英语教师用书:Unit3SectionⅤGuidedWriting
想象性作文错误!本单元的写作项目属于新课标中说明文或记叙文中的“想象性”作文。
这类题目要求学生在头脑中创造出从未接触过的甚至根本不存在的新的形象.想象性写作允许自由想象、自主发挥的空间较大,因此需要灵活的思维能力和丰富的想象能力.要写好此类文章,应注意以下几点:1.首先要确定写作主题确定主题,明确写作中心,是写好文章的前提,想象性写作也不例外。
因为想象虽然可以海阔天空,但总要围绕一个中心进行,这个中心就是主题。
2.想象美好,立意深刻想象性作文必须要有一个“美好”的中心思想.如果只是瞎编一个热闹离奇的故事,就失去了想象的意义。
3.构思要巧妙,想象要合理构思和想象是写好此类文章的关键,既要合乎逻辑,又要匠心独运,或启迪思维,或引人入胜。
4.列出写作提纲,合理安排顺序通过合理想象列出写作素材,然后筛选确定;最后再根据写作对象的特点合理安排顺序。
5.前后一致,自圆其说不管允许想象的空间有多大,都要做到符合逻辑,顺理成章,这一点对于写好此类文章尤其重要。
6.此类文章大多采用三段式结构首先可以简要、巧妙地引出文章的话题,引起读者的阅读兴趣。
其次为文章主体,要按照一定顺序展开想象,说明想象的主体内容。
在最后一部分中,可以再进行总结或对前景进行期待。
错误!开篇常用:1.Sometimes I dream about life in the future.2.I imagine life in the future from time to time。
3.It is fascinating to imagine life in the future.4.I am curious about our future life.表达可能性常用:1.There is a possibility that human beings will。
..2.It is likely that.。
.3.Maybe in the future,we can。
GUIDED WRITING
GUIDED WRITING关注留守儿童,构建和谐社会——谈建议信写作文体介绍如何用英文写建议信是本单元的写作辅导内容。
建议信是书信的一种形式,属于应用文文体。
建议信是对收信人就某一问题提出看法、建议或忠告。
信中应明确写信的目的、建议的内容、提出建议的理由以及采纳建议的益处。
最后礼貌地总结或期盼回复,或者表达希望采纳建议的愿望。
其语言要具有合理性和说服力。
任务聚焦现在很多地方,出现了“留守儿童”一族(尤其在中国的农村地区,父母外出打工后,孩子被留在了家中,由祖父母照顾或者是独自生活)。
假设你叫李华,是一名高二年级的学生,请你就留守儿童所面临的问题,以建议信的形式,发一张帖子到某英文网站的论坛上,建议人们帮助、关爱他们。
激活大脑1. 表明写作目的。
首先要在信件的开头简要介绍自己并表明你写这封建议信的目的:希望全社会的人都来关注和帮助留守儿童。
2. 陈述具体内容。
包含三部分内容:其一,提出建议的理由。
因为留守儿童面临着许多问题,如:长期缺乏父母的关爱,缺少与父母的沟通,容易导致厌学、逃学和辍学,有的甚至走上犯罪的道路;其二,建议的内容——如何帮助这些留守儿童。
如:多与他们交流,尽力解决他们的实际问题,在生活上多照顾他们,在学习上多鼓励和帮助他们;其三,采纳建议的益处,也就是关注和帮助他们的意义。
如,有利于他们的健康成长,同时也是构建和谐社会的要求。
3. 呼吁大家采纳。
关爱留守儿童是大家的共同责任,希望大家多关爱身边的留守儿童,让他们象其他的小朋友那样快乐地成长。
J 参考句型:I would like to suggest that...I’m writing to express my views concerning...I will highly appreciate your consideration of my proposal.I believe you will take my advice into account.I hope you will find these proposals / suggestions / recommendations practical / useful / helpful.I will be ready for further discussing this matter in detail.I am looking forward to your reply.范文参考Dear everybody,I’m a Senior Two student. Having learnt about the difficulties and problems of left-behind children (especially in rural China, some children are left behind by their parents and live with their grandparents or live alone), I can’t help writing this letter. I would like to suggest that everyone should help left-behind children.Left-behind children face many problems. They lack the love from their parents. Worse still, they seldom communicate with their parents. As a result, they tend to get tired of their studies, play hooky or drop out of school. Worst of all, some even commit crimes. So, we should try our best to help solve their problems. We should communicate with them more often, help them work out the difficulties of their daily life and help them with their lessons with more encouragement. And, helping left-behind children is of great significance. We can offer them a favourable environment where they can grow healthily. In addition, it’s one of the requirements to build a harmonious society.All in all, I think helping left-behind children is every citizen’s responsibility and I hope everybody will take action and help such childrenaround you. I will highly appreciate your consideration of my proposal.Yours sincerely,Li Hua。
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GUIDED WRITING
如何描写最喜欢的一项运动
写作技巧
1. 明确要求。
向别人描述你最喜欢的一项运动,要写出你对这项运动的热爱,列举令人信服的理由,以此证明你喜欢这项运动是正确的、有价值的。
2. 确定时态。
通常情况下,应使用一般现在时,在介绍你如何喜欢上这项运动时,用一般过去时。
3. 拟定结构。
文章一般分为三部分。
第一部分:开门见山,指出你最喜欢的一项运动是什么,并简单介绍这项运动。
第二部分:描述你喜欢上这一运动的过程,并介绍你参加这项运动的基本情况。
第三部分:列举你喜欢这项运动的理由。
常用句型
1. There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy, such as ... However, my favorite sport is...
2. Sports make us healthy, happy and efficient. So I pay special attention to games, especially...
3. I am interested in many sports, such as ... But I always prefer ... and I enjoy it for many years.
4. ... is a very good sport, and I like it most.
5. When I was ... I started to...
6. I watch ... games as much as I can.
7. I play ... three times a week. Most often I play it in my school.
8. ... is a very good kind of sport, and that is because...
9. ... is considered an all-around sport which can exercise all parts of our body.
10. ... is quite a good sport in helping me improve my health.
11. Also it keeps me fit.
12. ... is very cheap and it is a good sport for our health.
13. The key reason I prefer it is that...
14. Therefore, ... is a very good sport. I think, you can play ..., can’t you?
15. ... has given me the most wonderful time in my life. Thus, it is my favorite sport.
黄金模板
There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy, such as ______. However, my favorite sport is ______, which requires ______.
When I was ______, I started to play ______. At that time, ______. Now, ______.
______ is an ideal game for us because ______. Besides, ______. In addition, ______. ______ has given me the most wonderful time in my life. Thus, it is my favorite sport.
实战演练
请根据下表中的内容,以“My favorite sport”为题,写一篇120词左右的英语短文,可适当增加细节。
范文欣赏
My favorite sport
There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy. However, my favorite sport is playing table tennis, which requires great strength in the arms and legs as well as a great deal of concentration.
When I was in Grade 4, I started to play table tennis. At that time, I fell in love with this sport deeply. Now, I play table tennis with my classmates almost every day.
Table tennis is an ideal game for us because it brings the whole body into action. It strengthens our muscles, expands our lungs, and promotes the circulation of the blood. Besides, it is very amusing and does not cost us much money. In addition, it is an indoor game which can be played even on rainy days. Playing table tennis makes me healthy, happy and efficient. Thus, it is my favorite sport.。