作文范文之2016专四作文

2016专四作文
【篇一：2016年专四作文辅导】
新考纲要求及题型调整说明《关于英语专业四级考试（tem4）题型
调整说明》（2015 年版）的测试要求为：能在45 分钟内根据所给
的作文题目、图表或阅读材料等，写一篇200 个单词左右的短文。

能做到内容相关、充实、语言通顺、用词恰当、表达得体。

本部分
为命题作文，文章体裁主要属于说明文、言论文或记叙文的范围，
以测试学生的基本书面表达能力。

材料以两种形式出现，一类给出
关于某一话题的两篇文字材料、观点相反，要求在阅读材料的基础
上发表自己对该话题的观点，材料总长度为300 词左右。

第二类给
出一至两份图表材料和一份相关介绍的文字材料，要求对图表进行
描述并进行合理分析，文字材料为150 左右。

评分标准分项评分：
内容阐述能力、篇章组织能力、语言运用能力。

内容阐述能力：对
所给材料进行准确的缩写和充分讨论。

篇章组织能力：考查学生对
缩写和讨论部分的组织安排，要求顺序合理、过渡自然、段落划分
合理等。

语言运用能力：考查词汇、语法和丰富和准确性，还包括
书写规范如拼写准确性、标点运用、卷面整洁等。

题型分析1.两篇文字材料的写作所提供两篇文字材料都是关于同一
话题，但观点对立。

因此，首先要对所给材料正反两方的观点进行
综述（summary），考查学生对观点中的重要信息的辨别、概括和
转述的能力，其次要求学生要提出自己的观点，考查论辩能力——
提供同意或反对的合理论据和逻辑推理能力——说服类的语言表达
能力。

注意事项：第一，概括错误。

新的四级写作要求学生对所提
供的材料进行概括，通常在概括能力方面，学生容易将材料原文的
主要信息未加以转述、原词照搬到自己的作文中，或者在概括过程
中未能对观点的主要信息进行归纳总结，将不重要的信息包括过来。

第二，内容不充实。

评分标准的要求是“内容相关、叙述清楚、前后
一致” ，在论述过程中由于思路不清或时间安排不合理等原因，造
成内容空洞或论据不充分。

例如：should private car owners be taxed for pollution? ......truly, the private cars have caused many problems. according to a recent research, many emissions among all the greenhouse gases are from the private cars. the painful experiences in the past have taught us to live in harmony with nature and manage to avoid any
incidents that may have an adverse effect on the environment.
besides, the contaminants sent by the cars are very harmful to our health. the pollutants will have a persistent impact on
human body and are likely to cause a number of diseases. above all, in recent years the number of private cars is growing at an unprecedented rate....... 修正后： ......to start with, the emission from cars contributes to the environment pollution. according to the study, the total gas emission of the private cars amounts to 30~60% among all the greenhouse gases, which leads to the deterioration of the whole ecosystem, such as climate change, acid rain and greenhouse effect. so it is these private car owners who should pay for the pollution, and it’ll be fair to use the tax revenue levied on their cars to treat air pollution. in addition, tax for pollution will be a good way to solve traffic jams which are becoming more and more severe due to the soaring number of private cars. with oil price becoming higher and higher, additional tax for pollution is surely a burden. then those who want to buy cars will consider more when deciding to buy a private car. consequently, the increasing rate of the number of the private cars and then the traffic jam can be controlled....... 第三，语态、时态等错误较多、
衔接不自然、句子质量不高。

这些问题都是由于语言基本功不扎实
引起的。

例如：“why are you always lack of money? ” “as far i know...we use money buy food...”
2003 2004 2005 2006 2007 2008 2009 2010 2011 2012 2013 2014 2015the importance of keeping a good mood will phones kill letter writing? my idea of a university arts festival saving money or spending tomorrow ’s money is it wise to make friends online? the benefits of volunteering will tourism bring harm to the environment? should college students hire cleaners? should private car owners be taxed for pollution?
the dragon boat festival the advantages of being careful with
money in daily life should english majors study maths? how i deal with stress?情绪手机校园生活观念网络交友志愿者社会话
题校园生活社会话题（环保）传统文化校园生活校园生活校园生
活从这16 年考题来看，标黑色的写作立场已经事先确定，考生无需
在作立场判断，这类不妨称之为“说明文” ；标红色的则需要考生在
写作的第一段表明立场，方便下文就这一立场进行论证，这类可以
称为“议论文” 。

样题解析（两篇文字材料的写作）：part iv
writing there is recently a debate about the influence of technology on our life. does it make our life easier or more difficult? the following are the supporters’ and opponents’ opinions. read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should first summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and give your view on the issue. mark will be awarded for content relevance,
content sufficiency, organization and language quality. failure
to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. yes technology and digital media can be a great help to no technology promises to make ourreaching out to other people and spreading your message to a lives easier, freeing up time for leisure very large platform. “social media removes all distances: pursuits. but the rapid pace ofgeographic, social, hierarchical. you can reach anyone, at any technological innovation and the split time, and communicate in real time. thus, a permanent link of second processing capabilities ofcommunication has been created,” said j ulien maldonate, a computers that can work virtually senior manager at deloitte. nonstop have made all of us feel rushed.
amina belghiti, partnerships manager at facebook, we have adopted the relentless pace of describes how technology has taken the universal the very machines that were supposedcommunication method of storytelling and transformed it, in a to simplify our lives, with the result way that now more stories can reach more people through that, whether at work or play, people do social media platforms than ever before. she recommends that not feel like their lives have changed for people find their digital media voice, tell sharable stories, and the better. drive engagement. the indispensability of technology it is supposed that technology helps us communicate easier and quicker. just as julien maldonate points out, digital media makes people from different places, different social backgrounds and classes communicate in the same media platform. and messages or stories can reach more readers or audiences by mass media. however, some people claim that when technology is running more and more rapidly, it quickens our life pace and has not bettered our lives. for example, secretaries have to reply to instant messages immediately when their blackberry beeps at mid-night; phone
users always fix their eyes on their cell phones and are ready to answer any ring calls. in fact, life does not become easy and relaxing, instead it becomes much busier and quicker.
although technology has made our lives more complex, it is an integral part in our lives. machines in factories and farms have freed us from manual works. household appliances, such as washing machines, vacuum cleaners and microwave ovens, have made our housework much easier than ever before. i
believe most people are not willing to give up using cellphones, the internet or other information technologies, because they do bring about much convenience on our daily life. in addition,, technology plays an increasingly important role in our society. owing to the application of technology, it has brought advancements in agriculture, industry, engineering,
architecture, and so on. advancements in technology have led to the evolution of newer and faster modes of transportation and communication. the development of technology has boosted research in fields ranging from genetics to
extraterrestrial space. so, technology has touched every aspect of life, making it easier, better and different. obviously technology does make our lives more complex. however, without technology we may be living in a primitive society
where most people have to live a monotonous life. (301 words)练习一：
【篇二：2016专四作文模板及句型】
2016专四作文模板及句型 exposition 型
supporting details
．表示原因 （第一段引起下文或第二段理由段引出理由）
1）the reasons for this are as follows ．
2）the reason for this is obvious ．
3)．a number of factors are accountable for this situation.
4) a number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem).
5). the answer to this problem involves many factors.
6). the phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that...
7). the factors that contribute to this situation include...
8). the change in rgely results from the fact that...
9). we may blame ...,but the real causes are...
10). part of the explanations for it is that ...
11). one of the most common factors (causes ) is that ...
12). another contributing factor (cause ) is ...
13). perhaps the primary factor is that …
14). but the fundamental cause is that ...
2．表示好处（第一段引起下文或第二段理由段引出好处）
1）it has the following advantages．
．
2）it does us a lot of good
3）it benefits us quite a lot．
4）it is beneficial to us．
．
5）it is of great benefit to us
3．表示坏处
1）it has more disadvantages than advantages．
2）it does us much harm．
3）it is harmful to us．
4．表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能（结尾段）
1）it is important（necessary，difficult，convenient，possible）
【篇三：2016年专四备考详细计划】
2016年专四备考详细计划
--- 2016年新题型专四备考时间表
专四备考应提早动手，充裕的复习时间总会带来不错的分数。

以下为2016年专四备考详细计划，希望考生们参考借鉴认真复习。

根据惯例及预测，16年改革后专八考试时间为：16年3月13日（周六），专四考试时间为：16年4月16日（周六）。

正常情况下，各校都会安排英语专业及相关可以参考tem考试的同学在十一月及十二月进行报名，请各位务必关注校内教务通知。

由于每年寒假前后总是考试最扎堆节日最热闹的时刻，各种纷扰之下，专四专八备考最容易不了了之。

按我们的培训经验，通过吃些大一大二的老本来通过专四考试，可能性有，不过，裸考过专八，难度略大，再加上很多人对
尽快启动备考，才是2016新题型改革完全没底，王道。

另外，以我的经验，求职过程中，最好用，能够最快速打动更多中国hr面试官的英文能力认证，就是专八。

第一阶段：基础备考（11月至12月中旬）
1、全面了解考试
专四听力变为三种（听写dictation，微讲话minitalk填空
gapfilling和会话conversation选择），语言知识language knowledge选择题，cloze完型填空，阅读理解（含选择题和简答题），写作。

其中专四听写听四遍，专四首度出现mini演讲……先
明白考什么比什么都重要。

比较四六级考试和专四考试特点，合理运用和掌握相关技巧。

2. 了解自己，有针对性的制定备考计划。

至少规范地做2套以上的题目，最好是真题（今年情况特殊，有了
新大纲。

但是往届真题仍然有最高的参照价值，当然最好是按
照新考纲改编的真题）。

找出薄弱环节，制定相应计划。

3、背词
词汇重要性不必多言，考生可以考虑购进专门针对tem的词汇书开
始热身或进行循环式词汇复习。

考研雅思托福等词汇和专四专八词
汇确实有重叠性，能力处于中上或者同步备考上述考试的同学一本
词汇书足矣。

8000词。

在词汇这个方面，特别提示一些题目：完型
及语法词汇：可以直接开始学习专四真题中完型（现在变成选词填空）及语词题目的选项。

专四过去考此类题目50道，选项200个，
重考率高，搞清楚这些词汇辨析对来年考试很有作用。

另外，梳理
一下真题中所有涉及的英文语法名称类短语，这是固定考点。

阅读：专八词汇则有赖于漫长的本科时代的积累。

专八词汇最大的挑战来
自于阅读部分生词太多。

所有关于专八阅读（包括专四阅读）的困难，比如速度慢，基本都源于生词、一词多义及熟词僻意的情况，
对于这个问题，唯一的方案就是：背词一直背到考场。

4、部分专项提前动手
专四听写：
专四听写虽然由15句瘦身至10句，依然建议提前训练。

全文听写
考察熟练度，只有坚持规律训练，才可以达到考试要求的美、快、
准的标准，也只有练得更多，才可能发现并排除单词拼写盲区（手感）。

这段时间，既可以使用些四级听力中的短文来听写，也可以
使用专
四听力中的短文来听写。

专门听写的题目可以放在稍后时段再做。

我大学时代备考前，老师带着听写过的文章大约30篇，我也建议30
篇听写练习成为练习数量的底线。

听写是非常好的英语学习手段！！
专四talk（专八mini-lecture）：
迷你演讲需要考生一定的速记能力，这段时间需要开始训练听记，
开始形成自己的一些符号体系。

可以使用真题中迷你演讲的原文
（记住，不做其对应题目），按照“放音-速记-看笔记口语复述”的循
环形式，提升对历年演讲原文的手感和语感。

几乎可以肯定。

但凡
十年m-l真题原文速记滚瓜烂熟者，分数一定不差。

专四与专八阅读与写作：
专四党可以先拿六级阅读做泛读材料，扩展词汇量并提升阅读速度；专八党可以用英语专业的各类泛读精读读物或课本来练手，考研真
题也可以。

由于新版专四和专八都强调了summary的能力，最好可以对此有针对性的训练。

新题型预测备考
专四：12月中旬至3月底
这个阶段几乎决定了稍后的考试成绩。

经常锻炼连续做题的能力很重要。

另外，为了一次通关，梳理掌握
各个科目的做题技巧必不可少。

所以，选择性购进一些解释较为全
面且进行改版的参考书是必须的。

专四：
这个阶段对专四考生来说，时间相对充裕。

备考时一定将题目做细
致一些。

例如全文听写题目可以多做几轮，并确认分数和美观度一
次比一次高；语法词汇题目在重新做的时候没有任
何错误，阅读的全文都可以进行较为通顺的翻译，做完至少十篇新
版专四模拟作文题（因为旧版的形式已经退出历史舞台）相对而言，四月份已是开学后学习状态回归正常的时间了，有了时间保证，专
四考生通过考试的几率也会因此比专八考生高。

总之，各科目的技
巧梳理，是本环节重点。

第三阶段：冲刺备考4月初）
这个环节中，第一、继续完成上个阶段未完成的2016新题型预测，或者反刍那些做过的题目；第二、熟悉流程比什么都重要。

以专八
为例，听力单收一次卷纸，稍后选择题再收一次，然后翻译收一次，然后写作收一次…搞来搞去，考生不要昏头。

体验真实的考场环境
和监考流程，对稍后考试很有好处。

最后，过来人，多说几句：
第一，专四和六级题型结构差别巨大，无可比性。

但是从证书/成
绩单认可度而言，六级完胜专四（你可以说最直接原因就是六比四
强）；所以，考专四的，为了避免以后殒命专八，建议你同步备考四六级；
第二，我觉得考专四的最直接目的就是为了可以考专八，拿出专八合格证的一刹那，六级成绩单就被秒成渣了（是的，八比六强），目前，并无确认消息说，专四不过不能考专八，所以，继续努力，
有机会；
第三，至少我觉得，专八也许事关能力高低，但专四仅仅事关有否努力；。