《Travelling Around》Reading for Writing -PPT标准课件
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上预订，这样我们才有足够的精力去参观上海。(so that) _U_p_o_n_a_rr_iv_i_n_g_i_n_S_h_a_ng_h_a_i，__w_e__w_il_l _c_he_c_k__in__th_e_h_o_te_l_f_o_r _a_g_o_o_d_r_e_st__fi_rs_t, _w_h_ic_h_w_i_ll_b_e_b_o_o_k_ed__o_nl_in_e_i_n_a_d_v_an_c_e_，_s_o_t_ha_t_w_e__ca_n_h_a_v_e_e_n_ou_g_h_e_n_e_rg_y_t_o ③vis下it S午han我gh们ai.将登上东方明珠，在那里我们可以欣赏到上海的全
I guess that’s all for now！I’ll write again soon and send photos！Do you have any plans for the coming holiday？Hope to hear from you soon. Your friend， Richard
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பைடு நூலகம்
Step 1 List the outline of the passage. Paragraph 1：I _w_i_ll_h_a_v_e__a_f_o_u_r-_d_a_y_t_r_ip__to__S_h_a_n_g_h_a_i _w_i_th__m_y__fa_m__il_y_.__ Paragraph 2：W_h_a_t_w__e_s_h_a_ll_d_o__e_v_e_ry__d_a_y_w__h_il_e_i_n_S_h_a_n_g_h_a_i_. _______ Paragraph 3：H_o_w__a_b_o_u_t_t_h_e_p_l_a_n_f_o_r_y_o_u_r_w__in_t_e_r _h_o_li_d_a_y_?__________ Step 2 List the words，phrases and sentences.
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(Ⅱ)Preparation for writing—Words and phrases ①_t_a_k_e__a_d_v_a__n_ta_g__e_o利f 用 ②_________a_s__f_o_l_lo_w如s 下
③____ta_k__e_a__t_o_u_r___ 游览 ④________s_e_t__o_u_t_/o_ff出发
We’re taking the train ， leaving the day before the October holiday begins.We’re arriving at 9：30 am and will start sightseeing right away，so I hope we sleep well on the train!
will have a four-day trip to Shanghai with my family.Here is my plan.
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核心·互动
We are leaving Liling for Shanghai by the high speed railway at around 2： 00 p.m.on Jan.21st.Upon arriving in Shanghai，we will check in the hotel for a good rest first，which will be booked online in advance，so that we can have enough energy to visit Shanghai.On the second day，we are going to the Disneyland to experience all kinds of recreation facilities ， and buy some souvenirs at the same time.On the third day，we will visit Shanghai Science and Technology Museum in the morning.Besides，we will climb the Oriental Pearl Tower in the afternoon ， from which we will enjoy the whole view of Shanghai.On Jan.24th，we will take the high speed railway back to Liling.
⑤__a__s_e_v_e_n_-_d_a_y__t_r_ip七日游 ⑥___e_n_j_o_y__th_e__s_c_e_n_er欣y赏风景
⑦_____le__a_v_e_f_o_r____ 动身去某地 ⑧_to__g_e_t_h_e_r_w__i_th____ 和……一起
around the corner
Travelling Around
Section Ⅶ Reading for Writing—有关旅行计划的电子邮件
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本单元的写作任务是读理查德给小李介绍旅行计划的电子邮件 后，给朋友写一封介绍旅行计划的电子邮件。
Ⅰ.Pre-writing (Ⅰ)Learning to write after the model
Dear Xiao Li， My time here in China is going well.I love my new school and
classmates.Over the October holiday，my parents and I are planning to go to Xi’an to see the Terracotta Army.I’ve heard that it is an amazing sight，and I can’t wait to go.To me the story of the Terracotta Army is almost unbelievable.It’s amazing that there are more than 8，000 statues，and no one in modern times knew about them until the 1970s.
景。(from which)
_W_e_w__il_l _cl_im__b_t_he__O_r_ie_n_ta_l _P_e_ar_l_T_o_w_e_r _in__th_e__af_te_r_no_o_n_，__fr_o_m_w__h_ic_h_w_e___ 8_w_il_l _en_j_oy__th_e_w_h_o_le__vi_e_w_o_f_S_h_a_ng_h_a_i._____基_础__·自__主______核_心__·互__动_______
1.Words and phrases
①_____b_o_o_k________ vt. 预订 ②___c_h_e_c_k_i_n_______ 登记 ③___i_n_a_d_v_a_n_c_e_____ 提前 ④____a_t_t_h_e_s_a_m_e__ti_m_e同时 ⑤__a_f_o_u_r-_d_a_y_t_r_ip____ 四天的旅行
Step 3 Draft the article by using the following words. as，so that，besides，from which
Dear Li Hua， How is everything going? As the winter holiday is coming，I
take a bus
⑨________________ 即将来临 ⑩________________ 乘公共汽车
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Ⅱ.While-writing
假设你是王明，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人去上海玩。请你给你的 好友李华写一封e-mail, 分享你的出行计划。
要点：1.元月21日下午2点左右从醴陵坐高铁去上海，到上海后入住预 订酒店，休息一晚。
2.第二天进上海迪士尼乐园游玩，体验各种游乐设施，购买纪念品。 3.第三天上午参观上海科技馆，下午登东方之珠，欣赏上海全貌。 4.元月24日乘坐高铁返回。
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注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.词数100左右。 参 考 词 汇 ： high speed railway 高 铁 book 预 订 Disneyland迪士尼乐园 recreation facilities游乐设施 souvenir 纪念品 Shanghai Science and Technology Museum上海科技馆 Oriental Pearl Tower东方明珠
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We’re also planning to visit several other places in Xi’an.My dad and I are both looking forward to going to the Shaanxi History Museum，because my dad loves history and I have heard that this museum is known as a “Chinese treasure house”！We’re also going to the Xi’an City Wall and a few other famous sights.
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基础·自主
核心·互动
写作要点 Time and travel destination： Over the October holiday，my parents and I are planning to go to Xi’an to see the Terracotta Army. Some other places of interest：My dad and I are both looking forward to going to the Shaanxi History Museum.We are also going to the Xi’an City Wall and a few other famous sights. Means of transport：We’re taking the train，leaving the day before the October holiday begins.
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2.Sentences ①随着寒假的到来，我和我的家人要到上海旅行四天。(as) _A__s_t_h_e_w__in_t_e_r_h_o_l_id_a_y__is__co_m__i_n_g_，__I _w_i_ll__h_av_e__a_f_o_u_r_-d_a_y__t_ri_p_t_o__ _S_h_a_n_g_h_a_i_w__it_h_m__y_f_a_m_i_l_y._________________________________ ②到达上海后，我们会先入住酒店好好休息，酒店会提前在网
How about the plan for your winter holiday? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours， Wang Ming
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Ⅲ.Post-writing—polishing the passage Exchange your passage with your partner，and pay attention to the following points. □1.Is there a clear purpose for the trip? □2.Does each paragraph have a clear main idea? □3.Does the writer use the present continuous tense for future plans? □4.Does the writer use commas ， stops ， and question marks correctly? □5.Are all the words spelt correctly? □6.Are all the proper nouns capitalised?
I guess that’s all for now！I’ll write again soon and send photos！Do you have any plans for the coming holiday？Hope to hear from you soon. Your friend， Richard
6
基础·自主
核心·互动
பைடு நூலகம்
Step 1 List the outline of the passage. Paragraph 1：I _w_i_ll_h_a_v_e__a_f_o_u_r-_d_a_y_t_r_ip__to__S_h_a_n_g_h_a_i _w_i_th__m_y__fa_m__il_y_.__ Paragraph 2：W_h_a_t_w__e_s_h_a_ll_d_o__e_v_e_ry__d_a_y_w__h_il_e_i_n_S_h_a_n_g_h_a_i_. _______ Paragraph 3：H_o_w__a_b_o_u_t_t_h_e_p_l_a_n_f_o_r_y_o_u_r_w__in_t_e_r _h_o_li_d_a_y_?__________ Step 2 List the words，phrases and sentences.
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基础·自主
核心·互动
(Ⅱ)Preparation for writing—Words and phrases ①_t_a_k_e__a_d_v_a__n_ta_g__e_o利f 用 ②_________a_s__f_o_l_lo_w如s 下
③____ta_k__e_a__t_o_u_r___ 游览 ④________s_e_t__o_u_t_/o_ff出发
We’re taking the train ， leaving the day before the October holiday begins.We’re arriving at 9：30 am and will start sightseeing right away，so I hope we sleep well on the train!
will have a four-day trip to Shanghai with my family.Here is my plan.
9
基础·自主
核心·互动
We are leaving Liling for Shanghai by the high speed railway at around 2： 00 p.m.on Jan.21st.Upon arriving in Shanghai，we will check in the hotel for a good rest first，which will be booked online in advance，so that we can have enough energy to visit Shanghai.On the second day，we are going to the Disneyland to experience all kinds of recreation facilities ， and buy some souvenirs at the same time.On the third day，we will visit Shanghai Science and Technology Museum in the morning.Besides，we will climb the Oriental Pearl Tower in the afternoon ， from which we will enjoy the whole view of Shanghai.On Jan.24th，we will take the high speed railway back to Liling.
⑤__a__s_e_v_e_n_-_d_a_y__t_r_ip七日游 ⑥___e_n_j_o_y__th_e__s_c_e_n_er欣y赏风景
⑦_____le__a_v_e_f_o_r____ 动身去某地 ⑧_to__g_e_t_h_e_r_w__i_th____ 和……一起
around the corner
Travelling Around
Section Ⅶ Reading for Writing—有关旅行计划的电子邮件
1
本单元的写作任务是读理查德给小李介绍旅行计划的电子邮件 后，给朋友写一封介绍旅行计划的电子邮件。
Ⅰ.Pre-writing (Ⅰ)Learning to write after the model
Dear Xiao Li， My time here in China is going well.I love my new school and
classmates.Over the October holiday，my parents and I are planning to go to Xi’an to see the Terracotta Army.I’ve heard that it is an amazing sight，and I can’t wait to go.To me the story of the Terracotta Army is almost unbelievable.It’s amazing that there are more than 8，000 statues，and no one in modern times knew about them until the 1970s.
景。(from which)
_W_e_w__il_l _cl_im__b_t_he__O_r_ie_n_ta_l _P_e_ar_l_T_o_w_e_r _in__th_e__af_te_r_no_o_n_，__fr_o_m_w__h_ic_h_w_e___ 8_w_il_l _en_j_oy__th_e_w_h_o_le__vi_e_w_o_f_S_h_a_ng_h_a_i._____基_础__·自__主______核_心__·互__动_______
1.Words and phrases
①_____b_o_o_k________ vt. 预订 ②___c_h_e_c_k_i_n_______ 登记 ③___i_n_a_d_v_a_n_c_e_____ 提前 ④____a_t_t_h_e_s_a_m_e__ti_m_e同时 ⑤__a_f_o_u_r-_d_a_y_t_r_ip____ 四天的旅行
Step 3 Draft the article by using the following words. as，so that，besides，from which
Dear Li Hua， How is everything going? As the winter holiday is coming，I
take a bus
⑨________________ 即将来临 ⑩________________ 乘公共汽车
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基础·自主
核心·互动
Ⅱ.While-writing
假设你是王明，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人去上海玩。请你给你的 好友李华写一封e-mail, 分享你的出行计划。
要点：1.元月21日下午2点左右从醴陵坐高铁去上海，到上海后入住预 订酒店，休息一晚。
2.第二天进上海迪士尼乐园游玩，体验各种游乐设施，购买纪念品。 3.第三天上午参观上海科技馆，下午登东方之珠，欣赏上海全貌。 4.元月24日乘坐高铁返回。
5
基础·自主
核心·互动
注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.词数100左右。 参 考 词 汇 ： high speed railway 高 铁 book 预 订 Disneyland迪士尼乐园 recreation facilities游乐设施 souvenir 纪念品 Shanghai Science and Technology Museum上海科技馆 Oriental Pearl Tower东方明珠
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基础·自主
核心·互动
We’re also planning to visit several other places in Xi’an.My dad and I are both looking forward to going to the Shaanxi History Museum，because my dad loves history and I have heard that this museum is known as a “Chinese treasure house”！We’re also going to the Xi’an City Wall and a few other famous sights.
1
基础·自主
核心·互动
写作要点 Time and travel destination： Over the October holiday，my parents and I are planning to go to Xi’an to see the Terracotta Army. Some other places of interest：My dad and I are both looking forward to going to the Shaanxi History Museum.We are also going to the Xi’an City Wall and a few other famous sights. Means of transport：We’re taking the train，leaving the day before the October holiday begins.
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2.Sentences ①随着寒假的到来，我和我的家人要到上海旅行四天。(as) _A__s_t_h_e_w__in_t_e_r_h_o_l_id_a_y__is__co_m__i_n_g_，__I _w_i_ll__h_av_e__a_f_o_u_r_-d_a_y__t_ri_p_t_o__ _S_h_a_n_g_h_a_i_w__it_h_m__y_f_a_m_i_l_y._________________________________ ②到达上海后，我们会先入住酒店好好休息，酒店会提前在网
How about the plan for your winter holiday? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours， Wang Ming
1
基础·自主
核心·互动
Ⅲ.Post-writing—polishing the passage Exchange your passage with your partner，and pay attention to the following points. □1.Is there a clear purpose for the trip? □2.Does each paragraph have a clear main idea? □3.Does the writer use the present continuous tense for future plans? □4.Does the writer use commas ， stops ， and question marks correctly? □5.Are all the words spelt correctly? □6.Are all the proper nouns capitalised?