初三英语下学期面表达汇编单元达标测试题试题

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初三英语下学期面表达汇编单元达标测试题试题
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1.(·黑龙江中考模拟)书面表达
假如你是英语俱乐部的Cathy,上周五你们收到了外教Angel为同学们网购的英文书籍。

俱乐部的同学们很喜欢网购图书这种便捷的方式,并打算在本周五交流读书后的感受。

请你根据以下信息, 给Angel写一封电子邮件,告诉她俱乐部的活动情况,并说说网购图书的好处。

写作要点:
1表达收到图书后的喜悦与感激之情。

2介绍活动的情况:
(l)上周五,俱乐部成员们一起读英文书。

(2)本周五的下午3点,大家将共同交流读书的体会。

(3)同学们将在下个月网购其他的英文书。

3说一说网上购书有什么好处。

写作要求:
1不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。

3字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。

4至少80词。

Dear Angel,
How are you doing?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Cathy
【答案】Dear Angel,
How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。

Last Friday,we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn’t go from one bookstore to another .
Best wishes!
Yours,
Cathy 【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文,向外教介绍俱乐部中读书交流会的活动,并且告诉外教同学们现在喜
欢网购图书并阐述网购图书的好处。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。

亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand...on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room 中which引导非限制性定语从句。

增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。

2.(·北京中考模拟)“友善”是一种美德,它犹如阳光和雨露照耀并滋润着美德的形成。

同学们,请奉献你的友善,为创建和谐社会做出贡献。

某英文网站正在开展以“友善待人、快乐生活”为主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈生活中你对他人提供善意帮助的经历。

主要内容包括:你对友善行为的认识和理解,你平时做哪些友善的事情,以及你这样做的美好愿望。

提示词语:kind,politely, trouble, offer, proud,society
提示问题:What do you think of showing kindness to others?
How do you help them kindly in your daily life?
What do you dream about being kind to them?
It's our duty to show kindness to others around us.
_________________________________________________
【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our community, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.
I believe our society will become better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文,谈谈生活中你对他人提供善意帮助的经历。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。

亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。

增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。

3.(·河南中考模拟)书面表达
生命就像是一种回声,你送出什么它就送回什么,你播种什么就收获什么,你给予什么就得到什么。

因此,人们常说“帮助别人就是帮助自己”。

请以Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves 为题写一篇短文。

要求:1. 思路清晰,观点明确,语法正确,有说服力;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 80词左右。

Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________
【答案】Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves
Nobody is perfect enough to manage to do everything, so help is necessary and important in our life. On the one hand, we should help others often. Giving help can bring us pleasure. Helping an old man cross the road often makes me feel confident and useful. On the other hand, we need others’ help when we get into troubl e. I often get help from my parents, friends, teachers, even some strangers. Thanks to their help, it is easy for me to get out of trouble.
All in all, everyone needs help. And only who are willing to help others will also be helped.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文,主要讲述“帮助别人就是帮助自己”。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运
用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。

亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如adj+enough,on the one hand,on the other hand,make sb do,get into trouble,thanks to,it is adj for sb to do sth。

增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。

4.(·浙江中考模拟)
如今,很多父母很关心孩子的学习,想随时监控孩子的学习状况如下图中 Tony 的母亲。

请简要描述图片内容,分析图中现象,谈谈你的看法和建议,并写一篇 110 词左右的短文向Parents 杂志投稿,让父母们通过阅读你的文章有所启发。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tony's mother wanted to keep watch on Tony's study. She was wrong to do so. First of all, he violated the right to privacy. It also disturbs Tony's study and makes him respond strongly. From a child's point of view, children may yearn for independence. What they want is affirmation
of their own abilities. But excessive supervision itself denies and distrusts their own abilities. Although we never mean to look down on their own children, maybe they don't think so. When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. In any case, family environment is the root of children, but first of all, it must be stable and reliable. In this way, monitoring children's learning is of little significance. We should always do our part well. Let children learn and grow in a relatively independent environment.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图画作文,根据图片中的相关信息介绍一下父母为了关心孩子的学习,想随时监控孩子的学习状况,就这样对吗?仔细分析所提供的图片内容,主要从你的看法和建议这个方面去介绍。

时态为一般现在时,人称为第一人称。

注意作文中必须包含图片中的所有信息,并适当发挥。

写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。

语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】
When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? 当孩子们发现自己受到监视时,他们将来怎么能向我们吐露心声呢?
句子When children find themselves under surveillance是由when引导的时间状语从句。

【高分句型二】
It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. 这也会影响未来的自信心建设,也会导致更多的担忧儿童,形成影响亲子关系的恶性循环。

which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship.是由which引导的定语从句。

5.(·山东中考模拟)书面表达
下图描述了李明和家人去年五一假期(May Day Holiday)外出旅游的经历。

请根据图片提示,用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。

要求:1. 完整叙述图片内容,可适当发挥;
2. 结合自己的实际情况陈述个人观点或给出建议。

【答案】Last May Day holiday, Li Ming and his family went to Qingdao seaside. They paid a visit to Qingdao by bus. There are many places of interest in Qingdao. They went to the beach, visited the Museum. But there were many people on the beach. What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. At the seaside, people don't pay attention to hygiene. There's rubbish everywhere. In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. We should avoid the rush hour and choose some unknown places.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇看图作文,根据图片的内容介绍一下李明和家人去年五一假期(May Day Holiday)外出旅游的经历。

主要是要完整叙述图片内容、结合自己的实际情况陈述个人观点或给出建议。

时态为一般过去时,人称为第三人称。

在陈述个人观点或给出建议时用一般现在时来写。

注意作文中必须包含图片上的所有信息,并适当发挥。

写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。

语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】
What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. 你在海边看到的不是风景,而是无数晃动的头。

句子What you see at the seaside做主语。

【高分句型二】
In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. 在我看来,旅行时,人们不仅要注意安全,还要注意卫生,不要到处乱扔垃圾。

该句话运用了not only…but also…。

6.(·山东中考模拟)书面表达
今天早上你目睹了一起事件(下图),你想以"Mother Stops Him"为题写一篇短文,向你校英语报社投稿。

短文内容如下:
1. 描述亊件。

2. 发表你的想法。

要求:
1.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

3. 100个词汇左右。

参考词汇:lift…up扶起,knock…down撞倒,trust信任
Mother Stops Him
_______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
【答案】This morning, my mother took me to school. On the way, I saw a car knock an old man down and the car ran away. The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up, but my mother stopped me saying, "Don't lift him up, or he 'll say you hit him." But I think helping others is what we should do. That old woman will certainly appreciate me, so I trust that as long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become a better place.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇看图作文,所给材料较为详细,逻辑清楚,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。

根据要点内容可知短语主要应用一般过去时态,主要是第一人称,句型以简单句为主。

写作时要灵活运用,注意主谓一致,单词拼写正确。

【点睛】
本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式,如:The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up。

所以在学习中,我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
7.(·如皋市实验初中中考模拟)亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开,你的印度朋友Danny收看了大会相关报道,对华夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣,来信向你了解中国文化。

假设你是李华,请根据以下内容提示用英语写一封回信给Danny。

注意:1. 词数90词左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。

2. 回复必须包括所以要点,可是当发挥,是短文连贯,通顺。

3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇: civilized 文明的
Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would
like to share something with you.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.
All the best,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you.
Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here ar e the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.
China is a nation of etiquette (礼仪). Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best.
Li Hua 【解析】
【分析】
本文要求给你的印度朋友Danny写一篇关于华夏文明的回信。

【详解】
文章需要介绍下中国的文化。

表格中列举了三个要点,写作时注意不要漏写。

平时注意多多积累句型、短语。

细心检查避免疏漏。

以图表展示的作文要以“读”为主,首先要认真读懂图表中的要求,对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括,去粗取精;在写作时目的要明确,要注意内容的准确性和严肃性。

【点睛】
写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系,上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

如but, so, then 等。

可以适当使用高分句子。

本篇文章写的好的句子有:Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world.中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。

China is a nation of etiquette(礼仪),中国是一个礼仪之邦。

8.(·天津中考模拟)手机在生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色,许多中学生沉迷于手机无
法自拔,比如你的好友Miller.请根据以下提示点写一篇短文:
1. 去年,Miller对手机游戏非常入迷,而且花大量时间用手机聊天看电影;
2. Miller与家人和朋友交流甚少,离开手机会很焦虑;
3. 昨天还因为走路看手机被自行车撞了,膝盖受伤;
4. 你的建议……
参考词汇:mobile games手机游戏anxious焦虑be crazy about对……入迷要求:
1字数80-100个2开头已经给出不计入总词数3要点齐全,行为连贯,适当发挥
Today more and more people are addicted to(沉迷)playing the mobile phones. Last year, My friend Miller was
【答案】Today more and more people are addicted to(沉迷)playing the mobile phones. Last year,My friend Miller was crazy about mobile games as well. He spent too much time in chatting and watching films on the phone. Miller hardly talked with his family and friends. He lived in his own world. He felt very anxious without mobile phones. Yesterday he was hit by a bike, because he was watching his phone at that moment. As a result, he hurt his knees badly.
In my opinion, I think we can’t use the mobile phones for a long time, I mean, no more than half an hou r a day. Don’t take mobile phones to school. A mobile phone is just a kind of tool, not our whole life.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文。

首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;再紧扣要点,动笔写作,可适当发挥。

在写作时,注意连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。

9.(·安徽省蚌埠龙湖中学中考模拟)当前,我市各学校正在开展“好书伴我成长”活动。

请你根据活动主题并结合表格信息,以“Growing up with Good books”为题,用英语写一篇
约80个单词的倡议书,向全校同学发出倡议。

要求:1.倡议书应包含所有要点;2.倡议书的开头已给出,不计入总词数;3.文中不得出现真实姓名与学校名称。

Growing up with Good books
My dear friend,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________
【答案】My Dear Friends,
Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn and the brighter our future will become. However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games. It takes much of their spare time. So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.
Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of ou r life!
Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如not only…but also,the more …the more,spend much time in doing,listen to music,watch TV,go online,play games,much of,like to do,so that,a part of等。

而非谓语动词结构Reading is very important./ some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games.和Our study can be improved if we read more good books./ So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.等复杂从句结构的运用,既丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

10.(·福建中考模拟)回首三年,相信你有满满的回忆。

在你将踏上新的旅程之际,请给新入学的学弟学妹们两则初中生活的建议,并说说原因,让他们的初中生活更加精彩。

请参考下面的思维导图用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。

School life Teachers and friends Schoolwork and activities
My Advice for Junior High
【答案】例文Junior high is an important stage in your life. As a student who is about to enter junior high, your heart must be filled with expectation. To help you get used to the junior high life, I will share you two pieces of advice. First, establish your routines. By doing this, you can quickly fall into a pattern that feels familiar and comfortable. Second, be sure to try new things. You can join new clubs or take up a new hobby. This will not only get you out of the stressful schoolwork, but also help you make more friends. I hope my advice can be helpful to you and make you enjoy your life in the junior high school.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如as a student,must be,filled with,get used to,relax ourselves,two pieces of advice,fall into,join new clubs,take up,not only…but also,make more friends,be helpful to等。

而非谓语动词结构To help you get used to the junior high life, I will share you two pieces of advice.和As a student who is about to enter junior high, your heart must be filled with expectation./ By doing this, you can quickly fall into a pattern that feels familiar and comfortable./ I hope my advice can be helpful to you and make you enjoy your life in the junior high school.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

11.(·浙江中考模拟)书面表达
为了解学生们的职业观,班主任以"我的理想职业"为主题在全班做了调查。

请你根据表格
中的结果,写一篇英语调查报告,并且结合实际情况,谈谈你对未来工作的选择和原因。

注意:⑴必须包含表格所有内容,并谈谈自己的未来工作选择和原因;
⑵文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息;
⑶0—100词,短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。

短文首句:In order to know more about the ideas of students on their future jobs,we made a survey in our class.
【答案】In order to know more about the ideas of students on their future jobs, we made a survey in our class. Here are the results. 45% of the students would like to become businessmen in the future. Because they think if they are rich, they can buy whatever they want. 28% choose to be teachers. They can not only teach students much knowledge, but also feel happy with them. 20% hope to be doctors. In their hearts, doctors can cure sick patients as well as saving people's lives. The rest of the students think about other jobs, such as policemen, engineers, nurses and so on.
In my opinion, I want to be an English teacher. That's because I love children and I love English, too.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇调查报告。

文章要按照题目要求,根据提纲中所给的信息完成短文,短文句中时态用一般现在时,句中的主要是第三人称,句中使用了一些固定短语和句中结果,例如,would like to do sth. in the future; be happy with; hope to do sth. as well as; think about; in my opinion;此外文章使用了一些主从复合句,使得文章上下文逻辑关系更加合理。

12.(·河北中考模拟)书面表达
初中毕业在即, 回顾三年的学习生活, 你一定有成功的体验, 如一次考试, 一次比赛, 一次表演......
请你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win为题写一篇演讲稿。

提示:(1)What was the event?
(2)How did you make it?
(3)What’s your feeling?
要求:(1)发言稿中须包括所有提示内容, 可适当发挥。

(2)发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

(3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数)。

Believe Myself, and I Will Win
Hello,
everyone!_______________________________________________________________________ ____
Thank you for your listening.
【答案】Believe Myself, and I will win
Hello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.
When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning Engl ish. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too.
To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.
Thank you for your listening.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以Believe Myself and I will win为题,写一篇演讲稿。

题目中用问题的形式给出了提示,审题可知,文章应包括以下内容:首先叙述你生活中遇到的一件困难的事;然后介绍你是如何克服了这个困难,最后取得成功的;最后说一下你自己的感受。

写作时学生们应根据这几个内容提要,发挥自己的想象力,将这些内容补充完整,用正确的英语表达出来。

短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主,注意谓语动词的正确形式。

写作时应注意:首先要保证发言稿中包括了所有提示的内容,不能遗漏要点,可以根据表达需要适当发挥,但要与上下文意衔接起来。

其次要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的,不能按照汉语思维,逐词翻译。

应从句子的整体结构出发,选择适当句型、短语、词汇进行表达。

句式结构可以简单句为主,穿插并列句或复合句。

为提升文章档次,应注意衔接词以及高级句式或复杂结构的使用。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求,写了一篇演讲稿。

文章有以下几个优点:首先短文内容完整,包括了题目中要求的所有内容,没有遗漏要点。

各部分内容安排合理,层次清晰。

短文主要分成三段,每一段主题都很明确,叙述详细、清楚。

其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称,短文主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时,动词形式变化准确,尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式,语法规范,用词准确。

文章中句式变化丰富,有简单句、并列句、复合句,长短句结合,增强了文章的表现力。

短文中使用了较丰富的句型,如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won't be afraid of。

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