2019届高三英语二轮复习----How to perfect your writing教学课件 (

What’s more, the government should make tough
laws that make offenders realize that they pay too much to hurt others.
Group revision
Presentation
Process-oriented approach
self-centeredness
and aggression Moreover
So mild is the relevant punishment
that studentms ioldften assume that committing school violence is nothing serious.
An approach which emphasizes the composing processes writers make use of in writing (such as planning, drafting and revising) and which seeks to improve students’ writing skills through developing their use of effective composing processes
Sentence structure: As …, (main clause), which… With…, (main clause), which… Recent years has witnessed…, which…
Reasons and measures revision
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Sentence structure: With…, (main clause), which…
Summary revision
Sample: As school violence among teenagers is becoming
increasingly severe, the government has released the guideline to handle the problem, which lays emphasis on a more severe attitude towards violence.
Homework
• Polish and rewrite your composition.
Thank you !
Within the paragraph: • Is there a topic sentence? • Do the supporting sentences serve the topic
sentence well? Between paragraphs: • Are the measures in paragraph 3 consistent with the
Requirements of a summary
Content: key words no details
language: paraphrased sentences
Steps of writing a summary
• Step 1: find some key words or the topic sentence
Sentence structure: Recent years has witnessed…, which…
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With school violence becoming a overwhelming social problem , the government has issued a guideline to cope with the problem, which lays emphasis on a stricter attitude towards violence.
reasons in paragraph 2?
To begin with
most students are regarded as the apple of their parents’
eye so they are easily spoiled, which may contribute to their
• Step 2: summarize the main idea of each paragraph in your own words
• Step 3: reconstruct the paraphrased sentences
In campus violence cases in Beijing during the last five years, 14 percent of the offenders not only beat others, but also insulted them. They slapped others, made them kneel down, and in some cases took off other people’s clothes.
In a bid to wrestle with the serious problem, joint efforts must be made.
First and foremost, the parents should be strict with their students instead
of spoiling them.
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Recent years has witnessed a chain of teenage violence cases on campus, which leads the government to put out a guideline emphasizing a more severe attitude towards violence.
How to perfect your writing
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Common errors in this writing
• Summary (inaccurate content) • Reasons and measures (incoherence) • Language mistakes
What is a summary?
A summary is a _s_h_o_r_t_/b_r_i_e_f __ account giving the __m_a_i_n_p_o_i_n_ts___ of something longer or detailed_i_n_y_o_u_r_o_w__n_w__o_rd_s__.
“The common tolerant attitude toward violence should be changed,” wrote Jiaxing Daily. “When teenagers do something wrong, we should tolerate and help them when necessary. But all of this has a limit.”
Violence at schools has been widely reported in media in recent years—the violence among teenagers has drawn public and government attention. On Nov 11, the Ministry of Education, along with eight other central sectors, published a guideline on dealing with school violence.
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The guideline stressed that students with serious behavioral problems should be handed over to special schools. Or, in more serious cases, they may take criminal responsibility and be sent to prison.