四级考试作文主要看内容

四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。

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内容不跑题即可，注意：1.不要妄图以情动人;2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。

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结构上牢记总分总：先写主题句(Topic Sentence)，再写分论点，最后写总结句(Conclusion)。

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语言最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要模仿和包装。

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基本表达
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人们认为：it is generally/ widely believED/ held/ agreed that (整
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越来越：be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of
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万能理由(Omnipotence) (收集整理)
1.方便：convenient/ convenience (英语作文网收集整理)
2.效率：efficient/ efficiently/ efficiency (英语作文网收集整理)
3.节省和浪费：save time/ money/ space; economical, thrift; waste time/ money/ space; costly, lavish (整理收集)
4.人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive,considerate, confident, creative, sociable,perseverance; selfish, isolated, conserative (整理收集)
5.人的身体健康：health, disease, strong, strength, energetic (整理收集)
6.娱乐：colorful, pleasure,joy, recreation, entertainmentm, relax, tired, boring, lonely (英语作文网收集整理)
7.环境：environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty (收集:)
8.安全和危险：safe, danGER, risk (收集整理:英语作文网)
9.经验：experience, social experience, enter the society (收集整理:英语作文网)
10.人际：humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely
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写完之后修改注意：(内容方面尽量不要修改) (收集整理:英语作文网)
1、字母大小写
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2、怪符号(英语作文网收集整理)
3、单词拼写(英语作文网收集整理)
4、主谓一致(收集整理:英语作文网)
5、动词时态(整理收集)
6、名词单复数(整理:)
实例一(英语作文网收集整理)
题目：Bicycles——An Important Means of Transport in China提纲：(1)为什么自行车在中国这样普及(2)和汽车的比较(3)自行车在中国的前途(整理收集:英语作文网) Score: 8 (英语作文网收集整理)
Bicycle is an important means of transport in China. The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese. The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage. They can only afford a bicycle, and they have no money to buy a car which is too expensive. So Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work, or go to travel and so on. The other reason is the large population of China. All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport. (英语作文网收集整理)
The bicycle, compared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it. It doesn’t ask to build the garage like car. This point is very important to China, because of the lack of land. It isn’t too expensive, so Chine se can afford it. It doesn’t need any oil, and it can’t cause the polusion. All of these are the good needs compared to the car. (英语作文网收集整理)
In the future, bicycle will be widely used. And it will be in good demand. People will produce much more modern bicycles.
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Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people -- man and woman, old and young -- ri de their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”.
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注：1.第一句总写，第二句和第三句分写，最后总写。

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2. During the rush hour分词结构开头。

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3.破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。

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Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents. (英语作文网收集整理)
注：1. Compared with cars分词结构开头。

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2. be superior to/ be inferior to优于/低于(整理收集:英语作文网)
3. thirst, second, third英语语言有层次感，信号词
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4. cheap便宜，最好用inexpensive (整理收集:英语作文网)
5. be good for health对健康有好处(万能理由)
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6. Moreover表示递进(收集整理:英语作文网)
In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time. (收集整理:英语作文网)
注：promising有前途的a promising young man (整理:)
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There millions of bicycles in today’s China. Bicycles are very important means of transport in people’s daily lives. Because to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the rider’s strength, bicycles are popular all over the world, especially in China. (整理:)
注：第一句应该用there be结构(收集整理:英语作文网)
Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper. It is more suitable for China as a developing country. And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has. On the contrary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car. (整理收集:英语作文网)
I think th e population of China’s bicycle will be kept for the long run. Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made
a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that it’s quality will be improved.
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I、对比观点选择题：1.有人认为……; 2.另外一些人认为……; 3.谈谈你的观点和看法。

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实例二99年6月真题(收集整理)
Reading Selectively Or Extensively? (整理收集:英语作文网)
Outline: 1.有人认为读书要有选择2.有人认为应当博览群书3.我的想法
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How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view. (整理:)
Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively. (收集:)
But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively. (收集整理:英语作文网)
Who’s right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field. (整理收集:英语作文网)
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：(整理收集:英语作文网)
(启)Paragraph I：(1)引出将要评论的事物或者是观点; (2)简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。

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How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.(启) (收集整理)
注：第一句提出问题，第二句提出两种见解(收集:)
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：
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(承)Paragraph II：(1)提出一种观点或优点;(2)本段的支持性分论点;(3)本段总结(可以省略)。

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樊煜我男朋友名字，他说他自己是一个帅哥，但是我从来不这样认为。

因为我爱他的不是因为他的帅，我认为他是一个独立的人，我们有共同的兴趣爱好。

看电影，唱歌，讲笑话和他在一起我很快乐。

感觉很放松，不会紧张。

他年龄比我大，但是我们似乎没有代沟，他总说自己老了，但是我不觉得。

他照顾我很好，有一种幸福感，他的兴趣爱好就是抽烟，烟鬼，我恨抽烟，因为对身体不好，他有时就和朋友一起喝酒，他有一个朋友是很帅，他的名字叫，韩鑫。

我经常叫他帅哥,我有一个舍友叫董路。

Fan Yu My boyfriend's name, he said, he is a handsome guy, but I never think so. Because I love him not because of his handsome, I think he is an independent, we have common interests. Watching movies, singing, telling jokes, and I am very happy with him. Feel relaxed, not tense. He was older than I, but we seem to have no generation gap, he always says he's old, but I do not think so. He took care of me well, there is a sense of happiness, and his hobbies are smoking, heavy smoker, I hate smoking, because of poor health, he sometimes drank with friends, he has a friend is very handsome, he The name, Han Xin. I often call him Shuai Ge, I have a roommate named Dong Lu. He often called her Mei Nv .But this just a joke .I know we love each other ,I Must marry to him!。