【金版学案】高中英语必修5人教版单元过关检测卷：第一单元B卷.docx

英语•必修5（人教版）
B卷综合检测
（测试时间：120分钟评价分值：135分）
第一部分语言知识及应用（共两节，满分45分）
第一节：完形填空（共15小题；每小题2分，满分30分）阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，从各题所给的四个选项中选出最佳
答案。

I was in Chinatown when I observed some elderly men just sitting around.They all 丄well.When they sat in a row, wearing decent（体面的）clothing, they 2 chatted with their neighbors while most times they just stared at passers-by.They_3_me of the pigeons（鸽子）that perch（栖息）on a fence happily.They seemed, like they were just passing time.At least they were 4 doing nothing.
To do nothing is a（n） 5 Jt allows us to slow
down.It's ⑥ and it improves health and reduces the chances for heart disease too!
However, don't confuse it with having nothing to do.Some people just…7_because they have nothing to do and have no idea what to do.The only other thing that 8 itself to behave like this is a headless chicken, wandering around without aim.
There is a difference between doing nothing and having nothing to do.One is done 9 while the other is a product of consequence.If you And yourself wandering 10 , ifs time to rest.Wandering aroundfeeling anxious and 11 is a sign of burnout（倦怠）・It could be from work, studies, and even arguments with a loved one.If your 12 an mood is not controlled, you might get depressed.Take a（n） 13 : give yourself a chance to be like a pigeon just perching
somewhere ・
If you need 14^ on how to do this, you may consult any of the old men sitting in Chinatown.You may be invited to hang out with them.If not, pick up a 15 hobbywhich can help you find a new world.
语篇解读：本文是一篇夹叙夹议文。

坐在街边上的一排老人让作 者想起了栖息在篱笆上的鸽子。

放慢你生活的步伐，去寻找心灵的那 份宁静吧！ 解析：由下文wearing decent(体面的)clothing 及对这些老人生 活
状态的描述得出：这些悠闲的老人已经没有什么家庭负担，他们穿 着(dressed)彳艮好。

答案:C
解析：从本空后most times 可知：当他们坐成一排时，有时
(sometimes)互相闲聊。

但是，多数情况下他们只是看着路人。

答案:B
解析：本空后就是这些老人让作者想起的事物：这些老人让作者 想到(reminded)那些快乐地栖息在篱笆上的鸽子。

答案:D
解析：根据上下文老人的状态可知：他们无所事事，心情快乐
(happy) o
答案：A
5. A.art
B ・ disaster C. joke D. challenge
解析：本段讲述什么事情也不做的好处，所以作者认为这也是一 种艺术(art)o
1・ peted C ・ dressed B ・ performed D ・ studied 2. A.always
C. never
B • sometimes D ・ often
3. Aeinformed
B • warned C. told
D • reminded
4. Aehappy C- serious B • careful D. attractive
答案：A
6・ A.frightening B ・ calming
C・ exciting D・ confusing
解析：从上文slow down 及下文improves health and reduces the chances for heart disease 得出：它能让人心气和(calming)o
答案：B
7・ A.argue B・ wander
C・ look D・ travel
解析：根据下文wandering around可知：他们无事可做，也不知道该做什么。

答案：B
8・ A.teaches B ・ persuades
C・ orders D・ allows
解析：只有无头脑的鸡才会让(allows)自己这样(无目的地闲逛)。

答案：D
9. A.luckily B・ right
C・ normally D・ purposely
解析：根据下文a product of consequence可知，此处是指一个是有目的，另外一个却是结果的产物。

答案：D
lOeAehungrily
C・ aimlessly B • slowly D. freely
解析：由第9空后without ai m判断：如果你发现自己漫无目的地(aimlessly)闲逛，那么你就该休息一下了。

答案:C
11- A<amazed
C ・ frightened B ・ excited D. bored
解析：与本空前restless构成并列：到处闲逛，感到焦躁不安和无聊(bored)就是你倦怠的迹象。

答案:D
12. A.skill
C- experience B • energy D・ career
解析：从下文get depressed可知：如果你不能掌控你的精力(energy)和情绪，那么你就可能变得沮丧。

答案:B
13・ Aebreak B. exam C- trip D- risk
解析：由第10空后it*s time to rest得出：休整一下(break),给自己一个机会能够像一只悠闲栖息的鸽子。

答案：A
14. A.ambition
C • agreement
B • encouragement D> advise
解析：根据下文consult可知：如果你需要关于此的建议(advise), 你可以去咨询坐在唐人街上的任何老人。

答案：D
15 ・ A.old B・ popular C・ new D・ familiar
解析：根据下文a new world可知：如果不行，你可以开始一个新(new)爱好，这会帮你找到一个新天地。

答案:C
第二节：语法填空(共10小题；每小题1・5分，满分15分) 阅读下面
短文，按照句子结构的语法性和上下文连贯的要求，在
空格处填入一个适当的词或使用括号中词语的正确形式填空。

We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely.16・___ , some of us are upset 17.__ our body styles and looks.Ifs unnecessary and it*s not important at all.We needn't care about it.lt is one's inner beauty
18.__ matters.Second, we sometimes seem to be misunderstood
19.__ our teachers, parents and classmates.20. ____ (face)with this, we can find a proper time to have a heart-to・heart talk with them, trying to remove the 21. ____ (understand)・ Some of us have fewer friends! think being open-minded and friendly will do us good.Third , we may fall behind others,22. ______________________ makes us stressed.Actually we can encourage 23. ___ t o work efficiently, full of 24. ___ (determine)・ At last, some of us don't have much pocket money, so we feel unhappy.Isn't it strange? So long as we have some, thafs enough.And we can learn 25. ___ to spend money.
16.解析：下文有second, third等，此处用first,列举成长中的烦恼。

答案:First
17.解析：词组be upset about sth.的意思是"因.......... 而难过/烦恼”。

答案：about
18.解析：这里是强调句型：Itis・・・that 答案：that
19.解析：be misunderstood by 表示“被误解”。

答案：by
20.解析:Faced with is=When we are faced with this:当我们面临这个问题时。

答案：Faced
21 ・解析:remove the misunderstanding（s）的意思是"消除误会”。

答案:misunderstanding（s）
22.解析：which引导非限制性定语从句。

答案：which
23.解析：encourage ourselves:自我鼓励。

答案：ourselves
24.解析：介词of后用名词，所以填determinationo
答案：determination
25.解析：这里指学会如何花钱。

答案：how
第二部分阅读（共两节，满分50分）
第一节：阅读理解（共20小题；每小题2分，满分40分）阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项中选出最佳选项。

A
He is regarded as having one of the brightest minds on the planet ・ But outstanding astrophysicist（天体物理学家）Stephen Hawking has admitted that he did not learn to read until he was eight years old.
In a public lecture at the Royal Albert Hall，Professor Hawking also admitted that he was not active in studying while at Oxford University, where he studied physics, and that only the diagnosis that he might die young from motor neurone仔申经元）disease made him concentrate on his work・
Professor Hawking said： "My sister Philippa could read by the age of 4 but then she was definitely brighter than me.” He said that he was unexceptional at school and was never further than halfway up his class・“My classwork was very untidy, and my handwriting was the despair of my teachers, ” he said・"But my classmates gave me the nickname Einstein, so presumably they saw signs of something better. ”
But he said that it was when doctors told him that he probably only had a few years to live at the age of 21 that galvanized him into focusing on his work and a period of productivity that resulted in some of his early breakthroughs. He said, “When you are faced with the possibility of an early death, it makes you realize that life is worth living and there are lots of things you want to do. ”
语篇解读：文章向我们介绍了传奇科学家霍金。

26 ・ Which of the following is NOT true according to the passage?
A・ Stephen Hawking is the second Einstein in the world・
B・ Stephen Hawking couldn't read at the age of 7.
C・ Stephen Hawking's handwriting was once terribly bad・
D・ Stephen Hawking's sister once performed much better than him.
解析：细节理解题。

由第三段的But my classmates gave me the nickname Einstein, so presumably they saw signs of something better.”可知绰号“爱因斯坦”是同学给起的，但并不意味着他就是第二个爱因斯坦。

故A项不符合文意。

答案：A
27.We can infer that Stephen Hawking was ________ when he was a child and studied in Oxford University.
A. clever B・ lazy
C・ bright D・ mean
解析：推理判断题。

由第一段特别是But outstanding astrophysicist Stephen Hawking has admitted that he did not learn to read until he was eight years old.和第二段开头句可知，他小时候和在大学里是非常懒惰的。

故选B项。

答案：B
28.What made Stephen Hawking devote himself to his work?
A. Patience. B・ Knowledge・
C・ Disease. D・ Laziness・
解析：细节理解题。

由第二段最后一句“...only the diagnosis that he might die young from motor neurone disease made him concentrate on his work."可知，是“运动神经元疾病”促使他有所作为。

故选C项。

答案:C
29・ What can we learn from the last paragraph?
A. Stephen Hawking didn't realize his dreams in physics.
B・ It was possible for Hawking to face the early death.
C・ The purpose of the doctor's diagnosis was to encourage him to work hard・
D・ His life might be taken away by long hard work.
解析：段落大意题。

由最后一段，特别是信息句“He said,
'When you are faced with the possibility of an early death, it makes you realize that life is worth living and there are lots of things you want to do."可知，他有可能要面对英年早逝的不幸事实。

故选B 项。

答案：B
30・ From whom did Hawking get a relatively just estimation when he was at school?
A ・ His sister.
B ・ His classmates・
C ・ His teachers・
D ・ His parents・
解析：细节理解题。

根据第三段最后霍金的话可知，尽管老师不看好他，同学仍给他“爱因斯坦”的绰号，他们从他身上看到好的一面。

答案：B
Edmund Halley was an English scientist who lived over 200 years ago. He studied the observations of comets which other scientists had made・The orbit of one particular comet was a very difficult mathematical problem・ He could not figure it out. Neither could other scientists who dealt with such problems.
However, Halley had a friend named Isaac Newton, who was a brilliant mathematician・ Newton thought he had already worked out that problem, but he could not find the papers on which he had done it He told Halley that the orbit of a comet had the shape of an ellipse.
Now Halley set to work, He figured out the orbits of some of the comets that had been observed by scientists. He made a surprising discovery・ The comets that had appeared in the years 1531, 1607 and 1682 all had the same orbit. Yet their appearances had been 75 to 76 years apart*
This seemed very strange to Halley. Three different comets followed the same orbit. The more Halley thought about, the more he
thought that there had not been three different comets, as people thought. He decided that they had simply seen the same comet three times・ The comet had gone away and had come back again・
It was an astonishing idea! Halley felt certain enough to make a prediction of what would happen in the future・ He decided that this comet would appear in the year 1758・There were 53 years to go before Halley f s prediction could be tested.
In 1758 the comet appeared in the sky. Halley did not see it, for he had died some years before・Ever since then that comet had been called Halley's comet, in his honour.
语篇解读：本文讲述科学家哈雷发现哈雷彗星的运行轨迹和特点O
31・ Halley made his discovery ______ ・
A. by doing experiments
B・ by means of his own careful observation
C・ by using the work of other scientists
D. by chance
解析：细节理解题。

从第一段第二句可以看出，哈雷的发现是在研究其他科学家的观察中得出来的，其他选项与本文内容不符。

答案:c
32・ Halley made a surprising but correct prediction in the year ■
A・ 1704 B・ 1705
C・ 1706 D・ 1707
解析：计算推理题。

首先确定彗星下次出现的时间是1758年，然后确定这一时间距离他预测的时间是53年，1758-53 = 1705。

答案:B
33・ This text in general is about ______
A ・ Halley and other scientists
B ・ the orbit of a comet
C・ Newton and Halley
D・ Halley and his discovery
解析：主旨大意题。

通读全文，就可以看出文章的每一段都在介绍哈雷及他的发现，另外也可以从文章的首尾句看出本文的大意。

答案：D
34・ Which of the following is TRUE?
A. Edmund Halley was an American scientist・
B ・ Halley made his discovery by doing experiment・ C・ Isaac
Newton was a famous mathematician・
D・ The orbit of a comet had the shape of an around.
解析：辨别正误题。

本文第一句说哈雷是一个英国科学家，所以A项是错误的。

从第二句话可以看出，哈雷的发现是在研究其他科学家的观察中得出来
的，所以B项是错误的。

从第二段最后一句话可以得知哈雷彗星的轨道是椭圆形的，所以排除D项。

答案:C
35・ This passage is probably written to _____ ・
A ・ general readers
B ・ college students
C・ scientists D・ astronomers
解析：可以用排除法。

文章没有特别说明写给谁，故推理是一般的读者。

答案：A
C
Someday a stranger will read your e-mail without your permission or scan the websites you've visited・ Or perhaps someone will casually glance through your credit card purchases or cell phone bills to And out your shopping preferences or calling habits・In fact, it's likely some of these things have already happened to you. Who would watch you without your permission? It might be a
girlfriend, a marketing company, a boss, a policeman or a criminal. Whoever it is, they will see you in a way you never intended to be seen—the 21st century equal to being caught naked（裸露的）・Psychologists tell us boundaries are healthy, though it*s important to reveal（透露）yourself to friends, family and lovers in stages, at appropriate times. Actually few boundaries remain. The digital bread crumbs （面包屑）you leave everywhere make it easy for strangers to reconstruct who you are, where you are and what you like. In some cases, a simple Google search can reveal what you think. Like it or not, increasingly,
w£_]iv£_ii|_^_woria_}vheF£_you_§imply_eamiot_Keep_m_3ecret・The key question is: Does that matter? For many Americans, the answer apparently is "no” ・
When opinion polls ask Americans about privacy, most say they are concerned about losing it. A survey found a majority of people are pessimistic about privacy, with 60 percent of respondents saying
they feel their privacy is a slipping away, and that bothers me” ・But people say one thing and do another. Only a small part of Americans change any behaviors in an effort to preserve their privacy ・ Few people turn down a discount at tollbooths（收费亭）to avoid using the EZ-Pass system that can track（跟踪）automobile movements・ And few turn down supermarket loyalty cards・Privacy economist Alessandro Acquits has run a series of tests that reveal people will submit personal information like Social Security numbers just to get their hands on a pitiful 50-cents-off coupon（优惠券）.
But privacy does matter at least sometimes. It's like health: when you have it, you don't notice it. Only when it's gone do you wish you'd done more to protect it.
语篇解读:在这个信息化、高科技化的时代，我们变得越来越“透明”——几乎没什么隐私。

多数人对此抱有忧虑，但实际上却很少有人在现实生活中去保护自己的隐私。

专家指出，隐私犹如健康，不要等到失去了才后悔。

36・ From Paragraph 2, we can infer _______ ・
A ・criminals are easily caught on the spot with advanced technology
B ・people tend to be more frank with each other in the information age
C・ in the 21st century people try every means to look into others* secrets
D・ people's personal information is easily accessed without their knowledge
解析：考查推理判断。

根据第二段"they will see you in a way you never intended to be seen ” 可知。

答案:D
37・ What would psychologists advise on the relationships between friends?
A. There should be a distance even between friends.
B・ There should be fewer quarrels between friends.
C・ Friends should always be faithful to each other.
D・ Friends should open their hearts to each other.
解析：考查具体细节。

根据第三段"Psychologists tell us boundaries are healthy...”可知与朋友保持适当距离是有益的。

答案:A
38. Why does the author say "we live in a world where you simply cannot keep a secret^ ?
A. There are always people who are curious about others* affairs.
B・ Many search engines profit by revealing people's identities.
C・ People leave traces around when using modern technology.
D・ Modern society has finally developed into an open society.
解析：考查猜测句意。

根据第三段“...bread crumbs you leave
everywhere make it easy...”可知在这个高科技化的时代人们几乎没有秘
密。

答案:C
39 ・ What do most Americans do with regard to privacy protection?
A・ They change behaviors that might disclose their identity.
B・ They talk a lot but hardly do anything about it.
C ・ They rely more and more on electronic equipment.
D・ They use various loyalty cards for business deals.
解析：考查具体细节。

根据倒数第二段第一句“But people say one thing and do another” 可知。

答案:B
40 ・ According to the passage, privacy is like health in that ■
A. its importance is rarely understood
B ・ it is something that can easily be lost
C・ people will make every effort to keep it
D・ people don't treasure it until they lose it
解析：考查主旨大意。

根据文章大意和最后一段可知，隐私和健康的相似点在于，人们直到失去了才知道珍惜。

答案:D
D
Franz Kafka wrote that “ q_book_must_I>e _皿_奘_（斧子）_foyjth£_fn）zeq_§e2_iiisidw_us” ・ I once shared this sentence with a class of seventh graders, and it didn't seem to require any explanatio n ・
We'd just finished John Steinbeck's novel Of Mice and Men. When we read the end together out loud in class, my toughest boy, a star basketball player, wept a little, and so did I・"Are you crying? ” one girl asked，as she got out of her chair to take a closer look. "Iam, ” I
told her, a and the funny thing is Fve read it many times. ”
But they understood・ When George shoots Lennie, the tragedy is that we realize it was always going to happen・In my 14 years of teaching in a New York City public middle school, Fve taught kids with imprisoned parents, abusive（辱骂的［parents, irresponsible parents; kids who are parents themselves; kids who are homeless; kids who grew up in violent neighborhoods・ They understands more than I ever will, the novePs terrible logic—the giving way of dreams to fate （命运）.
For the last seven years, I have worked as a reading enrichment teacher, reading classic works of literature with small groups of students from grades six to eight. I originally proposed this idea to my headmaster after learning that a former excellent student of mine had transferred out of a selective high school—one that often attracts the literary・minded children of Manhattan's upper classes—into a less competitive setting. The daughter of immigrants, with a father in prison, she perhaps felt uncomfortable with her new classmates. I thought additional a cultural capital” could help students like her develop better in high school, where they would unavoidably meet, perhaps for the first time, students who came from homes lined with bookshelves, whose parents had earned Ph.D.'s.
Along with Of Mice and Men, my groups read: Sounder, The Red Pony, Lord of the Flies, Romeo and Juliet and Macbeth. The students didn't always read from the expected point of view.About The Red Pony, one student said, “it's about being a man, it's about manliness・” I had never before seen the parallels between Scarface and Macbeth, nor had I heard Lady Macbeth's soliloquies （独白）read as raps （说卩昌），but both made sense; the interpretations were playful, but serious・Once introduced to Steinbeck's writing, one boy went on to read The Grapes of Wrath and told me repeatedly how amazing it was that "all these people hate each other, and they1re all white” ・ His historical view was broadening, his sense of his own country deepening・ Year after year, former students visited and told me how prepared they had felt in their first year in college as a result of the classes・
Year after year, however, we are increasing the number of practice tests. We are trying to teach students to read increasingly complex texts, not for emotional punch （碰撞）but for text
complexity. Yet, we cannot enrich （充实）the minds of our students by testing them on texts that ignore their hearts・ We are teaching them that words do not amaze but confuse・ We may succeed in raising test scores, but we will fail to teach them that reading can be transformative and that it belongs to them・
41. The underlined words in Paragraph 1 probably mean that a book helps to _______ ・
A ・ realize our dreams
B ・ give support to our life
C・ smooth away difHculties D・ awake our emotions 答案：D
42. Why were the students able to understand the novel Of Mice and Men ?
A・ Because they spent much time reading it.
B ・ Because they had read the novel before・
C・ Because they came from a public school.
D・ Because they had similar life experiences・
答案:D
43 ・ The girl left the selective high school possibly because .
A. she was a literary・minded girl
B・ her parents were immigrants
C・ she couldn't fit in with her class
D・ her father was then in prison
答案:C
44. To the author's surprise, the students read the novels ■
A・ creatively B・ passively C・ repeatedly D・ carelessly
答案:A
45. The author writes the passage mainly to _______
A. introduce classic works of literature
B・ advocate teaching literature to touch the heart C・ argue for equality among high school students D・ defend the current
testing system
答案：B 第二节：信息匹配（共5小题；每小题2分，满分10分）
阅读下列应用文及相关信息，按照要求匹配信息。

A. Chemistry Club：The Chemistry Club promotes students* interest in several basic sciences, which include chemistry, physics and various engineering disciplines.Members of the club have a desire to apply textbook knowledge to real world experiments.One goal of the organization is to create " experiment assemblies（集会）” for lower, middle and upper school students・
B・Ecology Club：The Ecology Club is an award winning organization at the state level.Students in this organization participate in numerous energy education activities, including an extensive on-campus recycling program.Emphasis is placed on environmental awareness, science education, and special projects, including upkeep（维修）of the schoofs trails（小路）.
C・Young Einsteins：Students interested in science have the opportunity for hands-on experience and field trips related to a wide range of scientific topics.The club meets after school with the Lower School science lab coordinate（同等的人）.
D・ Readers and Surfers Club： The Readers and Surfers Club is designed to encourage students to read for pleasure, as well as for research into science.Students are also given an opportunity to enhance their computer surfing skills・
E・SADD：The Students Against Destructive Decisions is a school-based organization dedicated to addressing the issues of underage drinking, drug use, and other destructive decisions and killers of young people.Its mission is to provide students with the best prevention and intervention tools to deal with the serious issues young adults are facing today.The idea of empowerment the foundation of SADD, is to build students1confidence and ability to create changes.SADD promotes a "no use” message of alcohol and other drugs and encourages students not to participate in activities with destructive
consequences・
F・ FBLA： The Future Business Leaders of America strives to develop competent, aggressive business leadership, to strengthen the confidence of students in themselves and their work, to assist
students in the establishment of occupational goals 9to encourage scholarship and promote school loyalty, to create more interest in and understanding of the American Business Enterprise, and to facilitate the transition from school to work.Any student enrolled in a business class may join FBLA・
46・Marty is an excellent student majoring in business.Unfortunately for him, he has picked up some bad habits because of heavy stress.Nowadays, what troubles him most is that he often feels pain in his lung.He wonders if there is any good way to throw off his sufferings.
47・Rochester is a student majoring in engineering.Having formed a habit of studying something in order to apply it, he has developed a wide range of interest in scientific research・
48・ Taylor is an average healthy school kid—except that she is director of her own company and earns more money in a day than her teachers earn in a year.But she wants to stay at high school for a little longer and hunt for every opportunity to improve herself.Thus she can have more chances to start a different kind of business in the future ・
49・Laurence is a computer addict as well as a science lover.Unlike other students who are fond of playing computer games, he takes reading on-line as his hobby・
50・Rebecca is always dreaming of becoming a woman scientist.Now, being aware of the shortage of energy, she desires to do every bit to protect the environment and strongly objects to throwing
F・
FBLA
some recyclable things away・
D.
E.
F.
答案：46.E 47.A 48.F 49.D 50.B
第三部分写作(共两节，满分40分)
第一节：基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)
请根据以丁提示，以The Man of “Apple”为题写一篇介绍Steve Jobs 的短文。

1. 出生年月：生于1955年。

2.职业: 美国苹果公司前CEO、联合创始人。

1976年, 21 岁的乔布斯和26岁的沃兹尼艾克(Wozniak)成立了苹果电脑公司。

3・成就：乔布斯先后缔造了麦金塔计算机、ipad、iPod、iTunes Store> iPhone等诸多数字产品。

4・荣誉：1985年，乔布斯获得了由里根(Ronald Reagan)总统授予的国家级技术勋章；1997年成为《时代周刊》的封面人物；2007
年，被《财富》杂志评为年度最伟大商人。

2009年，被《财富》杂
志评选为这十年美国最佳CEO,同年当选《时代周刊》年度风云人物之一。

5. 评价：乔布斯是一个充满想象和创造的人。

世界各地的人们永远不会忘记他和他的“苹果”。

参考词汇：麦金塔计算机Macintosh computer
参考范文：
The Man of "Apple”
Born in 1955 in America, the former Apple CEO, cofounder, Steve Jobs, formed Apple Computer with Wozniak, aged 26, in ter Jobs created the Macintosh computer and has led ipad, iPod, iTunes Store, iPhone and many other well-known digital products.
In 1985，Jobs received a grant from the Ronald Reagan Presidential Medal of state-level technology； In 1997 as cover on the Time magazine； In 2007，Steve Jobs was Fortune magazine as the greatest businessman of the year.In 2009 by Fortune magazine as the best decade American CEO, the same year was elected one of Time magazine Person of the Year.
In a word, Jobs is a great man full of imagination and creation.so people all over the world will never forget him and his “Apple” ・
第二节：读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

My husband received a letter a month ago from a young woman who had been his student when she was in middle school. She was writing because she wanted to thank him for having a great influence in her life.
In the letter she wrote, "You were the teacher who helped me discover my talent for math・ Before you came to teach us91 had been terribly poor at math, and had never thought that I would be interested in it. To my surprise, you magically showed me the beauty of math. I guess that was the turning point of my attitude towards it. Gradually my interest in it began to grow. Thanks to your encouragement, I made continuous progress in math, and finally made up my mind to study it in the university. Today I am working as an accountant at Valley Medical Center in California・ You played an important part. Thank you! ”
What a wonderful gift to a retired teacher! My husband has received many letters from students over the years・This one was special, for it arrived at this time in his life when he is in very poor health ・
写作内容
1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2.以约120个词就老师影响学生的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包
括:
(1)上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师;
(2)举例说明该老师对你学习或成长的影响；
(3)你怎样看待老师对学生的影响。

写作要求
1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

评分标准
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

参考范文：
One possible version：
A thankful letter from a former student of the writer's husband inspired the retired, sick teacher, from which the writer learnt how great influence a teacher might have on his students・
Having read this passageI can*t help thinking of my former teacher called Miss Li who helped me most when I was in great trouble in Senior 2・
I can still well remember that it was Miss Li who raised my confidence and inspired my motivation to study hard.When I was in Senior 2,I had great problems in learning English.As I couldn't remember the new words, I always did poorly even failed in the English exams.For some time, I decided to give up learning English.Luckily, it was Miss Li who encouraged me to try some different methods to remember English words and kept praising me constantly even though I made a little progress・
Thanks to her timely encouragement and guide, my English was improved greatly finally・
Personally , everyone needs encouragement especially the encouragement from a teacher can give a deep and signiflcant impact on students.Even have a strong effect on the students* life.Without their encouragement, I would not achieve my dream in senior 3・名师点拨:本文要求以自己的亲身经历谈论老师的鼓励在学生学习方面的重要性。

首先表明自己的观点一一鼓励对于学生的进步很有帮助，能够帮助学生建立自信、激发学习兴趣。

然后举例说明以前在学习遇到困难时老师及时的鼓励使自己提高兴趣并取得了进步。

句中可用be of great significance to sb., have difficulty in doing sth ・，make progress in, owe sth.to sb•等短语或句式，也可以适当用一些定语从句等复合句式。