《Onthemove》PartⅤPPT
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从小就喜欢游泳，在学校里认真学习，放学后认真训练；
H确e定is我体ev裁e是n：th学本e m文校o为st游记cap叙泳ab文l队e；. 的队员。 第I am三2f步r.oI：m_由S_h词a_n扩_do_句n_g雏，_形_lao_m现v_eem_db_es_rw_of_itmh_e_ms_chi_on_ogl_sw_i_m_m_in_g_teawmh. en I was a small boy. lHoeveisd我esvwe小inmtmh的einmg时ost候cap喜abl欢e. 游泳。
a member of school swimming team
Whe6ne.vIenr Iemveeert d_if_fic_u_lti_es_，_I_ne_v_er_lo_s_e _he_a_rt_. ___l_o_se__h_e_a_rt___________________.我从来不灰心丧气。
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第五步：过渡衔接连成篇 I am from Shandong，a member of the school swimming team.I am 198cm in height.I
have been loving swimming since I was a small boy.At 7 I became a member of the school swimming team.Five years later ， I won a gold medal at the County Swimming Championship and became a champion at the National Swimming Championships later.Though I have got great achievements，I never give up training.One day I injured my arm in training，someone advised me to see a doctor，but I refused.Whenever I meet difficulties，I never lose heart.
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第二步：核心词汇想周全 1.___a_m__e_m_b_e_r__o_f._..____ 是……的一员 2.__w__in__a_g_o_l_d_m__e_d_a_l __ 赢得一枚金牌 3._b_e_c_o_m_e__a_c_h_a_m_p_i_o_n__ 成为冠军 4._g_e_t_g_r_e_at_a_c_h_i_e_v_e_m_e_n_ts 获得巨大成就 5._____l_o_se__h_e_a_rt______ 失去信心 6.__ad_v_i_s_e_s_b_t_o__d_o_s_th___ 建议某人做某事
many records. 7.This spirit is worthy to be learned by all of us. 8.With this ambition，he could defeat any difficulties. r loses heart. 10.make more progress...
Unit 3 On the move
Part Ⅴ Writing——体育故事
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故事重点在写事，而不在写人。但是，故事应以人为主题，讲述发生在人物身 上的感人故事。故事应具有激励性，充满正能量，给人以启发，催人奋进，积极向 上。语言具有趣味性，耐人寻味，同时，精炼、言简意赅。
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【增分表达】 1.one of the best athletes in our country 2.He is good at... 3.He is even the most capable...in the world. 4.keep the best record of...until now. 5.I find myself full of passion in my heart. 6.He is the best example of making every effort to develop his sport career and break so
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第一步：布局谋篇很关键 ►审题 1.确定体裁： 本文为记叙文； 2.确定中心人称：本文主要为__第__一__人__称____； 3.确定主题时态：_______一__般__现__在__时__或__过__去__时_______。 ►构思 第一部分：简要介绍自己。 第二部分：____自__己__的__故__事____。 第三部分：对体育运动的认识和对未来的期许。
One day I injured my arm in training，someone advised me to see a doctor，but I refused.
I am319.I8chmainvheeigghot.t _________g_r_e_at_a_c_h_i_e_v_e_m_e_n_t_s_________.
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请_第I第g将请a__PW第HaI故lIgFlW_HWAI_gI语 Oa故我将g_将HIIOa确oaiiriianhhnaf___a___teeennvtvvvmmmmvieiiimmr用_三一句用__一事__言事是句_句定eaaene7ttteeeeeeeatiiihhhvv______vveeeerdsssdt.yuuuⅤee列ddee11英 _步 步 2英 __步 应 __具应 学 2_5主mmmmItttgeemeapppsrraa99______改改和hhhbbgovvabbcbbwyy语_：：语__：具__有 具校_题88__yiiioettteeeohrssseeee的rrrs________成成句cciIIcstnnedimaaarrrrWeaaamme写_由布写__布有__趣 有游_时a__iin_lnniiimmlmttooooaamv________一一6nnnmf_hhrjjl成tefffftii一_词局一__局激__味 激泳_态__请1234注2合iiuiuiof.bb_bnneeennne.timusss________个个rrnvi_iiir.....gggcccneettthhmml篇_扩谋篇__谋励__性 励队_：__a并，ig我学从我可_lehhhiiinddg绩ee________含含用意oooo_mnooooog—ii自_句篇自__篇性__， 性的____成nnnImm_fggtssooo_________有有esw，，，s是校小认适tt_hhp—llly。yw己_雏很己__很，__耐 ，队____英：m主_ttaccosss_________ss..hhhaaiaa_体wwwsnbmii所_形关所__关充__人 充员____从rreeesnnpp山游就为当_eiiimm_________i语1ammmccaam_育occcr经_现键经__键满__寻满。____复eebb_ooo.gnommmiii_________状状东泳喜增…词_llnnn故ouuueef历_历__正__味 正____写i合_giiinllll..tttnnnd________ddd_语语_事rrhs__m的_的__能__， 能__ggg句aa人队欢加…数_mdddie_________一nii从从_ttteeyenn__体_体__量__同 量__。eeeesc_fffiich_________edaaaeeenn句句队细。1游_he__育_育__，__时 ，__篇mmmaaaagg_o0Ia_________tttl，，的的_owr__a故_故__给__， 给__aaa员节0泳_tlt_________自nnnss句句a._左soo__事_事__人__精 人__tyyys_whmm_________子子。，，_dddae__。_。__以__炼 以__己i_miiiee右sfff_________。。C_fffoom_____启__、 启__miiio以在_nnccc_________所au_uuueie；_____发__言 发__nl_nllll_________tttaag使学_tbiii_____，__简 ，__经ddyeee_to_________vvssse.Sy..._____催__意 催__iia行w校ss._________历meei_____人__赅 人_。mdd.________文里mmm_____奋__。 奋_的________eein_____进__进_连认ttg________体oo_____，__，_C__ss______贯真hee..___积__积_育aee______m___极__极_aa。学p______故dd___向__向_iooo______习ncc___上__上_事tts______ooh___。__。_rr，ip______。，，______a______bbn放______内uud______ttb______II学e______容rreec______aff______后uum______要ss______eeedd认a点.. ch真如am训p下ion练：at；the经Nat过iona努l Sw力im取min得g Ch了am一pion系ships
经过努力取得了一系列的成绩。
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第四步：句型升级造亮点 1.将句2改成一个含有since状语从句的句子。 ____________I _h_a_v_e_b_e_e_n_l_o_v_in_g__s_w_i_m_m__in_g__s_in_c_e__I_w__a_s _a_s_m_a_l_l_b_o_y_._________________ 2.将句3和句4合并成含有though引导让步状语从句的句子。 __________T_h_o_u_g_h__I_h_a_v_e__g_o_t _g_re_a_t_a_c_h_i_ev_e_m__e_n_ts_，__I_n_e_v_e_r_g_i_v_e_u_p__tr_a_in_i_n_g_.__________ 3.将句5和句6合并成主从复合句。 __________________W__h_en_e_v_e_r_I__m_e_e_t_d_if_f_ic_u_l_ti_e_s_，__I _n_e_v_e_r _lo_s_e_h_e_a_r_t.________________
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This spirit is worthy to be learned by all of us.
give u第p t三rain步ing ：由词扩句雏形现
确定中心人称：本文主要为____________；
____1__.I__a__m_______________a____m___e__m_____b__e_r____o___f__s___c_h__o___o__l___s__w____i_m_____m___i__n__g___t__e___a__m______________.__
Whenever I meet difficulties，I never lose heart.
从小我就喜已欢经游泳取，得在学了校巨里认大真成学习就，。放学后认真训练；
advise sb to do sth
IFahcaivn4eg.bdIeifenfinceulovltvieiensrg，s_wh_eim_nme_vi_nerg_lso_isn_ecse_h_Iew_ara_ts._a_sm_a_ll_b_ogy_.i_v_e_u_p__tr_a_in_i_n_g________________.我从来不放弃训练。 确a m定e5主m.bI题er_时o_f态._：______________________________________________m____e__。e_t _d_if_f_ic_u_l_ti_e_s________________.我遇到困难。
H确e定is我体ev裁e是n：th学本e m文校o为st游记cap叙泳ab文l队e；. 的队员。 第I am三2f步r.oI：m_由S_h词a_n扩_do_句n_g雏，_形_lao_m现v_eem_db_es_rw_of_itmh_e_ms_chi_on_ogl_sw_i_m_m_in_g_teawmh. en I was a small boy. lHoeveisd我esvwe小inmtmh的einmg时ost候cap喜abl欢e. 游泳。
a member of school swimming team
Whe6ne.vIenr Iemveeert d_if_fic_u_lti_es_，_I_ne_v_er_lo_s_e _he_a_rt_. ___l_o_se__h_e_a_rt___________________.我从来不灰心丧气。
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第五步：过渡衔接连成篇 I am from Shandong，a member of the school swimming team.I am 198cm in height.I
have been loving swimming since I was a small boy.At 7 I became a member of the school swimming team.Five years later ， I won a gold medal at the County Swimming Championship and became a champion at the National Swimming Championships later.Though I have got great achievements，I never give up training.One day I injured my arm in training，someone advised me to see a doctor，but I refused.Whenever I meet difficulties，I never lose heart.
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第二步：核心词汇想周全 1.___a_m__e_m_b_e_r__o_f._..____ 是……的一员 2.__w__in__a_g_o_l_d_m__e_d_a_l __ 赢得一枚金牌 3._b_e_c_o_m_e__a_c_h_a_m_p_i_o_n__ 成为冠军 4._g_e_t_g_r_e_at_a_c_h_i_e_v_e_m_e_n_ts 获得巨大成就 5._____l_o_se__h_e_a_rt______ 失去信心 6.__ad_v_i_s_e_s_b_t_o__d_o_s_th___ 建议某人做某事
many records. 7.This spirit is worthy to be learned by all of us. 8.With this ambition，he could defeat any difficulties. r loses heart. 10.make more progress...
Unit 3 On the move
Part Ⅴ Writing——体育故事
1
故事重点在写事，而不在写人。但是，故事应以人为主题，讲述发生在人物身 上的感人故事。故事应具有激励性，充满正能量，给人以启发，催人奋进，积极向 上。语言具有趣味性，耐人寻味，同时，精炼、言简意赅。
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【增分表达】 1.one of the best athletes in our country 2.He is good at... 3.He is even the most capable...in the world. 4.keep the best record of...until now. 5.I find myself full of passion in my heart. 6.He is the best example of making every effort to develop his sport career and break so
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第一步：布局谋篇很关键 ►审题 1.确定体裁： 本文为记叙文； 2.确定中心人称：本文主要为__第__一__人__称____； 3.确定主题时态：_______一__般__现__在__时__或__过__去__时_______。 ►构思 第一部分：简要介绍自己。 第二部分：____自__己__的__故__事____。 第三部分：对体育运动的认识和对未来的期许。
One day I injured my arm in training，someone advised me to see a doctor，but I refused.
I am319.I8chmainvheeigghot.t _________g_r_e_at_a_c_h_i_e_v_e_m_e_n_t_s_________.
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请_第I第g将请a__PW第HaI故lIgFlW_HWAI_gI语 Oa故我将g_将HIIOa确oaiiriianhhnaf___a___teeennvtvvvmmmmvieiiimmr用_三一句用__一事__言事是句_句定eaaene7ttteeeeeeeatiiihhhvv______vveeeerdsssdt.yuuuⅤee列ddee11英 _步 步 2英 __步 应 __具应 学 2_5主mmmmItttgeemeapppsrraa99______改改和hhhbbgovvabbcbbwyy语_：：语__：具__有 具校_题88__yiiioettteeeohrssseeee的rrrs________成成句cciIIcstnnedimaaarrrrWeaaamme写_由布写__布有__趣 有游_时a__iin_lnniiimmlmttooooaamv________一一6nnnmf_hhrjjl成tefffftii一_词局一__局激__味 激泳_态__请1234注2合iiuiuiof.bb_bnneeennne.timusss________个个rrnvi_iiir.....gggcccneettthhmml篇_扩谋篇__谋励__性 励队_：__a并，ig我学从我可_lehhhiiinddg绩ee________含含用意oooo_mnooooog—ii自_句篇自__篇性__， 性的____成nnnImm_fggtssooo_________有有esw，，，s是校小认适tt_hhp—llly。yw己_雏很己__很，__耐 ，队____英：m主_ttaccosss_________ss..hhhaaiaa_体wwwsnbmii所_形关所__关充__人 充员____从rreeesnnpp山游就为当_eiiimm_________i语1ammmccaam_育occcr经_现键经__键满__寻满。____复eebb_ooo.gnommmiii_________状状东泳喜增…词_llnnn故ouuueef历_历__正__味 正____写i合_giiinllll..tttnnnd________ddd_语语_事rrhs__m的_的__能__， 能__ggg句aa人队欢加…数_mdddie_________一nii从从_ttteeyenn__体_体__量__同 量__。eeeesc_fffiich_________edaaaeeenn句句队细。1游_he__育_育__，__时 ，__篇mmmaaaagg_o0Ia_________tttl，，的的_owr__a故_故__给__， 给__aaa员节0泳_tlt_________自nnnss句句a._左soo__事_事__人__精 人__tyyys_whmm_________子子。，，_dddae__。_。__以__炼 以__己i_miiiee右sfff_________。。C_fffoom_____启__、 启__miiio以在_nnccc_________所au_uuueie；_____发__言 发__nl_nllll_________tttaag使学_tbiii_____，__简 ，__经ddyeee_to_________vvssse.Sy..._____催__意 催__iia行w校ss._________历meei_____人__赅 人_。mdd.________文里mmm_____奋__。 奋_的________eein_____进__进_连认ttg________体oo_____，__，_C__ss______贯真hee..___积__积_育aee______m___极__极_aa。学p______故dd___向__向_iooo______习ncc___上__上_事tts______ooh___。__。_rr，ip______。，，______a______bbn放______内uud______ttb______II学e______容rreec______aff______后uum______要ss______eeedd认a点.. ch真如am训p下ion练：at；the经Nat过iona努l Sw力im取min得g Ch了am一pion系ships
经过努力取得了一系列的成绩。
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第四步：句型升级造亮点 1.将句2改成一个含有since状语从句的句子。 ____________I _h_a_v_e_b_e_e_n_l_o_v_in_g__s_w_i_m_m__in_g__s_in_c_e__I_w__a_s _a_s_m_a_l_l_b_o_y_._________________ 2.将句3和句4合并成含有though引导让步状语从句的句子。 __________T_h_o_u_g_h__I_h_a_v_e__g_o_t _g_re_a_t_a_c_h_i_ev_e_m__e_n_ts_，__I_n_e_v_e_r_g_i_v_e_u_p__tr_a_in_i_n_g_.__________ 3.将句5和句6合并成主从复合句。 __________________W__h_en_e_v_e_r_I__m_e_e_t_d_if_f_ic_u_l_ti_e_s_，__I _n_e_v_e_r _lo_s_e_h_e_a_r_t.________________
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This spirit is worthy to be learned by all of us.
give u第p t三rain步ing ：由词扩句雏形现
确定中心人称：本文主要为____________；
____1__.I__a__m_______________a____m___e__m_____b__e_r____o___f__s___c_h__o___o__l___s__w____i_m_____m___i__n__g___t__e___a__m______________.__
Whenever I meet difficulties，I never lose heart.
从小我就喜已欢经游泳取，得在学了校巨里认大真成学习就，。放学后认真训练；
advise sb to do sth
IFahcaivn4eg.bdIeifenfinceulovltvieiensrg，s_wh_eim_nme_vi_nerg_lso_isn_ecse_h_Iew_ara_ts._a_sm_a_ll_b_ogy_.i_v_e_u_p__tr_a_in_i_n_g________________.我从来不放弃训练。 确a m定e5主m.bI题er_时o_f态._：______________________________________________m____e__。e_t _d_if_f_ic_u_l_ti_e_s________________.我遇到困难。