上海2009年高考英语作文训练与仿写

（A）

It is said that a summer camp is to be held by your school and a few courses are available to choose from. I am interested in gardening, in that I believe it features my character and personal benefits.

During the learning period, I expect to gain some unexpected knowledge. A radical technique I‟d like to obtain is to know how to tell difference species of plants and flowers apart. This helps me to have a clearer outlook of those in my garden. Furthermore, the proper cutting time and frequency to water are some other skills I want to learn. A little knowledge concerning choosing suitable soil or reasonable positions will also be a good choice.

The main reason why I choose gardening is that I want to help my parents with their work in the domestic garden. In addition, I find that we students generally lack the knowledge of gardening, missing a chance to have a word with nature, so that knowing the surroundings is imperative. Last but not least, by attending the courses, I will have a meaningful summer vacation, and drowning myself between plants will by all means add a brilliant touch to my life.

能根据题目要求，详略得当地阐明自己的想法，尤其是写出了文章的重点“你期望从这门课程中学到什么，为什么想学这些内容”。语言表达基本正确，流畅，句子结构和用词多样性，体现了较高的语言知识水平。但对于申请信的功能和信的读者等方面考虑还欠佳。

（B）

Having read your school‟s advertisement, I am great interested in you lessons. Of all these

lessons, I prefer nursing best. Many factors make me do this decision.

To begin with, not only is nursing used in the hospital, but also it is useful in common life. Whenever the person around me is injured, I can always try my best to help him. After doing that no doubt I must be pride of myself.

Because my ambition is to be a doctor, that‟s one of my reasons why I choose it. I want to learn to treat some people who are sick and take care of those unabled people. How meanful and wonderful!

能根据题目要求，说明自己的决定和想法，但对于“你期望从这门课程中学到什么，为什么想学这些内容”只略微提及了一下。语言表达有较多错误，但基本不影响理解。能使用一些连接词。对于申请信的表达形式欠理解。

（C）

My name is Wang Yuehua, a senior high school student. I heard that you will offer many courses for us. I am on top of the world. I‟d like to join the nursing course.

I think my English is not very good. So I want to improve my English level through the activity. In fact, I‟m a careless boy. But I always want to help other people when they are in trouble. So I want to learn something in this course.

In a few months, I will enter the university. So it is necessary for me the learn how to deal with the life and getting along with others. So I need to learn by using this period.

I‟m looking forward to it.

未能根据题目要求，具体表达“你期望从这门课程中学到什么，为什么想学这些内容”，文中有许多与试题要求不太相干的表述。语言表达有较多错误，但基本不影响理解。能使用一些连接词，对于申请信的表达形式欠理解。

同体裁作文训练：2010届闵行区二模试题

上海世博会组织机构正在招募世博期间园区范围内的志愿者，种类分为：参观服务协助员；（assistant guider）新闻报导协助员（assistant news reporter）；交通管理协助员（assistant traffic manager）；礼宾接待协助员（assistant receptionist）

假如你是王跃华，请写一封申请信给世博会组织机构，申请参加一项志愿者服务，并根据你的性格、爱好、兴趣或特长，谈谈你申请该项志愿者服务的理由，以及在此期间拟打算做些什么。

同体裁作文训练：2009届第一次六校联考

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

2010上海世博会正在广泛招募志愿者。请写一封自荐信。内容包括：

1、为什么参加应聘？

2、你的优势及特长。

22分

Dear Shanghai Expo V olunteering Committee,

I would like to be a volunteer during the World Expo held in Shanghai. I clearly remembered when I heard Shanghai had won the bid of hosting the Expo, I jumped with joy. At that time, I decided to work for Expo in 2010.

Expo will present a stage for us to demonstrate our city and our country to the whole world. It surely needs a large number of volunteers like the past Olympic Games. As a senior 3 student. I