细节描写片段练习(汇编)
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细节描写片段练习
一、进球
他抢过球,转身一抛,把球抛进了篮筐里。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 二、吃辣椒
他拿起一根辣椒咬下去,辣得他晕头转向,他急忙找水喝。_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________三、试卷发下来之后
老师把批好的试卷发了下来。在拿到试卷之前,我紧张得要命,就怕自己考砸了。试卷拿到手以后,我一看不及格,很是伤心。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 四、做错了题目
老师批评学生做错了题目,老师说:“你又做错了!”我无地自容。
要求:请同学们把老师批评学生做错了题目这个典型细节写得生动起来,要精心锤炼词语,巧妙运用修辞,善于想像联想,写一段片段作文。
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