2020高考英语写作指导---建议信

附：高考新课标卷英语书面表达命题特点
书面表达是近年高考中较为稳定的题型，重点考查学生能否有效 地运用所学英语知识进行布局谋篇、遣词造句的能力，以及能否清楚、 连贯地传递信息，表达真实思想的能力。试题难度适中，稳中求变， 但总的来说越来越贴近课程标准的要求。
在命题方向和规律上，书面表达题型有几个明显特点： 仍为半控制性、半开放式写作，以提纲方式呈现材
建议信写作的注意事项：
a．这类文章一定要符合英语信件的基本 格式。
b．这类文章的基本时态多用现在时和一 般将来时。
c. 掌握建议信的语言特点：语气要诚恳， 有礼貌；建议内容要详尽具体，不能含糊其 辞；可提供的建议通常是多个，因此要注意 各个建议之间的衔接。
d. 熟悉建议信的常用句型。
常用Baidu Nhomakorabea语
A．建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图)
2020年高考英语写作训练指导
建议
（书信/电子邮件）
长春市第二实验中学 2020.6.6
写作攻略：
1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠 告。 2.建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题 提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织 和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。 3.建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建 议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要 礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明 确、具有合理性和说服力。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。提示词： 新型冠状病毒感染的肺炎COVID-19; 口罩 face mask
One possible sample:
Dear Jack, As we know, the world is suffering from
COVID-19, and I’m very worried about you. This is why I’m writing to to know about your situation.
料，词数100左右； 2.写作体裁：命题多以书信或电子邮件形式突出写作的交际性、
应用性、真实性； 3.写作话题：贴近现实和学生生活实际，学生比较熟悉，第一人
称写作为主，话题场景性和真实性突出，体现中外交流以及现实或传 统中的“正能量”，往往涵盖考纲要求的多个话题的组合运用；
4.写作手法：介绍性说明占主体（说明时间、地点、原因、过程 等），辅以交际性应用（解决“现实”生活中的实际问题）。
One possible sample:
As you know, Chinese is so flexible that you need to pay attention to the different meanings of a word or phrase in different situations. Besides, it is difficult for foreigners to write Chinese characters, especially for the beginners. So I advise you to learn some oral Chinese first. Then you may begin to try writing some simple Chinese characters. Finally, there is one point for you to remember: practice makes perfect.
Best wishes! Yours Sincerely Li Hua
Goodbye!
1. After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that … 2. I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3. I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter. 4. I am writing to you in reply to ... 5. You have asked me for my advice on how to…and I’ll try to make some suggestions. 6. I am writing to express my views on/ concerning…
One possible sample:
As your best friend, I'm willing to try my best to help you with overcoming the difficulty. I hope you are all right forever.
Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Hua.
适当运用模板
Dear XXX, I've received your letter, saying+ 对方的问题.
I'm sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. My suggestions are as follows.
Firstly, ____________, because ___________. Secondly, you'd better________________. By doing this, you'll _________. Thirdly, it is useful for you to __________. Only in this way can you __________. What's more, why not _________?
Homework
假设你是学生李华，你的外国朋友Tom目前正在 努力学习汉语，但在学习中遇到了一些困难，因此他 在几天前给你发电子邮件求助，询问怎样才能学好汉 语。请根据以下要点给他回复一封邮件：
1．感谢他之前对你英语学习的建议和帮助； 2．简要介绍汉语语言的特点以及学习汉语的方法； 3．邀请他暑假期间来中国，交流语言学习经验。 注意： 1．词数：100左右; 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
For anyone, keeping healthy was, is and remains to be the most important thing in one’s life. So you must take good care of yourself during this period. You'd better keep staying in these days. And I advise you wash your hands frequently and wear a mask when having to go out.
One possible sample:
Dear Tom, I'm so glad to receive your last letter. I
can't thank you enough for your advice and help in my English study, due to which I've made great progress. Meanwhile, I'm concerned to know that you are facing some difficulties when studying Chinese. I'm willing to offer you some help.
B. 表达建议（Body正文）
1. Have you considered doing.../ So why not do...? 2. I think it would be more beneficial if you could … 3. I would like to suggest that you should… 4. If I were you, I would… 5. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 6. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can… 7. You'd better do.../ It's better for you to do... 8. The best way to do sth is to do …/ There is no better way to do sth than to do sth ...
C.建议信结尾常用句式
1. I believe you will take my suggestions into consideration. 2. I hope you will find these suggestions useful/ helpful. 3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard(在这一点上). 4. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it. 5. In the end, I will be glad if you find these ideas useful. 6. I would be ready to further discuss this matter. 7. I am looking forward to your early reply and good news. 8. Let’s keep in touch. I do hope to hear good news from you.
One possible sample:
Another suggestion is that you should experience the native Chinese language environment in person. How about coming to China during the summer holiday? We can talk about our experience in language learning with each other.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.
Best wishes.
Yours,
xxx
建议信例题
假定你是李华，现在全世界正遭受新型冠状病毒感 染的肺炎，你对外国朋友 Jack 的状况非常担心，所以 给他写一封电子邮件，询问他的状况并给他建议。 内容包括： 1. 询问 Jack 身体境况； 2. 建议 Jack 照顾好自己（别出门，勤洗手，戴口罩）； 3. 愿意力所能及提供帮助。 注意：1. 词数 100 左右。