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如何回复审稿人意见(Response to Reviews)

如何回复审稿人意见(Response to Reviews)

Dear Editor,We have studied the valuable comments from you, the assistant editor and reviewers carefully, and tried our best to revise the manuscript. The point to point responds to the reviewer’s comments are listed as following:Responds to the rev iewer’s comments:Reviewer 1Comment 1: in page 3, line 40, we fed rats..." changed to rats were fed with... Response: According to the reviewer’s comment, we have corrected the sentence. Furthermore, we have had the manuscript polished with a professional assistance in writing.Comment 2:page 25. The style of reference 40 is not right (using initials for the first names). Since this paper has been published, the volume and page Nos should be provided.Response: Thank you for your careful work. We have added the volume and page numbers for reference 40.Reviewer 2Comment: I would like to thank the authors for their efforts in addressing the criticisms with additional experiments. The one criticism that they did not address was relating to energy expenditure as the reason that the animals on the low calcium diet gained more weight. While I understand that performing this experiment will not affect the conclusion of this manuscript, I do believe that this point could be discussed in the Discussion section.Response: Thank you for your valuable advice. Based on the previous revision, we further address the relationship between low calcium diet and energy expenditure in the section of discussion according to your thoughtful comments.Reviewer 3Comment 1: In the text you often write: “As previously described”. Unless that paper is from your lab or one of the method paper co-authors is on the present MS this is not quite proper since the statement infers method development from your lab. There are numerous instances like that in the methods section; these should all be changed “according to those described by…..”Response: We are sorry for this language mistake. We have carefully corrected this phrase throughout the manuscript according to your comment.Comment 2: There are still some wording, sentence structure and grammatical issues even in this basically well put together MS. For example, while authors may have been excited about the data you cannot start a sentence with “Excitedly” in line 418 or “Whatever” in line 395.Response: Thank you very much to point out the sentence structure and grammatical issues in our manuscript. According to the comments from you and the editors, we polished the manuscript with a professional assistance in writing, conscientiously.Comment 3:In my view a big omission in this work is ignoring the anabolic side of lipid metabolism as well as thermogenesis issues. For example all animals consumed the same amount of feed but we had extra fat storage in the low Ca diet groups. So where did the extra energy go? Zemel et al (citation 34) in similar work indicate that increased thermogenesis on the high Ca diet explains the dissipation of dietary energy. Further even though Zemel et al (#34) indicated lipogenesis was enhanced in the low Ca diets that was in 2000 and you should have monitored expression of FAS and UCP either as mRNA abundance or actual FAS/UCP changes via proteomics or blotting techniques. In any case these controls are missing here and not emphasized in the MS. Casual reading of this paper would lead to the conclusion that the dietary Ca effect on fat deposition is strictly a function of increased or decreased lipolysis. While lipolysis appears to be a major player, lipogenesis and thermogenesis cannot be ignored for completeness. In Fig 8 you also show a decline in cAMP for the low Ca diet. Well beta agonists or cAMP enhancers regulate transcription of adipose and liver FAS (in rats (J Biol Chem 271:2307, 1996) and recently with large animal models (Hausman et al J Animal Science 87:1218, 2009 and Halsey et al J Animal Science 89: 1011, 2011). In additioncAMP levels could have been monitored. I really do not like the last sentence in the Abstract line 47-50 where you state that “low calcium diet-induced increase in fat mass was due to enhanced lipogenesis mediated by an upregulated CaSR signaling pathway” Your results here show no such thing, this is a completely false statement based on data herein. Correct. You show that high Ca diets enhance lipolysis and low Ca diets are antilipolytic. You did not monitor lipid anabolism here at all. See also line 255-257 and lines 333-335 of your MS. Response: Thank you for your valuable and thoughtful comments. As you suggested that the anabolic side of lipid metabolism as well as thermogenesis issues should be monitored. We really agree with your viewpoints. In the present study, we did find that low calcium diet increased the mRNA level of fatty acid synthase (FAS) in white adipose tissue. Furthermore, the FAS mRNA level were also increased in adipocytes after treatment with 1,25-(OH)2D3in in-vitro experiments. However, the increased FAS mRNA levels were not affected by preventing either the nuclear vitamin D receptor (nVDR) or calcium-sensing receptor (CaSR), suggesting that FAS might not be involved in the CaSR pathway. In addition, we thought that FAS played its role in fatty acid synthesis mainly in liver previously. Besides, the manuscript was required to restrict number of total words and our previous focus was on the antilolytic role of CaSR in the process of fat accumulation. So we ignored to provide the data of FAS mRNA levels in the submitted manuscript. In the newly submitted manuscript, we have provided the mRNA levels according to your helpful suggestion.We have reported the effects of dietary calcium on UCP2 mRNA levels in adipose tissue and UCP3 in skeletal muscle in our previous studies (1, 2). Thus, we believed that low calcium diet led to decreased thermogenesis in the present study. It was a pity that we did not measure the rat core temperature in those studies. The UCP2 mRNA levels in adipocytes were observed to be decreased after treatment of 1,25-(OH)2D3. This effect was prevented by using nVDR CaSR gene silencing but not by CaSR gene knockdown, suggesting that UCP2 was not involved in CaSR pathways. In the newly submitted manuscript, we have provided the UCP2 results.Thank you for your careful reading of our manuscript. We are very sorry for our fault statement in the abstract. We have corrected it in the new manuscript.Comment 4: A point that does not emerge well from the discussion is how low Ca intakes result in higher intracellular [Ca] concentrations and really the effects on fatdeposition in the cells in many ways are due to an increased intracellular Ca level mediated via CaSR expression increases and the effect of VitD3 on nVDR show in Fig 8. The authors must remind readers that Ca levels in the blood are under hormonal regulation (Calcitonin, PTH and VitD3). Thus when diets low in Ca are consumed and blood Ca decline, PTH and VitD3 are called upon to mobilize bone Ca to replenish the blood Ca. Then coupled with an increase in CaSR more Ca actually is found in AT despite the fact that many would think the AT Ca level should decline. The reason is that tissue/circulating Ca levels are not diet depended but regulated. The vast bone stores of Ca will provide ample Ca here especially during a study of this length. While authors address these issues maybe could be presented in a less complicated discussion.Response:Thank you for your instructive suggestions. We are sorry for not describing the effect of low calcium diet on intracellular calcium concentrations mediated by CaSR, as well as the impact of hormone regulation on serum calcium levels clearly. According to your helpful advice, we have rewritten these two parts in the section of discussion. Thank you again.Comment 5: Not all citations are in JN styleResponse: We have careful recheck and corrected the style of the citations according to the requirement of JN.Comment 6: Abstract conclusion differs from lines 255-257 and 333-335; WHY? Response: Thank you for your careful reading of our manuscript. The conclusion from lines 255-257 is about the effect of low calcium diet on serum levels of free fatty acids (FFAs) and lipids. We considered FFA and glycerol as indicators of TG hydrolysis in adipose tissue. The low calcium diet caused decreased serum FFA and glycerol levels without influencing lipoprotein lipase (LPL) activity, so we thought the lipolytic effect of adipose tissue to be suppressed by low calcium diet. The conclusion from lines 333-335 was about the effect of 1,25-(OH)2D3 whose levels were increased under low calcium conditions on lipolysis. We used the glycerol level as the indicator of TG hydrolysis in adipocytes. Both the in vivo and in vitro experiments showed low calcium status caused an antilipolytic effect.Comment 7: Line 150-153. The qRT-PCR methodology is not at all understandable as you cite a Texas A&M published paper. This is completely insufficient with the newly established standards on gene expression via qRT-PCR. There is no mention of efficiencies of amplifications in these data nor how the use of the reference gene was established etc. I think Pfaffl and Bustin have recently written an article on this; please totally revise 150-153 in line with what you did and applying the new standards.Response: Thank you very much. Because the JN restricts the number of total words of manuscript, we cited the Texas A&M published paper. In the newly submitted manuscript, we describe the detailed protocols in our lab.Comment 8:Line 179 on Not clear as in sentences talk about different AT cell sources etc..revise.Response: We are sorry for not addressing the adipose tissue cell sources clearly. We have rewritten the methods.Comment 9: Any previous documentable work with siRNA?Response: Yes, we have documentable work with siRNA in our research team. The results were published in the journal of Biochem Biophys Res Commun (3).Comment 10: Line 214.. Cultured primary rat adipocytes and SW872 adipocytes ……Response: Thank you very much. According to your comment, we have had the manuscript polished and corrected the mistakes.。

回复审稿意见的礼貌用语英语

回复审稿意见的礼貌用语英语

回复审稿意见的礼貌用语英语English:"Dear Reviewer,Thank you very much for your thoughtful and detailed comments on our manuscript. We greatly appreciate the time and effort you have dedicated to reviewing our work. Your feedback is invaluable, providing us with crucial insights and guidance to improve the quality of our paper. We have carefully considered each of your suggestions and have made the necessary revisions accordingly. Our responses to your specific points are outlined below. Please let us know if there are any further changes or clarifications required. Once again, thank you for your constructive criticism, and we look forward to your feedback on our revised manuscript."中文翻译:"尊敬的审稿人,非常感谢您对我们稿件的深思熟虑和详细的评论。

我们非常感激您为审阅我们的工作所投入的时间和精力。

您的反馈非常宝贵,为我们提供了重要的见解和指导,帮助我们提高论文的质量。

我们已经仔细考虑了您提出的每一条建议,并进行了相应的修改。

reply和answer的用法与to

reply和answer的用法与to

Reply和Answer的用法与to在英语中,我们经常使用词汇来表达回应或回复某人的话。

其中,“reply”和”answer”是两个常用的词汇,但它们的用法略有不同。

在本文中,我们将深入探讨这两个词汇的用法及其区别。

首先,让我们来看一下”reply”的用法。

“reply”通常用来指作为回应或答复某人的话。

例如,当别人给你发来一封邮件时,你可以用”reply”来表示你收到了并作出了回应。

这个动词强调的是作为对话或通信的一部分,是一种回应或答复的行为。

比如,你可以说:“I replied to his email promptly.”(我及时回复了他的电子邮件。

)而”answer”则更多地侧重于回答问题或提供信息,通常更具体地指对问题或要求的回答。

当你”answer”一个问题时,你在给出具体信息或解释,而不仅仅是对某人的话作出回应。

举个例子,你可以说:“I answered all the questions on the test.”(我回答了测试中的所有问题。

)在一些情况下,“reply”和”answer”可以互相替换使用,但细微区别仍然存在。

“reply”更加抽象和广泛,可以包括任何形式的回应,而”answer”则偏重于解决问题或提供信息。

另外,值得注意的是,当我们使用这两个词汇时,有时需要加上适当的介词”to”。

“reply to”和”answer to”表达了回应或回答某人或某事的行为。

比如,“She replied to my question with a s mile.”(她微笑着回答了我的问题。

)或者,“He answered to the accusations calmly.”(他冷静地对指控作出回应。

)这里的”to”起到连接作用,使得回应或回答与特定对象联系起来。

总的来说,虽然”reply”和”answer”都可以表示回应别人的话,但在细微之处仍有不同。

“reply”更加通用和抽象,着重于作为对话或通信的一部分的回应;而”answer”则更具体,强调解决问题或提供信息。

Responses-to-comments-(英文期刊-审稿意见回复)

Responses-to-comments-(英文期刊-审稿意见回复)

Responses-to-comments-(英文期刊-审稿意见回复)Dear Editor-in-Chief in XXXXXXX:Thank you very much for your help in processing the review of our manuscript (Manuscript ID XXXXX). We have carefully read the thoughtful comments from you and reviewers and found that these suggestions are helpful for us to improve our manuscript. On the basis of the enlightening questions and helpful advices, we have now completed the revision of our manuscript. The itemized responses to the reviewers’ comments are listed in the su cceeding sheets. We hope that all these corrections and revisions would be satisfactory. Thanks a lot, again.1.Title: XXX2.Manuscript type: Article3.Corresponding author: XXX4.Full author names: XXXSincerely,Prof. XXXSchool of Chemistry and Chemical Engineering,XX Key Laboratory of Controllable ChemistryReaction & Material Chemical Engineering,XX University,Wuhan, Hubei, 430072 , P R China.2015-03-05Responses to comments of EditorThank you for your serious and constructive comments on our manuscript. According to your suggestion, the manuscript has been revised as a letter to editor. The revisions we have made are as follows:➢ 1 Subtitles "5. Conclusions", "6. Acknowledgments", and "7. References" should be revised into "4. Conclusions", "Acknowledgments", and "References", respectively.Reply:Thank you for your constructive and helpful suggestion.The relevant subtitles have been revised in the revision.➢2 In the section of the References, title of cited paper should be removed, and in ref.35 the superfluous comma should be deleted.Reply:Thank you for your constructive and helpful suggestion.All the titles have been removed as you required and the superfluous comma in ref.35 has also been deleted.➢ 3 Numerous relevant papers have been published in recent years especially in 2014 and 2015. Some key, important or/and latest research results in this field, should be mentioned and cited in the section of introduction instead of outdated or earlier papers so that we can provide a solid background and progress to the readers regarding the current state-of-knowledge on this topic. Therefore, I strongly require you to rewrite this part and then update your citations.Reply:Thank you for your constructive and helpful suggestion.We have rewritten the section of introduction and updated corresponding citations as you required. In detail, some recent and excellent researches have been cited in the revision to replace those ofearlier papers which are no longer novel.➢4 Any changes or revisions in the text should be highlighted by different color in the revised manuscript compared with that of the previous version.Reply:Thank you for your constructive and helpful suggestion.All the changes and revisions have been highlighted by cyan.We have revised our manuscript againWe have made further modifications on the manuscript, especially the introduction section. The latest revisions are highlighted by green, while previous changes are highlighted by cyan.To be specific: a) Some adjustments about sentence structures have been made to increase the diversity of expression.b) The second example about N-doped carbon materials is relatively early research result published in 2009. Thus we have replaced it with a lasted and outstanding paper.c) The unique effects of S-doping have been expounded in the revision to correspond to the effects of N-doping introduced above.d) In addition to rewriting the part of introduction as you required, we have also polished and revised the chapters of experimental, results and discussion, conclusions and updated the section of references.The initial examples about N-S-codoped carbon materials (references16 and 17) are earlier results published in 2012 and 2013. Thus we have replaced them with some lasted and outstanding papers.。

审稿意见回复信英文模板和语料总结

审稿意见回复信英文模板和语料总结

审稿意见回复信英文模板和语料总结[Your Name][Your Address][City, State, ZIP Code][Email Address][Phone Number][Date][Reviewer's Name][Journal Name][Journal Address][City, State, ZIP Code]Dear [Reviewer's Name],2. Abstract: Thank you for pointing out the need to providea brief summary of the main findings in the abstract. I have revised the abstract accordingly, ensuring that it concisely summarizes the key results and implications of the study.4. Methodology: I appreciate your suggestion of including more details on the specific methods and protocols used in the study. In response to this suggestion, I have added a subsection in the methodology section that provides a detailed descriptionof the materials, procedures, and statistical analyses employed in the research.5. Results and Discussion: I am grateful for your constructive feedback on the organization and interpretation of the results. I have carefully restructured the results and discussion sections to ensure a logical flow and to present the findings in a more coherent manner. Additionally, I have revised the discussion section to provide a more in-depth analysis and interpretation of the results, addressing the limitations and potential areas for future research.6. Conclusion: Thank you for pointing out the need for a more concise and focused conclusion. I have revised the conclusion section accordingly, summarizing the main findings and their implications succinctly.7. Language and Style: I appreciate your input regarding the clarity and language usage in the manuscript. I have carefully reviewed the entire manuscript, addressing grammar and sentence structure issues, and ensuring that the writing style is concise and coherent.Once again, I would like to thank you for your valuable feedback, which has significantly contributed to enhancing the quality of my research. I am confident that the revisions I have made have addressed the concerns raised in your reviewadequately. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further clarifications or have additional suggestions.Sincerely,。

向编辑部发邮件询问审稿进度英语作文

向编辑部发邮件询问审稿进度英语作文

向编辑部发邮件询问审稿进度英语作文Dear Editor,I am writing to inquire about the status of the manuscript I submitted to your esteemed publication. I understand that the review process can take some time, but I am eager to receive an update on the progress of my submission.As a budding writer, I am anxious to hear back from you regarding the editorial decision on my work. The manuscript I submitted is a piece that I have poured my heart and soul into, and I am hopeful that it will be considered for publication in your prestigious journal.I understand that the review process can be lengthy and that you likely receive a large volume of submissions. However, I would greatly appreciate any information you can provide regarding the current status of my manuscript. Is it currently under review? Has it been assigned to an editor? When can I expect to receive a decision?I am aware that the publishing industry can be highly competitive, and I am grateful for the opportunity to have my work considered by your editorial team. I am committed to the craft of writing and ameager to receive feedback, whether positive or constructive, that will help me to improve and grow as an author.If there is any additional information or materials you require from me, please do not hesitate to let me know. I am happy to provide any necessary clarification or supplementary materials to assist in the review process.Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you regarding the status of my manuscript.Sincerely,[Your Name]。

英文文章回复审稿意见信4

英文文章回复审稿意见信4

Response to Reviewer #3:We would like to thank the reviewer for careful and thorough reading of this manuscript and for the thoughtful comments and constructive suggestions, which help to improve the quality of this manuscript. Our response follows (the reviewer’s comments are in italics).General Comments. The paper ‘An overview of the MILAGRO 2006 campaign: Mexico City emissions and their transport and transformation’ by L.T. Molina, et al. is an overview of findings from the MILAGRO field campaign. However, it is not just a ‘paper about papers’ but also provides some further analysis and attempts to extract the most important results.It is very well written and is well balanced between the different topics, such as experimental design, emissions, photochemistry, radiation, and transport. It definitely deserves to be published and is a valuable contribution to the ACP journal.The only weakness of the paper is its length. It is true that some of the chapters can be regarded as stand-alone documents, and it is thus not necessary to read the whole paper. However, it is my belief that the main purpose of the paper (overview of the MILAGRO project, road map to its numerous publications, bringing across the main messages) could have been achieved on less pages, e.g. by omitting some details and rather refer the reader to one or more of the MILAGRO publications. It is difficult to point specifically to omittable sentences as they are rather spread throughout the paper, but I recommend making one more effort to shorten the paper at least somewhat, in order to make it more readily accessible.Reply:We appreciate the positive feedback from the reviewer.With regards to the length of the article: as we noted in our response to Reviewers #1 and #2, it is not easy to shorten the article. We are trying to target both readers that are interested in the comprehensive study and readers that are only interested in subsections. The current form serve both of these needs and we are concerned that if we cut out the small overlaps in the introduction to each section as well as the technical material, then the subsections will not be readable to the reader who is only interested in one or a few sections. Therefore we would like to keep the manuscript largely in its current form. However, as suggested by the reviewer, we have reviewed carefully the entire manuscript and have removed redundancies, as shown in the revised manuscript.One more general remark: What about calling Section 12 ‘Summary and Conclusions’ and Section 13 ‘Future work’ in order to better reflect their content.Reply:As suggested by the reviewer, we have changed the title of Section 12 to “Summary and Conclusions” and Section 13 to “Future Research.”Minor comments:1) p.7823, lines 23-25: add already here how many partners, from which countries, duration and funding agenciesReply:As suggested by the reviewer, we have moved the information from last paragraph of page 7829 to page 7823.2) p.7824, line 23: facilitates -> facilitateReply:The correction has been made.3) p.7826, line 14: remove colon after ‘showing that’Reply: The correction has been made.4) p.7827, lines 17-25: don’t need to name here all conferences and media, can be shortened (while keeping the link to the website).Reply: We have shortened the paragraph, as suggested.5) p.7827, line 26 and onwards: this should be in the introduction.Reply: We have moved the paragraph to the Introduction.6) p.7829, line 24 and onwards: this is what I suggest to include in the introduction (see first minor comment above)Reply: We have moved the paragraph to the Introduction.7) p.7833, line 12: ‘and more’ -> ‘and a more’Reply: The correction has been made.8) p.7848, line 25: remove ‘is’Reply: The correction has been made.9) p.7850, line 13: ‘constrains’ -> ‘constraints’, line 19: comma around ‘respectively’Reply: The correction has been made.10) p.7853, lines 2 and 3: write ‘the UC Irvine group’ and ‘T0 and T1 sites’.Reply: The correction has been made.11) p.7854, line 11: ‘were’ -> ‘was’Reply: The correction has been made.12) p.7864, line 1: remove ‘reflects the partitioning between OH and HO2, and’Reply:The text has been revised as suggested:“The HO2/OH ratio can be used as a measure of the efficiency of radical propagation.”13) p.7865, line 12: you mean ‘early afternoon’? (as opposed to late afternoon which is VOC limited)Reply:The text has been revised as suggested:“An analysis of ratio of radical loss from the formation of nitric acid and organic nitrates to the total radical production for MCMA 2003 also suggests that ozone production is VOC-limited in the early morning and late afternoon, but becomes NOx-limited during the early afternoon [Mao et al., 2009].”14) p.7870, line 18: ‘composition’ -> ‘compositions’, and: PMcoarse is shown, not PM2.5 Reply:The text is indeed incorrect. The subject figure shows PM2.5 and PM Coarse and not PM2.5 andPM10 as indicated in the text. The sentence has been corrected to read:“The fractional compositions of PM2.5 and PM Coarse are illustrated in Fig. 12.15) p.7887, line 1: ‘leads’ -> ‘lead’Reply: The correction has been made.16) p.7888, line 2: move ‘were’ to after ‘aerosols’Reply: The suggested correction has been made.17) p.7890: The sentences in lines 12 and 18, referring to Hodzic et al., 2009, Mugica et al., 2009, and Christian et al., 2010, are very similar. Combine.Reply:As suggested by the reviewer, the second occurrence of these citations has been eliminated 18) p.7892, line 5: ‘Previous work’ refers to the past, and ‘will’ to the future. Rather write‘missed’, or, e.g., ‘the method used in previous work . . . did not detect’Reply: The suggested correction has been made. The sentence now reads:“Previous work using single wavelengths, particularly at wavelengths longer than 500 nm, did not detect these changes in absorption in the 300 to 500 nm range that are primarily due to oxidized organics (both aged primary and SOA coatings).”19) p.7903, line 23: move comma after ‘NO’ to after the parenthesis.Line 24: factor of 1.4 to 1.9?Reply:The suggested correction has been made. The sentence now reads:“These include slight overpredictions of CO and NO (<30% and <20%, respectively), and a probable underprediction of VOCs by a factor of 1.4 to 1.9 in the inventory.”20) Fig.3: ‘except MCM-2006’? So why is it included in the figure? Mention that the measurements were performed in the Mexico City basin, or refer to section 3.1 or Fig.4. Reply:The suggested correction has been made. The figure caption now reads:“MILAGRO Campaign: Geographic Coverage. Measurements were performed in the MCMA (see Fig. 4). The size of the circle (MAX-Mex, MIRAGE-Mex and INTEX-B) indicates the geographic coverage of the aircraft deployed.”21) Fig.5: ‘9 March’ -> ‘9 March 2006’Reply: The suggested correction has been made.22) Fig.6, NOx, don’t private cars include any Diesel vehicles?Reply:The private cars in Mexico are mostly gasoline-powered; there are very few diesel-powered private cars.23) Fig.7: ‘insert’ -> ‘inset’Reply: The suggested correction has been made.24) Fig.9: ‘at T0’ -> ‘at the supersites T0’Reply: The suggested correction has been made.25) Fig.10: ’19 March’ -> ’19 March 2006’ In the text replace ‘Fig.’ with ‘Figure’Reply: The suggested correction has been made.26) Fig. 11: I don’t see the ‘Modeling Domain’. Guess it’s the whole figure, so the red box in the legend can be omitted. Furthermore, the figure has rather poor print quality.Reply:As suggested by the reviewer, we have revised Figure 11. We have also added a panel showing the percentage change in Ox formation rate as a function of the indicator, ratio of H2O2 production rate to HNO3 production rate.27) Fig.13: ‘March 15’ -> ‘March 15, 2006’Reply: The suggested correction has been made.。

审稿意见英文回复范文

审稿意见英文回复范文

审稿意见英文回复范文Reviewer Comments and Author Response.Reviewer 1。

Comment 1:The introduction lacks a clear statement of the research question and hypothesis. The authors should revise the introduction to provide a more focused and specific overview of the study.Author Response:Thank you for your suggestion. We have revised the introduction to include a more explicit statement of our research question and hypothesis:Revised Introduction:In this study, we investigate the relationship between sleep quality and academic performance in university students. Previous research has shown that sleep deprivation can have a negative impact on cognitive function, including attention, memory, and problem-solving skills (e.g., Pilcher & Walters, 2010). However, the majority of this research has focused on children and adolescents. There is a lack of research on therelationship between sleep quality and academic performance in university students.The purpose of this study is to examine therelationship between sleep quality and academic performance in university students. We hypothesize that there will be a negative correlation between sleep quality and academic performance, such that students who report better sleep quality will have higher GPAs.Comment 2:The methods section is not sufficiently detailed. The authors should provide more information about theparticipants, the measures used, and the procedures followed.Author Response:Thank you for your feedback. We have revised the methods section to provide more detail:Revised Methods:Participants.Participants were 100 university students (50 male, 50 female) who were recruited from a large public universityin the southeastern United States. Participants wereeligible for the study if they were at least 18 years old and currently enrolled in at least one college-level course.Measures.Sleep quality was assessed using the Pittsburgh Sleep Quality Index (PSQI), a self-report questionnaire thatmeasures sleep quality over the past month. The PSQI has been shown to be a reliable and valid measure of sleep quality in university students (e.g., Buysse et al., 1989).Academic performance was assessed using students' self-reported GPAs. Students were asked to report their current GPA on a scale from 0.0 to 4.0.Procedures.Participants were recruited for the study through online advertisements and flyers posted around campus. Interested participants were screened for eligibility and then completed the PSQI and the GPA questionnaire online.Comment 3:The results section is difficult to follow. The authors should reorganize the results and present them in a more logical manner.Author Response:Thank you for your suggestion. We have reorganized the results section to make it more logical and easier to follow:Revised Results:The mean PSQI score for the sample was 6.5 (SD = 3.2), which indicates that the participants had relatively good sleep quality. The mean GPA for the sample was 3.2 (SD =0.5).There was a significant negative correlation between sleep quality and academic performance, such that students who reported better sleep quality had higher GPAs (r = -.25, p < .05). This relationship was consistent across genderand year in school.Comment 4:The discussion section does not adequately discuss the implications of the findings. The authors should expand thediscussion to include a more in-depth discussion of the implications of the findings for students, educators, and policymakers.Author Response:Thank you for your feedback. We have expanded the discussion section to include a more in-depth discussion of the implications of the findings:Revised Discussion:The findings of this study have several implicationsfor students, educators, and policymakers. First, the findings suggest that sleep quality is an important factor in academic performance. Students who get better sleep are more likely to have higher GPAs. This suggests that students should make an effort to get enough sleep, even when they are busy with schoolwork.Second, the findings suggest that educators can play a role in promoting sleep quality among their students. Forexample, educators can encourage students to establish regular sleep schedules, create a relaxing bedtime routine, and avoid caffeine and alcohol before bed.Third, the findings suggest that policymakers should consider the importance of sleep quality when making decisions about educational policies. For example, policymakers could consider implementing policies that allow students to get more sleep, such as later schoolstart times or more flexible class schedules.Reviewer 2。

英语邮件回复常用句子

英语邮件回复常用句子

英语邮件回复常用句子导语:在生活工作中,掌握一些英语邮件回复常用句子很有必要。

下面是小编整理的英语邮件回复常用句子,供各位参考。

1. I am writing to confirm/enquire/inform you...我发邮件是想找你确认/询问/想通知你有关…2. I am writing to follow up on our earlier decision on the marketing campaign in Q2.我写邮件来是为了跟进我们之前对第二季度营销活动的决定。

3. With reference to our telephone conversation today...关于我们今天在电话中的谈话…4. In my previous e-mail on October5...在之前10月5日所写的邮件中提到…5. As I mentioned earlier about...在先前我所提到的关于…6. As indicated in my previous e-mail...如我在之前邮件中所提到的…7. As we discussed on the phone...如我们上次在电话中所说的…8. from our decision at the previous meeting...如我们在上次会议中所决定的…9. as you requested...根据贵方要求…10. In reply to your e-mail dated April 1,we decided...回复贵方4月1日的邮件,我方决定…11. This is in response to your e-mail today.这是对您今早发来的邮件的回复。

12. As mentioned before, we deem this product has strong unique selling points in china.如先前所述,我们认为这个产品在中国有强有力且独一无二的销售点。

审稿意见英文回复范文

审稿意见英文回复范文

审稿意见英文回复范文English: Thank you for your valuable feedback on my manuscript. I appreciate the time and effort you have put into carefully reviewing my work. I will take into consideration all of your comments and suggestions to make necessary revisions and improvements to the manuscript. Your insights have provided me with a new perspective on my research, and I believe that incorporating your feedback will significantly enhance the quality of the paper. I will address each of your concerns in detail and ensure that the revised version meets the standards of the journal. Once again, I want to express my gratitude for your thorough review and constructive criticism.中文翻译: 感谢您对我的稿件提供宝贵的反馈意见。

我非常感激您花费时间和精力仔细审阅我的作品。

我将考虑您所有的评论和建议,对稿件进行必要的修改和改进。

您的洞察力为我研究提供了新的视角,我相信融入您的反馈将显著提升论文的质量。

我将详细解决您所关注的每个问题,并确保修订版本符合期刊的标准。

reply to sth 造句

reply to sth 造句

reply to sth 造句1."I will reply to your email as soon as possible."(我会尽快回复你的电子邮件。

)2."Could you please reply to the questions in the survey by next Friday?"(你能在下周五之前回复调查中的问题吗?)3."She didn't reply to my text message, so I assumed she was busy."(她没有回复我的短信,所以我猜她很忙。

)4."Remember to reply to the email confirmation after booking your ticket."(在预订机票后,记得回复确认邮件。

)5."I sent him a message asking for help, but he hasn't replied to it yet."(我给他发了一条消息请求帮助,但他还没有回复。

)6."The customer service team will reply to your inquiry within 24 hours."(客户服务团队将在24小时内回复您的查询。

)7."Can you reply to this message with your thoughts on the project?"(你能就这个项目回复一下你的想法吗?)8."I'm sorry, I didn't understand your question. Could you please reply to my last email and clarify?"(对不起,我没明白你的问题。

最新回复审稿人意见模板

最新回复审稿人意见模板

如何回复SCI投稿审稿人意见(精典语句整理)如何回复SCI投稿审稿人意见1.所有问题必须逐条回答。

2.尽量满足意见中需要补充的实验。

3.满足不了的也不要回避,说明不能做的合理理由。

4.审稿人推荐的文献一定要引用,并讨论透彻。

以下是本人对审稿人意见的回复一例,仅供参考。

续两点经验:1. 最重要的是逐条回答,即使你答不了,也要老实交代;不要太狡猾,以至于耽误事;2. 绝大部分实验是不要真追加的,除非你受到启发,而想改投另外高档杂志----因为你既然已经写成文章,从逻辑上肯定是一个完整的“story” 了。

以上指国际杂志修稿。

国内杂志太多,以至于稿源吃紧,基本没有退稿,所以你怎么修都是接受。

我的文章水平都不高,主要是没有明显的创新性,也很苦恼。

但是除了开始几篇投在国内杂志外,其他都在国际杂志(也都是SCI)发表。

以我了解的情况,我单位其他同志给国内杂志投稿,退稿的极少,只有一次被《某某科学进展》拒绝。

究其原因,除了我上面说的,另外可能是我单位写稿子还是比较严肃,导师把关也比较严的缘故。

自我感觉总结(不一定对):1)国内杂志审稿极慢(少数除外),但现在也有加快趋势;2)国内杂志编辑人员认真负责的人不多,稿子寄去后,少则几个月,多则一年多没有任何消息;3)国内杂志要求修改的稿子,如果你自己不修,他最后也给你发;4)国外杂志要求补充实验的,我均以解释而过关,原因见少帖)。

还因为:很少杂志编辑把你的修改稿再寄给当初审稿人的,除非审稿人特别请求。

编辑不一定懂你的东西,他只是看到你认真修改,回答疑问了,也就接受了(当然高档杂志可能不是这样,我的经验只限定一般杂志(影响因子1-5)。

欢迎大家批评指正。

我常用的回复格式:Dear reviewer:I am very grateful to your comments for the manuscript. According with your advice, we amended the relevant part in manuscript. Some of your questions were answered below.1)....引用审稿人推荐的文献的确是很重要的,要想办法和自己的文章有机地结合起来。

通过回一件事如何意见一个人的作文

通过回一件事如何意见一个人的作文

通过回一件事如何意见一个人的作文英文回答:To give feedback on someone's essay, it is important to provide constructive criticism and suggestions for improvement. Here are a few steps to follow:1. Start with a positive comment: Begin by acknowledging the strengths of the essay. For example, you could say, "Your essay demonstrates a strong understanding of the topic and presents well-reasoned arguments."2. Point out areas for improvement: Identify specific weaknesses in the essay, such as unclear or repetitive sentences, lack of evidence or examples, or weak organization. Use phrases like "One thing that could be improved is..." or "I noticed that there is room for improvement in..."3. Offer suggestions: Provide specific suggestions onhow to address the weaknesses mentioned. For instance, you could suggest rephrasing certain sentences for clarity, adding more supporting evidence or examples, or rearranging paragraphs for better flow. Use phrases like "It might be helpful to..." or "Consider adding..."4. Encourage revision: Emphasize the importance of revising the essay to make it stronger. Use phrases like "I believe that with some revisions, your essay can become even more compelling" or "Take the time to revise and polish your work."中文回答:中文回答:给予他人作文的意见时,重要的是提供建设性的批评和改进建议。

怎么写对审稿意见的回复范文英语

怎么写对审稿意见的回复范文英语

怎么写对审稿意见的回复范文英语Here's a sample response to reviewer comments in English, adhering to the guidelines you've provided:First off, thanks a ton for taking the time to review my paper! Your feedback is invaluable.On the point about clarifying the methodology, Itotally agree. I'll add a section that breaks down the steps we took in more detail, to make it easier for readers to follow.And regarding the suggestion to expand on the limitations, that's a great idea. I'll discuss thepotential biases in our data collection and how they might have affected our findings.Oh, and the note about referencing more recent studies? Spot on! I'll update the literature review to include the latest research, to give my paper a more contemporaryperspective.The comment on improving the figures is super helpful too. I'll make the graphs more readable and add captions to explain each one, so they're clearer for readers.Lastly, the tip to strengthen the conclusion is much appreciated. I'll summarize the key findings more concisely and discuss how they contribute to the field.Again, thanks for the feedback. I'll make these changes and resend the paper soon. Appreciate your help in makingit better!。

一些英文审稿意见及回复的模板

一些英文审稿意见及回复的模板

一些英文审稿意见的模板最近在审一篇英文稿,第一次做这个工作,还有点不知如何表达。

幸亏遇上我的处女审稿,我想不会枪毙它的,给他一个majorrevision后接收吧。

呵呵网上找来一些零碎的资料参考参考。

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2345、对678、如何凸现原创性以及如何充分地写literaturereview: Thetopicisnovelbuttheapplicationproposedisnotsonovel.9、对claim,如A>B的证明,verification: Thereisnoexperimentalcomparisonofthealgorithmwithpreviouslyknownwork,soitisimpossible tojudgewhetherthealgorithmisanimprovementonpreviouswork.10、严谨度问题:MNQiseasierthantheprimitivePNQS,howtoprovethat.11、格式(重视程度):Inaddition,thelistofreferencesisnotinourstyle.Itisclosebutnotcompletelycorrect.Ihavea ttachedapdffilewith"InstructionsforAuthors"whichshowsexamples. Beforesubmittingarevisionbesurethatyourmaterialisproperlypreparedandformatted.Ifyouar eunsure,pleaseconsulttheformattingnstructionstoauthorsthataregivenunderthe"Instructio nsandForms"buttoninheupperright-handcornerofthescreen.12、语言问题(出现最多的问题):有关语言的审稿人意见:ItisnotedthatyourmanuscriptneedscarefuleditingbysomeonewithexpertiseintechnicalEnglis heditingpayingparticularattentiontoEnglishgrammar,spelling,andsentencestructuresothat thegoalsandresultsofthestudyarecleartothereader.个人认为文章还是有一些创新的,所以作为审稿人我就给了66分,(这个分正常应该足以发表),提了一些修改意见,望作者修改后发表!登录到编辑部网页一看,一个文章竟然有六个审稿人,详细看了下打的分数,60分大修,60分小修,66分(我),25分拒,(好家伙,竟然打25分,有魄力),拒但没有打分(另一国人审),最后一个没有回来!两个拒的是需要我们反思和学习的!(括号斜体内容为我注解)Reviewer4ReviewerRecommendationTerm:Rejectm.eraturedata,RESULTSANDDISCUSSION-discussion),-ithastobeaddedinthemanuscriptwhatkindofXXXXXXbyothermethodscomparedtothisnovelone(IN TRODUCTION-literaturedata,RESULTSANDDISCUSSION-discussion),-ithastobeoutlinedwhatisthebenefitofthismethod(ABSTRACT,RESULTSANDDISCUSSION,CONCLUSI ONS).(很多人不会写这个地方,大家多学习啊)2.WhendiscussingXRDdataXXXauthors-statethatXXXXX-statethatXXXX-Thisusuallyhappenswithincreasingsinteringtime,butarethereanydatatopresent,density,pa rticlesize?(很多人用XRD,结果图放上去就什么都不管了,这是不应该的)3.Whendiscussingluminescencemeasurementsauthorswrite"XXXXXIfthereissecondharmonicinex4.Name:Deareditor:Thankyouforinvitingmetoevaluatethearticletitled"XXXX“.Inthispaper,theauthorsinvestig atedtheinfluencesofsinteringconditiononthecrystalstructureandXXXXXX,However,itisdifficultforustounderstandthemanuscriptbecauseofpoorEnglishbeingused.Thetextisnotwellarrangedandthelogicisnotclear.ExceptEnglishwriting,therearemanymistak esinthemanuscriptandtheexperimentalresultsdon'tshowgoodandnewresults.SoIrecommendtoyo uthatthismanuscriptcannotbeaccepted.Thefollowingarethequestionsandsomemistakesinthism anuscript:(看看总体评价,不达标,很多人被这样郁闷了,当然审稿人也有他的道理)1.TheXXXXXXX.However,thiskindmaterialhadbeeninvestigatedsince1997asmentionedintheauth or'smanuscript,andsimilarworkshadbeenpublishedinsimilarjournals.Whatarethenovelfindin gsinthepresentwork?Thesynthesismethodandluminescencepropertiesreportedinthismanuscrip tdidn'tsupplyenoughevidencetosupporttheprimenoveltystatement.(这位作者好猛,竟然翻出自己1997年的中文文章翻译了一边就敢投国际知名杂志,而且没有新的创新!说实不说了)好东西原文地址:对英文审稿意见的回复作者:海天奥博一篇稿子从酝酿到成型历经艰辛,投出去之后又是漫长的等待,好容易收到编辑的回信,得到的往往又是审稿人不留情面的一顿狂批。

英文文章回复审稿意见信

英文文章回复审稿意见信

英文文章回复审稿意见信AMR‐09‐0402.R2 Comments to editors and reviewersI have now received and considered the reviews of your revised manuscript submitted to Academy of Management Review “HUMAN RESOURCE SYSTEMS AND HELPING IN ORGANIZATIONS: A RELATIONAL PERSPECTIVE” (Manuscript AMR‐09‐0402.R1). All three of your reviewers agree that your manuscript has made good progress and you’ve made a good effort to respond to their earlier concerns. We all appreciate the clearer focus on the linkages between HR systems and helping and recognize the time and energies you put into this revision.Your reviewers also agree that at this stage, several issues remain. I share the opinion that your revised manuscript is much improved and that you undertook great effort to be responsive to the earlier feedback. And, while I agree there are still some issues to address, I believe these issues can be addressed with relatively moderate additional effort and thus, I am pleased to conditionally accept your manuscript for publication in AMR subject to the changes below. Congratulations! I will not be returning your revised manuscript to the reviewers, but instead will be ensuring the remaining changes are made on their behalf.In terms of the remaining changes I’d like you to make, it is important that you consider all the comments made by the reviewers but I would like to highlight the primary factors that I believe are necessary to move forward. I would like you to focus your energies on the points I note below.Dear Professor Lepak:Thank you for the positive feedback and conditionally accepting our paper. In this round of revision, we focused ourefforts strongly on the points made in your letter. Below, we grouped actions taken in response to your comments, organized under the major headings supplied. As before, we attempted to be succinct while fully explaining our actions.Although we replied directly to you and focused our explanations on points raised in your letter, we took seriously and addressed in some way each of the reviewer comments.Given your request for an August 1 deadline and your patience waiting for our firstrevision, we wanted to make every effort to return this revision as promptly as possible.Since your email inquiring about our returning the revision early, my colleagues’ and my schedules aligned such that we were able to make this revision our top priority. We have devoted most of our working (and nonworking) days to the revision. As a result, we are able to return the paper earlier than we estimated.Your and the reviewers’ comments have again stimulated changes we feel furtherimproved the paper. Should you find the paper requires further clarification or revision,we most certainly stand ready to do so.Best regards,Kevin MossholderPropositions. One of the more significant concerns that remain for the reviewers and myself relates to the propositions in your manuscript. For example, reviewer 1 (Comment 2) writes, “The way inwhich all the propositions are currently stated is clumsy, convoluted, and would benefit from simplification. In each case you might remove the intermediary climate information, as thisis contained in the preceding paragraphs. Please see the following examples: … P1a: In a compl iance HR system, helping behavior is motivated by self‐interest and instrumentality. (remove the “will lead to a market pricing climate in which”) … P2a: In a collaboration HR system, helping behavior is motivated by in‐kind reciprocity and maintained by b alanced exchanges (remove “will lead to an equality matching climate”) … P1e is incomplete. Constrained by what or to what?”Reviewer 3 (Comments 4‐6) raises similar concerns and writes, “The very first proposition regarding helping indicates that helping will be “constrained.” This is not testable as stated. Constrained relative to what? … All of the propositions regarding risk were worded in a way that I believe renders them impossible to test (1c, 2c, and 3c). I understand risk to be one of the dimensions of relational climate, so you cannot simply delete these propositions. Perhaps they could be reworded to indicate that perceived risk will be greater for X than for Y?... The causal model of hr systems ‐> relational climates ‐> helping is never presented, and the abstract even hints that you are not proposing mediation. I would think that at least partial mediation is expected here, and that logic should permeate the manuscript (abstract, introduction to big picture model, propositions, and perhaps even a figure). Is there a reason that you are shying away from proposing mediation?”I’m not exactly certain as to what the best course of action is and I do not want to impose specific wording on how you structure your propositions. Having said that, I think it is imperative that you do address these concerns regarding the structure of your propositions. I believe this is doable with some effort to get to the essence of each proposition and to presentclear and testable propositions.Following R1’s suggestion, we reworded the “a” through “d” propositions to eliminatethe phrase containing intermediary climate information. We think this refinementimproves their clarity. We also improved the wording of the “e” and “f” propositions as well.We also altered all “c” propositions (i.e., those dealing with risk) in response to R3’scomment 5. Whereas the previous wording of these propositions simply described risksassociated with helping in each climate, the revised wording indicates employees willperceive helping as risky to the extent certain conditions exist.As requested by R1 (comment 2) and R3 (comment 4), we reworded proposition 1e, tomake it consistent with propositions 2e and 3e. It now reads: “In a compliance HR system and market pricing climate, helping behavior will occur less frequently than incollaborative or commitment HR systems.” We believe this revision works because thecollaborative and commitment systems are now introduced in greater detail at an earlier point in the paper (see our response in the Structure section below).Finally, we agree with R3 (comment 6) that there is an undercurrent of mediation in thepaper. However, given that relational climate is a new construct and researchunderpinning relations between HR systems and helpingbehavior has been undertaken in earnest only recently (e.g., Chuang & Liao, 2010), we felt it premature to make causal relations among the constructs a focus of the paper. We emphasized developing atheoretical foundation that might stimulate researchers to investigate both the relationalclimate construct as well as relations among major components of the paper (i.e., HRsystems, relational climate, and helping behavior). Addressing mediational issues would require incorporating an additional layer into a crowded substantive landscape. Another reviewer (R2) stated the opinion (see Clarification and additional considerationsbelow) that we were “really trying to cover a lot of literatures and concepts (as I noted in the prior version of the manuscript).” Finally, R3 asked why we were shying away from mediational issues. In short, at this point in the research life cycle of the constructspresented, this was the more conservative and appropriate stance to take.Clarification and additional considerations. The reviewers pointed out several instances where some additional clarification would be very helpful for the reader. For example, reviewer 2 (Co mment 1) writes, “I believe the distinction between a “collaborative” system needs to be more clearly distinguished from collective system in the intro. In particular, if employees/org have “collective commitment” (p. 4) doesn’t this also suggest “collaboration” between them? The distinction becomes clearer later when discussing the climates and the specific systems, but I believe this distinctions needs to be made veryclear when first defining each HR system (p. 4).” This reviewer goes on to note (Comment 2), [“I found the discussion of the “dimensions” (now bottom of p.8/top of p. 9) a bit difficult to follow as you are really trying to cover a lot of literatures and concepts (as I noted in the prior version of the manuscript). Perhaps most importantly, this discussion seems more focused on emphasizing that it’s important to incorporate these constructs (and why), what “substantive areas “ were reviewed (is it really necessary to state the specific literature, e.g., “social capital… interpersonal helping”), and the “grounding principle” for inclusion. I would suggest it would be more valuable to focus on how these constructs link to your framework (i.e., the link between HR systems, climate, and helping).”] Reviewer 2 also raises several useful points about your discussion section. [In comment 6 s/he highlights a need for clarifying the relationship with flexibility. I agree with this reviewer that this focus in the discussion section does seem to be disconnected from the rest of the model. Moving forward, you need to be sure to somehow better incorporate this discussion with the major thrust of your contribution or more clearly articulate your arguments to address these concerns by reviewer 2.]Regarding R2’s comment 1 about distinguishing the collaborative and commitmentsystems in the introduction, we now explicitly highlight key differences between thesesystems when first presenting them on pp. 4-5. In particular, the characteristic mutuality and psychological links forged between the organization and employees in commitment systems create situations in which employees become focused on groups, teams, and the organization, thus blurring individualidentities in favor of collective identity. Incollaborative systems, employees maintain their own identities while working towardcommon goals, which when attained reward the parties involved. Although both systems entail degrees of interdependence, the ties in a commitment system are analogous to afamily or clan, whereas those in a collaborative system are analogous to a partnership or alliance.We believe the general changes made in the introductory part of the paper also aid infurther clarifying differences between commitment and collaborative systems.Specifically, we moved forward to pp. 4-5 the broad descriptions of the three archetypal HR systems, which in the first revision had been located at the beginning of therespectively headed sections—Compliance HR Systems: Effecting Helping ThroughA Market Pricing Climate, Collaborative HR Systems: Effecting Helping ThroughAn Equality Matching Climate,and Commitment HR Systems: Effecting HelpingThrough A Communal Sharing Climate.(See also responses about moving thesedescriptions in the Structure section below.)We were a little puzzled by R2’s comment 2 ab out focusing on how the relational climate dimensions link to the proposed framework. Describing why and from where thedimensions were derived demonstrates linkages between them and the core substance of relational climate. R3 (comment2) had noted that our initial introduction of thedimensions got lost in excess verbiage added during the first revision. We worked tostreamline this section in the current revision (bottom p. 8-top p. 9). Specifically, wedeleted three unnecessary sentences (including the one containing “grounding principle”), and now cite no more than two references for each substantive area reviewed. With due respect to R2, we feel it is important to let readers (especially ones not familiar withrelational constructs) know the underpinnings of relational climate.We also rearranged the flow of material as requested by R3 (comment 2) to make therelational dimensions more visible. They now are listed and numbered in the first fullparagraph, top p. 9. By sharpening the focus of the entire section labeled “RelationalClimates: Schema and Dimensions” (beginning at bottom p.6) and the key paragraphwhere the relational climate dimensions are introduced (top p. 9), we hope to havesufficiently addressed R2’s (and R3’s) concerns.In regard to the organizational flexibility material (R2, comment 6), we view one of thepaper’s contributions as highlighting helping behavior’s connection with organizationalflexibility. Perhaps more importantly, we suggest that certain HR systems (and associated climates) promote helping appropriate for meeting more circumscribed or moreexpansive flexibility needs. We had added extra material on flexibility in the first revision in responding to reviewer comments. In hindsight, this gave organizational flexibilitymore emphasis in the paper than we really intended. Therefore, in response to your andreviewer requests, we have pared back the amount of material devoted to flexibility (from two paragraphs to one, pp. 23-24) and linked it more clearly with helping behavior. We believe this reduction is consistent with its respective importance in the paper.In a small point, R2 (comment 2) also asked if “factors” or “elements” could be used todescribe relational climate components rather than “dimensions.” We had used the term “dimensions” as the descriptor for the climate components because we felt it was the more frequently used term in the climate literature. To double-check this, we examinedtwo recent organizational climate reviews by leading scholars (James et al., 2008;Schneider, Ehrhart, & Macey, 2011) and other climate articles we referenced in thepaper. From this examination, we determined that “dimensions” is the most commonlabel, and therefore prefer to retain “dimensions” in describing components of relational climate.Reviewer 3 suggests that you consider several additional points for your discussion section. Specifically, in comment 8 s/he writes, “There are two interesting issues raised by reviewers (one mine, one from another reviewer) that I think could be mentioned as future research. The first is negativeeffects of competitive HR practices on helping; that is, HR practices that stimulatecounter‐productive work behaviors. The second is reverse causality, where certain relational climates alter the HR systems adopted, or at least how they are enacted/interpreted by certain managers.”We addressed R3’s comment 8 by including material concerning both topics s/he raised.Keeping length considerations in mind, we first deleted material pertaining to HRresearch design issues that we had inserted during the first revision. (This deletionaddresses R3’s comment 7 question about an HR design/measurement issue, as theunclear material is no longer in the paper.) The deleted material was located immediately afte r the “Implications and Future Research” heading (p. 24). Because HR research design and measurement issues have been more fully addressed in the broader HRliterature (e.g., Gerhart, Wright, McMahan, & Snell, 2000), we felt it better to considerfuture research issues more directly connected with the focus of our paper.Next, we inserted material concerning the idea of reverse causality where we discussbottom up influences on helping (p. 28). Relying on structuration theory (Giddens, 1984), we suggest how emergent social interactions conceivably could influence managers to adjust HR practices. Although there is little empirical evidence suggesting relationalclimates and helping could influence an entire HR system, there is evidence that (a)patterns of helping affect certain HR practices and (b) informal social processes caninfluence which HR practices an organization adopts. To balance the added length to the paragraph in which bottom up influences are discussed, we added two more sentences (and accompanying references) to the top down paragraph preceding the bottom upparagraph (p. 27).Regarding the counterproductive work behavior issue, we agree with R3 that outcome-and efficiency-oriented HR practices might decrease the likelihood of helping behavior.We noted this issue is particularly salient in compliance HR systems, which are morelikely to use practices such as individual incentives and lead to more constrained helping exchanges than are found in the other two HR systems. To address R3’s concern, we discuss that when practices constrain employee helping behavior, employees maywithhold help or in extreme cases engage in counterproductive behavior. We have added this material to the paragraph in which we mention helping obstacles and toxic managers (pp. 26-27).From my own reading of your manuscript, I would like to make a minor suggestion and encourage you to simply refer to “hr systems’ rather than ‘strategic HR systems’. I think they convey the same thing and the reality is that any HR system could be used in a strategic manner. The key point that you areemphasizing is that you are focusing on the system.Throughout the paper, we now refer to the three systems as “HR systems” only.Structure. Reviewer 3 raised several points regarding the structure of your paper. For example, in comment 1, this reviewer writes, “I’d prefer to see the definition of helping (along with some illustrations to make the definition more concrete and compelling) in the introduction.] Then, in the HR systems section, I’d like to learn more detail about the three archetypes. This wouldmean shifting Table 2 to become Table 1, and walking the reader through at least some of Table 1 at this juncture. I think the reason to do this is simple – not every reader will understand the archetypes as described. You will want to offer an explanation of each grounded in the details of how employment relationship and employment mode play out with specific HR practices. This will help an AMR reader who is not a specialist in SHRM. [Please note that I am not asking for a complete revision of structure here, I am suggesting shifting some material around to be more consistent with the structure you are now using.” I am not suggesting that you must conform with this recommendation but I do agree with this reviewer that there are some parts of your paper in which some earlier definitions could help the reader. I agree that it would be helpful to make sure that constructs are defined before you make reference to them.Following the recommendation of R3 (comment 1), we moved the definition of helpingto the introduction of the paper (p. 2). We appreciate this suggestion and believe thedefinition fits better in its new location. We did not addspecific examples, feeling theycould fixate readers on the illustrations as opposed to the entire gamut of helpingbehaviors possible in organizations. Additionally, this change addresses R3’s (comment1) concern regarding the heading “Human Resource Systems and Relational Climates” onp. 3. Because the definition of helping is no longer in this section, the heading nowaccurately represents the content of the text that follows it.We also appreciate R3’s recommendation to provide more description of the threearchetypal HR systems in the “Human Resource Systems and Relational Climates”section. To implement this suggestion, we moved forward (to pp. 4-5) the broaddescriptions of the HR systems that had been located at the beginning of the respectively headed sections—Compliance HR Systems: Effecting Helping Through A MarketPricing Climate, Collaborative HR Systems: Effecting Helping Through AnEquality Matching Climate,and Commitment HR Systems: Effecting HelpingThrough A Communal Sharing Climate.For readers less familiar with the SHRMliterature, these descriptions should provide an initial understanding of the conceptualobjectives underlying each system, and foreshadow how the employment relationship,employment mode, and specific practices might beconfigured in operationalizing thesystems.Please note that we left explicit discussion of each HR system’s employment relationship and mode in their original locations in the paper, however. Our thinking is that discussion of employment relationship and mode should immediately precede the motivation andsustenance propositions for each HR system/relational climate section, because these HR system components are most directly relevant to relational climates. Further, were we to move detailed descriptions of employee relationship and mode to earlier in the paper, itmight overwhelm the general links between HR systems, climates, and helpingoverviewed at that point in the paper.Finally, we also note that at R2’s urging in the first round of revision, we had switchedthe order of the tables so that relational climate dimensions were contained in Table 1 and the HR systems and practices contained in Table 2. We had also revised the textaccordingly. Switching the tables again would require major adjustments in the body ofthe paper. For these reasons, we would prefer retaining the content of Tables 1 and 2 ascurrently set.Editing. I would like to also request a good amount of effort in this final revision to focus on editing. Your paper is relatively long (probably because we asked you to do so much!), and now we need to pare it back. I’m not suggesting a hard page number to cut but I do believe with some careful editing you couldprobably reduce 4‐5 pages of text by sharpening and tightening your message. Some specific suggestions to consider are:a) Tighten the discussion. I realize that I have asked you to add to the discussion section. And, I realize that the discussion section is much improved over the first submission. However, what is currently there could be edited and more precise. Some of the points are speculative and might be reduced in length or eliminated.b) General Editing. Within the body there are some areas in which transitions between sections are excessive. At other points, you note what you are about to discuss, then you state it, and then you state what you did state. This can be reduced. As noted by reviewer 1 (Comment 1), “The paper contains a fair bit of repetition. In some instances this is called for; in others, it is overkill. Please go through the paper to reduce the repetition.” Revi ewer 2 (Comment 7) adds, “…throughout the paper, I believe the writing could be made more direct and less complicated.”In thoroughly addressing concerns raised in the first review, our wording in the priorrevision became pedestrian and repetitious in some places. We took several steps torectify this situation.First as you requested, we tightened the discussion. In particular, we reduced the material on flexibility and the section entitled “Implications and Future Research.” Please note that in reducing the latter, we also addressed R2’s (comment 7) specific concern that this section was repetitive. Additional information about the changes made to the discussion can be found above in our responses to you regardingR3’s comment 8 and R2’scomment 6.Second, we attempted to carefully edit the paper to eliminate repetition and increaseclarity. In addition to general editing, we explicitly addressed each of the specific editing, wording, and repetition points raised by the reviewers. For example, a concern noted by you and all three reviewers was that our transitional paragraphs (i.e., those that introducea section and provide an overview of what we do in it) were repetitive. We agree withthis assessment, but believe such paragraphs serve a useful purpose in guiding the reader through the paper. Examining other AMR papers, we noticed that most used suchtransitional paragraphs for the same purpose. Thus, our approach was to substantiallyreduce the material in each of these transition paragraphs (in most instances by 50% ormore), but not eliminate them. This was accomplished primarily by deleting sentenceswhere we reiterated previously stated ideas using different wording (e.g., as noted by R2, comment 7).Additionally, moving part of the archetype descriptions forward to pp. 4-5 (R3, comment1) allowed us to reduce the introductions of each archetype section (R3, comment 3). Inthe process, we further streamlined the initial and subsequent archetype descriptions. Finally, we also specifically reworded or deleted each of the sentences or sections noted by R2 in his/her comments 5 and 7, and carefully proofed thereferences as requested by R1 in his/her comment 3. Overall, we reduced the paper by approximately 5 pages.Finally, only two reviewer comments were not explicitly noted in your above comments. These were R2’s comment 3 objecting to referring to Lepak and Snell (1999) as recent, and comment 4 requesting we use “collaborative HR system” rather than “collaboration HR system.” T o satisfy R2’s comment 3, we deleted the word “recent.” To satisfy R2’s comment 4, we use “collaborative” to describe that HR system throughout the paper.References not included in the paperGerhart, B., Wright, P. M., McMahan, G. C., & Snell, S. A. 2000. Measurement error in research on human resources and firm performance: How much error is there and how does it influence effect size estimates? Personnel Psychology, 53: 803-834.James, L. R., Choi, C. C., Ko, C-H. E., McNeil, P. K., Minton, M. K., Wright, M. A., & Kim, K. 2008. Organizational and psychological climate: A review of theory and research. European Journal of Work and Organizational Psychology, 17: 5-32. Schneider, B., Ehrhart, M. G., & Macey, W. H. 2011. Perspectives on organizational climate and culture. In S. Zedeck (Ed.), APA handbook of industrial and organizational psychology, Vol. 1: 373-414. Washington: American Psychological Association.。

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如何回复英文论文编辑部的修改意见

之邯郸勺丸创作望对年夜家有帮手 1.Dear Prof. XXXX,Thank you very much for your letter and the comments from the referees about our paper submitted to XXXX (MS Number XXXX).We have checked the manuscript and revised it according to the comments. We submit here the revised manuscript as well as a list of changes.If you have any question about this paper, please don’t hesitate to let me know.Sincerely yours,Dr. XXXXResponse to Reviewer 1:Thanks for your comments on our paper. We have revised our paper according to your comments:1. XXXXXXX2. XXXXXXX2.Dear Professor ***,Re: An *** Rotating Rigid-flexible Coupled System (No.: JSV-D-06-***)by ***Many thanks for your email of 24 Jun 2006, regarding the revision and advice of the above paper in JSV. Overall the comments have been fair, encouraging and constructive. We have learned much from it.After carefully studying the reviewer’ comments and your advice, we have made corresponding changes to the paper. Our response of the comments is enclosed.If you need any other information, please contact me immediately by email. My email account is ***, and Tel.is***, and Fax is +***.Yours sincerely,Detailed response to reviewer’s comments and Asian Editor’s adviceOverall the comments have been fair, encouraging and constructive. We have learned much from it. Although the reviewer’s comments are generally positive, we have carefully proofread the manuscript and edit it as following.(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6) Besides the above changes, we have corrected some expression errors.Thank you very much for the excellent and professional revision of our manuscript.3.The manuscript is revised submission (×××-××××) with new line and page numbers in the text, some grammar and spelling errors had also been corrected. Furthermore, the relevant regulations had been made in the original manuscript according to the comments of reviewers, and the major revised portions were marked in red bold. We also responded point by point to each reviewer comments as listed below, along with a clear indication of the location of the revision.Hope these will make it more acceptable for publication.List of Major Changes:1).........2).........3).........Response to Reviewers:1).........2).........3).........Response to Reviewer XXWe very much appreciate the careful reading ofour manuscript and valuable suggestions of the reviewer. We have carefully considered the comments and have revised the manuscript accordingly. The comments can be summarized as follows:1) XX2) XXDetailed responses1) XX2) XX4.Dear editor XXWe have received the comments on our manuscript entitled “XX” by XX. According to the comments of the reviewers, we have revised our manuscript. The revised manuscript and the detailed responses to the comments of the one reviewer are attached.Sincerely yours,XX5.Response to Reviewer AReviewer A very kindly contacted me directly, and revealed himself to be Professor Dr. Hans-Georg Geissler of the University of Leipzig. I wrote him a general response to both reviews in January 2000, followed by these responses to specific points, both his own, and those of the other reviewer .Response to Specific PointsWhat follows is a brief and cursory discussion of the various issues raised by yourself and the other reviewer. If you should revise your judgment of the validity of the theory, these points will be addressed at greater length in a new version of the paper that I would resubmit to Psychological Review.Response to Specific Points- Reviewer A:In part (1)of your critique the major complaint is that no theory is presented, which was discussed above. You continue "Regrettably, not much attention is drawn to specific differences between the chosen examples that would be necessary to pinpoint specificities of perception more precisely", and "if perceptual systems, as suggested, hler (Kindeed act on the basis of HR, there must be many more specific constraints involved to ensure special `veridicality' properties of the perceptual outcome", and "the difficult analytic problems of concrete modeling of perception are not even touched". The model as presented is not a model of vision or audition or any other particular modality, but is a general model to confront the alternative neural receptive field paradigm, although examples from visual perception are used to exemplify the principles discussed. The more specific visual model was submitted elsewhere, in the Orientational Harmonic model, where I showed how harmonic resonance accounts for specific visual illusory effects. As discussed above, the attempt here is to propose a general principle of neurocomputation, rather than a specific model of visual, auditory, or any other specific sensory modality. Again,what I am proposing is a paradigm rather than a theory, i.e. an alternative principle of neurocomputation with specific and unique properties, as an alternative to the neuron doctrine paradigm of the spatial receptive field. If this paper is eventually accepted for publication, then I will resubmit my papers on visual illusory phenomena, referring to this paper to justify the use of the unconventional harmonic resonance mechanism.In part (2) (a) of your critique you say "it is not clarified whether the postulated properties of Gestalts actually follow from this definition or partly derive from additional constraints." and "I doubt that any of the reviewed examples for HR can treat just the case of hler: (1961, p. 7) "Human experience in the phenomenological sense cannot yet be treated with our most reliable methods; and when dealing with it, we may be forced to form new concepts which at first, will often be a bit vague." Wolfgang Kthe dog cited to demonstrate `emergence'. For this a hierarchy relation is needed." The principle of emergence in Gestalt theory is a very difficult concept to express in unambiguous terms, and the dog picture was presented to illustrate this ratherelusive concept with a concrete example. I do not suggest that HR as proposed in this paper can address the dog picture as such, since this is specifically a visual problem, and the HR model as presented is not a visual model. Rather, I propose that the feature detection paradigm cannot in principle handle this kind of ambiguity, because the local features do not individually contain the information necessary to distinguish significant from insignificant edges. The solution of the HR approach to visual ambiguity is explained in the paper in the section on "Recognition by Reification" (p. 15-17) in which I propose that recognition is not simply a matter of the identification of features in the input, i.e. by the "lighting up" of a higher level feature node, but it involves a simultaneous abstraction and reification, in which the higher level feature node reifies its particular pattern back at the input level, modulated by the exact pattern of the input. I appeal to the reader to see the reified form of the dog as perceived edges and surfaces that are not present in the input stimulus, as evidence for this reification in perception, which appears at the same time that therecognition occurs. The remarkable property of this reification is that the dog appears not as an image of a canonical, or prototypical dog, but as a dog percept that is warped to the exact posture and configuration allowed by the input, as observed in the subjective experience of the dog picture. This explanation is subject to your criticism in your general comments, that "the author demonstrates more insight than explicitly stated in assumptions and drawn conclusions". I can only say that, in Kuhn's words, sometimes it is only personal and inarticulate aesthetic considerations that can be used to make the case.In the words of Wolfgang K?hler: (1961, p.7)"Human experience in the phenomenological sense cannot yet be treated with our most reliable methods; and when dealing with it, we may be forced to form new concepts which at first, will often be a bit vague."Wolfgang K?hler (K?hler 1923 p. 64)"Natural sciences continually advance explanatory hyptotheses, which cannot be verified by direct observation at the time when they are formed nor for a long time thereafter. Of such a kind were Ampere's theory of magnetism, the kinetic theory of gases, the electronic theory, the hypothesis of atomic disintegration in the theory of radioactivity. Some of these assumptions have since been verified by direct obser vation, or have at least come close to such direct verification; others are still far removed from it. But physics and chemistry would have been condemned to a permanent embryonic state had they abstained from such hypotheses; their development seems rather like a continuous effort steadily to shorten the rest of the way to the verification of hypotheses which survive this process"In section (2) (b) of your critique you complain that "there is no serious discussion of possible alternatives", and you mention Neo-Gibsonian approaches, PDP, Grossberg's ART model and Pribram's holographic theory. In the next version of the paper this omission will be corrected, approximately as follows. Gibson's use of the term resonance is really a metaphorical device, since Gibson offers no mechanisms or analogies of perceptual processes, but merely suggests that there is a two-way flow of information (resonance) between behavior and the environment. This is really merely a metaphor, rather than a model.The PDP approach does address the issue of emergence, but since the basic computationalunit of the neural network model is a hard-wired receptive field, this theory suffers all the limitations of a template theory. The same holds for Grossberg's "Adaptive Resonance Theory", which also uses the word resonance metaphorically to suggest a bottom-up top- down matching, but in Grossberg's model that matching is actually performed by receptive fields, or spatial templates. The ART model demonstrates the limitations of this approach. For the only way that a higher-level detector, or "F2 node", can exhibit generalization to different input patterns, is for it to have synaptic weights to all of the patterns to which it responds. In essence, the pattern of synaptic weights is a superposition or blurring together of all of the possible input patterns to which the F2 node should respond. In top-down priming mode therefore that F2 node would "print" that same blurred pattern back at the lower "F1 node" level, activating all of the possible patterns to which that F2 node is tuned to respond. For example if an ART model were trained to respond to an "X"-shaped feature presented at all possible orientations, top-down priming of this node after training would "print" apattern of all those X-shaped features at all orientations superimposed, which is simply an amorphous blob. In fact, that same node would respond even better to a blob feature than to any single X feature. In the presence of a partial or ambiguous X-like pattern presented at a particular orientation, the ART model could not complete that pattern specific to its orientation. The HR model on the other hand offers a different and unique principle of representation, in which top-down activation of the higher level node can complete a partial or ambiguous input pattern in the specific orientation at which it appears, but that same priming would complete the pattern differently if it appeared in a different orientation. This generalization in recognition, but specification in completion, is a property that is unique to the harmonic resonance representation.Kuhn observes that the old paradigm can always be reformulated to account for any particular phenomenon addressed by the new paradigm, just as the Ptolomaic earth- centered cosmology could account for the motions of the planets to arbitrary precision, given enough nested cycles and epicycles of the crystal spheres.Similarly, a conventional neural network model can always be contrived to exhibit the same functional behavior of generalized recognition but specific completion described above, but only by postulating an implausible arrangement of spatial receptive fields. In this case that would require specific X-feature templates applied to the input at every possible orientation, any one of which can stimulate a single rotation-invariant X-feature node, to account for bottom-up rotation invariance in recognition. However in order to also account for top-down completion specific to orientation, top-down activation of the higher-level invariant node would have to feed back down to a set of top-down projection nodes, each of which is equipped with an X-shaped projective template at a particular orientation, able to project a complete X-shaped pattern on the input field. But the top-down completion must select only the specific orientation that best matches the pattern present in the input, and complete the pattern only at that best matching orientation. This system therefore requires two complete sets of X-feature receptive fields or templates, one set for bottom-up recognition and the other set for top-downcompletion, each set containing X-feature templates at every possible orientation, and similar sets of receptive fields would be required for the recognition of other shaped patterns such as "T" and "V" features. This represents a "brute force" approach to achieving invariance, which although perhaps marginally plausible in this specific example, is completely implausible as a general principle of operation of neurocomputation, given the fact that invariance appears to be so fundamental a property of human and animal perception. However, as Kuhn also observes, a factor such as neural plausibility is itself a "personal and inarticulate aesthetic consideration" that cannot be determined unambiguously by the evaluative procedures characteristic of normal science.With regard to Pribram's Holographic theory, the concept of a hologram is closely related to a standing wave model, since it too works by interference of waveforms. The difference is that the hologram is "frozen in time" like a photograph, and therefore does not exhibit the tolerance to elastic deformation of the input, as does the standing wave model. Neither does the hologram exhibit rotation invariance as does the standingwave in a circular- symmetric system. However holograms can in principle be constructed of dynamic standing waves, as Pribram himself suggests, and this concept then becomes a harmonic resonance theory. The present proposal is therefore closely related to Pribram's approach, which will be discussed in the next version of the paper.The discussion of alternative models was indeed a significant omission in the version of the paper you reviewed, the next version will include such a discussion, which in turn will help to clarify the operational principles of the HR theory, and distinguish it from alternative approaches.In section (3) of your critique you propose that "notions like the receptive field concept are approximate descriptions of facts", and you propose a dualistic approach involving two forms of representations in the brain which are of different and complementary nature. While I do not dispute the anatomical facts of the shapes of neuron and the function of synapses, it has never been demonstrated that a neuron actually operates as a spatial template, that theory arose as an explanation for the neurophysiological response of "feature detector" cells in the cortex. However the noisystochastic nature of the neural response, and its very broad tuning function seem to argue against this view. My own hunch is that the feature detector behavior is itself a standing wave phenomenon, which is consistent with the fact that the response function of V1 cortical neurons resembles a Gabor function, which is itself a wavelet. However this issue is orthogonal to my main point, which is that whether or not some neurons behave as spatial templates, the limitations of a template theory suggest that the Gestalt properties of perception (emergence, invariance, reification, multistability) cannot be accounted for in that manner, and that some other significant principle of computation must be invoked to account for the Gestalt properties of perception.In section (4) you complain that there is no discussion of the limitations in the scope of HR. For example merely to reflect outside reality does not contribute to the problem of conscious awareness of these objects. However this issue is not unique to HR, it is a general philosophical issue that applies just as well to the alternative Neuron Doctrine model. But the Neuron doctrine itself cannot even plausibly account for thereflection of outside reality in an internal representation, due to the problems of emergence, reification, and invariance, which is why the Neuron Doctrine suggests a more abstracted concept of visual representation, in which the visual experience is encoded in a far more abstracted and abbreviated form. Therefore although HR does not solve the "problem of consciousness" completely, it is one step closer to a solution than the alternative. The philosophical issue of consciousness however is beyond the scope of this paper, which is a theory of neural representation, rather than a philosophical paper. I enclose a copy of my book, "The World In Your Head", which addresses these philosophical issues more extensively.Professor Geissler's ResponseProfessor Geissler kindly responded to my letter in April 2000 to say that he agreed with nearly everything I had said. He then gave me advice about the presentation of the idea. He recommended that I begin by describing the Neuron Doctrine in detail, and then point out the limitations of the idea before presenting the Harmonic Resonance theory as an alternative. I re-wrote the paper following Geissler's advice, and I includedsome ideas from the above letter in the new version of the paper. However it was too late to resubmit it to Psychological Review since the editor who was handling the paper was leaving. Furthermore, I am becoming convinced that the proper medium for presenting radically new and different theories is the open peer review format of the Behavioral and Brain Sciences journal, which is where I submitted the revised version of this paper.6.Dear Dr. S. Heller,Attached please the revised manuscript " A Group-Decision Approach for Evaluating Educational Web Sites" submitted to computers & Education for possible publication. A file containing the revision summary is also attached. Your acknowledgement will be highly appreciated.Thank you.Sincerely yoursGwo-Jen HwangInformation Management DepartmentNational Chi Nan UniversityPu-Li, Nan-Tou, Taiwan 545, R.O.C.FAX: 886-940503178TEL: 886-915396558Response to Reviewers and EditorPaper#: SMCC-03-06-0056Title: On the Development of a Computer-Assisted Testing System with Genetic Test Sheet-Generating Approach[Reviewer 1 Comments]:____ The paper should be shortened.[Response to Reviewer 1]:The paper has been shortened to 24 pages by removing someredundant descriptions of genetic models and algorithms; moreover, Sections 3 and 4 have been re-written to condense the entire paper.[Reviewer 2 Comments]:No innovative contribution was found both in the theory of genetic algorithms and in the application of them.[Response to Reviewer 2]:(1)_We have re-written the abstract and Sections 1 and 2 to explain the importance about the construction of a good test sheet. The major contribution of this paper is not in its technical part. Instead, we tried to cope with an important problem arising from real educational applications. Such a problem is known to be critical and has not been efficiently and effectively solved before.(2)_Since the innovative contribution of this paper might not be significant, we have re-written the paper as a technical correspondence based on the editor's suggestion.[Reviewer 3 Comments]:Make the definitions, formulas, and other descriptions clearer and more precise, so that the revised paper will be improved in its readability and correctness.[Response to Reviewer 3]:Te mixed integer models and the genetic algorithms in Sections 3 and 4 have been re-written to make the definitions, formulas,and other descriptions clearer and more precise (please refer to Pages 6-17). Moreover, a colleague who is an English expert has carefully checked the paper to correct potential grammatical errors.。

用英文巧妙回复SCI期刊编辑信件

用英文巧妙回复SCI期刊编辑信件

用英文巧妙回复SCI期刊编辑信件众所周知,外审专家对于文章的主要批评意见是非常重要的,因此作者对于这些意见的回复也是尤为关键。

本文就如何用英文就其意见进行回复做一下简单说明:1、In reply to the referee’s main criticism of paper, it is possible to say that您的回复:外审专家对于表1中xxx所提出的问题现已改正。

而后面的一些小改动则不会影响文章对结果的解释。

One minor point raised by the referee concerns of the extra composition of the reaction mixture in Figure 1 has now been corrected. Further minor changes had been made on page 3,paragraph 1(line 3-8)and 2(line 6-11).These do not affect our interpretation of the result.2、我非常仔细地阅读了外审专家的意见,而且我认为文章仅仅因为缺少xxx而被拒绝刊登的。

我承认本应在丈中包含XXX 然后这仅是出于对文章简洁的考量,没有提供相关数据而非疏忽。

I have read the referee’s comments very carefully and conclude that the paper has been rejected on the sole grounds that it lacked toxicity data. I admit that l did not include a toxicity table in my article although perhaps I should have done. This was for the sake of brevity rather than an error or omission.3、谢谢您对于我文章“XXX”的回复以及外审专家的意见。

英文 回复审稿人意见

英文 回复审稿人意见

回复审稿人意见开头The authors want to really thank the editor for the time spent reviewing the manuscript and for his valuable comments and suggestions. According to his valuable recommendations, we modified the manuscript.The authors want to really thank the reviewer for the time spent reviewing the manuscript and for his valuable comments and suggestions. According to his valuable recommendations, we modified the manuscript as reported in the point-by-point responses below.最后一段Therefore, the whole paper was totally revised based on your suggestion and the reviewer comments. We hope that in this new version the manuscript can be considered for publication in International Journal of Mechanical Sciences.通用创新性…… have been revised to better clarify the proposed novelty.补充材料The authors want to thank the reviewer for this suggestion. Accordingly, a new sentence was added in the abstract of the new version of the manuscript for pointing out such aspects as follows:The comparison between the proposed methodology and the existing ones is presented in the introduction section but it will be treated more in detail.However, to state clearly this aspect for readers, in accordance with the reviewer’s comment, the following sentence is added to the paper:疏忽或表达不清道歉Thanks for your comment and sorry for the ambiguous expression.Thanks for your thoughtful comment and sorry for the unclear statements.回答开头一句话,承认,感谢It is a very good question.It is a very important comment and is very useful for us to improve our manuscript.This comment is highly appreciated.This comment is accepted.This comment is accepted and is very important for us to improve our manuscript.This comment is highly appreciated. We have checked the readability of the manuscript throughout, and revised accordingly, to eliminate long sentences hard to follow and odd expressions.This comment is highly appreciated. As the comment pointed out,错误纠正The authors want to thank the reviewer for highlighting such a mistake.Thank you for pointing out this problem. It is indeed that…The authors want to thank the reviewer for highlighting this very important aspect.虽然不是,但也作出了修改和完善However, to state clearly this aspect for readers, in accordance with the reviewer’s comment, the following sentence is added to the paper:删除某部分After careful consideration, we think He/She is right and we removed Fig. 11 and related discussion in the revised manuscript, and we believe this will not affect the integrity and main conclusions of the paper.感谢肯定和承认Thank you for your recognition for our work, and we sincerely appreciate your comments, which are of great importance to the improvement of our manuscript.无法补充或解释的答复This comment was highly appreciated. As the comment pointed out, how does the lubricating properties of … be improved was not explained clearly. The mechanism for improving the tribological performance of composites added with … reported in other literatures is added in introduction. As the main purpose of this paper is to discuss the synthesis of …, we did not discuss the problem in detail.As the main purpose of this paper is to discuss the synthesis of …, we think it is not necessary to present detailed mechanical analyses. Of course, the mechanical properties of …. will be studied in detail in our further works according to your valuable suggestion.As the comment pointed out, the fracture toughness in … increases and flexural strength decreases in this study. To be honest, the reason for this phenomenon is not clearly now. According to our knowledge, the fracture toughness and flexural strength do not relate with each other in some studies as well, such as doi:10.1016…., doi:10.1016/….and doi:10.1016/…., et al. But we will focus on this unusual phenomenon and try to find the reasons. Thanks again for your thoughtful comment.The questions you mentioned are of great importance to our research, and are the focus of our future research. We think again for your meaningful comments.。

如何回复审稿人意见审稿回复

如何回复审稿人意见审稿回复

如何回复英文论文编辑部的修改意见Response to Editor and Reviewer这是我的英文修改稿回复信Dear Editor,RE: Manuscript IDWe would like to thank XXX name of Journal for giving us the opportunity to revise our manuscript.We thank the reviewers for their careful read and thoughtful comments on previous draft. We have carefully taken their comments into consideration in preparing our revision, which has resulted in a paper that is clearer, more compelling, and broader. The following summarizes how we responded to reviewer comments.Below is our response to their comments.Thanks for all the help.Best wishes,Dr. XXXCorresponding Author下面是如何对Reviewer的意见进行point by point回答:一些习惯用语如下:Revision —authors’ responseReviewer 1:Major comments1.The referee correctly noted that our language about XXX was ambiguous.Therefore, we changed the text and the figures to emphasize that …. To furthersupport the concept that, we have analyzed …. As depicted in Supplementary Fig.S1…2.As suggested by the reviewer we have emphasized our observations of XXX inresults and discussion sections. We have added new findings see above point inSupplementary Fig S. to support…3.As requested by the reviewer we have added a scheme Supplementary Fig. thatsummarizes…Minor comments1.We have removed the word SUFFICIENT from the title.2.We have added and improved the scale bars in the figure 1 and 2.3.We have added statistics to Fig 5C.4.We have corrected the typescript errors in the XXX paragraph.Reviewer 2:1.Because of the reviewer’s request, we have performed new experiments to betterclarify… The new Fig. shows that… This finding suggests that…2.As suggested by the reviewer we have added new data of XXX to clarify the pointtha t…3.We agree with the reviewer that … Because of the reviewer’s request we have usedXXX to confirm that… The new data are depicted in Supplementary Fig .4.Because of reviewer’s request, we have analyzed the efficiency of RNAi byquantitative RT-PCR the efficiency of RNAi. We have now added the new panel in Supplementary Fig.Reviewer 3:1.Because of the referee’s comment, we have moved the panel of Fig. 5 into the newFigure 6 and we have added new experiments to address …. The new F ig. 6 shows that….2.In response to the reviewer’s requests, we have studied…. The new data aredepicted in Suppplementary Fig.3.We agree with reviewer that…. However, a recent paper has shown that …. Wehave added this reference and modified th e sentence to underline….4.We have changes Figure 1 with a picture that…. The previous one was too weekand the green fluorescence was lost during the conversion in PDF format.5.Because of review’s request, we have changed as much as possible t hemagnification in order to maintain the same scale bar but also to preserve details.6.The difference between XXX and XXX is not statistically significant. In order tobetter clarify this issue we changed the graphics of our statistical analysis in Fig.另外一篇5分杂志的回复:1nd Revision –authors’ responseReferee 1:We want to begin by thanking Referee 1 for writing that “the finding in our manuscript is generally interesting and important in the field.” We also appreciated the constructive criticism and suggestion. We addressed all the points raised by the reviewer, as summarized below.1.According to the referee’s suggestion, the experiment demonstrating…; in the newexperiment, this result is presented in the revised Fig.2.The referee sug gests demonstrating that…. This experiment was performed in XXXby comparing…3.The referee comments that it is unclear whether the effect of ….is due to …. Toaddress the referee’s comment, we revised Fig. and demonstrated that…. To further confirm…. 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a r X i v :c o n d -m a t /0604084v 1 [c o n d -m a t .s t r -e l ] 4 A p r 2006Feldbacher,Held,and Assaad Reply:Re-cently,we introduced a projective quantum Monte Carlo (PQMC)algorithm for simulating the Anderson impurity model (AIM)[1].The preceding critique [2]based on the orthogonality catastrophe (OC)[3]is invalid:(i)There is no OC in [1],and it is generally not “unpractical”to avoid it.(ii)The OC does not affect our results.Concerning (i):The OC theorem [3]states:If a Hamil-tonian H T is perturbed by a local disorder potential and/or interaction H ′to a Hamiltonian H =H T +H ′,the overlap of the ground states of H and H T is | ψG |ψT |∼N −α,N being the numer of bath sites .(1)What Katsnelson [2]overlooked is that α=0in [1].The αof Eq.(1)is given by the difference between the scatter-ing phase for H T and H (ϕT and ϕG ,respectively),i.e.,α∼(ϕT −ϕG )2[4].According to the Friedel sum rule,the scattering phase ϕis related to the average number of electrons on the impurity site:ϕ=π/2n d .Since n d is the same for H and H ′,we have ϕT =ϕG ,and hence α=0.There is no OC.Note that our calculations in [1,5]are for half-filled bands,so that we automatically have α=0.But also offhalf-filling one is free to choose a H T with the same n d .This proof based on Friedel’s sum rule has been incor-porated in [2],where it is now argued that using a H T without OC is “unpractical”[2]because one would need an (analytically)“exact answer for n d ”[2].We reject this critique.For a numerical algorithm,it is perfectly legitimate to calculate n d numerically .We have done so in practice [6].Concerning (ii):The OC is irrelevant for our calcula-tions since for long enough projection time θwe obtain the same Green function G (τ)with and without OC,see Fig.1.The calculations of Fig.1have been done for an AIM with on-site hybridization V =1,a constant bath density of states ranging from -1to 1(with N →∞bath sites),imaginary time discretization ∆τ=0.1,impurity level ǫd =0.5,and Coulomb interaction U =0(for maxi-mizing precision).The trial AIM with OC was half-filled,i.e.,ǫtrial d=0,n trial d =1instead of ǫd =0.5,n d ∼0.7.For long enough projection θ,the Green function with OC converges to the exact result.At θ=100(250),the av-erage difference to the exact G (τ)is already as small as 7·10−4(3·10−4).Also,n d =2[1−G (τ=0)]is obtained extremely precisely even with OC.Technically,one can understand the irrelevance of the OC by considering that we have integrated out the N bath sites of Eq.(1)[1,7].The algorithm is exactly the same with OC (N →∞)and without OC (finite N ).For large enough but finite N ,also the non-interacting input Green function can be the same as for N →∞,within any given accuracy.Hence,the results are the same with and without OC.Physically,one can understand the irrelevance of the OC by considering that the OC theorem [3]holds in theτG ( )τFIG.1:(Color online)PQMC Green function with OC and without OC (exact).For long enough projection θ,the Green function with OC converges to the exact result.Note the logarithmic scale of the y axis.metallic,(quasi-)particle regime and only for N →∞.Then,however,the ground state and excited states with a finite number of particle-hole excitations,have the same physical properties,since the finite number of particle-hole excitations becomes irrelevant for N →∞.Ground state and such low-lying excited states yield the same equilibrium (ground state)Green function [8].This ex-plains,why we obtain the correct results,e.g.,in Fig.1,even with OC.The OC is irrelevant for our calculations.Katsnelson’s objection [2]is not valid.M.Feldbacher 1,K.Held 1,and F.F.Assaad 21Max-Planck-Institut f¨u r Festk¨o rperforschung,Heisen-bergstraße 1,D-70569Stuttgart,Germany 2Institut f¨u r theoretische Physik und Astrophysik,Uni-versit¨a t W¨u rzburg,Am Hubland,D-97074W¨u rzburg,Germany Received DOI:PACS numbers:[1]M.Feldbacher,K.Held,and F.F.Assaad,Phys.Rev.Lett.93,136405(2004).[2]M.I.Katsnelson,preceding comment.[3]P.W.Anderson,Phys.Rev.Lett.18,1049(1967);Phys.Rev.164,352(1967).[4]See,e.g.,K.Yamada and K.Yosida,Progr.Theor.Phys.60,353(1978).[5]R.Arita and K.Held,Phys.Rev.B 72,201102(2005).[6]R.Arita and K.Held,Phys.Rev.B 73,064515(2006).[7]J.E.Hirsch and R.M.Fye,Phys.Rev.Lett.56,2521(1986).[8]Also note O.Gunnarsson and K.Sch¨o nhammer,Phys.Rev.B 26,2765(1982),where—for the original OC model of non-interacting electrons [3]—it was proved that the ground state and the lowest excited states (even with in-finitely many particle-hole excitations,less then ∼N 1/2)yield the same local expectation values for equal-time one-particle operators in the limit N →∞.。

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