2021届新高考8省3+1+2模式高三名校好题速递分项汇编之书面表达--应用文写作(解析版)

2021届新高考8省3+1+2模式高三名校好题速递分项汇编（5）之书面表达--应用文写作【湖北省部分重点中学2021届高三第一次联考】假如你是李华，本周六你们学校要组织学生去参观武汉新建的中国建筑科技馆（China Architecture and Technology Museum）,你想邀请对中国建筑感兴趣的外教Daniel ―同参观。

请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 参观时间和地点；2. 活动安排:听专家讲座；做建筑模型等；3. 参观前准备：简要了解中国建筑史.注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。

Dear Daniel,Knowing that you're interested in Chinese Architecture,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________I am sincerely looking forward to your presence. Please reply soon.Yours,Li Hua 【答案】Dear Daniel:Knowing that you're interested in Chinese Architecture, I'm writing to invite you to visit China Architecture and Technology Museum this Saturday.Not only will we admire the delicate building models, but also we are to attend a lecture delivered by an expert, through which we can have a better understanding of the buildings with Chinese features and technology. The most fascinating arrangement is to make models in person.If you would like to come, you'd better learn about the history of Chinese architecture in advance.I am sincerely looking forward to your presence. Please rely soon.Yours truly,LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Daniel写封邮件，邀请他一同参观武汉新建的中国建筑科技馆。

第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.参观时间和地点；2.活动安排:听专家讲座；做建筑模型等；3.参观前准备：简要了解中国建筑史.第二步:列提纲（重点词组）admire the delicate building models；most fascinating arrangement；learn about the history等等。

第三步：连词成句1.Not only will we admire the delicate building models, but also we are to attend a lecture delivered by an expert, through which we can have a better understanding of the buildings with Chinese features and technology.2.The most fascinating arrangement is to make models in person3.If you would like to come, you'd better learn about the history of Chinese architecture in advance.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）表并列补充关系：Not only…but also;连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】[高分句型1] Not only will we admire the delicate building models, but also we are to attend a lecture delivered by an expert, through which we can have a better understanding of the buildings with Chinese features and technology. [高分句型2] The most fascinating arrangement is to make models in person.[高分句型3] If you would like to come, you'd better learn about the history of Chinese architecture in advance.【湖南省衡阳市第一中学2021届高三上学期期中】假定你是李华，你的英国留学生朋友John没有进入“汉语才艺大赛”的决赛，感到非常沮丧。

请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示理解；2. 给予安慰；3. 鼓励继续努力。

注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】Dear John,I am sorry to know that you didn't make it to the final of the Chinese Talent Show. I was told that you are in low spirits and I understand how you feel. However, I think you should cheer up. You have tried your best, so there is nothing to regret. And have you noticed that you have made great progress in Chinese and singing since you took part in the talent show? This is what you have gained and what really matters.Moreover, it's common for us to experience failure, which will encourage us to go further. Keep on trying and you will succeed sooner or later. I wish you happy every day.Yours,Li Hua 【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国留学生朋友John写封邮件，对John没有进入“汉语才艺大赛”的决赛进行安慰。

第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时，少量一般过去时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 表示理解；2. 给予安慰；3. 鼓励继续努力。

第二步:列提纲（重点词组）be sorry to do sth.; make it; cheer up; try one’s best; make great progress; take part in sth.; encourage sb. to do sth.第三步：连词成句1. I am sorry to know that you didn't make it to the final of the Chinese Talent Show.2. However, I think you should cheer up.3. You have tried your best, so there is nothing to regret.4. And have you noticed that you have made great progress in Chinese and singing since you took part in the talent show?5. Moreover, it's common for us to experience failure, which will encourage us to go further.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表并列补充关系：And，Moreover2.表转折对比关系：However2.表因果关系：so连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] This is what you have gained and what really matters.用了两个what引导的表语从句。

[高分句型2] Moreover, it's common for us to experience failure, which will encourage us to go further. 用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句。

【湖南省长沙市第一中学2021届高三上学期月考（二）】假定你是李华，你校英文报拟刊登介绍美国电影的短文，请给你的美国朋友Peter写封约稿邮件，内容包括：1、校英文报简介；2、稿件内容与要求；3、交稿时间与方式。

注意：1、写作词数应为100左右；2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。