考研资料英语写作——何凯文版.doc

考研英语写作三段论：第一段---描述图画或图表第二段---解释寓意第三段---给出评论第一段：第一句1、As is shown above , 描述图画（倒装）.There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper.报纸上有一张图画引起人们广泛的关注。

描述图画注意：第一步：寻找图画的中心事物，并确定中心事物的位置。

第二部：描述中心事物，可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述。

第三部; 寻找中心事物周围相关的事物，并进行简单的描述。

模式：在图画中央有------(倒装)，它-------（主谓一致、现在分词、非限定性定语从句），周围有-----（独立主格作状语）第二句----总结①The picture , at the fist glimpse , seems to be simple , butonly a penetrating sight can pierce through its superficialmeaning.这幅画初看好像很简单，但是只有具有洞察力的人才能看穿其肤浅的含义。

②The author’s real purpose is not the fact itself , but to leadus to find what hides behind the ice burg.作者的真实目的不是图画本身，而是要引导我们去探求在图画背后究竟隐藏着什么。

第二段第一句----观点的提出(1) The picture tells us that nothing can be compared withthe 重要主题. In no country , other than china ,it has been said , is this phenomenon more obvious .(2) The picture does revel certain disturbing socialphenomenon , that is , people tend to overlook the fact that 有害主题. ( 或The picture does reveal that 有害主题is not only harmful , but also damaging .) The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to the reform and opening-up policy carried out , bringing some problems at the same time , with the above one being the foremost .在过去的十年间，由于改革开放政策的执行，我国的经济有了巨大的发展，但同时带来了一些问题，上面的问题是最严重的。

（或In no country other than china , it has been said m is this problem more serous . ）万能观点：①图画主题的重要性Nothing can be compared with······is not only necessary , but also indispensable ······remains to be an integral part in···②图画主题的有害性Nothing is more harmful or damaging.···is not only harmful , but also damaging.···in large measure detrimental.第二句----进一步讲解人们的态度（重视/不重视）(1) The public fails to attach due attention to 有害主题.(2) The public attach due attention to 重要主题.give priority to···优先考虑···attach attention to···对··注意emphasize the importance of···强调···的重要性stress the fundamental role of···强调···的根本作用第三句---对主题进行展开（3-4句）By doing so , 十一个角度平行展开···（也可用科学论据法或举例法）(一)、十一个万能理由（角度）物质回报：①主题can provide (offer) people with not only deliciousfood but fashionable clothes and such benefits as comfortable dwellings and handsome automobiles.②The industrious and insightful people will never fail toprofits from (benefit from) doing 主题.时间角度节约时间①It can make the most of one’s time , chance andtechnology.②主题(e.g. Learning more western culture) , occupyingspare time so constructively , makes a person contented , with no time for boredom/wondering and helps them achieve a more broaden horizon.浪费时间As all known , the days of youth should not be friend/idled away and time should be cherished , but (主题 e.g. star worship) wastes hours , lavishes days and even squanders years , which leads us to say kills an even murders youngster’s prime time.效率角度①主题（e .g. Star worship/Addiction to the Internet）makespeople weary of other important things , discourages him to learn more , and finally lose their interest to learn , and lead to low grades / low efficiency / underachievement .②One’s energy gradually wears off and one’s thought ,creative thinking and exploration has been stifled by doing 主题.方便和快捷①主题（e.g. Wide World Web）provides people withup-to-date , concrete and accurate and vivid information .②主题（e.g. MSN and other instant messengers）canshrink the distance between cities and even continents ;smooth the communication between residents and rid of the barrier between people .安全角度①主题can secure his food and shelter.②主题can shield people from various kinds of hazardsranging from injury , robbery , assaults to traffic accidents .身心健康①（主题）can relieve not only pressure but also anxiety and such problems , stress , isolation and solitude .②By doing (主题) people stay healthy , and therefore prevent heart diseases , hypertension , diabetes or fattiness .③(主题) can also have added benefit of increasing one’s knowledge and giving us a new perspective of the outside world .生活娱乐①It’s a major means of entertainment that relieves one’spressure , boredom , stress and burden .表“受益”的词组：Broaden one’s mindEnrich one’s experienceEnhance vigor and put more enthusiasm to one’s work②It is well received as an instructive mode of entertainmentthat provides people with not only a bulk of information , but a source of imagination as well.③It provides a variety of leisure activities that enhance yourenergy , enthusiasm and charm . It adds a special means of entertainment to you seemingly tedious , routine and monotonous life .有助成长和成功（自己和他人）①People can obtain financial aids , material support , mentalcomfort , or spiritual back from your support .②They can draw on experience from you . Through yourspeeches , instructions or assistance , they can broaden their minds , increase their income .③Through your encouragement , they cultivate the spirit ofcompetition , participation and cooperation and finally find their own ways to fulfill their pursuit of happiness .④Though your assistance , not only can they accumulatewealth , but will also establish their career , fit into society , and even attain social status .⑤People who treat others with love , sincerity , sympathy ,enthusiasm , hospitality or generosity always win respect from others .⑥It dose / doesn’t necessarily cultivate talent , confidence ,self—worth ,self—reliance and dignity .文化价值观①It cannot help people treat the world with benevolence ,confidence and tolerance .②It can sometimes intensify conflicts and tensions betweennations . It put harmonious human relationship in danger .It cannot promote mutual understanding . It can breach the friendly ties , and widen the gap between people .环境保护①It means that central authority can set aside more funds toeliminate air pollution , noise pollution , reduce soil erosion or desertification , prevent the thinness of ozone layers , reduce industrial sewage , and rescue the dwindling tropical jungles .②It government should raise the public awareness ofenvironmental preservation , thereby promotingsustainable development and creating a more livableenvironment .社会宏观角度①It can minimize inflation , economic stagnation , economicrecession , unemployment rate . It can maintain socialorder and reduce crime rate .②It means that revolutionize the scientific level of a country ,means of co communication and quality of life .③It means that the authorities can allocate more funds to theconstruction and quality of infrastructure ranging fromkindergartens , hospitals , medical center , museums ,school libraries , trains to highways and express ways .④It means that people can have equal opportunity to collegeeducation , employments , self—realization and pursuit ofmaterial wealth .（二）、科学论据法According to a survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Science （CAS），···According to a survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Social Science (CASS) , ···China Daily interviewed for people from four professions – a surgeon , a while collar worker , a carpenter and a farmer . Thesurvey discovers that all of them are of the idea that 主题重要或有害.（三）、举例子①Our human history has been filled with a variety of examples of ···, with the following one being the foremost . 我们人类历史上与这个话题相关的例子有很多，下面这个是最有说服力的。