how to save water

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Water is very important.
We must use water every day in our daily life. And we also use it in industry. If there is no water left on the Earth, we will die. Without water, without lives.
Please give some advice.
1. 2. 3. 4. 5. We should… Why not… Try to… What about… It’s a good idea…
Key words
take shorter showers, don’t leave the tap running , reuse water , should not pollute water…
There are several ways to save water. Firstly, take shorter showers and don’t leave the tap running when we don’t need to use water. Secondly, try to reuse water . It’s the most important way for us to save water. Last but not least, we should not pollute water so that we will have fresh water for years and years. As a result, we can save plenty of water. In a word, if we do not save water, the last drop of water will be a teardrop. To protect water is to protect ourselves.
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Water is the source of life Without water, without lives So please cherish water resources from now on Tomorrow will be better!
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Tips:
1.Topic sentence 2.Conjunctions besides; what’s more; however; but; as a result; in a word; so; in my opinion; though; in spite of…
Water is very important.We must use water every day in our daily life. Besides(还有）, we use it in industry. What’s more(此外), If there is no water left on the Earth, we will die. Without water, without lives.
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Tips： We can use water to…/Water can be used to… If there is no water on the earth, we will/won’t… Without water, without…
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Topic t: first, next, then and finally. Or firstly, secondly, finally (last but not least…)
How can we save water? Topic sentence: There are several ways to save water. How can we save water? The followings may help. Key words take shorter showers, leave the tap running , reuse water , should not pollute water… Conjunctions(连词） as a result, and , in a word… Proverbs(谚语）(use it if necessary)： Water is the source of life.
How can we save water?
Choose proper topic sentence
A. There are several ways to save water. B. Water is endless(无穷无尽的). C. We can see water everywhere.
Topic sentence is usually the first sentence of We must a paragraph. use water every day in our daily life. And we also use it in industry. If Topic sentence tells the main idea of the there is no water left on the Earth, we Paragraph. will die. Without water, without lives. This is the beginning part.