人教版高一英语必修一建议信how-to-write-letters-of-advice

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人教版高中英语必修1 How to write a letter of advice

人教版高中英语必修1 How to write a letter of advice
Lead in
Suggestions: You can…/Why not…/You’d better…
I called the policeman and
wrote a letter of advice to the government.
Dear lucy,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new
How many paragraphs did I write in the passage?
What is each paragraph about?
My letter
Structure
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to Para.1 your new school life in America. I'm writing this letter to purpose
help to make life more interesting. By doing this,you will be happier
with your new life soon.
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Yours, Hou Tao
Analyze the structure of the letter
trouble adapting to your new school life your letter.
in America. I'm writing this letter to offer Having received your letter,I know...

高一写作How to weiter a letter of advice

高一写作How to weiter a letter of advice

Yours, ______
Dear ________ 建议信的模式 It is nice to receive your letter. You have asked me for my advice about your problem.Here is my advice. Firstly, it is important to_____________(建议1) If you do this,___________________(建议1的原因). Secondly, you should ______________(建议2) . In this way, You can_____________(建议2的原因). At last, it would be a good idea to _____(建议3)。 By doing this, you can_____________(建议3的原因) I hope you will find these ideas useful.
4. join club/ join in activities
4. make more friends
Your for Xiao Dong How toadvice join the advice and its reason into a sentence
Reasons: Advice: 1. get to know different 1. join in discussions people and let them see you and show interest in others’ are friendly ideas 2. find classmates with 2. ask people their likes and the same interest dislikes 3. let others know more 3.share your feelings with about you others 4. make more friends 4. join club/join in acticities Useful sentence patterns(可用到回答的句型)

高中英语必修一人教版:Unit 1 建议信课件 课件

高中英语必修一人教版:Unit 1 建议信课件 课件

Besides, keeping a dairy is also a good choice, as it can improve your writing skills. I hope you will find my suggestions helpful and useful and make great progress in Chinese. Yours, Li Hua
Dear Peter, I'm glad that you are interested in learning Chinese and I would like to offer you the following tips. To begin with, it is a good idea to make more Chinese friends in you daily life. You can pracice your spoken Chinese with them. What's more, it would be wise to listen to Chinese songs and watch Chinese movies. They can make you have a better understanding of Chinese culture.
开头句: 1. 我知道你在....方面有困难,我想给你提如下 一些建议。 I have known that you have some trouble (doing sth) and I would like to give/offer you the following suggestions. 2. 当涉及/关于...,我的建议如下。 When it comes to/As for .. the following are my suggestions. 3. 我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议。 I'm writing to give you some suggestions/ advice/tips.

高中英语必修1 Unit 1 Writing—Write a letter of advice

高中英语必修1 Unit 1 Writing—Write a letter of advice

Would you please have some special smart phones designed and produced f or the old?
Yours, Li Hua
本课结束
Unit 1 Teenage Life
Period Five Writing—Write a letter of advice
PART 1 技法点拨 PART 2 写作训练
Hale Waihona Puke PART 1技法点拨
◆写作指导
本单元的写作任务是写建议信。建议信是常用的书信形式之一,主要用来 针对收集的一方存在的某一问题提出自己的合理化建议,从而达到帮助对方解 决问题的目的。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
1.首段:表明写作意图。首先应该简单地就对方对自己的信任表示感谢, 亦可表明自己的诚意。建议信的开头必须指明建议的前提和事情的原委,对自 己的立场作解释。
2.主体段落:应该首先肯定对方的优点,然后再写需要改进的地方或针对 具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉,而不是 提建议。
5.人口老龄化使得我们国家老年人越来越多。 The aging of the population makes our country have more and more old people. 6.老年人组成了一个庞大的消费群体。 Those old people make up a big consumer group.
◆组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇80词 左右的英语短文。
参考范文 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m a high school student and I’d like to make a proposal today. Smart phones become more and more popular with people but these smart phones are difficult for many old people to operate.So I wonder if your company could make some special smart phones that are easy to use for the old. Firstly,the aging of the population makes our country have more and more old people,who make up a big consumer group.Secondly,most old people are eager to catch up with the development of science and technology.A smart phone will be of great help in some way.Thus,old people need their own smart phones.

人教版高一英语必修一作文写作《How to write a letter of advice》

人教版高一英语必修一作文写作《How to write a letter of advice》

题材:a letter
人称 Person (The first/ third person…)
时态:Tense (the simple present tense) 要点:…
第一步:审题
养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的,但 审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例,谈谈如何审题: 思考的问题 第几人称?(person) 文章的题材是什么? 样题分析 第一人称 一封信
学校和一所小学毗邻,对着 政 府应采取措施 , 大街,高峰期交通繁忙;加 如修天桥等。 之孩子小 , 家长接送。交通 更拥挤;学生过街在车辆中 穿行危险。 参考词汇: 穿行 thread one’s way 天桥 overpass
第一步: What must we pay attention to when writing an article ?
适当运用模板
Dear Bob, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议) As to , I suggest (有时根据需要 具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建 议). I'm sure (预测可能的结果,给对 方以行动的信心和决心). I'm looking forward to (表达愿望). Sincerely yours, Li Hua

人教版高一英语必修一建议信《How to write a letter of advice》

人教版高一英语必修一建议信《How to write a letter of advice》

Task 1: Brainstorming Watch the video and find the answer to the question.
1.What’s Riley’s problem? (Individual work) 2.What suggestions or advice would you give to Riley? (pair work)
sentence patterns
A. state your purpose
1. I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on… 2. I am writing to express my views concerning… 3. Knowing that…, I’d like to give some suggestions.
Dear Riley, I’m sorry that you are having trouble in making friends. ___________, the situation is easy to change if 1: you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you: 2 Firstly, ___________ more outgoing and take part in your classmates’ activities. Then more classmates will know you and they will find that you are friendly and would like to make friends with you._______, you should 3 be helpful. You are welcome since you are always there 4 when others are in trouble. __________, you will also get happiness from helping others._______________, 5 __________________a good listener. ____________, 6 7 your classmates would like to communicate with ou whether they are happy or sad. Then, you will be good friends. I hope you will find these proposals helpful. Yours, Miss Zhao

人教版高一英语必修一建议信how-to-write-letters-of-advice

人教版高一英语必修一建议信how-to-write-letters-of-advice

Part2 Ideas and reasons

1. First(ly), why not…? If you do this, …. 2. Second(ly), you should /can… Then/ That way, … 3. Third(ly), it would be a good idea if… By doing this, ….
表目的:
For this reason / purpose, … For the purpose of … …… so that …… in order to / so as to……
常见连接词
表总结:
/ In short, / In brief, / In conclusion, / In a word, / All in all, / In general, / In summary, /
To befriendly to others To show interest in others’ ideas
How to write a letter of advice?
Part1 Introduction 1.I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble/difficulties/problems in…. 2.I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on… 3.I’m writing to offer you some advice on… 4. Here are some suggestions./Here are some tips to help you.
to my classmates, I still find it hard to make

人教版高一英语必修1Unit1 How to write letters of advice建议

人教版高一英语必修1Unit1  How to write letters of advice建议

Advice
reasons
1. to ask people their likes 1. to find classmates with
and dislikes
the same interest
2. to join in discussions 2. to get to know different
Firstly, ____________, because________. Secondly,
you’d better________________, because_________.
Thirdly,
you’d better
_________________. Only in this way can you __________. What’s more, _____.
Best wishes to you.
Yours,
Lihua
❖Read Xiao Dong’s letter on page 7 and answer: ❖What is Xiao Dong’s problem?
Problems 1. He’s not good at communicating with people. 2. He finds it hard to make friendswith his classmates. 3. He feels lonely
第二段:
Suggestions
常见连接词——罗列观点
firstly, first of all, in the first place, to begin with, above all, for one thing
secondly, besides, moreover, in addition, what's more furthermore for another,

高中英语课件-人教版高中英语必修一how to write a letter of advice

高中英语课件-人教版高中英语必修一how  to write a letter of advice

Summary
What have we learned today?
Put your smartphone aside and cherish your time and people around you.
手机成瘾 smartphone addiction
sentence patterns A. state your purpose
1. I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on… 2. I am writing to express my views concerning… 3. Knowing that…, I’d like to give some suggestions.
Language sentence structure ★★
Make no grammar mistakes ★★ Handwriting clear and neat ★★
writing
Dear Xiao kun ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

人教版高中英语How to Write a Letter of Advice建议信写作指导

人教版高中英语How to Write a Letter of Advice建议信写作指导

2.中段(婉转地提出建议)
If I were you, I would ... As far as I am concerned ... / In my opinion ... It seems better that ... Why not ...? It would be a good idea if ..
人教版高中英语 How to Write a Letter of Advice
建议信写作指导
I. 建议信的定义
• 建议信是书信的一种形式,属于应用文。建 议信是写信人向收信人就某事提出自己的建 议或忠告,有可能是写给个人,就收信人遇 到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点;也可 能是写给某个组织或机构,就改进其服务等 方面提出建议或忠告。
First of all, it is normal for you to feel lonely because you are living now in a new environment.(表示同情) Second, why not greet your teachers and classmates when meeting them on campus?(建 议一) Third, it will be a good idea if you often express your ideas in class and take an active part in class activities, which can help them learn more about you. I believe you are sure to make new friends soon if you show your friendliness to others.(建议二)

必修一-Unit1-Writing-交友建议信

必修一-Unit1-Writing-交友建议信
I hope you will find these ideas useful. Yours,
What makes an excellent writing?
主谓宾 拼写检查 三段
谚语
刚学习的单词 语法句式 连接词
【Show Time】
假如你是李华,你的朋友Mary最近刚升入高一, 在英语学习方面遇到困难,询问你如何学好英 语。根据以下内容回信给她。
思考的问题
样题分析
第几人称?(person)
第二人称
文章的题材是什么?
一封信
要写的文章主题是什么 (topic)
怎样安排信息点的顺序? (order)
好友Harry在交友过程中遇 到了困难,给其建议
说理逻辑性
动作是什么时候发生的?(时态) (when)
现在时
建议信篇章结构
⑴提出问题的原因; ⑵说明建议的内容; 注意事项:语言要委婉、礼貌,顾及对方
Dear Mary
I am sorry to hear that___________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ _
2. 句式练习 一句多译
(3).在班级举行讨论的时候,你要积极参加,并且积极 表达自己的观点。
A.In a class discussion, you’d better actively take part in it and express your views/opinions actively.
C.I am sorry to hear that you are not good at communicating with others and often feel lonely. However, the situation is easy to change if/so long as you take/follow my advice.

高一英语必修一-人教版Section Ⅴ Writing — 如何写建议信

高一英语必修一-人教版Section Ⅴ Writing — 如何写建议信

Section Ⅴ Writing — 如何写建议信[写作规范][题目要求]假如你是李华,你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难,请根据下面提示给她写一封100词左右的信。

1.要交朋友首先要做一个朋友;2.要和朋友同甘共苦;患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友;3.友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。

第一步:审题谋篇1.体裁:书信;2.话题:向好友提建议;3.时态:一般现在时为主;4.人称:第二人称。

5.结构⎩⎪⎨⎪⎧ 第一段:点出写信的目的;第二段:列出所提的建议;最后一段:写出写信人的希望。

第二步:词汇推敲1.交朋友 make friends2.做……有困难 have trouble/difficulty (in) doing...3.做朋友 be a friend4.和……同甘共苦 share happiness and sorrow with...5.需要 call for/need第三步:句式锻造1.知道你在交友方面有麻烦我很难过。

I am sorry to know that you are having trouble/difficulty(in) making friends.2.如果你采纳我的建议,改变这种处境很容易。

The situation is easy to change if you take my advice.3.想要交朋友,首先要做一个朋友。

If you want to make friends, you should be a friend first.4.你要和朋友同甘共苦。

You should share happiness and sorrow with your friend.5.患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。

A friend in need is a friend indeed.6.友谊需要时间和投入。

Friendship calls for/needs time and effort.第四步:句式升级7.用why not 改写句3。

人教版必修1unit2 Writing-建议信-语言学习课件

人教版必修1unit2 Writing-建议信-语言学习课件
建议内容:
1.培养对英语的兴趣爱好;
2.阅读英文报纸,观看英文电影,学唱英文 歌曲;
3.交外国朋友。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
第一步:审题
养成重视审题的习惯
①信件类型 ②写作话题
③人称 ④时态
建议信 语言学习 第二人称 一般现在时
第二步:谋篇布局(开头段)
Dear Tom,
中间段表达建议句:
• Here are a few suggestions. • I’d like to share some advice with you. 1. As far as I am concerned ... 依我看来.... 2. In my opinion ... 在我看来..... 3. You'd better do...最好做...... 4. You can have a try to...尝试做......
3.交外国朋友。 make some English/foreign friends
Here are few suggestions. First of all, it is important for you to develop an interest in learning English for interest is the best teacher. Besides, you can try to read English newspaper, watch English movies, or learn to sing English songs. By doing so, you’ll learn and remember English words more easier. Finally, it would be a good idea to make some English friends because you will improve your English by communicating with them.

人教版必修一unit1 建议信写作

人教版必修一unit1  建议信写作
By doing this, your spoken English will improve a lot.通过这么做你的口语水平会提高。
For example, you can remember ten words a day or talk with your friends ten munites a day.例如, 你可以一天记十个单词或和朋友谈论十分钟英语。
Last but not least, you should make full use of every opportunities to study English, only in this way can you get a good command of English.
最后,你应该充分利用每一个机会来学习英语,只有通过这种方式你才能掌握好英语。
From your letter, I know you are facing the problem on how to learn English well.
3.这是我极大的荣幸来给你提 一些建议。
It is my great pleasure to give you some advice.
主体段 建议:1.认真听老师上课 2.充实词汇量并且多用英文交流 3.看英文电影和听英文歌 4.充分利用每一个机会来学习英语
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. I also believe you will get over this problem and enjoy learning English.
Yours, Li Hua
连起来:Secondly, it's important for you to enrich your vocabulary and communicate with others in English. By doing this, your spoken English will improve a lot.

人教版高中英语必修一 Unit 1 Section Ⅴ Writing——建议信

人教版高中英语必修一 Unit 1 Section Ⅴ Writing——建议信

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4.In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful/helpful.
5.I hope you will take my advice into account. 6.I will be glad if you will consider my tips.
In a word,I do hope my tips will be of great help to you. Yours,
Zhang Wei
英美 文化
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欣赏
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【导读】 《狮子、女巫与魔衣橱》(The Lion,the Witch and the Wardrobe)是英国作家 C.S.路易斯所著的《纳尼亚传奇》系列奇幻儿 童文学小说的第二部(写作顺序是第一部)。
14 2._W__it_h__fe_w___p_e_o_p_le__k_n_o_w_i_n_g_ how to communicate with others, you haven't got to be concerned about it too much. 因为很少人了解如何与他人交流,因此你没有必要对此太过于 担心。(with 的复合结构) 3.I find __i_t _n_e_c_e_s_sa_r_y__to__g_i_v_e__ you some tips on how to settle the problem. 我发现提供给你一些如何解决这个问题的方法很有必要。(it 作 形式宾语,不定式作真正宾语)
17 7.那就是为什么我想要提供给你一些如何解决这个问题技巧的 原因。(表语从句及动词升级) It's the reason why I want to give you some tips on how to settle the problem. →_T_h_a_t _i_s_w__h_y__I__w_a_n_t_t_o__g_i_v_e_y_o_u__s_o_m__e__ti_p_s__o_n__h_o_w__t_o__so_l_v_e _th_e__p_r_o_b_le_m__. 8.我希望我的建议对你有帮助。(be of+n.) I hope my tips will be helpful to you. →_I__h_o_p_e__m_y___ti_p_s_w__il_l__b_e_o_f__g_r_e_at__h_e_lp__t_o__y_o_u_.__

人教版必修一Unit 1 Writing—Write a Letter of Advice

人教版必修一Unit 1  Writing—Write a Letter of Advice

注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
审题谋篇
审题 1.确定文体:这是一篇建议信。写作时注意建议信的写作特点。 2.主体时态:文章应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。 3.主体人称:由于是给对方提出建议,所以人称应该以第二人称为主。
谋篇 第一段:表明写信目的; 第二段:提出建议并阐述理由; 第三段:表达祝愿。
第一部分:引出话题; 第二部分:提出建议; 第三部分:表达祝愿。
常用表达
1.I am writing to express my views concerning... 2.I would like to suggest that... 3.You have asked for my advice with regard to...and I will try to make some suggestions. 4.Why don’t you buy a computer? 5.Have you considered doing...? 6.Maybe it would be better to... 7.There are several things we could do. 8.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
句式升级 1.用定语从句改写句1。 In fact,there is something (that) you can do to improve this situation . 2.根据要求连接句2和句3。 (1)Try to help your classmates when they are confused about their lessons and this will help you make more friends .(并列句) (2)Try to help your classmates when they are confused about their lessons, which will help you make more friends .(定语从句)

Unit1 How to write a proposal lette 写作课 人教版高中英语必修一

Unit1 How to write a proposal lette 写作课 人教版高中英语必修一
Writing
How to write a proposal letter ---建议信
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Miss Wang has received a letter from Xiao Dong.(Book P6) He is also asking for some advice. Read the letter carefully and help Miss Wang answer it.
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Read the letter and answer the
questions.
1. What problem does Xiao Dong have? 2. What is Xiao Dong asking for? 1. He is not good at communicating with people
to get to know different people and let them see you are friendly
3. …

5
Ideas
Why
1. to ask people their likes to find classmates with the
and dislikes
same interests
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A Good Writing
1. The handwriting is good. 2. The structure is reasonable. 3. Include all information. 4. Correct grammar. 5. Use linking words and different sentence patterns. 6. 100 words.
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To befriendly to others To show interest in others’ ideas
How to write a letter of advice?
Part1 Introduction 1.I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble/difficulties/problems in…. 2.I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on… 3.I’m writing to offer you some advice on… 4. Here are some suggestions./Here are some tips to help you.
Part3 conclusion
1.I hope you will find these ideas useful. 2. I believe that if you follow my advice, you’ll….. 3. Let’s keep in touch. I do hope to hear your good news. 4. At last, I hope everything goes on well with you. Good luck to you.
常见连接词
表列举:
for example (instance) / such as / take … for example / that’s to say / in other words / as follows
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
表条件关系:
only if…
if / unless / as long as / on condition that… /
could give me some advice.
Yours,
advice for Xiao Dong
To ask people their likes and dislikes To join in discussions
To be helpful
To share his feelings with others
词、单词拼写…
Dear Xiao Dong, I’m glad to receive your e-mail. You ask me something about how to make friends. The following is my advice.
Everyone needs friends, so how to make friends is very important. First, you must be friendly to others if you want to make friends with them. Second, you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes. That way you will soon find people with the same interests. I think that is a good way to find new friends.
Part2 Ideas and reasons

1. First(ly), why not…? If you do this, …. 2. Second(ly), you should /can… Then/ That way, … 3. Third(ly), it would be a good idea if… By doing this, ….
罗列观点:
常见连接词
● Firstly / First of all / To begin with / Above all / In the first place / On one hand For one thing, ● Secondly / Besides / What’s more, / In addition, / Furthermore, / Moreover,/ On the other hand / For another thing, / Next, ● Finally / In the end / At last / Last but not least,
to my classmates, I still find it hard to make
good friends with them. So I feel quite lonely
sometimes. I do want to change this situation,
but I don’t know how. I would be grateful if you
Writing a letter of
advice
Miss Wang has received a letter from Xiao Dong. He is also asking for some advice. Read the letter carefully and help Miss Wang answer it.
Improve your writing and hand it in
tomorrow.
表换种方式表达:
in other words / that is to say / to put it another way
Let’s improve it.
1.Structure(结构):书信文体?
2.Content(内容):是否切题、连贯?
nguage(语言):人称、时态、动
表目的:
For this reason / purpose, … For the purpose of … …… so that …… in order to / so as to……
常见连接词
表总结:
/ In short, / In brief, / In conclusion, / In a word, / All in all, / In general, / In summary, /
Third, it would be a good idea if you try
to join a discussion. You may not feel that
this is right, but by doing this you are
letting people know how friendly you are. So there should be no problem. It should be certainly provide you with some new friends. I hope you find these ideas useful. Yours, Miss Wang
Dear Miss Wang, I’m a student from Huzhou Senior High School. I have a problem, I’m not very good at
communicating with people. Although I try to talk
表陈述事实:
in fact / actually / as a matter of fact / to tell you the truth / to be honest /
honestly speaking
常见连接词
表让步转折关系:
however / but / on the contrary / nevertheless / instead / despite / in spite of (the fact that ) / whereas / though / although / as / even if (though) / while / in contrast / after all


Connective words
I think/agree/ believe …
Illustration
(阐述)
You should/can/ … In my opinion..
Addition (递进) Contrast (转折) Summary (总结)
Secondly … Then … Besides … In addition … But … However … On the other hand … At last… In a word… Therefore … So …
常见连接词
表因果关系:
since / as / because / for / thanks to / due to/ owing to / as a result of / for the reason that / now that / therefore / so / as a result
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