英语写作练习二

years. After careful observation, we can find that it is more complicated than we have thought.On the whole, I should say remedial examination are necessary for our educational system. On the one hand some college students are not working hard, and if none of them fail the examination, how can we guarantee the quality of education?On the other hand by pre-paring for and taking part in remedial examinations, students can make up for the lost time. If they can learn from this lesson, it will certainly do go od to their future life.To make remedial examinations do the job, however, we have to make sure of several points below. For one thing, we should make all the examinations as fair as possible. Some students cheat in the examinations to get high scores, and others beg the teacher for a satisfactory grade. All of these people should be severely punished. For another, we should not decide the number of students failing the test before the examination. Teachers should bear a standard in mind, which is comparable across the years.The remedial examination is an important part ofcollege education. Only by planning it wisely and conducting it reasonably can we make best use of it.12 Nowadays every one of us may come across some… now and then. These... are mos t harmful to the whole society. In my opinion, their harmfulness can be summarized in the following three respects. In the first place… In the second place…In my mind, the government and the citizens should join hands to put an end to these…On the one han d, the government should… On the other hand, common citizens… Only by the joint efforts of the government and the common people can we do away with…My View on the Negative Effects of Some Advertisements1.现在有些不良的商业广告2.这些广告的副作用和危害性3.我对这些广告的态度Nowadays every one of us may come across some false advertisements now and then. These advertisements are most harmful to the whole society.In my opinion, their harmfulness can besummarized in the following three respects. In the first place, some advertisements make up the functions of their products, and many consumers are cheated. In the second place, many such ads depict ideal life as luxurious, which have a negative influence on young people. Last but not least, in order to catch the attention of customers, some ads design language tricks, which often lead to language pollution.In my mind, the government and the citizens should join hands to put an end to these false advertisements. On the one hand, the government should punish the advertisers severely lest they harm the customers again, On the other hand, common citizens should report such harmful advertisements as soon as possible. Only by the joint efforts of the government and the common people can we do away with plagiarism.利弊类文章利弊类是观点类文章的一种特殊情况，它就是谈论事物的正反两个方面。

1. Nowadays... is playing a more and more important role in people's daily life. However, people's opinions are still divided on this point.Those who are in favor of…claim that it has a lot of advantages. Firstly…Secondly… Last but not least…Those who are opposed to... hold that disadvantages are many. In the first place…In the second place… Finally…All in all, we can safely come to the conclusion that the pros outweigh the cons. The past twenty years witnessed the fast development of... along with… A brighter future is awaiting us if we make good use ofSample 1Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet1.有些人认为因特网利大于弊2.有些人认为因特网弊大于利3.我的看法Nowadays the Internet is playing a more and more important role in people's daily life. However, people's opinions are still divided on this point.Those who are in favor of the Internet claim that it has a lot of advantages. Firstly,information searching is no longer a tough job with the help of all kinds of search engines,Secondly，we can contact friends or business partners via e-mails or software such as Internet Meeting and Yahoo Messenger. Last but not least,we can take part in groups or mailing lists to talk with friends of the same interest.Those who are opposed to the Internet hold that disadvantages are many. In the first place,the Internet costs considerable time, money and energy especially for those with less self-control, In the second place,surfing on the Internet for a long time harms the eyes a lot. Finally more and more young people are indulged in online games, Internet chat and even pornography, which are extremely harmful to their future development.All in all, we can safely come to the conclusion that the pros outweigh the cons. The past twentyyears witnessed the fast development of the Internet along with national economy. A brighter future is awaiting us if we make good use of the Internet. Sample 22Like anything else… has both advantages and disadvantages.The main benefits of... are as follows. First … In the second place… Last but by no means the least…However, the negative effects are also obvious. To begin with…Second… Finally…In conclusion, the advantages of... outweigh its disadvantagesAdvantages and Disadvantages of Overseas Study1.海外留学的好处2.海外留学的副作用3.结论Like anything else,overseas study has both advantages and disadvantages.The main benefits of studying overseas are as follows. First,the academic level is usually higher and the research facilities are usually more advanced. In thesecond place, by understanding a new culture and meeting different people, they can develop a more reasonable and balanced view toward the st but by no means the least,the experience will be invaluable to character building, making most students more independent, diligent and enterprising.However, the negative effects are also obvious. To begin with if a person does not make full preparations before going out, he will have great difficulty adapting to the new environment, Second,the cultural differences will binder the regular life in many ways. Finally,money is always a big problem. Many students have to find part-time jobs to earn money to pay tuition and fees.In conclusion, the advantages of overseas study outweigh its disadvantages. Once they return home, the overseas students will make great contribution to our motherland.Sample 3Recently more and more people begin to… They argue that...bring se veral advantages. First … Second… ...also bring many problems. Firstly… Secondly… Finally…From what has been discussed above, we canAdvantages and Disadvantages of Keeping Pets 1．养宠物的好处2．养宠物带来的问题3．结论Recently more and more people begin to keep pets. They argue that keeping pets bring several advantages. First a pet is a good companion, especially to old and lonely people. Second, a pet in the family can always bring amusement and Entertainment. Getting on well with pets could make a person more careful, considerate and responsible. Keeping pets also bring many problems. Firstly,we have heard too many instances of pets such as dogs and cats injuring people. Once bitten, the victim should receive treatment as soon as possible. Pets may also spread diseases because they cannot be always clean. Secondly,pets should not be allowed in many public places lest they pollute the environment.Finally, many pets are too expensive to keep. We must be surprised to know how much it costs to buy and keep a rare dog.From what has been discussed above, we can seegovernment should control the total number of pets, and the owner should take care of his pet lest it pollute the environment and spread diseases or even attack people. Sample 4There is a good side and a bad side to everything, and ... are no exception. Generally speaking, the positive aspects can be listed as follows. To begin with... In the second place... Most important of all…However, as every coin has two sides, the negative aspects are also obvious. For one thing… For another… Most important of all…As for me … First… Second … What's more…Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports1．体育运动的好处2．体育运动可能带来的副作用3．我参加体育运动的体会There is a good side and a bad side to everything, and sports are no exception.Generally speaking, the positive aspects can be listed as follows. To begin with, people will have a healthy body and a sober mind if they take part in sports regularly. In the second place, we can also learn cooperationwhile making good friends. Most important of all, sports will teach us good qualities such as courage, determination and perseverance.However, as every coin has two sides, the negative aspects are also obvious. For one thing,too many sports will make us feel exhausted.For another, old people and children should be most careful to choose proper sports. Most important of all some sports are dangerous in nature such as boxing, surf ing, and mountaineering. Consequently amateurs should receive guidance and company if they want to have a try.As for me,I am a sports lover and my favorite Sport is winter swimming. First,I became stronger and stronger both in body and in mind. Second,I make friends with a lot of teachers and schoolmates. What's more, I become confident in myself—I will never Give tip in front of difficulty.Sample 5…has brought a lot of benefits to college students ever since the beginning. First… Second… Third…Though it does good to college students in many ways …Can never be said to bring no problems. For one thing … For another…In order to make good use of… I form the habit of.... On the one hand… On the other hand… By carefully planning my time…The Two-Day Weekend1．双休日给大学生带来的好处2．双休日可能给大学生带来的问题3．我应当怎样过好双休日The two-day weekend has brought a lot of benefits to college students ever since the beginning. First,it gives students time to digest what has been taught In class and gain a better mastery of professional knowledge and skills. Second，students can also conduct experiments and participate in social activities to combine knowledge with practice. Third,they can also take part in sports to strengthen their bodies or take a rest to p repare for the coming week.Though it does good to college students in many ways, the two-day weekend can never be said to bring no problems. For one thing,too many lectures crowd into the weekdays,and students can hardly keep pace with them. For another quite a few students spend their time playing video games or chatting on the Internet instead of focusing on study. How can they make progress in their specialty if they waste too much time?In order to make good use of the two-day weekend, I form the habit of making a concrete plan for each weekend. On the one hand,I always set aside enough time for reviewing Lessons and reading reference books. On the other hand,I usually go to the gymnasium to swim twice in all seasons. By carefully planning my time, I am confident to be not only healthy in body but also intelligent in mind.Sample 6The discussion about… has never stopped in the past few years. Let's have a look at its advantages and disadvantages before drawing the final conclusion.The biggest advantage of... What's more…However, the negative effects are also obvious. To begin with… In the second place… Finally…Up until now, we can see it clearly that… The key lies in the user so long as we can make proper use of it,it can be most helpful to us in many respects.Advantages and Disadvantages of Electronic Dictionary1．电子辞典的优点2．电子辞典的缺点3．我的结论The discussion about electronic dictionaries has never stopped in the past few years. Let's have a look at its advantages and disadvantages before drawing the final conclusion.The biggest advantage of an electronic dictionary is its convenience. Whenever you meet new words or expressions, you can know the meaning quickly. What's more,with the development of science and technology, electronic dictionaries are becoming more and more advanced: they can pronounce the words clearly, provide sample sentences to illustrate word usage and store different words for special memorization. Last but by no means the least, electronic dictionaries are becoming cheaper and cheaper, and more and more students can afford them.However, the negative effects are also obvious. To begin with, some students rely too much on the electronicdictionary they never put their heart into learning new words and expressions. In the second place, some explanations are neither complete nor accurate, which are quite misleading. Finally,new technical inventions do not necessarily lead to progress in learning. Diligence is always the decisive factor, because "there is no royal road to learning".Up until now, we can see it clearly that electronic dictionary is not beneficial or harmful in itself. The key lies in the user so long as we can make proper use of it, it can be most helpful to us in many respects.Sample 7In recent years… Like anything else, it also has both advantages and disadvantages.To begin with... In ad dition… Finally…Apart from its adv antages, the disadvantages are also obvious. First of all… Moreover…Up until now we can draw the conclusion that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. We have every reason to believe that… will embrace its bright fu ture during the next decade.Motorcycles and City Traffic1．近年来中国城市中的摩托车2．摩托车的优点和缺点3．你对我国城市中摩托车发展前景的看法In recent years, motorcycles have developed very quickly in cities all over our country.Like anything else, it alsohas both advantages and disadvantages.To begin with,motorcycles are much cheaper but as fast when compared with cars. In addition, motorcycles are much more convenient when traffic congestion arises. Finally,they take up very limited parking space.Apart from its advantages, the disadvantages are also obvious. First of all,it is much more dangerous to ride a motorcycle, which is small on the one hand and runs at a high speed on the other hand. Moreover,the tail gas given off by motorcycles will also lead to environmental pollution.Up until now we can draw the conclusion that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. We have every reason to believe that the motorcycle will embrace its bright future during the next decade.。