西安爱知初级中学面表达汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·湖南中考模拟）现在智能手机（smartphone）越来越普及，很多中学生都有智能手机。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看法，可适当发挥。

提示：1、在生活中你用智能手机做什么？

2、智能手机对你的生活产生了怎样的影响？

3、你对中学生使用智能手机有什么看法？

【答案】例文：The smartphone is becoming more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two sides.Sometimes I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams.

So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文，要求根据内容提示，写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看法。文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

2．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

近日，你校迎来一批来自英国的交流生，学校组织学生向他们介绍中国的传统文化。请你根据表格信息写一篇题为"Chinese Tea"的英语短文，向英国交流生介绍中国的茶文化。

注意:1.对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2.词数90左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

Chinese Tea

Tea is an important part of Chinese culture.

【答案】Tea is an important part of Chinese culture. It has a long history and it is famous all over the world. There’re many kinds of tea in China. Each of them has its own characteristics.

Most Chinese like drinking tea.People often treat friends with tea.They often buy tea for their friends and rela tives as a gift.Drinking tea is good for people’s health.A cup of tea can make relaxed and energetic.

Tea not only helps foreigners know about China but also builds a bridge between the East and the West.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇话题作文，题目是Chinese Tea。本文人称主要是第三人称，时态主要是一般现在时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，表格信息提示就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚，字数90词左右。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

茶是中国文化的重要组成部分。它历史悠久，享誉世界。中国有很多种茶。它们中的每一个都有自己的特点。

大多数中国人喜欢喝茶。人们经常用茶来招待朋友。他们经常给朋友和亲戚买茶作为礼物。喝茶有益于人们的健康。一杯茶可以使人放松和精力充沛。

茶不仅有助于外国人了解中国，而且能在东西方之间架起一座桥梁。

【点睛】

书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。

3．（·云南中考模拟）书面表达

提示：转眼间三年的初中生活即将结束，在这三年的学习与生活中一定有些让你难忘的人或事物。请以“ An Unforgettable …”为题，写一篇英语作文，记叙你难忘的人或事物以及你的感受。

要求：1. 请先将题目补充完整后再作答；

2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；

3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

4. 将短文写在答题卡上。写在本试题卷上无效。

【答案】Everyone has an unforgettable thing in his life. So do I.

when I was a middle student, I celebrated my mother’s birthday for her. I cleaned the room, mopped the floor and also bought a present for her. I waited for mum at home after doing all these things. When mum came back, I jumped to her and gave her the present and said happy birthday to her. Mum was so happy and surprised that she hugged me for a long time. This is an unforgettable thing in my life because this was the first time I did the housework and felt how tired to do the job and this was also the first time I noticed mum was so happy that she even cried. Though I was tired, I felt happy.

【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇话题作文。根据以“ An Unforgettable …”为题，写一篇英语作文，记叙你难忘的人或事物以及你的感受。文章时态用一般过去式时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求。

4．（·山东中考模拟）写作

现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活（low-carbon life）”，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。

提示词语：be good for,everyone,ride a bike,think,make a difference,environment,suggest,reuse _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Low-carbon life is good for everyone.To help with the environment,I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.Besides,I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.I think it's my duty to live a low-carbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.And we'd better not spend much money on expensive

clothes.

If everyone does something for the environment,I believe the earth will be a better place

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于话题作文，针对“低碳生活”你的做法、感受以及建议。根据要表达的内容确定并

准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be good for, help with, instead of, besides, make a difference, as long as possible, had better do, it is my duty to。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

5．（·辽宁中考模拟）现在手机是人们生活的必需品，在给我们提供便利的同时，也有很

多负面作用。

很多人成了“手机控”。请你根据要求谈谈对自己的看法：

1. 手机的正面作用；

2. 手机给人们带来的烦恼；

3. 如何防止成为“手机控”。

【答案】 Phones can help us communicate more easily and know about what's happening around the world. Today many people, especially young people, are phone freaks. Depending on mobile phones too much is bad for health. Looking at mobile phones too often is bad for our eyes. Playing with mobile phones is a waste of time and harmful to study. I think young people should spend more time doing sports or being with their family and friends. They should also pay more

attention to their studies. If they fill their time this way, they won't have too much spare time to think about phone entertainment.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇开放性话题作文，针对很多人成了“手机控”这一现象，结合自己的亲身经历，谈一谈自己的观点。考生首先要阅读前面的提示去认真审题，确定出文章的中心，用一般现在时态来表达。要求从三个方面去完成写作：1. 手机的正面作用；2. 手机给人们带来的烦恼；3. 如何防止成为“手机控”。需要自由发挥的地方较多，比如手机的正面作用可以写有利于我们的沟通与交流，通过上网了解世界上所发生的事情，手机的负面作用可以写手机对健康的危害，对学生学习的影响等等。最后总结并发出呼吁。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

6．（·北京中考模拟）题目②

“持之以恒，方得始。”坚持是一种可贵的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。

某英文网站正在开展以“坚持”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈淡你在初中生活中坚持的一件事（爱好，习惯……），你是怎样做的，以及你的感受。

提示词语：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud

提示问题：1. What did you do?

2. How do you feel?

It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.

【答案】It's important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept running for three years.

When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after school.Sometimes，I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling myself that I could make it.No matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in running and I'm very proud of myself.I feel more confident and I'm ready for any challenges in the future.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇是材料作文，根据所给提示写一篇自己在初中生活中坚持做的事；文中写明自己是怎么做的并谈谈自己的感受。

【详解】

1.本篇要求根据所给材料，用第一人称写初中生活中自己坚持做的一件事，根据提示，描写“What did you do?用一般过去时，描写How do you feel?用一般现在时。书写时要紧扣主题，文句通顺。

2.本例文开篇立即点明自己的坚持做的事是“跑步”，正文部分详细地描写了自己起初跑步总是不及格，通过克服困难、不懈地努力，坚持跑步，到现在比以前会跑；结尾谈了这件事对自己的影响；文章结构清晰，前后呼应。

3.本例文出彩之处在于用了很多的短语和重点句型。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It's +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；状语从句so…that …；比较级do much better in …、feel more confident等；短语多彩、文句表达多样。

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7．（·合肥市五十中学东校中考模拟）诚信是中华民族的传统美德，也是社会主义核心价值观内容之一。而你的朋友Daming最近却被诚信危机所困扰。上周末，他本来和Lingling相约一起去电影院看电影，但是他却因为在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。因此，Lingling很生气，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。

请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”为题，内容要点如下：

1、简述事件；

2、谈谈自己的看法，并给Daming一些建议。

注意：

1、词数80—100；

2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；

3、文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；

4、文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

The Importance of Promise

Dear editor,

People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.

Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.

Yours,

Tony 【答案】The Importance of Promise

Dear editor,

People always emphasize（强调）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who

break their promise.

Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.

Yours,

Tony 【解析】

【分析】

本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺的事情，谈自己的看法。信守承诺是中华民族的传统美德，在写作过程中，注意文章结构，先写出大明和玲玲之间的事情，然后再说自己对此的看法。

【详解】

首先，第一句话直接点明作者的观点，大明是犯错了的。然后仔细阐述了事情发生的经过。接下来说出自己对此事件的看法，不信守承诺会导致失去别人的信任，对大明的建议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。

【点睛】

文章结构清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自己观点，然后阐述事情，提出自己的观点和建议。整篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。除此之外，中间也使用了一些连接词，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通顺。

8．（·辽宁中考模拟）（B）根据要求完成大作文,词数:80-100

体育运动是中学生的共同爱好.请根据下面提示写一篇题为What We Get from Sports 的短文,应该包含以下要点:

1,学生参加体育运动的兴趣不同,理由各异.

2.多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自己.

3.男孩参加各项体育运动,希望运动能使自己更强壮.

4.女孩也喜欢运动，希望运动使自己减肥和保持健康,苗条.

5.你对运动的观点.

6.注意:文中不得出现自己的名字和学校的名字

7.短文开头已给出,不计入词数.

8.参考词语:keep slim （保持苗条）

What We Get from Sports

Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in

sports._________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________

【答案】Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.

Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.

In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.

【解析】

【详解】

本篇写作主要是谈论自己对运动的观点和看法，应该用一般现在时态，写作要点要包括：1.提出目前学生对运动的不同看法及原因。2.具体分析（多数学生的观点、男生的观点、女

生的观点）。3.提出自己对运动的观点。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，在文中使用了时间状语从句，定语从句，特别使用一些亮点词句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。

9．（·陕西西北工业大学附属中学中考模拟）假如你是李华，初中生活即将结束，在步入

高中学校学习之际，你思绪万千。请你根据下面的提示，写一封信表达你对老师由衷的感激。

提示：1. 生活上的照顾 2.精种上的支持 3. 学习上的帮助要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；

2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；

3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、班级）

4. 词数：不少于 80 词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。） Dear teachers,

My junior high school life is coming to an end. Now, I'd like to show my thanks to you for what you’ve done to me these years.

【答案】My junior high school life is coming to an end. Now, I'd like to show my thanks to you for what you’ve done to me these years. You take gre at care of me in life. Last year, when I was ill, You took me to see a doctor and took good care of me. I'm very grateful. When I encounter difficulties, you always encourage me to face them bravely and help solve them. You supports me in sperm. when I have difficulties in studying , You are always willing to help me.

【解析】

【详解】

考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【点睛】

这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如：You take great care of me in life. Last year, when I was ill, You took me to see a doctor and took good care of me.给文中增色不少。

10．（·广东中考模拟）书面表达

根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。

生活中常常会发生一些意外的事，但每个人处理事情的方式不同。有些人冷静温和地处理，有些人简单粗暴地对待。当你与人发生冲突时，你会如何处理呢？请你写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的经历与看法。内容包括：

1. 请你简单叙述一次与别人发生冲突的经历；

2. 你认为该如何正确处理日常生活中发生的冲突（至少两点建议）；

3. 呼吁大家友好相处。

作文要求：

1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Life is full of the unexpected, ___________________________________________

【答案】Life is full of the unexpected. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, a schoolmate and I hit into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then we started shouting, and it turned into a terrible quarrel. To be honest, it was neither my fault nor the schoolmate’s, only because we both cared too much about winning and losing. That made me feel shameful.

In our daily lives, we should deal with these quarrels properly. Firstly, try to be friendly to each other. Secondly, we should communicate more an d put ourselves in other’s place. Don’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.

It’s very important to get on well with each other. Let’s build a friendly, peaceful and safe society together and make our life better and better.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如full of，during the basketball game，each other，try to do，turn into，to be honest，neither…nor，care about，too much，deal with等。而固定句型It’s very important to get on well with each other.和Don’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

11．（·四川雅安中学中考模拟）书面表达。

假如你们学校要开展主题为：“如何保护地球”的演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿。

提示：1. 现在存在的环境问题。

2. 采取措施，保护环境。

1）关闭工厂，不乱扔垃圾。

2）节约用水、用电的方法。

3）使用购物袋代替塑料袋, 尽量乘坐公共交通。

4）回收利用废品等。

要求： 1.不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥。

2.词数80--100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不记入字数。

Hello, everyone!

The earth is our home, so we should protect it well.

Thanks for listening!

【答案】How to Protect the Earth

Hello, everyone!

The earth is our home, so we should protect it well.

However it becomes dirtier and dirtier: polluted rivers and lakes, growing deserts, the destruction of the forests and wildlife. All the bad things are the punishments from nature.

It's time to take measures to protect the environment. First of all, close the factory and don't litter. Second, the method of saving water and electricity. Third, use shopping bags instead of plastic bags and try to take public transport. Fourth, recycling waste products and so on.

I hope our home will become better and better.

Thanks for listening!

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如dirtier and dirtier，the punishments from nature，It's time to do，first of all，the method of，instead of，try to do，and so on，better and better等。而First of all,/ Second,/ Third,/ Fourth,等词语的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理

后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

12．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达

地球是我们的家园，我们作为地球的主人，就应该好好保护地球。现在正在倡导“低碳”生活，只要我们不污染地球的环境，不浪费地球的能源，就能够让我们的周围变得更绿，生活变得更美好。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？谈谈你的想法。内容应该包括以下几点：

1. 节约用水、用电；

2. 节约纸张，循环使用旧课本，保护森林；

3. 节约粮食，在更多的土地上种树；

4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境；

要求：短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；80词左右

提示词：the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式

How does our earth turn better?

The earth is our home. _______________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.

【答案】How does our earth turn better?

The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?

I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees won't be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don't throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.

If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，live in，around us， such as，as a middle school student，and so on，close down the water，turn off the lights，cut down，make a contribution to our earth，pollute our environment，better and better等。而固定结构But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要

尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

13．（·天津中考模拟）假如你是天津的一名中学生李明，刚刚结東五一小长假的旅游回到学校。请你根据以下内容提示，以“A Trip to Beijing”为题，写一篇短文，向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。

（1）5月1日天气晴朗，我和家人开始了两天的旅程。

（2）早上7：30我们乘京津城际铁路出发，车程大约半小时。

（3）上午我们参观了故宫博物院，学到了许多历史知识，并为朋友们购买了礼物。

（4）第二天清晨，我们登上了长城，雄伟的长城是世界著名奇观之一；下午去位于市中心的王府井大街品尝北京烤鸭。

（5）我的旅游感受……

参考词汇:京津城际铁路 Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway

王府井大街 Wangfujing Street

故宫 the Palace Museum

北京烤鸭 Peking Roast Duck

要求：

（1）词数:80～100个。

（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

A Trip to Beijing

During the May Day Holiday，

I______________________________________________________________

【答案】During the May Day Holiday, I went to Beijing for a visit with my parents. We left Tianjin at 7:30 on the morning of May 1st, and we took the Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway to get there. It was a fast and comfortable journey and it took us about half an hour to arrive there. To our joy, the weather was pleasant. And we began our two-day-trip in Beijing.

First of all, we went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. We were very excited when we saw the Palace Museum and took a lot of photos there. We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What's more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.

On early morning of the second day, we went to walk up the Great Wall. It was one of the most famous wonders in the world. Millions of tourists from all over the world visit it every year. After that, we took the underground to the city center, Wangfujing Street .At that moment, we all felt very hungry, so we decided to try Peking Roast Duck. In my opinion, Beijing food was very delicious.

During this trip, I not only tried the delicious Beijing food, but also learned more about the Chinese traditional culture as well as the long history of China. Though I felt tired after the trip, it was a meaningful experience and I will never forget it.

【解析】

【详解】

以“A Trip to Beijing”为题，写一篇短文，向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。

记叙自己的一次旅行，审题时注意本文使用一般过去时，叙述事实的时候以时间为顺序。用合适的连词把各句连接成一个有机的整体，同时要用相对高级的词汇提升文章的层次和文采。在发表你的看法的时候，写作的时候要注意要点的全覆盖，不能有遗漏或省略，同时要注意使用合适的连接词和较高级的词汇。注意所使用的语法规则的准确性和合理性。变化使用多种句式让文章更有亮点。

【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。同时要注意使用合适的连接词和较高级的词汇。注意所使用的语法规则的准确性和合理性。变化使用多种句式让文章更有亮点。 We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What's more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.

.等这些句子运用也让文章增色不少。

14．（·广东中考模拟）假设你是来自中国的中学生李华,打算参加当地组织的国外冬令营,

看完了这个网页后,你打算给Liz Payne留言,表达你在冬令营期间想去London Canal Museum 参观的愿望。

内容包括：

1.简单介绍自己；

2.留言目的（包含冬令营的时间,听Liz Payne的讲座）；

3.预期收获。

作文要求：

1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；

2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。

Dear Liz Payne,

I’m Li Hua,

Yours,

Li Hua 【答案】Dear Liz Payne,

I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London

Canal Museum. From https://www.360docs.net/doc/0d19423516.html,, I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.

I’m looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

这篇作文要求我们以中学生李华的身份，给Liz Payne写一个留言。文章内容主要包括三个部分：首先是介绍自己的身份；然后写留言的目的，包括冬令营的时间、想要去参观London Canal Museum以及听Liz Payne的讲座；最后简单介绍一下你的预期的收获。写作时，应根据题目的这些要求，组织语言，串联成一篇短文。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用第一人称I来叙述，时态应以一般将来时态和一般现在时为主。注意英语句子的表达和

汉语习惯是不同的，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用正确的句式结构以及适当的词汇、短语和句型，保证句子的准确性和语言的地道。另外还应注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。穿插一些高级词汇和复杂句式，提升文章档次和水平，使表达更加流畅。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。作者主要从三个方面叙述：首先介绍了自己的身份和写留言的目的；接下来详细介绍了自己参加这次冬令营的愿望；最后是一个简单的结尾。如果分段叙述效果则会更好，那样会使文章的层次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以第一人称、一般将来时和一般现在时为主，谓语动词形式准发，语法规范，符合英语句子的表达习惯。短文以简单句结构为主，也使用了一些复合句和较高级的句型，如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation.中使用了宾语从句；From https://www.360docs.net/doc/0d19423516.html,, I know you will hav e a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp.中有一个非限制性定语从句；And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal.中有一个结果状语从句等。整篇文章语句通顺、意思连贯、表达流畅。

15．（·辽宁初三）近年来“汉语热”在全球各地悄然兴起，你的笔友 Peter在如何学好汉

语方面急需你的帮助，快来帮帮他吧！

Dear Peter,

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】例文

Here are some ways to learn Chinese. You could watch Chinese movies. You could also write to me in Chinese. It's good to find a partner to practice Chinese with. These will be helpful.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇书信，书信的内容为方法策略，给外国笔友推荐一些学习汉语的方法。因此在信件中，写出一些你认为有效的学习方法即可，写作过程中注意语法、拼写正确。

【高分句型】

It's good to find a partner to practice Chinese with.找一个同伴一起练习汉语很不错。句子为It is+形容词+to do sth.结构，句中it为形式主语，真正的主语为不定式短语。

16．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，作为活动主持人，你打算邀请外教 Smith 先生来参加本周末学校开展的“英语戏剧展示”活动，请用英语给他写一封邀请函，告诉他本次活动的具体时间和地点，安排了哪些内容，以及需要他做哪些事情。

提示词语:wear, role, perform, judge, suggestions, photos

提示问题:When and where are you going to hold the English drama show?

What are you going to do on the show?

What will you ask Mr. Smith to do for the show?

Dear Mr. Smith,

I'm glad to tell you there'll be an English drama show this weekend.

______________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________

We’re looking forward to your reply.

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m glad to tell you there’ll be an English drama s how this weekend . It will be held at 8:00 this Saturday morning. We are going to hold it in our music club. All of us are going to wear nice clothes and play different roles in groups. We will perform English dramas. Speeches will be made during the show.

I hope you can work as a judge and give scores for each group after their performances. Then at the end of the drama show, you can give us some suggestions. If possible, you can bring your camera with you and take some photos for us. I believe this English drama show will be successful with your help.

We’re looking forward to your reply.

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于话题作文，邀请外教史密斯先生参加英语戏剧展示活动。根据要表达的内容确定

并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be going to, at the end of, give sb sth, if possible, take some photos以及with one’s help。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

17．（·北京中考模拟）从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计人总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

题目①

假如你是李华，明天下午2:00你要去参加“传统文化才艺展示”活动，因此不能上英语课。请用英文给你们的外教John写一张请假条，告诉他你要去干什么，为什么要参加这个活动以及你保证按时完成作业。

提示词语:traditional talent show, Chinese culture, ask, help

提示问题:.What will you do tomorrow afternoon?

Why will you take this activity?

How will you finish your homework?

Dear John,

I'm sorry to ask for absence from your English lesson.__________________

______________________________________________________________

Your loring student

Li lHua

题目②

一位好老师，胜过万卷书。在你的初中生活中，一定会有一位老师给你留下了深刻印象。

某英文网站正在开展以“Thank you, my teacher”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，让更多的人认识你的老师，同时表达你对他/她的感激之情。主要内容包括: 哪位老师给你留下了深刻印象，发生了什么事使你印象深刻以及你想对他/她说些什么。

提示词语：kind, helpful，talk with，make progress

提示问题：Which teacher impressed you most?

What happened to make you impressed?

What do you want to say to him/her?

Thank you,my teacher

【答案】题目一：

Dear John,

I'm sorry to ask for absence fom your English lesson. I'm going to aend a traditional talent show at 2:00 tomorrow aftermoon.

In order to let the foreign students in our school know more about Chinese culture, our school holds this talent show. I will introduce Chinese painting in English.

I will ask my classmates to help me with my English. And I promise to finish my homework on time.

Your loring student

Li Hua

题目二：

Among all my teachers, my English teacher impressed me most. She is always kind and helpful. last year, I did badly in a big test and I found English too hard. As soon as she found out this, she talked with me and gave me some helpful advice. With her encouragement, I have made great progress.

I really want to say"Thank you for helping me. I love you!" to my English teacher.

【解析】

【详解】

、

题目①

本文是一篇应用文，作文要求写一张请假条，因此格式要遵循假条的格式。假条的内容——时间和事由均给出，结合提示问题可知假条主要从三个方面写，这三个方面需要作者自由发挥一部分内容。

本例文是一篇应用文，人称为第一人称，时态是以一般将来时为主。例文分成三段，根据提示问题，每段成一行，这种写法条理清晰，分段明确。

高分亮点：ask for；absence from；一般将来时；in order to；help sb with sth；promise to do；on time。

题目②

题目二是一篇话题作文，根据话题可知这是一篇感谢老师的文章。人称应该为第一人称。注意给出的提示问题，文章要包含这三部分的内容。

本例文以第一人称书写，时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时。文章第一段介绍“我”要感谢的老师，第二段用一般过去时介绍为什么“我”要感谢老师，第三段表达“我”的感谢。分段明确，语句简洁不啰嗦，时态运用合理。

高分亮点：Among all my teachers；did badly in；As soon as；found out；talked with；现在完成时；want to do sth。

18．（·江苏中考模拟）近年来，随着智能手机的普及，越来越多的学生开始使用手机来完成家庭作业。这引发了学生们是否喜欢用app学习的讨论，为此，英文报Teens 将在下期开设专栏讨论这一话题，你采访了一些同学，写了一篇题为“Would you like to study on apps?”的报道。内容如下：

1.短文需包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；

2.省略号后展开合理想象；

3.词数90个左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数；

4.短文必须写在答题卷对应的位置上，写在试卷其他部位无效。

Would you like to study on apps?

Smartphones are becoming more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study.

【答案】Would you like to study on apps?

Smartphones are becoming more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. Students can often practice speaking English on phones. There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ourselves.

But other students don’t like to use them. Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. Also, they can’t help playing with other apps while studying. This leads to bad results in their study.

I think it is useful for us to use mobile phones . I can learn more at home without paying much money. But we should use them in a proper way.

【解析】

【详解】

阅读题干，这是属于看法类的作文，那么在写这类作文时，首先要分别写出支持和反对两方面的看法及原因，最后要说明自己的观点看法来进行总结。

亮点词汇短语：practice doing sth.练习做某事；learn by oneself自学；lead to导致；it is adj. for us to do sth对某人来说，做某事是怎样的；in a proper way以适当的方式。

亮点句型：

There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ourselves.应用程序上有很多练习，这使我们更容易自己学习。Make it + adj.+ for sb to do sth.

Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. 自从他们使用手机以来，他们的视力变得更差了。

they can’t help playing with other apps while studying.他们在学习时忍不住玩其他的应用程序。Can’t help doing sth情不自禁地做某事。

19．（·河南中考模拟）“苔花如米小，也学牡丹开。”我们大多数人虽微不足道，但也能有所作为。请以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。

要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

2. 词数80左右。

One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________

【答案】I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.

To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when ma king fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.

I felt proud of cooking on my own.

【解析】

【分析】

本文是一篇话题作文。

【详解】

根据题干““苔花如米小，也学牡丹开。”我们大多数人虽微不足道，但也能有所作为。请以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。”要求可知，本文用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。

英语作文一般分为三个部分：

第一部分：开篇点题——我将介绍曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。

第二部分：文章主体——具体介绍这件事情的始末。

根据事情发展顺序，从先到后交代事情的经过，我做了什么，为什么引以为傲。

这些内容用一般过去时，注意动词的过去式变形。

第三部分：总结全文——我为自己感到骄傲。

20．（·无锡市江南中学中考模拟）书面表达

亲子关系是目前广受关注的话题。假设你是张华，你正在以“如何与父母更好地相处” 为题进行英语自主课程研究。通过搜集资料，你查找到中国青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日就中美两国亲子关系进行了问卷调查，结果如下表。请你根据下表选取并整合你认为有用的信息，结合你的实际经历以How to get along well with parents为题写一篇感想。

注意事项：

1.内容须根据表格数据和实际经历合理展开；

2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；

3.词数在90个左右，首尾已经在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；

4. 内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置。

【答案】How to get along well with parents

More and more people begin to focus on the parent-child relationship. Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents.

CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that 48.1% of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans. More understanding lies in