最新精品 专题07图画类写作 新高考英语写作精讲+写作模板(解析)

专题07图画类写作——新高考英语写作精讲+写作模板
1.(2022·山西临汾三模)请你根据下面图片，以“Labor Education Counts”为题写一篇英语短文。

内容包括：1.你对图片的解读；
2.你的一次劳动体验。

注意：1.词数150左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.短文题目已为你写好。

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【答案】
Labor Education Counts
The picture vividly illustrates that labor education plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’ development, cultivating their all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique. Just like the tree in the picture, it is thriving on the boy’s watering.
When it comes to my experiences of labour, making a fruit plate after Tiktok struck me as an unforgettable one. I first collected some kinds of fruit like apples, oranges, strawberries and bananas. Then came the most challenging part, cutting them into the style in the video, which took me about thirty minutes. After that, I shaped them on a plate into a blossoming flower with delicious sauce. To my delight, when I served it to my families, they all spoke highly of it.
No pains, no gains. Through the hands-on experience, not only do I gain a sense of achievement, I also appreciate that labour itself is a kind of enjoyment and a must for our personal growth.
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于之图画类写作。

要求考生生根据所给图片，以“Labor Education Counts”为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括：你对图片的解读(通过分析图片可知：图片生动地说明了劳动教育在培养青少年发展、培养他们德智体全面发展方面发挥着重要作用。

就像图片中的树一样，它在男孩的浇灌下茁壮成长)；你的一次劳动体验(需要考生自拟)。

最后进行总结升华主题：不劳则无获。

通过亲身体验，我不仅获得了成就感，我还意识到劳动本身是一种享受，是我们个人成长所必需的。

【句式拓展】
原句：I first collected some kinds of fruit like apples, oranges, strawberries and bananas.
拓展句：I first collected some kinds of fruit, which include apples, oranges, strawberries and bananas. 【亮点句型】
1.Then came the most challenging part, cutting them into the style in the video, which took me about thirty
minutes. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2.Through the hands-on experience, not only do I gain a sense of achievement, I also appreciate that labour
itself is a kind of enjoyment and a must for our personal growth.
(运用了部分倒装句和that引导的宾语从句)
2.(改编自2021·上海市建平中学高三阶段练习)假设你是《青年周刊》(Youthweek)杂质的一位编辑，你在社交媒体上看到这幅画，想在杂质上写一篇文章表达对此现象的看法。

你的文章必须包括：1.对图片信息的描述；
2.对此现象的分析；
3.你对图片人物的建议。

注意：词数150左右。

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【答案】
As can be seen from the cartoons, parents have different attitudes towards their children at different stages of their growth. In Picture 1, from primary school to high school the boy’‘s parents say to him, “No, you must do what we tell you.” In Picture 2, when the boy is at college, his parents say, “You are in your twenties, but you don’t have your own judgement.”
The message conveyed here is clear: when some kids are young, their parents always control them and let their kids do what they tell so that their children lose their judgement when they are grown-up. Therefore, as parents, they should reflect themselves.
Parents should remember that children are individuals and they have their own right to decide something. Only by letting them do something on their own, can they really grow up independently.
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于之图画类写作。

要求考生就所给的两幅图，写一篇文章表达对此现象的看法。

文章必须包括：对图片信息的描述(通过分析图片可知：从漫画中可以看出，在孩子成长的不同阶段，父母对孩子的态度不同。

在图1中，从小学到高中，男孩的父母对他说：“不，你必须按照我们告诉你的做。

”在图2中，男孩上大学时，他的父母说：“你20多岁了，但你没有自己的判断”)；对此现象的分析(当孩子小的时候，他们的父母总是要控制他们，让孩子按照他们所说的去做，这样孩子长大后就失去了判断力.所以，作为父母，他们应该反省自己)；你对图片人物的建议(父母应该记住，孩子是个人，他们有自己的决定权。

只有让他们自己做一些事情，他们才能真正独立成长)。

【句式拓展】
原句：Therefore, as parents, they should reflect on themselves.
拓展句：Therefore, as parents, they should reflect on themselves, which is important for the growth of their children.
【亮点句型】
1. ... when some kids are young, their parents always control them and let their kids do what they tell so that
their children lose their judgement when they are grown-up.
(运用了两个when状语从句，so that状语从句和what名词从句)
2.Only by letting them do something on their own, can they really grow up independently.
(运用了only+状语位于句首，句子用部分倒装)
3.(改编自2022·北京高二专题练)请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。

1.简要描述下图内容。

2.畅述阐述你对该图的理解
注意：词数120左右。

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【答案】
From the picture given above, we can observe that a boy is climbing a high mountain, who is sweating all over and having a tired look. In spite of many large rocks blocking his way, the exhausted boy is still struggling on the steep mountainside, because he knows that there is a rainbow behind the mountain.
What the picture conveys is that although the way to success seems long and difficult, there is still hope like the rainbow in our hearts. In everyday life, all of us are facing many difficulties and experiencing great hardships just like the boy. However, if we are determined to get to the top, we’ll see the rainbow.
Therefore, as long as we are confident and never give up, we are sure to achieve success.
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于之图画类写作。

要求考生首先要看懂图的中心意思，要求考生筛选出要点，然后再把要点用连接词串联成文。

通过分析图片可知，一个男孩正在爬一座高山，满头大汗，看上去很疲倦。

尽管有许多大石头挡住了路，但精疲力尽的男孩仍在陡峭的山坡上挣扎，因为他知道山后有彩虹。

本文告诉我们的道理是，尽管成功之路似乎漫长而艰难，但我们的心中仍然充满希望。

在日常生活中，我们每个人都面临着许多困难，就像男孩一样，正经历着巨大的困难。

但是，如果我们决心登顶，就会看到彩虹。

因此，只要我们有信心并且永不放弃，我们一定会取得成功。

【句式拓展】
原句：From the picture given above, we can observe that a boy is climbing a high mountain, who is sweating all over and having a tired look.
拓展句：As is vividly shown in the picture given above, a boy is climbing a high mountain, sweating all over and having a tired look.
【亮点句型】
1.In spite of many large rocks blocking his way, the exhausted boy is still struggling on the steep
mountainside, because he knows that there is a rainbow behind the mountain.
(because引导的原因状语从句)
2.What the picture conveys is that although the way to success seems long and difficult, there is still hope
like the rainbow in our hearts.(what引导的主语从句)
3.Therefore, as long as we are confident and never give up, we are sure to achieve success.
(as long as引导的条件状语从句)
4.(2022·安徽合肥一中高二期末)请你观察下面这幅图，写一篇100词左右的英语短文投给校报，谈谈你对读图后的感受和对劳动的看法。

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【答案】
As the picture shows, some parents love their children so much that they don’t let them do housework at home. They think that their children are too busy with their studies and they only expect them to do well in their lessons.
However, I think children should help their parents do housework at home, which can help them develop their ability to live on their own and promote emotional communication among family.
All in all, labour can do good to children both mentally and physically. It’s time for us to experience the pleasure of labour. Let’s take action right now!
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于之图画类写作。

要求考生所给图片，并谈谈自己读图后的感受和对劳动的看法。

分析图片可知：有些父母非常爱孩子，以至于不让他们在家做家务。

他们认为他们的孩子学习太忙了，他们只希望他们学好功课。

自己读图后的感受：孩子们应该帮助父母在家做家务，这可以帮助他们培养独立生活的能力，促进家庭之间的情感交流。

对劳动的看法：劳动对孩子的身心都有好处等等！
【句式拓展】
原句：All in all, labour can do good to children both mentally and physically.
拓展句：All in all, labour can do good to children both mentally and physically, which can help them grow better and faster.
【亮点句型】
1.They think that their children are too busy with their studies and they only expect them to do well in their
lessons.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
2.However, I think students should help their parents do housework at home, which can help them develop
their ability to live on their own and promote emotional communication among family.(运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了that，同时运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5.(改编自2022·北京二十中高一阶段练)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。

请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍你和父母计划并陪伴爷爷奶奶欢度“重阳节”的过程，以“A Happy Double Ninth Festival”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件。

注意：词数150左右(标题已经给出，不计入总词数)。

提示词：缆车cable car 快递员courier
A Happy Double Ninth Festival
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【答案】
A Happy Double Ninth Festival
Last weekend, my parents and I celebrated the Double Ninth Festival with my grandparents happily.
Before the big day, I planned to take my Grandparents to Xiangshan Park for a visit, while my parents booked flowers online. On the early morning of the festival, my grandparents and I set out for the park. Considering their age, I accompanied them to the top of the mountain by cable car. Enjoying the beautiful scenery, we couldn’t help taking lots of photos. When we came back home at noon, my parents had already prepared a big lunch for us. I served the dishes and all the family enjoyed the meal happily. To my grandparents’
surprise, a courier delivered two bunches of flowers soon after we finished the meal. My parents and l, along with the courier, wished them a pleasant life.
Seeing the smiles on my grandparents’ faces, I was glad and proud to have done something to show my love to them.
【简要分析】
本篇书面表达属于之图画类写作。

要求考生根据所给四幅图的先后顺序，给校刊“英语角”写一篇以“A Happy Double Ninth Festival”为题介绍自己和父母计划并陪伴爷爷奶奶欢度“重阳节”过程的稿件。

首段需要交代叙述图画的由头：上周末，我和我的父母和祖父母快乐地庆祝了重阳节。

描述四幅图：第一幅图：节日前，我计划带祖父母去香山公园参观，父母在网上订购鲜花；第二幅图：节日的清晨，我和祖父母出发去公园。

考虑到他们的年龄，我陪他们乘缆车到达了山顶。

欣赏美丽的风景，我们情不自禁的拍了很多照片；第三幅图：我们中午回到家，很开心地享用父母已经准备的丰盛午餐；第四幅图：饭后不久，一位快递员送来了两束鲜花。

我的父母和我，以及快递员，祝他们生活愉快。

最后总结全文：看到爷爷奶奶脸上的笑容，我为能做些事儿向他们表达我的爱而感到高兴和自豪。

【句式拓展】
原句：Seeing the smiles on my grandparents’ faces, I was glad and proud to have done something to show my love to them.
拓展句：When I saw the smiles on my grandparents’ faces, I was glad and proud to have done something to show my love to them.
【亮点句型】
1.Enjoying the beautiful scenery, we couldn’t help taking lots of photos.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
2.To my grandparents’ surprise, a courier delivered two bunches of flowers soon after we finished the meal.
(运用了after引导的时间状语从句)。