2021届 全国卷新题型《读后续写》公开课 课件

dad towards the mountains.
Turning
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Ending
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Kinds Character Action Place Concrete Things Abstract
Underlined key words and phrases dad / Uncle Paul feed / get lost farm house / river sheep/ track
Fill in the blanks with proper words: …So, my dad and I __p_u_t__o_n_ our new cowboy hats, ___g_o_t_o_n_ our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul __cr_i_e_d_, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!" "OK! " my dad __cr_i_e_d_b__a_ck_. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight.
Development
I experienced a lot but what I most wanted to do was to take a horse ride.
Although Uncle Paul was a little worried, I
was so happy to take a horse ride with my
Eg：The home –Made Ball
• The two friends kicked and ran until the sun turned the sky pale orange.
Tips on continuation writing
Writing tip 5:
Make use of the given information to echo the previous part.(呼应前文）
5. To make use of the given information to echo the
previous part.(呼应前文）
Tips on continuation writing
Writing tip 1:
In the concluding paragraph, you’d better communicatepositive thoughts and attitudes to readers by creating a positive ending.
Look back on tips on continuation writing in the story of Mac, Paul and the wolf 1. Positive thinking 2. To describe the characters’ actions in detail to
late/ sight
Beginning sentences:
P1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse….
• P 2:We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark….
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
Q: What kind of persons are Father and Un, courageous , optimistic , witty…
Uncle Paul : experienced, helpful, considerate , diligent, hospitable (好客的)….
on a farm in the __W__il_d__ West.
Para 3: I experienced a lot of interesting things but what I most wanted to do was to take a
_h__or_s_e_ ride.
Para 4: Although Uncle Paul was a bit _w_o_r_r_ie_d_,
Think and share:
What would the horse do ?
frighten run (wildly) disappear …
Think and share:
What would Dad do ?
protect follow comfort instruct calm down…
Writing
How to write it?
Based on:
• what we have read
• 5(10)c_l_u_e__ words
• beginning sentences of the two paragraphs
Plot Development
Para 1-2: My dad took me to a special vacation
Think and share:
What would Uncle do ?
Uncle Paul
rescue help/aid shout hug prepare a dinner…
Tips on continuation writing
Writing tip 3:
Creative plotting requires a careful analysis of the close link between the given information. Being creative doesn’t mean you can write whatever you like. Continuation writing should
Tips on continuation writing
Writing tip 2:
To make a vivid story, you may as well describe the characters’ actions to express characters’ thoughts feelings in detail instead of telling the readers directly.
express their thoughts and feelings 3. To be logical and reasonable 4. To use some conjunctions and non-predicate verbs
to make the text coherent.(copy the language）
Tips on continuation writing
Writing tip 4:
Use scenery description to imply one’s _f_e_e_lin_g_s_. scenery description with metaphor（暗喻） creates a strong and vivid picture in readers’ mind. .
评分原则
与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语 衔接合理。 第五• 档本题内总容分丰为富25，分应，用分了5个5个档以次上给短分文中标出的关键 词语。 (21-25) 所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确， 可能有些 错误，但完全不影响意义表达。
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短 文结构紧凑。
读后续写:
I was so happy to take a horse ride with my dad towards the mountains.
Continue and complete the story
Beginning
My dad took me to a special vacation on a farm in the wild west.
horse ride towards the mountains.
the rabbit.
What’s in the two given first sentences?
Para1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
Para2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.
Writing purpose:
1. To praise the spirit of being courageous and optimistic to think ways out even in difficult situations 2. When others are in need ,we should never hesitate to give a hand.
no GPS…
a narrative(叙事) story
Develop the plot based on the context
What’s in the previous story, especiallyWthee glaostt lpolsot?
Although Uncle Paul was a little worried, my dabdeacnad uIsteoook fa
Tips on continuation writing 4： copy the language
• It was so peaceful and quiet • and the colors of the brown • rocks, the deep green pine • trees, and the late afternoon m• asguinc mixed to create a •be_a_u_ti_fu_l_ scene. It looked like a • _________woven blanket • spread out upon the ground • just for us.
提供一篇350词以内的材料，要求考生依据 材料内容、所给段落开头语及所标关键词续写一 篇150词左右的短文。（满分25分）
Read ＋ Write
Read for what?
Read for key elements Read for main plot Read for writing style
---detailed description of
__t_h_e_a_c_t_io_n_/_m__o_ti_o_n
Think and share:
What would the author do when suddenly a little rabbit jumped out ?
stop follow catch protect control fall off…
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Continuation Writing 读后续写
1. to review, learn and apply the writing skills; 2. to appreciate good writings and avoid some common mistakes; 3. to rewrite the composition .
be designed in a logical and reasonable way.
Logical and reasonable
Fly your imagination but keep to the track of the story!
not a fairy tale not a fiction