中考英语书面表达技巧和方法完整版及练习题

一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达
年济南市入选全国文明城市。

为巩固文明城市创建成果，共建美好济南，济南市团委正在开展“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动，作为一名中学生，我们平时应该从以下几个方面来规范自己的言行举止。

请根据下列提示，写一篇短文。

要求： 1.词数100个左右。

2.所写短文必须包括以上内容，自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。

3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.
【答案】In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.
First.we should choose to live a low-carbon life. We’d better go to school by bike or on foot. When we are shopping. we can use baskets or cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldn’t buy anything we don’t need. Second，it’s our duty to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.
Third，it’s nece ssary for us to show good manners to others/ be polite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. I’m sorry and Please” as often as possible.
Finally, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. It’s important for us to take part in voluntary work.
We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!
【解析】
本文是一篇给材料作文。

为使济南市入选全国文明城市，巩固文明城市创建成果，共建美好济南，济南市团委开展“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动，作为一名中学生，我们平时应该规范自己的言行举止。

要求根据所给出的提示，写一篇短文。

根据所给材料可知时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称。

本文给出的材料比较具体全面，考生需要用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，并可进行适当想象发挥。

写作中注意理顺要点，防止漏写，注意表达的条理性、连贯性；注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误；要使用自己有把握的句式、单词，词汇、句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一。

最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求；检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面
是否有误等。

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

2．（·四川成都外国语学校中考模拟）Writing.
In the past, most Chinese families have got one child in them. But recently, the government has relaxed the family planning policy, which means each couple are allowed to have two children. Would you like to have a brother or a sister who grows up together with you?
Now please write a passage of about 80-120 words to introduce your opinion. The following points should be included:
1. Is it necessary for a family to have more than one child? Give at least two reasons for it.
2. What’s the situation in your family? Are you the only child or not? List what makes you happy and unhappy.
3. Give at least two suggestions to the families with two children.
【答案】First of all, two-child policy is the gift for some only child.For some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. Put aside the loneliness of their child, when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally, the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginable heavy. Their child and his wife have to take care of two old couples.
In my family ,my parents have a only child. I also have some happy things.I can enjoy some delicious food by myself. But I have no playmate in my family. Sometimes. I may feel lonely.
If parents have two children, they can share the burden of taking care of their parents. It would be much better. Also, two-child policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population.
【解析】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如first of all，grow up，grow older，marry with，burden on，have to do， take care of，by oneself，have no playmate，the number of等。

而For some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. / when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally,/ It would be much better.等多种表猜测句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

3．（·北京中考模拟）自信赋予人力量，带给人快乐。

拥有自信，人生处处是舞台，生活越来越精彩。

假如你是李华，请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自信的重要
性，分享一次使你更加自信的经历，并说说我们如何更加自信。

提示词语：powerful，happy，believe in，keep doing
提示问题：
Why is it important to be confident?
What experience made you more confident?
How can we become more confident?
It's very important to be confident
【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.
When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe ho w happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.
To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.
【解析】本文内容应包含表格中所提供的所有信息。

灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。

语言力求准确，简洁。

最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如at the beginning of；know about；make a speech等；When ；Although ；Then ；From then on,等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。

4．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，即将结束在美国的交换学习，回国前你想给住家妈妈Sarah写封感谢信，告诉她你什么时候回国，为什么感谢她，以及你的感受。

提示词语： help, care, communicate, drive to hospital, own family
提示要点：When are you going to leave?
Why do you want to say ‘thank you’ to her?
How do you feel?
Dear Sarah,
I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you.
Thanks again for taking care of me so well.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sarah,
I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. I am going to leave the US next Tuesday morning. I really want to say thanks to you because of your help and care during my stay here. I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in communicating with others in English, and I will never forget you drove me to the hospital in the late night when I didn’t feel well.
Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.”
Thanks again for taking care of me so well.
【解析】
此文为提纲式作文，文章属于感谢信。

文章可分为三段，第一段表明写信的目的；第二段分析感谢的具体原因；第三段写出你在住家妈妈Sarah家里的感受。

文章用第一人称来写，时态主要用一般过去时和一般将来时。

亮点分析：表示感激的句型：I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you.
Thanks again for taking care of me so well.
[高分句型一]
I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in communicating with others in English. 我永远不会忘记，当我用英语和别人交流困难时，你主动提出帮助我。

句子中有when引导的时间状语从句。

[高分句型二]
Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.” 住在您们家里就像住在我自己的家里一样，这让我想起了一句话：“天下之大, 家最美好。

” 其中which reminds me of the saying是由which引导的定语从句。

5．（·四川中考模拟）书面表达
在你的成长过程中,许多人、许多事物一直在陪伴着你、支持着你、温暖着你,让你感动、伴你成长。

请以“Say thanks to________”为题,写一篇短文。

要求: 1. 写出要感谢的对象、原因及感激语言；
2.语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯;
3.词数70左右,书写工整、规范;
4.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。

Say thanks to my teachers
How time flies! My junior high school lives will come to end.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _
【答案】Say thanks to my teachers
How time flies! My junior high school lives will come to end.
In the past three years, I have studied in a beautiful school which provides me with a good study place. Teachers in my school also give me lots of help. Whenever I was in trouble, you always stood around me to comfort me .You taught me how to be a good person and gave me the courage to face difficulties. You are my friends. So I want to say, I love you, my dear teachers. I have grown up happily with your help. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.
【解析】话题作文写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。

英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。

英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。

6．（·上海中考模拟）In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic“ ..and I”.（以“我和……” 为题，写一篇60-120 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。

）每一个生命个体都和这个世界发生着联系，你也不例外。

请分享一个你和他人、社会或自然之间的故事，并谈谈自己的体验或感受。

（注意：短文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

）
【答案】My friends and I
Before I went to school, I felt so excited, because I was so curious about the campus life. Now I have been in middle school, after seven years’ study, I feel the bitter and happiness. The bitter is that there are always exams, and sometimes I can’t do well. Every time I get the low mark, I will be afraid of disappointing my parents. The happy thing is that I make many friends here. We play and study together. They are just like the brothers and sisters to me. This is the process of growing up, which mix pain and happiness. I am so lucky to have these friends in my life, they mean so much to me.
【解析】
这是一篇要求介绍自己和他人、社会或自然之间的故事，并谈谈自己的体验或感受。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。

英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。

7．（·全国中考模拟）书面表达
健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。

你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文,首句已给出。

信息提示：1.健康饮食; 2.早睡早起, 不熬夜; 3.参加运动, 强身健体。

4.不沉迷网络，做网络的主人。

要求：根据信息提示, 把握要点, 适当发挥, 不逐字翻译。

字数在80词左右。

I think healthy habits are very important for us.
Best wishes.
Yours,
【答案】I think healthy habits are very important for us. All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bed for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should be in control of computer games instead of being addicted to them.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇材料作文。

请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文。

文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。

本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。

动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。

在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求。

8．（·东莞市虎门智升学校中考模拟）书面表达
如今的交通已经成了许多城市的主要困扰。

假如你是一名工程师，请你设计一种交通工具，既可以解决部分交通运行的问题，又有助于环保。

要求：
1. 要展开大胆的想象，可以假设为一种空中交通工具，也可以是地上交通工具。

2. 内容要合理、完整、丰富与流畅。

3. 词数：不少于80。

开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

An Important Vehicle
As an engineer, I try my best to invent an important vehicle.
It's________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
I hope my idea can come true one day, and everyone can be interested in it.
【答案】An Important Vehicle
As an engineer, I try my best to invent an important vehicle. It's an air bus. You are right. It's a kind of special bus, and it can also fly in the air. When there are too many cars and buses on the street, it can fly in the air. It doesn't cause any accidents or trouble. At the same time, it is so convenient that lots of people will take it.
On the bus, there are enough seats for the passengers. What's more, it doesn't run on oil but a kind of special water. That's to say it will be very good for people to take it, because it doesn't produce any pollution at all.
I hope my idea can come true one day, and everyone can be interested in it.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文。

假如你是一名工程师，要求你展开大胆的想象，设计一种交通工具，可以假设为一种空中交通工具，也可以是地上交通工具；既可以解决部分交通运行的问题，又有助于环保。

根据所给的提示材料可知本文时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一和第三人称。

在写作时，要注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查字数是否符合要求。

【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

9．（·江苏赣榆实验中学初三）初中的三年即将过去，这三年里你一定学会了不少东西。

假如你是Jack，你想给老师写一封感谢信，表达你的感激之情。

请根据下列提示，完成这封感谢信。

词数100左右。

开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

1. 学会了如何学习：课前预习；课堂认真听讲，记笔记：课后认真完成作业，及时复习；懂得了读书的重要性，养成了好的阅读习惯，为以后的学习做好准备。

2. 懂得了如何做人：在家里，爱父母和家人，帮父母做力所能及的事：在学校，尊重老师，关爱同学，做文明学生；在社会，遵守交通规则，爱护花草树木，…（适当补充）
3. 以后的打算：……（适当补充）
Dear teachers,
How time flies! Nearly three years has passed. I will graduate from the school. I want to say "Thank you, dear teachers." It is you who have taught me a lot of things.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear teachers,
How time flies! Nearly three years has passed. I will graduate from the school. I want to say "Thank you, dear teachers." It is you who have taught me a lot of things.
First，I learn how to learn. I preview before class, listen carefully in class and take notes. I finish homework carefully after class and review in time. I understand the importance of reading and develop good reading habits to prepare for future learning.
Secondly, I know how to be a person. At home, I love parents and family and help parents do what they can. At school, I respect teachers, care for classmates, and try to be civilized students. In society, I obey traffic rules, love flowers and trees. I try to be a civilized teenager.
I am going to study harder in high school. I will meet new challenges and enter my dream university. I will make greater contributions to society in the future.
Yours,
Jack 【解析】
10．（·辽宁初三）生活中总有些不经意的事让你感动，总有些平凡的人让你难以忘记。

白杨是我的同学。

她家境贫寒；她精心照顾患病母亲；她学习刻苦，成绩优异；她关心同学，乐于助人；她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工作。

请根据提示内容介绍白杨，并谈一谈她对你及同学们的影响。

There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you. ________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________
【答案】There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you.
My classmate Bai Yang comes from a poor family. She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness. But she never gives up her studies. She keeps studying hard and has got good grades. What’s more, she cares for the classmates and is ready to help others. During her spare time, she often does voluntary work instead of relaxing herself like most of the students.
She sets a good example to us all. Everyone in our class likes her because of her kindness. In our eyes, she faces difficulties bravely. No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇人物介绍。

人物身份为同学白杨，介绍分四个要点：她家境贫寒；她精心照顾患病母亲；她学习刻苦，成绩优异；她关心同学，乐于助人；她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工作。

人称为第三人称，时态为一般现在时。

注意语法正确，善用连词，使各个要点连贯。

【高分句型一】She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness.她精心照顾生病的母亲。

who has a serious illness为定语从句。

【高分句型二】No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.不管生活多么艰苦，她仍然笑对生活。

No matter how hard the life is为让步状语从句。

11．（·天津中考模拟）请你根据以下内容提示,为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文,介绍发生在你好朋友王强Wang Qiang身上的一件事。

1.上周一放学后Wang Qiang骑车回家,在十字路口,看到一位老太太正要过马路。

2.当时交通灯坏了,所有车辆都一个接一个通过十字路口。

3.老太太犹豫不决,不敢独自穿过十字路口。

4.王强看到这种情况,主动上前拦住了车辆领着老人安全过了路口。

5.请就此事谈谈你的看法......
要求: 1.短文要包括以上所有要点。

2.行文连贯,可适当发挥。

3.词数:80-100。

开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:十字路口 crossroads 在……犹豫不决 hesitate in
Last Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike back
home.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________
【答案】Last Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike back home. On his way home, at a crossroads he saw an old lady going across the road. Because the traffic lights didn’t work at that time, all the traffic crossed the road without stopping one by one. The lady hesitated in whether she should cross it, but she was afraid to do that When Wang Qiang saw that, he offered to stop the traffic with his bike in order to lead her to cross the road safely.
In my opinion, Wang Qiang is such a good example that we should learn from him. At the same time we also suggest that all the drivers should let people cross first and then traffic when this situation happens.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍发生在我的好朋友王强身上的一件事。

【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：The lady hesita ted……，but she was afraid……，he offered to……，Wang Qiang is…..等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了王强骑车回家的路上看见一位老太太不敢过马路，接下来介绍他主动上前拦住了车辆领着老人安全过了路口，最后我就这件事谈谈我的想法。

此处on one’s way, see sb doing sth, at that time, without doing sth, offer to do sth, learn from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

12．（·四川中考模拟）书面表达
暑假即将来临,对于如何安排孩子初中毕业后的第一个假期,家长们和孩子自己有着各自的想法。

根据下表提示,写一篇英语短文,描述他们的不同看法,同时发表你自己对暑假安排的观点。

注意]
（1）表格中的观点仅供参考,允许适当发挥;
（2）开头已给出,不计入总词数;
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息;
（4）词数:不少于80。

How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________
【答案】How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.
Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it's important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go
sightseeing.
In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It's good for us to do some sports.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般现在时态进行叙述．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．
【点睛】
这篇短文用到了一些好的句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.这些给文章增色不少。

13．（·河北中考模拟）书面表达
初中毕业在即, 回顾三年的学习生活, 你一定有成功的体验, 如一次考试, 一次比赛, 一次表演......
请你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win为题写一篇演讲稿。

提示：（1）What was the event?
（2）How did you make it?
（3）What’s your feeling?
要求：（1）发言稿中须包括所有提示内容, 可适当发挥。

（2）发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。

Believe Myself, and I Will Win
Hello,
everyone!_______________________________________________________________________ ____
Thank you for your listening.
【答案】Believe Myself, and I will win
Hello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.
When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too.
To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the
future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.
Thank you for your listening.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以Believe Myself and I will win为题，写一篇演讲稿。

题目中用问题的形式给出了提示，审题可知，文章应包括以下内容：首先叙述你生活中遇到的一件困难的事；然后介绍你是如何克服了这个困难，最后取得成功的；最后说一下你自己的感受。

写作时学生们应根据这几个内容提要，发挥自己的想象力，将这些内容补充完整，用正确的英语表达出来。

短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。

写作时应注意：首先要保证发言稿中包括了所有提示的内容，不能遗漏要点，可以根据表达需要适当发挥，但要与上下文意衔接起来。

其次要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译。

应从句子的整体结构出发，选择适当句型、短语、词汇进行表达。

句式结构可以简单句为主，穿插并列句或复合句。

为提升文章档次，应注意衔接词以及高级句式或复杂结构的使用。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，写了一篇演讲稿。

文章有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。

各部分内容安排合理，层次清晰。

短文主要分成三段，每一段主题都很明确，叙述详细、清楚。

其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，短文主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式，语法规范，用词准确。

文章中句式变化丰富，有简单句、并列句、复合句，长短句结合，增强了文章的表现力。

短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。

14．（·天津中考模拟）请你根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”为题，为社区宣传专栏写一篇短文，介绍在玲玲身上发生的一件事。

（1）上周晚饭后玲玲和妈妈一起出去散步，在社区的门口看见一个钱包；
（2）玲玲把钱包捡起，发现钱包里有身份证和一些钱；
（3）玲玲和妈妈把钱包交给保安，保安把这个消息发到小区的微信群中；
（4）失主看到消息后，过来取回钱包并对玲玲和妈妈表示感谢；
（5）你觉得……
参考词汇：社区 community 身份证 ID card 保安 guard 微信群 Wechat group 失主owner
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。