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一观点类
These days/Nowadays,there is an increasingly hot topic among the general public concerning the phenomenon that____. When it comes to this issue, people’s views vary from person to person. Some people are in favor of _____, while still some others hold a negative attitude to it。
From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second。
It is not difficult for me to put forward some arguments to illustrate my standpoint。
T o begin with,____。
(Based upon a recent Internet survey,about ___% of ____) What's more, ______。
One more point that can’t be ignored is that ________.
Based upon what has been discussed above,I do hold that ________should be discouraged rather than encouraged. The relevant authorities should take immediate measures to put an end to this trend。
Only in this way, I firmly believe,will our life and society be made better。
(反对的结尾段)
第一段第二句替换句
Whenever it comes to this issue,there will spring up a wide variety of voices.
Whenever it comes to this issue,different people hold different opinions due to their distinct backgrounds and values。
第一段最后一句替换句
As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to support the former/latter view。
As far as I am concerned,the latter viewpoint seems more convincing and more appealing to me.第二段第一句替换句
T o prove my viewpoint, some significant arguments can be summarized as follows。
My arguments can be summarized as follows。
如果第一句话填入的是一个名词,则可以用下面这两三句话。
These days, one of the hottest topics arousing general concern is drive after drinking.
These days, there is an increasingly hot topic among the general public concerning drive after drinking
Nowadays,there is a widespread concern in our society about the widening income gap。
最后一段替换段
Based upon what has been discussed above, I do hold that ________should be encouraged rather than discouraged。
The relevant authorities should play a positive role in guiding this trend。
Only in this way,I firmly believe,will our life and society be made better.(支持)
There is no doubt that people will have diverse views on the same issue, but my standpoint is clear and well founded in the preceding discussions. Therefore, I believe that ____ be encouraged rather than discouraged or even banned. Only in this way, I firmly believe,will our life and society be made better.(支持)
There is no doubt that people will have diverse views on the same issue, but my standpoint is clear and well founded in the preceding discussions。
Therefore, I believe that ____ be discouraged or banned rather than encouraged. Only in this way,I firmly believe, will our life and society be made better.(反对)
范文:
These days,there is an increasingly hot topic among the general public concerning the phenomenon that private cars are becoming more and more prevalent in China。
When it comes to this issue,people's views vary from person to person。
Some people are in favor of the rapid development of private cars, while still some others hold a negative attitude to it. From my point of
view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second。
It is not difficult for me to put forward some arguments to illustrate my standpoint. T o begin with, it goes without saying that developing private cars can boost and prompt the local economy to develop more rapidly。
What's more,if conditions permit, owning a car can make us work more efficiently. One more point that can’t be ignored is that private cars will make our life become more convenient. With a car we can go to places where the regular buses and trains cannot get.
Based upon what has been discussed above, I do hold that the rapid development of private cars should be encouraged rather than discouraged。
The relevant authorities should play a positive role in guiding this trend. Only in this way,I firmly believe, will our life and society be made better。
练习:如今,名人(celebrity)在大学里当客座教授或兼职教授的现象很普遍,对于这种现象,不同的人持有不同的看法,请发表你的观点。
提高版
These days,one of the hottest topics arousing general concern is drive after dinking. According to the data given by the relevant government, about 89%of the drivers have such experiences。
Some really keen enthusiasts go so far as to make a habit of it。
Needless to say, this phenomenon will continue for a while in the future.
When it comes to this issue,people’s views vary from person to person。
Some argue that it’s normal and acceptable to drive after drinking . They believe that they are able to drink much wine and a little cannot make them stoned. In addition,they hold that they own excellent driving skills and wine will not influence their performance in the slightest。
However, there are other people who look at this phenomenon in quite another way. For them,it is of utmost danger to drink before doing such a thing as driving。
Besides, drunken drivers can bring about much harm to
themselves or some other social problems. Therefore, immediate measures should be taken to put an end to the current situation。
Just as a coin has two sides,so it’s natural for people to have diverse ideas as regards the same issue。
So far as I’m concerned,the latter viewpoint seems more convincing and more appealing to me. In other words,drink before driving should be discouraged or even banned in our society。
The authorities concerned should play an active role in eliminating this phenomenon。
附加版(适合两个事物之间选择)
These days,one of the most controversial topics arousing general concern is the choice between ___ and ___。
When it comes to this issue, people's views vary from person to person。
Some people prefer_____,and regard it as the most important part of life. But other people deem _____ their first choice to be made. So far as I’m concerned,the first/second viewpoint seems more convincing and appealing to me。
It is not difficult for me to put forward some arguments to illustrate my standpoint. T o begin with, ____. (Based upon a recent Internet survey, about ___%of ____)What’s more,______。
One more point that can't be ignored is that ________。
Though, as every coin has two sides,it’s hard to deny the other choice,my choice is still clear and well founded in the above discussions. Therefore,I hold it beneficial and imperative to maintain that choice, and thus our life and society will be made better。
二原因/利弊/措施分析类
These days, there is a hot topic among the general public concerning ____。
According to the data given by the relevant government,about _ percent of ___ (have such experiences). This phenomenon,without question, has aroused wide concern。
Among the media,we can find a lot
of relevant discussions。
Some driving factors that contribute to the above-mentioned phenomenon may be summarized as fallows. First and foremost of all,____。
(Based upon a recent Internet survey,about ____ % of ____) What's more,______. One more point that can’t be ignored is that ________.
Based upon what has been discussed above,I do hold that this phenomenon should be discouraged rather than encouraged。
The relevant authorities should take immediate measures to put an end to this trend. Only in this way, I firmly believe,will our life and society be made better. (反对)
Based upon what has been discussed above,I do hold that this phenomenon should be encouraged rather than discouraged. The relevant authorities should play a positive role in guiding this trend. Only in this way,I firmly believe,will our life and society be made better。
(支持)
第一段第一句替换句
Nowadays,there is a widespread concern in our society about the widening income gap.
第一段替换段
(1)As we can see from the situation,job-hopping has become a common phenomenon among the general public. According to a newspaper survey, about 55%percent of the graduates have changed their job in the first years of their employment. Some really keen enthusiasts go so far as to make more than one changes. Needless to say,this trend will continue for a while in the future.
(2) These days,one of the hottest topics arousing general concern is drive after dinking. According to the data given by the relevant government,about 89%of the drivers have such
experiences。
Some really keen enthusiasts go so far as to make a habit of it. Needless to say, this phenomenon will continue for a while in the future.
(3)These days, there is a hot topic among the general public concerning ____. When it comes to this issue,people’s views vary from person to person. Some people are in favor of _____, while still some others hold a negative attitude to it. From my point of view, this phenomenon is quite normal (abnormal)。
第二段第一句替换句
There are many factors contributing to the above-mentioned phenomenon, but in general,they may come down to three major ones.
第二段如果写的是危害,第一句可以用下面这句:
There is no doubt that this trend/phenomenon may have some negative effects on our society。
It goes without saying that the negative effects of ____ can be seen clearly in the following aspects.
So far as I’m concerne d,I believe that this trend will result in some negative consequences 第二段如果写的是好处,第一句可以用下面这句:
There is no doubt that this trend/phenomenon may have some positive effects on our society.
It goes without saying that the positive effects of ____ can be seen clearly in the following aspects。
第二段如果写的是措施,第一句可以用下面这句:
Considering the possible negative aspects of this phenomenon/trend,we should take some effective measures as follows.
第二段如果同时写利弊两个方面, 则可以用下面这个段落:
It is obvious that ____ has advantages as well as disadvantages. Generally speaking,the advantages can be listed as follows。
First of all,______makes people's everyday life more convenient。
In addition, ______ connects its users with the outside world. With a ______,people’s life will be greatly enriched。
Nevertheless,it is a pity that every coin has two sides and the disadvantages of _____ can’t be ignored. To begin with, ____. To make matter worse, ______ is most likely to add to your daily expenses。
最后一段备用段落
Considering the possible negative aspects of__this trend__, we may come up with some tentative suggestions as follows。
On the one hand, the authorities concerned should make relevant rules and regulations to these promises. On the other hand,the public should be educated to be more self-conscious。
Only in these ways, I firmly believe,will our life and society be made better。
(适用于最后一段强调措施的作文)
范文:
These days, there is a hot topic among the general public concerning the phenomenon that more and more people prefer to raise dogs in the cities. According to the data given by the relevant government, about 70 percent of the families have dogs. This phenomenon,without question,has aroused wide concern。
Among the media, we can find a lot of relevant discussions。
There is no doubt that this trend may have some negative effects on our society. First and foremost of all, raising dogs may pollute the environment. We can often see dogs dropping their waste in public places when they are walked outdoors. What’s more, with too many dogs in public places, cases of dogs attacking people are not rare now. One more point that cannot be ignored
is that the barking of dogs may disturb the quiet neighborhood.(第二段危害)
Based upon what has been discussed above,I do hold that this phenomenon should be discouraged rather than encouraged. The relevant authorities should take immediate measures to put an end to this trend。
Only in this way will our life and society be made better。
三图表类
As is shown in the diagram/graph/chart/table, some dramatic changes have taken place with regard to the number (percentage) of___ in the past several years。
According to the data given in the diagram,we can see that the number (percentage) of___ was on a steady rise/decline all the time。
In the year of____, it was only about ____,while within no more than ____ years,it went up/down to nearly _____ in ___.
Some driving factors that contribute to the above-mentioned changes may be summarized as follows. First and foremost of all, ____。
(Based upon a recent Internet survey,about ___%of ____)What’s more,______。
One more point that can’t be ignored is that ________。
Based upon what has been discussed above,we may reasonably predict that with the rapid and further development of our society, the number (percentage) of ____ will keep increasing in the forthcoming years. (中立的结尾)
第一句替换句
What is shown in the diagram/graph/chart/table above shows us clearly that dramatic changes have taken place with regard to ____ in the past several years。
As is depicted in the diagram/graph/chart/table above, some dramatic changes have taken place with regard to ______ in the past several years.
第一段替换段(适合描述多种事物同时表化)
As is shown clearly in the table,some dramatic changes have taken place with regard to the way people spent their holidays in the past several years。
In 2000, 63%of people spent their holidays at home,while the figure decreased considerably to 24%in 2009。
At the same time,the number of people choosing traveling rose sharply from 37%in 2000 to 76%in 2009.
最后一段可以替换的段落:
Based upon what has been discussed above, I believe these changes are abnormal and will exert negative effects on the society,so the relevant authorities should take immediate measures to prevent the current situation from getting worse。
Only in this way,I firmly believe, will our life and society be made better。
(反对的结尾段)
Based upon what has been discussed above, I believe these changes are quite normal and will exert positive effects on the society。
The relevant authorities should play a positive role in guiding this trend。
Only in this way, I firmly believe,will our life and society be made better。
(支持的结尾段)
Taking all these factors into consideration,we may reasonably predict that the present situation will continue for quite a while in the forthcoming years。
And if this change can be kept and guided properly, our life as well as our society will be made better。
(中立的结尾段)
范文:
As is shown in the diagram,some dramatic changes have taken place with regard to the number of recruitment of Master of Engineering in the past several years. According to the data given in the diagram, we can see that the number of recruitment of ME was on a steady rise all the time。
In the year of_1998_, it was only about 2500,while within no more than 7 years, it went up to nearly __35,000_ in _2004_。
Some driving factors that contribute to the above—mentioned changes may be summarized as follows. First and foremost of all, with the rapid development of Chinese economy and society,the persons with specific abilities are badly needed,especially in high-tech industries. What's more, ME can enable people to find a high-paying job easily。
It is said that nearly 100% job hunters with ME can get an ideal post in China nowadays. One more point that can't be ignored is that the conception of life-study has been commonly accepted by so many Chinese young people that most of them choose to study further after a few years of graduation。
Based upon what has been discussed above, we may reasonably predict that with the rapid and further development of our society, the number of recruitment of ME will keep increasing in the forthcoming years。
综合模板
These days,there is a hot topic among the general public concerning ____。
When it comes to this issue, people’s views vary from person to person。
Some people are in favor of _____, while still some others hold a negative attitude to it. From my point of view, this phenomenon is quite normal (abnormal)。
It is not difficult for me to put forward some arguments to illustrate my standpoint. T o begin with,____. (Based upon a recent Internet survey, about ___% of ____) What’s more,______。
One more point that can’t be ignored is that ________.
From what has been discussed above/Based upon what has been discussed above,I do hold that______should be encouraged rather than discouraged。
The relevant authorities should play a positive role in guiding this trend. Only in this way,I firmly believe,will our life and society
be made better.(支持的结尾段)
From what has been discussed above/Based upon what has been discussed above,I do hold that______should be discouraged rather than encouraged。
The relevant authorities should play a positive role in guiding this trend。
Only in this way,I firmly believe,will our life and society be made better.(反对的结尾段)
如果是分析原因,则第二段第一句用下面这句花
Some driving factors that contribute to the above-mentioned phenomenon may be summarized as fallows.
当我被上帝造出来时,上帝问我想在人间当一个怎样的人,我不假思索的说,我要做一个伟大的世人皆知的人。
于是,我降临在了人间。
我出生在一个官僚知识分子之家,父亲在朝中做官,精读诗书,母亲知书答礼,温柔体贴,父母给我去了一个好听的名字:李清照。
小时侯,受父母影响的我饱读诗书,聪明伶俐,在朝中享有“神童”的称号。
小时候的我天真活泼,才思敏捷,小河畔,花丛边撒满了我的诗我的笑,无可置疑,小时侯的我快乐无虑。
“兴尽晚回舟,误入藕花深处。
争渡,争渡,惊起一滩鸥鹭。
”青春的我如同一只小鸟,自由自在,没有约束,少女纯净的心灵常在朝阳小,流水也被自然洗礼,纤细的手指拈一束花,轻抛入水,随波荡漾,发髻上沾着晶莹的露水,双脚任水流轻抚。
身影轻飘而过,留下一阵清风。
可是晚年的我却生活在一片黑暗之中,家庭的衰败,社会的改变,消磨着我那柔弱的心.我几乎对生活绝望,每天在痛苦中消磨时光,一切都好象是灰暗的。
“寻寻觅觅冷冷清清凄凄惨惨戚戚”这千古叠词句就是我当时心情的写照。
最后,香消玉殒,我在痛苦和哀怨中凄凉的死去。
在天堂里,我又见到了上帝。
上帝问我过的怎么样,我摇摇头又点点头,我的一生有欢乐也有坎坷,有笑声也有泪水,有鼎盛也有衰落。
我始终无法客观的评价我的一生.我原以为做一个着名的人,一生应该是被欢乐荣誉所包围,可我发现我错了。
于是在下一轮回中,我选择做一个平凡的人.
我来到人间,我是一个平凡的人,我既不着名也不出众,但我拥有一切的幸福:我有温馨的家,我有可亲可爱的同学和老师,我每天平凡而快乐的活着,这就够了。
天儿蓝蓝风儿轻轻,暖和的春风带着春的气息吹进明亮的教室,我坐在教室的窗前,望着我拥有的一切,我甜甜的笑了.我拿起手中的笔,不禁想起曾经作诗的李清照,我虽然没有横溢的才华,但我还是拿起手中的笔,用最朴实的语言,写下了一时的感受:
人生并不总是完美的,每个人都会有不如意的地方。
这就需要我们静下心来阅读自己的人生,体会其中无尽的快乐和与众不同。
“富不读书富不久,穷不读书终究穷。
"为什么从古到今都那么看重有学识之人?那是因为有学识之人可以为社会做出更大的贡献。
那时因为读书能给人带来快乐。
自从看了《丑小鸭》这篇童话之后,我变了,变得开朗起来,变得乐意同别人交往,变得自信了……因为我知道:即使现在我是只“丑小鸭”,但只要有自信,总有一天我会变成“白天鹅”的,而且会是一只世界上最美丽的“白天鹅”……
我读完了这篇美丽的童话故事,深深被丑小鸭的自信和乐观所折服,并把故事讲给了外婆听,外婆也对童话带给我们的深刻道理而惊讶不已.还吵着闹着多看几本名着。
于是我给外婆又买了几本名着故事,她起先自己读,读到不认识的字我就告诉她,如果这一面生字较多,我就读给她听整个一面。
渐渐的,自己的语文阅读能力也提高了不少,与此同时我也发现一个人读书的乐趣远不及两个人读的乐趣大,而两个人读书的乐趣远不及全家一起读的乐趣大。
于是,我便发展“业务”带动全家一起读书……现在,每每遇到好书大家也不分男女老少都一拥而上,争先恐后“抢书”,当我说起我最小应该让我的时候,却没有人搭理我。
最后还把书给撕坏了,我生气地哭了,妈妈一边安慰我一边对外婆说:“孩子小,应该让着点。
"外婆却不服气的说:“我这一把年纪的了,怎么没人让我呀?”大家人你一言我一语,谁也不肯相让……读书让我明白了善恶美丑、悲欢离合,读一本好书,犹如同智者谈心、谈理想,教你辨别善恶,教你弘扬正义。
读一本好书,如品一杯香茶,余香缭绕。
读一本好书,能使人心灵得到净化。
书是我的老师,把知识传递给了我;书是我的伙伴,跟我诉说心里话;书是一把钥匙,给我敞开了知识的大门;书更是一艘不会沉的船,引领我航行在人生的长河中。
其实读书的真真乐趣也就在于此处,不是一个人闷头苦读书;也不是读到好处不与他人分享,独自品位;更不是一个人如痴如醉地沉浸在书的海洋中不能自拔。
而是懂得与朋友,家人一起分享其中的乐趣.这才是读书真正之乐趣呢!这所有的一切,不正是我从书中受到的教益吗?
我阅读,故我美丽;我思考,故我存在。
我从内心深处真切地感到:我从读书中受到了教益。
当看见有些同学宁可买玩具亦不肯买书时,我便想到培根所说的话:“世界上最庸俗的人是不
读书的人,最吝啬的人是不买书的人,最可怜的人是与书无缘的人。
”许许多多的作家、伟人都十分喜欢看书,例如毛泽东主席,他半边床上都是书,一读起书来便进入忘我的境界.
书是我生活中的好朋友,是我人生道路上的航标,读书,读好书,是我无怨无悔的追求。
从群体上看,中专毕业生的劣势是阅历较少、知识层次相对不高;优势是学校专业设置大多贴近市场实际、贴近一线需要,且中专毕业生年青、肯吃苦、可塑性强。
从个体来说,每位毕业生的优势与长项又各不相同,如有相当一部分毕业生动手操作能力较好;有些学生非常上进,上学期间还同时参加了职业资格考试或自学考试。
所以,在实事求是,不弄虚作假的前提下,要特别注意扬长避短,从而在竞争中取得优势,打动聘任
者。
没有重点和章法的写作易使文章显得头绪不清、条理紊乱。
非常热爱市场销售工作,有着十分饱满的创业激情.在××××两年从事现磨现煮的咖啡市场销售工作中积累了大量的实践经验和客户资源.与省内主要的二百多家咖啡店铺经销商建立了十分密切的联系,并在行业中拥有广泛的业务关系。
在去年某省的咖啡博览会上为公司首次签定了海外的定单。
能团结自己的同事一起取得优异的销售业绩。
合理分配自我介绍的时间前文说过,自我介绍一般也就持续1—3分钟,所以应聘者得合理分配时间。
常规安排是:第一段用于表述个人基本情况,中段重点谈自己的工作经历或社会实践经验,最后展望下自己的职位理想.但如果自我介绍被要求在1分钟完成,应聘者就要有所侧重,突出最有料的一点。
在实践中,有些应聘者试图在短短的时间内吐露自己的全部经历,而有些应聘者则是三言两语就完成了自我介绍,这些都是不明智的做法。
突出和应聘职位相关的信息自我介绍的内容不宜太多的停留在诸如姓名、教育经历等部分上,因为面试官可以在应聘者的简历上一目了然地看到这些内容.应聘者应该在自我介绍时选择一至两项跟自己所应聘的职位相关的经历和成绩作简述,以证明自己确实有能力胜任所应聘的工作职位.一个让人更有机会在面试中出彩的方法是在做一段自我介绍后适当停顿。
比如在“我曾在大学期间组织过有2000人参与的大型校园活动"之后的停顿可能会引导面试官去问“那是什么样的活动呢?”,这样做的目的是为面试的深入打下基础。
一切以事实说话在证明自己确实有能力胜任所应聘的工作职位时,应聘者可以使用一些小技巧,如介绍自己做过的项目或参与过的活动来验证某种能力,也可以适当地引用老师、同学、同事等第三方的言论来支持自己的描述。
而这一切的前提是以事实为基础,因为自吹自擂一般是很难逃过面试官的眼睛的,一旦被
发现掺假,基本预示着应聘者将被无情“秒杀”。
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