母亲节写作

3.Grammar & Spelling(语法与拼写)
Dear Mom, Thank you for love me. Mother’s Day is coming, 13.5 so I’ve decide to write this letter to you. When I was hungry, you gave me food. When I was ill, you stayed by my side. Thank you for taking care of me. Once I failed my test. At first, I was so sad. But you told me “Falling only makes us stronger”. Your words cheered up me and I began to study harder. Finally, I became one of the top students in my class. I will always love you, mom. I hope you can keep healthy forever. -1.5 Jerry
What did Mom do for you?
make sure I‟m safe keep me from danger
talk with me cheer me up
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What else did Mom do for you? ? ? ? ? ? ?
? Mom ?
Brainstorm
6.Thank you for helping me with my homework.
7.Thank you for teaching me how to laugh. 8.Thank you for teaching me how to make mistakes.
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Thank you mom for…
Talk about an event that impressed Group work you most. (4人小组合作说一件妈妈为你做 的你印象深刻的一件事。约4句话。2分钟内。) First Sentence ☆Once(有一次) I failed my math test. ☆ Once I was ill at night. ☆ Once I argued with my best friend . ☆ I started to learn the piano at the age of 5. ☆…
• • • 妈妈,你是我心目中最重要的人。 你的爱就像星星的眼泪那样珍贵。 爱你就像爱生命。
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•Finally, I became the winner. When I was four, I started to learn skating. Then you cheered me up and taught me “Falling only makes us stronger.”
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①… ②At first,… ③Then,… ④Finally,…
Passage Write a letter to your mom.
母亲节快到了，请你写一封信给你妈 妈，感谢她给你的一切。内容包括：
1. 为什么写信给妈妈？
2. 列举妈妈日常为你所做的一些事情，并 举一个具体事例加以说明。 3. 祝愿妈妈。
妈妈的爱就像星星的眼泪一样珍贵。 我爱妈妈就像爱生命。
Homework
• 1. Write a letter for your mom • 2.Send your letter to your mother on Mother‟s Day.
• Mama, you‟re the queen of my heart. • Your love is like tears from the stars. • Loving you is like food to my soul.
teach _____me about right and wrong
make ______ breakfast for me
drive _____ me to school help _____me with my homework give _____ birth to me Thank you for
What else did Mom do for you?
make ______ breakfast for me 2 _____ drive me to school
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… teach _____me about right and wrong
teach _____me how to laugh
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Sentence 2
Thank you Mom for everything you did.
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Thank you for______.
Match 1.Thank you for buying me this T-shirt!
2.Thank you for making my breakfast.
送我 上学 照顾我 给我好 的容貌
陪伴我
Sentence 1
When did Mom do these for you?
was hungry When I ____________________,
gave me food you ____________________.
When did Mom do these for you?
Don’t miss any points! 不要漏写任何一个要点！
1.Content(内容)
2.Handwriting(书写) +1 Dear Mom, Thank you for love me. Mother’s Day is coming, 1.Reasons you write it +2 so I’ve decide to write this letter to you.
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teach _____me how to laugh
stay _____ by my side
give _____ me good looks
Paragraph
What event impressed you most? (什么事让你印象最深?) Jenny & her mother
Put the sentences in order.
中考英语备考写作专项——
A Thank-You Letter
to Mom
Amber
Thank you, Mom!
Phrases What did Mom do for you?
give me food
tell me stories
take care of me
spend time with me
was ill When I ________________,
took care of me and stayed by my side. you _____________________________.
Make sentences (造句):
When I ________, you _______.
3.Thank you for giving me good looks. 4.Thank you for teaching me to eat fruit and vegetables.
Match. 5.Thank you for taking care of me my whole life.
A Letter to mom
body What Mom did
Thank you for… An event(事例): At first, Then, Finally... Hope you keep healthy.
Ending Wishes to Mom
Writing evaluation (作文评价) 1. 要点1：为什么写信给妈妈？(2分） 2. 要点2：列举妈妈日常为你所做的一些 事情(4分） 3. 要点3：一个具体事例加以说明(6分） 4. 要点4: 祝愿妈妈(2分） 5.卷面情况 (1分） ★语法错误（每个-0.5分）
Check each other„s letters (同桌互评)
1. 要点1：为什么写信给妈妈？(2分） 2. 要点2：列举妈妈日常为你所做的一些 事情(4分） 3. 要点3：一个具体事例加以说明(6分） 4. 要点4: 祝愿妈妈(2分） 5.卷面情况 (1分） ★语法错误（每个-0.5分）
Don’t miss any points! 不要漏写任何一个要点！
Summary
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1. Phrases 2. Sentences: When I…, you…./ Thank you for… 3. Paragraph: At first, But, Finally… 4.A writing mode: Writing hamburger 5.Writing evaluation: 6.Mom‟s love is like tears from the stars. Loving Mom is like food to my soul.
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Mom help _____ me with my stay _____ homework by my side give give _____ _____ 4 birth to me me good looks 5
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Game
See who is the first!
使我振 作 生我
教我如 何欢笑 与我 谈话
When I was hungry, you gave me food. When I was ill, you stayed by my side. Thank you for taking care of2. me. Once I failed test. At first, I was so Things Mommy did +4 sad. But you told me “Falling only makes us stronger”. Your words cheered up me and I began 3. An event +6 to study harder. Finally, I became one of the top students in my class. I will always love you, mom. I hope you can keep Wishes to Mom +2 healthy 4. forever. Jerry
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At first, I fell down again and again. Sometimes I even wanted to give up.
2 4 3 1 Order: _____________
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An event that impressed Jenny most: (使Jenny印象深刻的一件事) • When I was four, I started to learn skating. At first, I fell down again and again. Sometimes I even wanted to give up. Then you cheered me up and taught me, “Falling only makes us stronger.” Finally, I became the winner.
Writing Hamburger
Beginning
Body
Ending
Mind-map
beginning Why you write it
Writing
Thank you for loving me. …,so I've decided to write you this letter. When I…, you…