雅思哥学院2015.06.25 老徐雅思写作

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秀哥2024雅思小作文模板

秀哥2024雅思小作文模板

秀哥2024雅思小作文模板

英文回答:

The 2024 IELTS small essay template by Xiuge.

Prompt: Discuss the importance of learning a second language.

Learning a second language is of great significance for several reasons. Firstly, it broadens our horizons and allows us to communicate with people from different cultures. As the world becomes more interconnected, being able to speak multiple languages is becoming increasingly valuable. In addition, learning a second language can enhance our cognitive abilities and improve our memory and problem-solving skills. Moreover, it opens up new career opportunities and increases our employability in today's global job market.

中文回答:

雅思四段式作文范文

雅思四段式作文范文

雅思四段式作文范文

【篇一:雅思写作四段式】

雅思写作四段式

1. 写开头段

第一段:三句话

sentence 1. background information (general statement) 背景介绍 (可有可无)

sentence 2. rephrase the topic (thesis statement) 改写题目,转述话题。(必不可少)

sentence 3. personal opinion or brief description of the main body 亮明观点或首段先不写明观点,只做主体呈现,留到结尾段再表明。简洁的开头段,不错的选择;开头段与结尾段很重要,但主体段里的实质论证最核心的判分依据。

2. 主体部分,中间段落

第二段:进攻段,论述心有所倾的一方。

第一句:概括你倾向的一方观点(若与首段最后一句重复,可省略)。第二句:提出此观点第一个分论点(本段reason 1)。

第三句:对第一分论点合理展开支持(reason 1 的展开支持句supporting sentence)。

第四句:提出此观点的第二个分论点(本段reason 2)。

第五句:对第二个分论点合理展开支持(reason 2 的展开支持句supporting sentence)。

相应写出第六句(第三个分论点,即reason 3)与第七句(reason 3 的

展开支持)。(根据需要,可有可无)

注:

1. 展开支持句是主体段落最能体现考生论证实力部分,要丰满、充实、有说服力;

2. 主体段落的分论点不宜过多,否则有堆积之嫌;

雅思考试抽象类话题作文(老徐雅思)

雅思考试抽象类话题作文(老徐雅思)

11.11.26(发展中国家比以前幸福,但是发达国家不比以前幸福,原因和教训)

题目:With the rapid economic development, people living in developed and developing countries both have become richer than before. But studies show that people in developing countries feel happier than before, while those in developed countries do not. Discuss the reasons and lessons we can learn from it.

点评:这是个全新的题,但也有些勉强。发展中国家的人比以前幸福了,发达国家的人没有以前幸福。竟然还有调查表明(studies show),这个调查是谁做的?难道是有关部门?

不管你是否认同,既然有这样的题目,就得找几点理由。看似很陌生的一道题,有些难为同学们了。这次考试估计不少人要折戟沉沙,待卷土重来了。

那些一直在读我的范文的同学,我就不多说了,看看这一篇吧。读起来依然那么熟悉,那么亲切,还是那些课堂上讲过的素材进行改装。我的范文无数次地说明一个道理,无论来什么题目,我们以不变应万变!

在范文中特意补充了几个好词,大家可以学习,但这个并不重要。即使你不会这几个词,仍然可以有简单的写法,但是思路和结构永远是那些东西。

雅思考试大精选作文范文格式3篇

雅思考试大精选作文范文格式3篇

雅思考试大精选作文范文格式3篇

篇一:雅思考试大精选作文范文格式

【简介】:Somepeoplepreferplanningforthefuturewhileothersarguethatwesh ouldfocusonthepresent.WhatisyouropinionGivereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamp Some people prefer planning for the future while others argue that we should focus on the present. What is your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

真习题大意:有人认为应该计划将来,也有人认为重点就是现在。你同意哪一种想法请说出你的道理,并却从个人的知识或经验中,举出例子来证明。

Example Writing:

The present is where everything begins and there is no time like the present. Without being prisoners of the past, winners prefer working in the changing present toward the unpredictable future. The trouble with some people is that they are planning only for the unforeseeable time to nete and not facing the reality now.

雅思哥学院2015.11.01 老徐雅思写作

雅思哥学院2015.11.01 老徐雅思写作

雅思哥公益学院

2015年11月1日“老徐雅思”课堂笔记

雅思写作话题素材的一题多用

新浪微博: @老徐雅思

公共微信:yasi1jia2

咨询微信:laoxuyasi1

团队微博: @屠鸭联盟

团队微信:tuyaunion

10.31国内写作考试题目:Some people think creative artists should be financially supported by the government, while others believe artists should be supported by other sources of finance. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

甲方:

艺术活动对生活很重要,丰富生活,缓解压力,

人民需要艺术家和艺术活动,政府为人民服务,这个钱应该由政府来出

乙方:

政府预算有限,应该更多考虑教育、医疗、交通,

艺术家可以从其它渠道找钱

预测班源素材

政府投资艺术项目可能会增加纳税人的负担。

# The government’s investment in artistic projects is considered unnecessary and it may lead to an economic burden on taxpayers. In many countries, the government’s budget is limited. People hope that the government’s money can be spent on education, medical services, transportation, etc. For instance, if the government invests more in building subways, people would have more convenience in travelling. If the government establishes more hospitals, people would enjoy better medical services. (8)

雅思大作文---让步段,想说爱你不容易

雅思大作文---让步段,想说爱你不容易

雅思大作文---让步段,想说爱你不容易

定期推送与雅思写作备考相关的知识点技巧与干货知识。成功就是日复一日那一点点小小努力的积累。

往期精选

第一期:IELTS大作文如何回应评分标准中的Coherence &Cohesion

第二期:2018 年1月雅思写作总结&备考建议

第三期:三部曲让你的写作思维不再跳跃

接触过雅思大作文的同学都应该知道,大作文主要考察”议论文”和“说明文”两种类型。其中,议论文大概占80% 的比例,包含“观点类”和“论述类”两种类型。无论是哪一种议论文,评分标准的前两项TA(任务完成度)和CC(衔接与连贯)都强调论证的重要性,而如何论证又恰巧是很多中国考生最头疼的地方。尤其是近年来,雅思大作文涉及的话题越来越抽象,越来越难思考观点,以往一篇文章考生能想到三至四个观点,而现在能想到两到三个观点就已经绞尽脑汁了。那么如何在观点“缺货”的情况下,对文章的中心论点展开充分论证呢?本文将给大家介绍一种新的论证方法——让步的论证方法。

什么是让步段(“退一步海阔天空”) 说起“让步“二字,大家应该不陌生,因为英语的语法知识体系里就有让步状语从句。在雅思大作文中,让步就是先退一步承认自己不同意的事实或者观点,再对其进行反驳。

举个例子,大家都或多或少有过面试的经历,我们可以类比一下。通常在面试结束后,HR如果要拒绝录用我们,他会在拒绝前先适当肯定一下我们在某些方面的闪光点,这就是让步。当然,肯定完之后,HR还是会直奔主题,给我们挑刺,无情地拒绝我们。

在主体段写作过程中,将让步的内容扩展成一个段落,就是我们所说的让步段。

雅思哥学院2015.07.31 老徐雅思写作

雅思哥学院2015.07.31 老徐雅思写作

雅思哥公益学院

2015年7月31日“老徐雅思”课堂笔记

新浪微博:@老徐雅思

公共微信:yasi1jia2

雅思写作预测素材如何运用到真实考题

我们一直在预测,考官一直在反预测

没有预测不行

只信预测也不行

素材预测 + 能力提高= 考试通过

犯罪相关话题

12.05.12 罪犯应该进监狱还是接受教育

12.11.03 犯罪是否可以防治

13.11.09 青少年犯罪是否应该和成年人同样惩罚

13.02.16 罪犯应该进监狱还是采取其他方式

14.06.09 警察带枪是否会增加暴力犯罪

14.08.02 青少年犯罪的原因和解决办法

14.11.08 犯罪是环境造成的还是人的天性造成的

15.04.25 青少年犯罪是否应该和成年人同样惩罚

15.06.18 青少年犯罪的原因和解决办法

题1:Some people believe more actions can be taken to prevent crimes, while others think that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (2012.11.03)

甲方:防止犯罪的各项措施是有效的

1.严厉惩罚,震慑犯罪分子

2.安装摄像头

3.对犯罪更加警惕

乙方:犯罪的根本原因无法消除

1. 贫富差距

2. 反社会人格

源素材(甲方)

# There are various measures that are effective in reducing crimes. To begin with, those who commit serious crimes should be strictly punished. This would have a deterrent effect on people who intend to commit crimes. They would consider the consequences of their behavior and give up their intention. Another measure is to

雅思历年作文范文

雅思历年作文范文

雅思历年作文范文

篇一:雅思小作文大全及范文

101.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Test Tip

Check the horizontal axis to find(本文来自: 千叶帆文摘:雅思历年作文范文) whether the graph refers to past, present, future or all three.

We use the present simple to describe the graph: The graph shows …, We can see …

If the graph refers to past period of time, we use the past simple, and if the graph includes future times, we use will or it is predicted that. Look at the line graph and complete the text with the correct forms of the verbs in brackets and the correct prepositions.

历年雅思作文题教育篇:学校的科目谁来选

历年雅思作文题教育篇:学校的科目谁来选

历年雅思作文题教育篇:学校的科目谁来选

历年雅思作文题教育篇:学校的科目谁来选

与同学们学习息息相关的教育类话题是雅思大作文考察的重点,出题频率较高。教育类大作文的出题集中在以下几方面,即1. 学费由谁负担? 2. 教育与就业 3. 教育应该培养哪些能力?4. 学习科目的选择 5. 教育应该承担的道德和社会责任 6. 家庭教育 7. 科技进步对教育的影响。今天就来讲讲学习科目的选择方面的英语练习题,更多消息请关注应届毕业生网!

学校的科目谁来选择?(060916)

母题:Some people think that the government should decide which subjects students should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss the two views and give your opinion.

提示:这类题目采取的'策略就是“双批判”,因为题目中提供的两种选择往往都是错误的。

详解:

子题1:政府选课or 老师选课?学生选择所有的科目or根据兴趣自行选择?

子题2:只有学术科目重要,体育和音乐这样的课不重要,你同意吗?要不要学国际新闻?要不要学历史?要不要中学阶段就学习外语?要不要学数学哲学这类的科目?

提示:子题2与母题联系不大,需要准备这些科目各自的优点。

雅思写作例文 Task 2 25

雅思写作例文 Task 2 25

You should spend about40minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people choose to eat no meat or fish.They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.

Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least250words.

Answer:

The number of vegetarian in a community may depend on various factors, for example the traditions of the country,the wealth of the country,the religion or the age group.Therefore,the reasons why people choose to exclude meat and fish from their diet may also vary.

雅思(IELTS)考试写作试题荟萃

雅思(IELTS)考试写作试题荟萃

雅思(IELTS)考试写作试题荟萃

雅思写作,其实写来写去就是那么几种题型,从今天开始,大家跟着我一起来练写作,不写你一定后悔:)

1、Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons

2、It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and examples in your answer.

3、Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your generation different from your parents’generation? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

4、Some people pay money for the things they want or need. Other people trade products or goods for what they need. Compare the advantages of these two ways of obtaining things. Which way do you prefer? Explain why.

25雅思基础写作

25雅思基础写作

Writing Handout: 5

Vocabulary

exam essay qualification engineering assessment entrance mixture presentation experience college quantity countable vertical

horizontal axis Geography

Practice 1:Put the verbs in the box next to the nouns in the table. (You can use each verb more than once, and each noun can have more than one verb.)

Take sit do give write study make pass fail get

Practice 2: Complete the table with the correct past simple forms of these verbs and any matching nouns.

Mustafa: I have just finished school. I (1) ....... all my exams so I am really happy!

I'm going to go to university. I want to (2) ....................... Engineering. I have to

雅思写作观点类作文范文(合集7篇)

雅思写作观点类作文范文(合集7篇)

雅思写作观点类作文范文(合集7篇)

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雅思哥学院2015.06.25 老徐雅思写作

雅思哥学院2015.06.25 老徐雅思写作
雅思哥公益学院
雅思哥公益学院 2015 年 6 月 25 日“老徐雅思”课堂笔记
新浪微博:@老徐雅思 公共微信:yasi1jia2
写作考试的范围预测和素材分类
写作预测: 1. 素材具有广泛适用性 2. 关键是提高素材改装的能力 3. 预测题目的准确度
题 1:International tourism has been developing very fast in the past few decades. Do the advantages of the increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages? (2008.11.20)
改装素材: When travelling in a foreign country, the tourists may violate the local customs, because they have no knowledge about these. Some people have prejudice against the customs that are different from their own. Because of the cultural difference, the tourists’ behavior may be misunderstood by local people. In some cases, it may lead to tension or conflict. Therefore, it seems very difficult to be a responsible tourist.

雅思2015年写作真题(中英文对照版)

雅思2015年写作真题(中英文对照版)

雅思2015年写作真题

2015.1.10

The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 一个组织中的管理者或者领导者通常是老人。但一些人认为年轻人也可以当领导。你在多大程度上同意或不同意这种观点?

2015.1.17

Some people think that the amount of noise people make have to be controlled strictly, others say that people are free to make as much as they wish. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 有人认为人类制造噪音的数量应该被严格限制,有人认为这是他们的自由。讨论双方观点并给出你的观点。

2015.1.29

Nowadays, both scientists and tourists can go to remote natural environments such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 现如今科学家和游客都可以去遥远的自然环境比如南极,你认为这种发展的优势是否超过了劣势?

雅思哥6篇小作文推送

雅思哥6篇小作文推送

雅思哥6篇小作文推送

1、曲线图(剑7 Test2 W1)

The graph below show the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979and 2004.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph illustrates changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.

In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams).

However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams,

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题 4: Nowadays, international tourism has become a very large industry.
Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding
between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or
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may be misunderstood by local people. In some cases, it may lead to tension or conflict.
改装素材: Another problem is that tourists may cause damage to the scenic spots. Tourists are likely to show inappropriate behavior in their tour. Sometimes they make loud noise just to show their excitement. They take photos in the museum, although this is not allowed. They sleep on the bench of the park only because they are too tired. They litter because they cannot find the dustbin. Their behavior is understandable, but it may leave a bad impression with local people.
好处 1. 个人增长见识,丰富生活 2. 发展当地经济 3. 促进文化交流 弊端 1. 破坏环境 2. 导致文化冲突
源素材 # The rapid development of international tourism may cause damage to the local environment. Some scenic spots are very popular and every year they are visited by a huge number of tourists. The local government has to build more facilities to accommodate so many tourists. Some tourists show inappropriate behavior, like shouting or littering in their tour. As a result, the natural scenery is damaged.
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lead to tension or conflict. If tourists follow local customs, these problems can be avoided.
题 3:Responsible tourists could preserve both the local culture and environment.
Some people think it is impossible to be a responsible tourist. To what extent
do you agree or disagree?
(2013.12.07)
同意
1. 不懂文化差异
Hale Waihona Puke Baidu
2. 容易破坏环境
不同意
即使如此,我们还是应当努力去做文明游客
原因 1.外来移民 2.通讯发达和交通便利 好处 1. 促进经济发展 2. 促进文化交流 弊端 文化差异导致误解和冲突
改装素材: Some people have prejudice against the customs that are different from their own. If people from different cultures live in the same country, it may lead to tension or conflict. Sometimes people do not know the cultural difference, and their behavior may be misunderstood by other people. Moreover, racial discrimination is a serious problem in many multicultural countries.
改装素材: When travelling in a foreign country, the tourists may violate the local customs, because they have no knowledge about these. Some people have prejudice against the customs that are different from their own. Because of the cultural difference, the tourists’ behavior may be misunderstood by local people. In some cases, it may lead to tension or conflict. Therefore, it seems very difficult to be a responsible tourist.
改装素材: Another problem is that tourists may cause damage to the scenic spots. Tourists are likely to show inappropriate behavior in their tour. Sometimes they make loud noise just to show their excitement. They take photos in the museum, although this is not allowed. They sleep on the bench of the park only because they are too tired. They litter because they cannot find the dustbin. Their behavior is understandable, but they have become irresponsible tourists.
disagree?
(2004.04.03)
同意(造成了紧张) 1. 游客违反了当地习俗 2. 游客破坏了环境 不同意(增进了理解) 促进了交流和沟通,增进了理解
源素材可直接使用# When travelling in a foreign country, the tourists may violate the local customs, because they have no knowledge about these. Some people have prejudice or discrimination against the customs that are different from their own. Because of the cultural difference, some of the tourists’ behavior
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喧哗:Shouting 扔垃圾:Littering 自然景观:Natural scenery
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# When travelling in a foreign country, the tourists may violate the local customs, because they have no knowledge about these. Some people have prejudice or discrimination against the customs that are different from their own. Because of the cultural difference, some of the tourists’ behavior may be misunderstood by local people. In some cases, it may lead to tension or conflict.
题 2: Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. (剑 6-3)
# 在国外旅游的时候,游客可能会违反当地的习俗,因为他们对此缺乏了解。有 些人对于不同的习俗会有偏见或者歧视。因为文化差异,游客的某些行为 可能会被当地人误解。在某些情况下,有可能会导致紧张和冲突。
实用词汇
违反习俗: Violate the customs 缺乏了解:have no knowledge about 有偏见: Have prejudice against 歧视:Discrimination 文化差异: Cultural difference 误解: Misunderstand 关系紧张: Tension 冲突: Conflict
# 国际旅游的快速发展可能会损害当地的环境。有些景点非常受欢迎,每年都有 大量的游客去参观。当地政府必须修建更多的设施去接纳这些游客。有些游客在 旅游的时候表现出不文明行为,比如喧哗、扔垃圾,结果破坏了自然景观。
实用词汇 损害: Cause damage to 景点:Scenic spots 受欢迎:Popular 设施: Facilities 接纳: Accommodate 不恰当行为:Inappropriate behavior
题 5: Many countries now have people from different cultures and ethnic groups. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development? (2012.10.13)
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题 1:International tourism has been developing very fast in the past few decades. Do the advantages of the increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages? (2008.11.20)
正方 1. 表示对当地文化的尊重,避免误解和冲突 2. 个人获得更好的体验,更深刻了解当地文化 反方 1. 表示对外地人的宽容和理解,吸引更多游客 2. 促进文化多样性
改装素材: Some people have prejudice against the customs that are different from their own. Following local customs and behavior is a good way for tourists to show respect for the local culture. Because of the cultural difference, the tourists’ behavior may be misunderstood by local people. In some cases, it may
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