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2024雅思写作IELTSWriting课件
雅思写作是雅思考试中的一部分，主要评估考生的英语写作能力。
Task 1通常要求考生根据所给图表或数据写一篇报告，主要考察考生的数据分析和描述能力；Task 2则要求考生就某一话题发表自己的看法，主要考察考生的议论和表达能力。
雅思写作考试要求考生在限定时间内完成两篇作文，分别是Task 1和Task 2。
雅思写作考试简介0102雅思写作评分标准主要包…任务完成情况、语法和拼写、词汇使用、句子结构和连贯性。
任务完成情况评估考生是否按照题目要求完成了写作任务，是否清晰地回答了题目中的问题。
语法和拼写评估考生的语法和拼写是否正确、准确，是否影响了读者的理解。
词汇使用评估考生使用的词汇是否丰富、准确，是否能够恰当地表达自己的意思。
句子结构和连贯性评估考生的句子结构是否多样、复杂，是否使用了恰当的连接词和过渡语，使文章更加连贯和流畅。
030405雅思写作评分标准03要求考生根据所给的图表或数据写一篇报告，分析数据并得出结论。
常见的图表类型包括柱状图、折线图、饼图等。
图表作文要求考生就某一话题发表自己的看法，并给出理由和证据支持自己的观点。
常见的话题包括教育、环境、科技、社会等。
议论文要求考生在一篇文章中同时完成图表分析和议论两种任务，既需要描述数据又需要发表自己的观点。
这种题型对考生的综合能力要求较高。
混合类型作文雅思写作题型介绍审题与立意仔细阅读题目，理解题意在写作前，务必认真阅读题目，确保完全理解题目的要求和限制。
确定文章主题和观点根据题目要求，明确文章的主题和要表达的观点，确保立意明确、不跑题。
列出要点和论据在审题和立意的基础上，列出文章的主要要点和支持观点的论据，为写作做好准备。
03注意段落内部的逻辑关系在每个段落内部，要注意句子之间的逻辑关系，确保段落内部的连贯性和一致性。
01合理安排段落根据文章的主题和要点，合理安排段落，确保文章结构清晰、层次分明。
02使用合适的转折词和连接词在段落之间和句子之间使用合适的转折词和连接词，使文章更加连贯、流畅。
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Poverty is one of the most important problems many developing countries face. However, what types of international aids are more effective for them is a controversial issue. In my view, what the poor countries need most is not financial aid or loans, but advanced technologies and talents in some key areas.
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Moreover, the developed countries can not only send expert teams to poor nations to build roads, dams, factories and other infrastructures, but train talents and experts for them. The rich countries can provide scholarship or financial help to the students from the poor regions, which some famous western universities are actually doing. It is a wiser way to deliver help.
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❖ A museum is a good place where tourists can appreciate the local and better understand the local history.
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❖ Who is qualified to be the censor remains an issue of controversy.
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❖ 什么是分级制度 ❖ 分级制度指的是某一组织根据一定的原则把
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❖ （三）连接代词who, whom, whose, what, which等wh-词既充当连接词，连接主句和从 句，又在从句中担当一定的语法成分，做主 语、宾语或者是补语。
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❖ 现阶段人们更加关心的是政府能否能够创造 更多的就业机会。
❖ 关心：be concerned with; care for;
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❖ 取得巨大成功的人，毫无例外，都是善于利 用零碎时间的人。
❖ 毫无例外：with no exception ❖ 利用：utilize ❖ 零碎时间：odd moments ❖ 善于：wisely; be good at; be wise in
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新东方雅思写作讲义Last revision on 21 December 2020雅思写作完全攻略Total Solution of IELTS Writing俞伟国－2009－雅思考试作文部分题型课时安排：Marking SystemEssay WritingIntroductionBodyConclusionStructureReport Writing近年雅思考试中国大陆考区作文部分得分情况(From Mat Clark)Band4 or below: 15%-20% Band5: 60% Band6: 15%-20% Band7: <5% Band8 or above: RareKey Language Features in Marking SystemTask Response:1. No evidence of digression/irrelevant content2. Adequate Words3. Position + Supporting Ideas + DevelopmentCoherence and Cohesion1.Logical overall structure2.Topic Sentence3.Cohesive devicesLexical Resource1.Accurateness2.Authentic Vocabulary (Less-common Vocabulary)3.VarietyGrammatical Range and Accuracy1.Accuratenessplex Sentence3.Variety欢迎光临俞老师的BLOG:Chapter One－Essay Writing第一章. 议论文完全攻略____________________________________________________________________________ _______________________Part One－Introduction－闪亮开篇－－Version －Structure of Introduction1. Background Information(1). Lead-in Sentence (Introduce the subject of the topic)(2). Public Opinion2. Statement (State your position)1．主体背景（Background Information）(1) In the last century, the first man walking on the moon said: “It is a big step for mankind”. However, some people think it ma de______________________________, when________________________________________________________________for the first time, he _____________________________________________________ that it was a great step for mankind. Nowadays, however, some people believe that it actually_____________________________________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase方法之一－具体化 (笼统概念－缩小范围)(2) Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizers and better machinery. However, some people think the methods used to do this may have negative effects on local communities and be dangerous to human health.Nowadays people can _______________ food far more ________________________________________ more _______________ fertilizers and machinery. Nevertheless, some people hold the methods used may____________________________________________________________________________ ________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase 方法之二－单词转换（优先考虑三大词类：）Paraphrase方法之三－句型转换（方法1 ）(方法2 )(3) Many people say teachers should only teach students academic subjects；Others say teachers should also take the responsibility of teaching students to judge what is right and wrong.Some people hold the opinion that___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________While some argue that____________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________Language Skill: 句型转换 (方法3 )(4) Some people believe that air travel should be prohibited as it uses up fuel resources and causes pollution. Do you agree or disagree with the statement You should use your own experience to supportyour argument.According to some __________, air travel should be_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase思路顺序：单词转换>句型转换>具体化(5Some people propose that___________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法4 )(6). In modern society, there are more and more old people, do you think its benefits outweigh its disadvantages____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________Language Skill:信息量偏少的Topic Introduction写作对策追根溯源法－ Factor(s) [因]－Phenomenon (Subject) [果]2. 总论点(Statement)Topic－If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punishedAverage Example：In my opinion, the parents should not be punished.Decent Example：In my opinion, the parents should not be punished except that (unless) they are those who purposefully teach the child to behave badly.Topic－Some people think that it is beneficial for students to go to private secondary schools. But others feel that it has negative effects on them. Discuss the both viewpoints From my point of view, it is an ideal choice to send children to private middle schools______________________________Exercise1: Topic－Should college students be allowed to get married________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Language Skill:句型转换 (方法5 ) Exercise2: Topic－Should college students be encouraged to take up part-time jobs________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Language Skill:句型转换 (方法6 )3. Report－Introduction写作对策Today, the phenomenon that_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________has aroused growing concern.In my opinion, a lot of factors contribute to the problem and in this article, I would like to_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________*This phenomenon, as far as I am concerned, can be attributed to the following causes, whichcould be regarded as the apple of discord.Structure of Report Introduction1. Lead-in Sentence (Paraphrase the first sentence in the topic)2. Plan A: Essay StatementPlan B: Linking SentenceExercise1:Exercise2: Topic－Pressure on the school and university students is increasing andstudents are pushed to studyExercise3: Topic－欢迎光临俞老师的BLOG:Part Two－Body－中流砥柱－－Version －分论点的要求：1.字数要求：One complex sentence preferred. Around 20 words. 2. 分论点四项基本原则：(1). 内容原则：分论点应该体现为一种_____________________________并且与总论点为_________________关系。
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雅思写作强化时间：一个小时，无法超时上午九点考试，写作往往是11点开始考。
一般学生考到这里的时候就蒙了。
雅思写作考试是国内考试时间最长的一个，比托福等都长。
图表作文只占了1/3的分数，那议论文就占了2/3。
G类也要按A类要求去做。
Academic writing 的特殊要求1.Some teachers don't know how to use computers to help the students effectively. 不能用缩写，凡是用了缩写的都是业余选手，专业选手必须要用，do not.. Shouldn't 也是错的，特别提醒大家，cannot 中间没有空格。
如果你不相信我说的话，我建议你可以翻下剑5剑6，一个缩写你都找不到。
2.Historic buildings attracts lots of visitors and can improve local economy. 大家觉得哪个是口语词汇。
其中lots of 是特别口语化词汇，可以用numerous或者a host of 这两个单词修饰可数名词。
A great deal of 不可数。
3.The impact of tourism on these neighbourhoods should be analyzed. 下次你看到任何-ze 结尾的都是美式英语，-se 结尾的都是英式英语，而这里的neighbourhood 是英式英语，而neighborhood是美式英语，有些同学会问是不是雅思考试当中只能用英式英语呢？不是这样的，在剑桥6中明确说了可以用英语或美式，但两者不能混合使用。
我建议大家-our -se 是英式的，-or -ze 是美式的，这两者的区别是最常见的，其他的我们就没有必要掌握了。
4.Children in wealthy families are more and more depend on their parents.这里哪里不像学术写作呢。
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是不是一上来就学习官方满分范文？读写互通学习范文的正确方法，是不是要读，要背很多范文？自成风格什么是模板？要不要学习模板？如何形成自己的写作风格？正确审题，不再跑偏，高分从这里开始5分钟认真审题，构思，写提纲。
高手审题4大技能12-12-08More men and women decide to have children later in life. Why is it happening? What influences does it have on society and family life?原因1.现代人均寿命增长，生育期相应延后；2.社会竞争压力大，选择事业收入稳定后生孩子。
影响1.父母与孩子的年龄差会变大，交流中代沟会明显；2.会出现劳动力缺口，老龄化社会。
In order to learn a language well, we should learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some industrialised countries have serious environmental problems. The damage to the environment is an inevitable result when a country tends to improve the standard of living. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people said the government should not spend money on building theaters and sports stadiums. Instead, it should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?In the last century when a human astronaut first arrived on the Moon he said “it is a big step for m ankind” but some people think it makes little difference to our daily life. To what extent to you agree or disagree?II.十五句语法句型对应推荐读写互通，剑桥经典句型语法集锦剑81.1 The revolutionary aspect of this new timekeeper was neither the descending weight that provided its motive force nor the gear wheels (which had been around for at least 1,300 years) that transferred the power; it was the part called the escapement.1.3 Some researchers say the results constitute compelling evidence that telepathy is genuine. Other parapsychologists believe that the field is on the brink of collapse, having tried to produce definitive scientific proof and failed. Sceptics and advocates alike do concur on one issue, however, that the most impressive evidence so far has come from the so-called ‘ganzfeld’ experiments, a German term that means ‘whole field’.2.2 The Little Ice Age was far from a deep freeze, however; rather an irregular seesaw of rapid climatic shifts, few lasting more than a quarter-century, driven by complex and still little understood interactions between the atmosphere and the ocean.2.3 While it is true that the olfactory powers of humans are nothing like as fine as those possessed by certain animals, they are still remarkably acute.3.3 It follows from the above that sparing use of energy reserves should tend to extend life.3.1 Discussion now centres on whether the route through the maze is communicated as a'left-right' sequence of turns or as a 'compass bearing and distance' message.3.3 Forests are one of the main elements of our natural heritage. The decline of Europe's forests over the last decade and a half has led to an increasing awareness and understanding of the serious imbalances which threaten them.4.2 The MSC has established a set of criteria by which commercial fisheries can be judged.4.3 It was found that children from the noisy schools had higher blood pressure and were more easily distracted than those who attended the quiet schools. Moreover, there was no evidence of adaptability to the noise. In fact, the longer the children had attended the noisy schools, the more distractible they became.剑61.2 Theoretically, in the world of trade, shipping costs do not matter. Goods, once they have been made, are assumed to move instantly and at no cost from place to place. The real world, however, is full of frictions.1.3 Some scientists doubt the value of traditional knowledge because the occupation of the Arctic doesn't go back far enough. Others, however, point out that the first weather stations in the far north date back just 50 years.2.1 It is common for supporters of road networks to reject the models of cities with good public transport by arguing that such systems would not work in their particular city.2.3 Perhaps the most fundamental step in developing a sense of number is not the ability to count, but rather to see that a number is really an abstract idea instead of a simple attachment to a group of particular objects.3.1 But it is worth trying, for to understand the initial shock of those images is to understand the extraordinary power and magic of cinema, the unique, hypnotic quality3.3 The monkey projects demonstrate that, compared with control animals that eat normally, caloric-restricted monkeys have lower body temperatures and levels of the pancreatic hormone insulin, and they retain more youthful levels of certain hormones that tend to fall with age.4.3 The more effort put in and the wider the whole school involvement, the more substantial the results are likely to be.剑51.3 （媒体负面）People are clearly more curious about bad news than good. Newspapers and broadcasters are there to provide what the public wants. That, however, can lead to significant distortions of perception.2.1 The impetus behind the development of these early plastics was generated by a number of factors - immense technological progress in the domain of chemistry, coupled with wider cultural changes, and the pragmatic need to find acceptable substitutes for dwindling supplies of 'luxury' materials such as tortoiseshell and ivory.2.3 There were several reasons why original science continued to be written in Latin. The first wassimply a matter of audience.A third reason why the writing of original science in English was delayed may have been to do with the linguistic inadequacy of English in the early modern period.3.2 According to Siegel, international environmental organisations are beginning to pay closer attention to the region, partly because of the problems of erosion and pollution of the Nile delta, but principally because they fear the impact this situation could have on the whole Mediterranean coastal ecosystem. But there are no easy solutions.4.1 （开发旅游业）The market for tourism in remote areas is booming as never before. Countries all across the world are actively promoting their 'wilderness' regions - such as mountains, Arctic lands, deserts, small islands and wetlands — to high-spending tourists.剑42.1 （语言习得）What makes a language endangered is not just the number of speakers, but how old they are.Language is also intimately bound up with culture, so it may be difficult to preserve one without the other.2.2 Part of the incentive was financial, Dr Laver said. The bottom line is that most general practitioners are business people. If they see potential clientele going elsewhere, they might want to be able to offer a similar service.'3.1 Many children may choose entrepreneurship because it allows them a degree of independence, is less exploitative than many forms of paid-employment, and is flexible enough to allow them to participate in other activities such as education and domestic task.4.1 No one theory can explain improvements in performance, but the most important factor has been genetics.Identifying genetically talented individuals is only the first step.4.3 The problem of how health-care resources should be allocated or apportioned, so that they are distributed in both the most just and most efficient way, is not a new one.写作提纲中立观点，两者皆可，个人选择。
九分学长雅思写作讲义
九分学长雅思写作讲义
1. 内容涵盖：
九分学长雅思写作讲义可能会包括对于雅思写作任务1和任务2的详细讲解。
对于任务1，讲义可能会介绍如何描述图表、流程图、地图等不同类型的数据，并给出范例和写作技巧。
对于任务2，讲义可能会涵盖不同类型的题目，如讨论型、观点对比型、问题解决型等，以及如何构思和组织文章结构。
2. 写作技巧：
讲义可能会介绍一些写作技巧，比如如何避免常见的语法错误、如何使用丰富多样的词汇和句式结构、如何进行段落间的衔接等。
此外，还可能包括如何在有限的时间内高效地完成写作任务，以及如何提高写作的逻辑性和连贯性等方面的建议。
3. 范文解析：
九分学长雅思写作讲义可能会提供一些高分范文的解析，分析范文的优点之处，比如论点的合理性、论证的充分性、语言的表
达准确性等，帮助考生了解什么样的表达方式和思路可以得到高分。
4. 常见题型分析：
讲义可能会对雅思写作常见的题型进行分析，比如环境类、
教育类、社会类等，指导考生如何应对不同类型的题目，以及如何
找到合适的论据和例子支撑自己的观点。
总的来说，九分学长雅思写作讲义是一份全面系统的教学材料，旨在帮助考生全面提高雅思写作的能力，从而取得更好的成绩。
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写作强化阶段讲义吴浩Georgewuhaoielts@wuhaoielts20128243559学习目标：1.全面地了解IELTS写作2.明确IELTS写作的要求3.了解议论文的分类和主要类型的文章结构4.掌握一种有效的句子构成法：四步句子速成法5.了解各种图表作文的特征和各类图表的典型写作句型6.熟悉各个话题的实用词汇和短语第一讲：第一部分：IELTS写作概述An overview of the IELTS writing test 解决三个问题：1.What: What is the format of the IELTS writing test?Components of the writing test: task writingTask 1: to write a summary of some graphic or pictorial information.Data：line chart, pie chart, bar chart, table, mixture●Facts: flow chart, maps Task 2: to produce a written argument on a given topic.●Opinion: A/B(option A/option B), A/D(advantages/disadvantages) ●Solution: Causes, Effects, Solutions 2.Why: Why is the test designed in this way?The nature and goal of each task Task one FormNature Goal Report Objective To help the readers to understand the tableTask two Form Nature Goal EssaySubjective To convince the readers 3.How: How to achieve the writing goal of each task?The criteria of the writing test Content ：essential components of your response complete &relevant 1.an overview of the general trends Task 1 2.a summary or description of the key features in the graph or diagram 设技术题，而且可保障各类管路习题到位。
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讲解内容ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ • 雅思写作概述 • Task 2议论文概述 • 辩论型题目之一边倒结构
雅思写作概述
• 60分钟 分钟 • Task 1 150w G: letter A: graph 1/3 • Task 2 250w Essay 2/3
Task 2议论文概述
• • • • • • 一、字数、时间 字数、 250-300 words 35m 二、三大命题形式 1.Argumentation辩论型题目 1.Argumentation辩论型题目 70% 2.Explanation 解释型题目 20% 3.Others 其他型题目 10%
argumentation 辩论型题目
4段 结构二 对称式结构 段 • 一、开头段 2-4句 句 • 二、二、三段 14句左右 句左右 • 1句概述+3*2 1句概述 句概述+3*2 • 四、结尾段 3-5句 句
Explanation解释型题目写法
原因（and 办法） 结构一 基本同一边倒结构 • 开头 • r1 • r2 • （r3） • solutions
Task 2议论文概述
四要素作文法) 三、评分标准(四要素作文法 评分标准 四要素作文法 • Task • Organization • Idea • Language
argumentation 辩论型题目
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新东方雅思写作讲义
新东方雅思写作讲义新东方雅思写作讲义第一部分：写作基础知识介绍（500字）1. 什么是雅思写作？雅思写作是雅思考试的一项重要组成部分，涵盖了一系列的写作任务，包括图表描述、图表解释、观点阐述等。
写作考试的目的是测试考生的语言表达能力、逻辑思维能力和写作组织能力。
2. 准备雅思写作需要注意的事项- 掌握基本写作技巧：如如何概括图表信息、如何展开论述、如何论证观点等。
- 增强写作词汇量：扩展词汇储备，提升表达准确性和多样性。
- 阅读大量范文：学习优秀范文的写作结构、句式使用和观点论证方式。
- 练习写作：进行频繁的写作练习，提高写作速度和思维流畅度。
3. 雅思写作评分标准雅思写作总分为9分，分为四个维度对写作进行评分：任务响应（Task Response）、语言表达（Coherence and Cohesion）、词汇使用（Lexical Resource）和语法准确性（Grammar Range and Accuracy）。
考生需在这四个方面都达到一定的水平才能取得高分。
第二部分：写作技巧及范文分析（1000字）1. 图表描述类写作图表描述类写作是雅思写作的常见形式，考察考生对图表信息的表达能力。
常见的图表形式有柱状图、饼状图、折线图和表格等。
在写作时，考生需要概括图表信息并进行详细描述，同时还要注意使用适当的语言连接词来连接句子和段落。
范文分析：柱状图描述了1990年至2000年间英国人口变化趋势。
从图中可以看出，英国人口总数在这十年间一直在增加，但增长速度有所波动。
具体来说，1990年英国人口为52.4百万，而2000年则达到了58.6百万，增长了大约11.8%。
在这十年间最大的增长出现在1997年，而最小的增长出现在1991年。
因此，可以看出英国人口的变化是不稳定的。
2. 图表解释类写作图表解释类写作是考察考生对图表信息的解读能力。
此类题型通常以饼状图、表格或流程图为主要形式，考生需要从中找出关键信息，并进行准确解释。
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A 不要让词汇表限制思路，想素材时仍然用思考素材的四种方法； B 一个类别的词汇也可能用在其他类别，比如transform（变革,及物动词）被列在technology类里，但是也可以用在讨论development类的话 题里； C 注意词汇的用法：noun 名词vt 及物动词 vi 不及物动词 adj 形容词 adv 副词 BrE 表示该单词使用的是英式拼写； D “ / ”符号表示前一个词和后一个词都可以用，任选一个即可;画横线的单词为7分或7分以上词汇 Education: 1) 传授知识：impart(vt)/inculcate(vt) knowledge灌输高尚的道德观念：instill(vt) high moral values（注意values复数表示价值观）给学生以动 力 give the students motivation to do sth.或者motivate（vt） the students to do sth. 给学生以灵感 stimulate the students’ thought 或者 give the students inspiration 培养（某种素质） cultivate / foster / nurture (vts)促进学生身心的发展 promote the student’s physical,mental(或者 用intellectual) and emotional development 心理健康 psychological soundness/well-being/welfare(adjs) 塑造某人的性格mould(BrE,vt) one’s character责任感 a sense of obligation 能力（先天就有的） aptitude/talent 能力（后天学习得到的）ability / skill 2) 学生接受的学校教育(名词) schooling(noun)儿童接受的家庭教育（名词）upbringing(noun)教学法 teaching methodology / pedagogical methodology 用填鸭式教学教育学生 force-feed(vt) the students 学生不应该只是被动的接收简单知识的容器 Students should not be treated as passive receptacles of predigested ideas. 死记硬背 learn things by rote 为了记忆而记忆 memorise(BrE) for memorisation’s own sake 记忆方程式，公式，定理，定律 memorise(vt) equations, formulas, theorems and laws(nouns) 应用 apply (vt) 盲从 follow something blindly/indiscriminately(advs)限制创造力的发展 extinguish (vt)/ stifle(vt) /constrain(vt) creativity(noun) 打击学生的积极性 dampen/sap(vts) the students’ enthusiasm或者frustrate the students 产生不必要的压力 beget / create undue pressure
环球雅思写作强化讲义
1 Smoking is just a personal choice rather than a moral issue. （主语可以是动名词，不定式和从句）2 Nowadays, more and more people agree that gambling is an unhealthy hobby. （谓语只能是动词）3 Junk food impairs people’s health （impair 是破坏的意思，固定搭配health，宾语的组成成分和主语完全一样。
）4 In recent years, the Internet has been gaining in popularity at an amazing rate.（定语，这也是个常用词汇）5 Outdoor activities can greatly improve our health.（状语，修饰动词，修饰形容词，或是修饰整个句子的词都可以叫做状语。
）6 Shopping, an necessary activity in everyday life, is far more convenient in the city than in the country. （同位语，并不是修饰这个名词，而是把这个名词的成分展开来说，是补充说明）7 I found the employment situation disappointing. （补语，动词加名词，加形容词或分词，是常见的一种结构）正确使用四种特殊句式a 状语提前Obviously, if elderly people live at home, their children can take care of them and they feel lesslonely.Overall, （雅思考官在结尾段的最爱）the function of a building is more important to a buildingthan its appearance.I am fond of the Western culture. Specifically, I think the French culture is really second to none.Most importantly, the government should make sure that citizens can improve their lives.In terms of attitude, Teddy Bear is a very good teacher. （明显让句子变的更灵活，放在句中的话，没有这么好的感觉。
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IELTS INTERMEDIATE WRITINGBY SOPHIELecture One: Agree or DisagreeEnvironmental problems are so big that they can not be solved by any country or person alone. Instead, it should be solved at international level.To what extent do u agree or disagree?1+2+1+1(正方两个原因及一个反驳段)Environmental degradation has been recognised as one of the main challenges that we have to overcome in the 21st century. The rapid deterioration of environmental problems are believed to have posed serious threat to our survival. To address this concern, countries worldwide should join forces ,instead of working individually for their own targets. 主旨句People support international cooperation for two reasons. The first point is that the impact of environmental problems is normally on a global scale. it is common knowledge that we share the same biosphere , whose components are interrelated（解释）. For example, a stream in one country can be polluted by sewage dumped by its neighboring country（举例子）.in other words, one country’s efforts can be futile if other countries are not involved(结果) .It also should be noted that some countries do not have adequate resources (including capital and technology)to reduce pollution, even though countries realize the importance of environmental protection. These countries ,therefore , can cooperate with developed countries ,introduce technologies, draw on experience so as to implement environmentally-friendly policies continuously(阐释结果) .Despite the importance of international cooperation, countries should take the initiative to implement some changes. it is fair to say that countries are confronted with different environmental problems（解释原因）.For instance, greenhouse gas emissions in china are mainly created by the electricity generation industry while those in the united states are primarily attributed to the increase in car use（例子）. The technologies and methods that are globally applicable may not be effective in some countries(结果). In addition , countries should enforce some environmental laws and raise citizens’ awareness so as to restore the environment.To summarize, countries should make a joint efforts not only because the ecosystem is a unified mechanism but because it can make optimal use of financial and human resources.Countries resource commitment is also important at a national and regional level.总结主题段讨论过的要点Key words and phrases1. environment 环境2.degradation 恶化3. deterioration 恶化4.survival 幸存5.challenge 挑战6.impact7.cooperation8.concern 让人担心的事物9.recognise 认出，认识到10.overcome 克服11.address 解决12.pollute 污染13.individually 单独地14.futile 徒劳无功的15.introduce 引进16.draw on 借鉴17.sewage 污水18.dump 倾倒19.attribute...to...把...归因于20.effective 有效的21.enforce 实施22.implement 实施，贯彻23.awareness 意识24.adequate 充足的25.resource26.capital 资金27.despite28.be involved 参与29.join forces共同努力30.in other words换句话说31.it also should be noted32.pose threat to33.it is common knowledgeponents 组成元素35.take the initiative主动36.it is fair to say that37.be confronted with 遇到38.greenhouse gas emissions39.make a joint efforts共同努力40. make use of41.technologyThesis Statement===全文的中心论点TS===段落中心句HoweverAD型To what extent do you agree or disagree?题目论述合理性较强第一段：明确给出自己的倾向性观点。
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• 2.有些动词加不定式作宾语或者宾语补足语，如want, expect, encourage, advise,persuade, cause, urge,force,等。
• The aim of this campaign is to encourage young people be responsible for their driving.
• Public disorder can lead to a country's economic crisis.
• 3'有一些词既可以作介词也可以做连词（跟句子）比如for, since, after,before.等
• Traditional buildings are desired sometimes,for the simple reason is that they are of commercial and cultural values.
和这个名词或者代词在逻辑上形成动宾关系。此时如果不定 式短语中的动词是不及物动词，需要加上相应的介词。
• The rise of single parenthood is difficult for any society to deal.
• The rise of single parenthood is difficult for any society to deal with.
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刘洪波雅思写作真经班
四段式 前提： 1. 中立 2. 句子间逻辑清晰 3. 正反双方各2个论据
刘洪波雅思写作真经班
四段式 前提： 1. 中立 2. 语法好，句子间逻辑清晰 3. 正反双方各2个论据
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刘洪波雅思写作真经班
In conclusion, it is clear that at least 93% of farmland degradation worldwide was related to human activities in 1990s and although the dominant cause varies in different continents, Europe suffered most during that period.
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IELTS Writing Lecture 4
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刘洪波雅思写作真经班
刘洪波雅思写作真经班
刘洪波雅思写作真经班
Poverty is one of the most important problems many developing countries face. However, what types of international aids are more effective for them is a controversial issue. In my view, what the poor countries need most is not financial aid or loans, but advanced technologies and talents in some key areas.
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雅思强化写作精讲班第4讲讲义有效避免7种语法错误有效避免7种语法错误1 Employee can benefit more from telecommuting than employer.2.1 Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.2.2 Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.2.3The problems that are created by environmental contamination is very hard to resolve.2.4 Many students are very like studying home economics.2.5 In present-day society, cultures were becoming very similar.3 Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers.4.1 Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalisation may create.4.2 The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms.5 Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.6 Some people think the Internet only has positive impact, other people think it also has negative influence on our lives.7 There are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and enjoyment.高分范文讲解范文讲解In Britain, when some people get old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. The government has to pay for his care. Who should be responsible for our old people? Give reasons for your answer.Example 2 Band 8One of the most challenging problems of today’s society is the question about who should be responsible for our old people. It is not only a problem with money but also a question of the system we want our society to have. In my essay, I would like to present four possible models.Firstly, the company could be responsible for its retired employees. To do this, a special fund could be established. The advantage of this model is that if one believes in the capitalist system, it should be the cheapest solution. One possible problem is that the companies may have competition disadvantage due to higher staff costs.A second solution is that the government has to take the responsibility for the old people’s care. It can finance this with its tax in comes. Actually, this is the most democratic model since everybody gets as much money as he or she needs. Unfortunately, as the present situation in our country shows, this solution seems not to work very well.The government can no longer afford to support all the old peoples.Another way of solving the problem is to give back the responsibility to the individual, which means that everybody has to save money during their working life for the live after their retirement. This seems to be not a very fair model because there will certainly be people who can’t afford to save part of their salary; therefore, the government would have to care for them.A last solution is to go back to the old model of the “big family who cares for all their members. I do not think this is possible in our days society because the family structures have changed.To sum up, I have to admit that I cannot find a really good solution for this problem. All models have both advantages and disadvantages. Certainly we have to think about this topic much more in the future.雅思考官9分范文Writing Task 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced?It is true that in almost every country today each family produces a large amount of waste every week. Most of the rubbish comes from the packaging of the things we buy, such as processed food. However, even if we buy food without packaging, we still produce rubbish from the plastic bags that are used everywhere.The first reason why we have so much packaging is that we consume so much more every day than families did in the past. Also, convenience is very important in modern life; therefore, we buy packaged food that can be transported over long distances and store it until we need it, at first in the supermarket, then at home.Further, the amount of waste produced is also a result of our habit of using something once and throw it away. We forget that even the cheapest plastic bag has used valuable resources and energy. Above all, we also forget that it is a source of pollution and difficult to deal with.Therefore, I think that governments need to raise this awareness in the general public. Children should be educated about environmental issues at school while adults need to take action. Governments can encourage such action by collecting taxes on packaging, such as plastic bags and fining families and shops that do not try to recycle their waste.。