高考英语信件写作专题八-建议信-词句篇精讲
高考英语应用文常用句型:建议信
高考英语应用文常用句型:建议信
高考英语应用文常用句型:建议信
I am writing to express my views concerning... 我
写此信来表达我关于……的观点。
You have asked me for my advice about...,and I
will try to make some conducive suggestions. 对于你来
信问我关于……的事,现提供几条有益的建议。
I would like to suggest that... 我建议……
Why not.../Why don't you...?为何不……?
I think it will be a good idea/more beneficial if you could... 我认为……是个好方法/有利的。
It's important to.../It helps to...It should be a good idea to... 很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。
I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning... 我提出几条有关于……的建议。
Please take good consideration of my advice.Thanks. 请仔细考虑我的建议,谢谢。
Thank you for your attention. 感谢你对此事的关注。
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高考英语作文建议信
高考英语作文建议信高考英语作文建议信(精选12篇)在日常学习、工作或生活中,大家总少不了接触作文吧,根据写作命题的特点,作文可以分为命题作文和非命题作文。
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高考英语作文建议信篇1Dear president,I am writing to express my views concerning the way to improve student’s physical condition. I understand that you pay much attention to it for a long period of time.First, it is necessary to improve student’s eating food. It is no doubt that food can provide us with a lot of energy to live every day. Therefore, a scientific and reasonable meal is important for us to become stronger and healthy. Second, exercise does good to student’s physical health. So the school should arrange enough physical education lessons for students. Last but not least, the school should advocate some necessary physical knowledge to students.Thank you for your consideration of my suggestions.Truly yours,Li Ming高考英语作文建议信篇2Dear Mr. Principal,I'm a senior student of our school. I'd like to say something about the canteen in our school.In general, the service is satisfactory. The hall is clean and tidy. The dishes tastes delicious. What's more, the workers there treat us as their friends, which makes us feel very happy.However, we feel the price of the meals is a little too high. Besides, we can all only have a limited variety of dishes with little changes every week. In addition, we often have to stand in line for a long time before we can get the meal. You could understand how precious time is to students. Therefore, may I suggest something be to solve the problems so that we can all enjoy our meals at school?Thanks for your consideration.Sincerely yoursLi Hua高考英语作文建议信篇3Dear President,I am a student of Class Seven, Grade Two of our school. I am writing to share some advices with you. We all know that study is the most important task for senior students, so it’s necessary for us to spend most of our time in study. However, proper rest is necessary for us as well. But in our school, we only have a short night to rest, which I think it’s not good to us.I did a survey in our school that collect the ideas about having a longer rest every week. Almost all students say that they need more time to rest and relax. Therefore, according the opinions of our students, I would like to advise that set an afternoon and a night for students to have a good rest. Proper rest can help students focus on study better. I will be more than happy that you could accept the suggestion.Sincerely yours,Canny高考英语作文建议信篇4Dear Lily:I think you had better feed a hamster,the trendiest kind ofpet these days is the small hamster. People like them because they are quiet and clean. I have a hamster named Tom,it's very cute and easy to take care of,and it's cheaper than rabbits or cats,so I bought it. She's my best company,because she reads books and listens to music with me every night.However,life with a hamster isn't always perfect,she sometimes noisy at night ,she love sleep all day,too. So,sometimes she is very boring! How do you think?Sincerely yours,Canny高考英语作文建议信篇5Dear Headmaster,I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities. Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music. And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well.As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice. What’s more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time.Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!Yours sincerely,Liu Bo高考英语作文建议信篇6Dear editor,I have read many articles on the school magazine. I find that almost all the essays on the school magazine are about the daily trifles in the campus. It is good for us to know the whole things in the campus. But I think if there are some articls about current affairs andlearning methods must be better. Current affairs can open students’ eyes to kno w more about the world. Sharing learning methods can help some students find the best way for themselves to study.I hope you will find these proposals useful and put into effect as soon as possible.Yours Sincerely,Li Lei高考英语作文建议信篇7Dear Mr. President,I am writing to put forward some suggestions concerning the ways to improve student’s physical condition in your university. My proposals are as the following.First and foremost, I propose that we should take advantages of physical education classes on our campus, and not only educate students to realize the significance of the classes, but also to encourage students to take an active part in the classes. More importantly, we should attach importance to the role played by extra-curricular activates. For example, we could plan and organize a large number of such ball games as football games, basketball games and so on.It’s my honor to share my opinions concerned with you. If you could take my advice into consideration, I will be highly grateful.Sincerely yours,Li Ming高考英语作文建议信篇8Dear President,I am a student of Class Seven, Grade Two of our school.I am writing to share some advices with you. We all know that study is the most important task for senior students, so it’s necessary for us to spend most of our time in study. However, proper rest is necessary for us as well. But in our school, we only have a short night to rest, which I think it’s not good to us. I did a survey in our school that collect the ideas about having a longer rest every week. Almost all students say that they need more time to rest and relax. Therefore, according the opinions of our students, I would like to advise that set an afternoon and a night for students to have a good rest.Proper rest can help students focus on study better. I will be more than happy that you could accept the suggestion.Sincerely yours,Canny高考英语作文建议信篇9Dear master:I have some advise about our new class rules.I must say these rules are useful,and they are good.But to myself, I like listen to the music after class,but the first rule of our new class rule is "Don't listen to music or have snacks in classroom",it make me very sad.I don't think that listen to the music will influnceMy study life,what's more,it can relax myself.So I think we can listen to the music after class,of course,weWon't continu it to the next class.And other part,I'd love to play basketball,it's good to our health,but if we " Don't stay at school after 4:30 p.m. ",I will have no time to play basketball.I have troubles on these parts,and I think it present many students' problems,so I want to be gave answers,thank you.I hope our new class rules can make our class rise to a higher place.Sincerely yours,Canny高考英语作文建议信篇10Directions:Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address.To Whom It May Concern,I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to spend my spare time. Generally speaking, the services you offer here are quite good; however, I have some suggestions for you to adopt. And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration. To begin with, will you please prolong the time for reading? In the daytime, most of the students are having classes, so they can’t come to the library. Moreover, some of the books on shelves are out of date. If you are so kind as to provide us consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Ming高考英语作文建议信篇11Dear Wang Mei,I’m very glad to have received your e-mail.Now I’mwriting to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school. First of all,you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that 众所周知),vocabulary is of great importance / essential.You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud.What’s more,try to your classmates in English out of class.In this way you can improve your listening and spoken English st but not least,you should keeping a diary,which helps improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt.I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.Remember:where there is a will,there is a way./The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”.Yours sincerely,Li Ming高考英语作文建议信篇12Dear Editor-in-Chief,Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy.There are many advantages of Global Mirror. Firstly, Global Mirror covers both national and international news. By simply turning the pages, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad. Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them. In a word, thanks to Global Mirror, we are well-informed and keep up with the changing world.As a young student, I wish that I can be a master of English language. Therefore, I suggest that Global Mirror provide articles about English learning for us.Finally, I hope that Global Mirror will become more and more popular. Thank you for your time!Sincerely yours,Li Hua。
高中英语 高考应用文写作-建议信
写作-建议信一.推荐信结构第一段:简介自己,说明写作目的,注意语气;第二段:在肯定对方优点的基础上提出需要改进的地方,或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。
切忌别人以为你是在投诉,而不是提建议。
总结建议,注意礼貌,易于接受。
经典表达方式很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。
这样的问题是很正常的。
可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
1.I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite common. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。
我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
2.I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway.I would be more than happy to see improvement.在你来亲眼看到这些地方之前,你有必要读一些关于这些地方的书。
有了关于这些地方更多的知识,你将会更好的理解中国的历史和文化。
3.It’s necessary for you to read some books about these places before you come to seethem with your own eyes. With more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture.我已经收到了你的来信。
信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。
可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
4. I have received your letter saying you plan to pay a visit to China for ten days next month.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.我准备好和你进一步讨论这件事情。
高考英语写作分类训练:建议信
建议信1.假如你是李华,获悉中国日报(China Daily)将举办“最美中国”(Amazing China)手机摄影大赛。
请写封邮件建议你的美国留学生朋友George参加,邮件内容包括:1.作品要求:展示风土人情,附上作品名称;2.投稿方式与截止时间:12月30号前发邮件至3.表示愿意提供帮助。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯的;3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear George,How is everything going?_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________Yours,Li Hua 2.你是张伟的好朋友John ,张伟即将参加学校的英语朗诵比赛,向你求助,请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。
广东高考英语写作分类训练:建议信
建议信1.假定你是李华,在你班学习一个月的美国男孩Kavin不太适应这里生活,请给他回信。
内容包括:1. 表达安慰及写信目的;2. 提出建议及理由;3. 表示祝愿。
注意:1. 词数:80词左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:adapt oneself to适应于;express one’s comfort to sb.向某人表示安慰_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________2.假定你是李华,你的英国好友Angela写信告诉你她很不适应高中生活,感到很孤独。
请你根据以下要点,用英语给她回一封电子邮件。
1.注意学习方法,培养良好的学习习惯。
2.多交一些朋友,友情会使人忘记孤独。
3.积极参加各种活动,使自己的生活更加有趣。
注意:1.词数80左右2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________3.假如你是李华,你的网友Tom告诉你他即将外出旅行。
高考英语复习应用文建议信写作指导讲义
高考英语应用文建议信写作指导一、建议信写作1.写信原因及目的;2.提出具体建议并说明原因;3.希望采纳建议,表达美好祝愿。
二、建议信写作可用句式1.I'm sorry to hear that (you are having trouble in...) Such problems are quite normal.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.很遗憾得知(你在……遇到了麻烦)这样的问题很正常。
也许下面的建议是有帮助的。
2.You have asked me for advice with regard to/concerning...., and I’ll make some suggestions here.你问我关于....的建议,我在这里提出一些建议。
3.I’m more than delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on...我非常高兴收到你的来信,询问我对……的建议。
4.I’m writing to share my views on this problem, which I think may be helpful to you.我写信是为了分享我对这个问题的看法,我认为这可能对你有帮助。
5.I would like to make some constructive suggestions/offer you the following suggestions, hoping to help you.我想给你一些建设性的建议,希望能对你有所帮助。
6.I do hope/Hopefully, these suggestions will be of great used to you.我希望这些建议对你会有很大的帮助。
7.I sincerely hope that you’ll find my suggestions beneficial.我真诚地希望我的建议对你有帮助。
高考英语--建议信
3. 开头语已为你写出,不计入总词数。
Hi Worried,
I am sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The true is that everyone will have such a time when things seem to be going wrong , so there is no need to worry too much about it . The important thing for you is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything that you’ll regret later . Here are three useful tips:
4. 利用
__m__a_k_e__u_s_e_o__f ___________
5. 向某人征求意见__a_s_k_s_b_.__fo_r__a_d_v__ic_e_______
6. 制订计划
_m_a__k_e_a__p_l_a_n____________
7. 认为……有用
find…__h_e_l_p_f_u_l_/_u_s_e_fu__l/_b_e_n_e_f_i_c_ial
8. 参加
tak_e__p_a_r_t_i_n_/_p_a_r_t_i_c_ip_a__te__i_n_
9. 听从某人的建议 _f_o_l_lo__w__o_n_e_’_s_a_d__v_ic_e_____
10. 把……考虑在内
高考英语满分书信作文模板建议信
⾼考英语满分书信作⽂模板建议信⾼考英语满分书信作⽂模板:建议信篇⼀:2011⾼考英语满分书信作⽂模板:建议信常⽤表⽰建议的句式段⾸:1.I’m writing to express my viewson/concerning…2. You have asked for some advice concerning… and I will try to giveyou my suggestions.3. I would like to suggest that…4. I am writing in reply to…5. In my opinion, I would say提出建议中:1.I think/believe it would bebetter/very helpful / beneficial ifyou ……2.It is desirable that …是可取的….3.I would like to suggest/ recommendthat …… Why not ……4.It would help to ……. This would5.Perhaps there could be …..段尾:1.I hope that you may consider doing …… 2 I would be ready to further discuss this decision. 3.I trust you will take my suggestions into account.⾼中英语满分书信作⽂模板——建议信Dear ______,①You have asked me for my advice with regard to(关于)______ , and I will try to makesome practical suggestions here. ②In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ______(建议的内容).③I hope you will find theseproposals(提议) useful, and Iwould be ready to discuss thismatter with you to further details. Yours sincerely,Li Ming模板:Dear …,I am writing to make somesuggestions as to……/ I am writing to express my views concerning…./ You have asked me for my advice with regard to … , and I will try to make some constructive suggestions here.In my opinion, you would bewise to …… / I would like to suggest first that ……. With the help of …, you can ……Besides/In addition/What’smore/ Furthermore, if you ……, you would be able to …….Finally/ Last but not least/, youmay consider……. This way …….I sincerely hope that you willtake my suggestions intoconsideration, and your prompt迅速的attention to my suggestions would be highly appreciated./ I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Yours sincerely,Li Hua例⽂:篇⼆:⼴东⾼考英语基础写作建议信建议信写作⼀、基础写作的内容分类1.应⽤⽂(欢迎词,建议信,投诉信,应聘信,⽇记,通知,便条,遗失招领启事,海报)2. ⼈物写照3. 地⽅介绍4. 调查报告(2007⼴东卷:谁是你的偶像)5. 事物介绍(2008 ⼴东卷:奥运⽐赛项⽬射击)6. 新闻采访(2009 近视问题;2010政府禁烟)7. 看图写作(社会现象或寓⾔、成语故事)8. 图表说明(表格,柱状图,曲线图,扇形图如:近10年我国私⼈汽车拥有量的变化)⼆、实例分析(2010深圳五校联考基础写作)在紧张的⾼三备考阶段,各校为了确保教学质量,除了早读和晚⾃习以外,每天⾄少要上9节课,甚⾄周末都要上课,学⽣们有⼤量的作业要完成,感到⾮常疲倦。
高考英语书面表达必备——建议信
高考英语书面表达必备——建议信今天给大家整理的是建议信。
这种类型在真题中出现过多次,2011年新课标卷2考过,近几年出现的较少,学子们必须牢牢掌握。
比如说:常见的提建议的句式,表示建议的单词,等等,比如:suggestion,proposal,advice,recommendation。
具体如下:建议信必备开头结尾开头:【例句一】你在上封信中问我如何快速高效的提高英语,我给你一些有用的并且有帮助的建议。
You have asked me for my advice on how to improve English effectively and efficiently in your last letter, I will give some useful and helpful suggestions.【例句二】你在上封信中说你不知道如何与你的同学相处,我推荐三个实用的建议。
I have received your letter saying that you had troubles on how to get along well with your classmates, I recommend three practical proposals.【例句三】我写信来回答你上封信中关于如何流利准确的说英语的问题。
I am writing in reply to your last letter on how to speak English fluently and accurately.结尾:【例句一】我希望我的建议对你最后的决定有帮助。
I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making.【例句二】我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。
I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account.【例句三】请认真考虑我的建议。
高考英语之建议信共27页文档
66、节制使快乐增加并使享受加强。 ——德 谟克利 特 67、今天应做的事没有做,明天再早也 是耽误 了。——裴斯 泰洛齐 68、决定一个人的一生,以及整个命运 的,只 是一瞬 之间。 ——歌 德 69、懒人无法享受休息之乐。——拉布 克 70、浪费时间是一桩大罪过。——卢梭
1、不要轻言放弃,否则对不起自己。
2、要冒一次险!整个生命就是一场冒险。走得最远的人,常是愿意 去做,并愿意去冒险的人。“稳妥”之船,从未能从岸边走远。-戴尔.卡耐基。
梦 境
3、人生就像一杯没有加糖的咖啡,喝起来是苦涩的,回味起来却有 久久不会退去的余香。
高考英语之建议信4、守业的最好办法就是不断的发展。 5丽,我不愿失 去今生对你的记忆,我不求天长地久的美景,我只要生生世世的轮 回里有你。
备战2023届高考英语写作专题08建议信答题模板+亮点句型讲义
应用文类型7 建议信万能句型靓丽首句篇1 I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to...我很高兴收到你的来信,咨询我如何··..2 I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you someadvice on how to...收到你的电子邮件我很高兴。
在·····的问题上,我正写信给你一些建议。
3 I have received your letter saying that..., I'd like to suggest that...来信收到,得知···.·.,我建议·....4I am writing to express my views concerning...我写信是为了表达我对······的看法。
5 Nowadays, it is generally believed that..., but I think that...如今,人们普遍认为,但是我认为·....6 I know you have trouble in... after reading your letter.在读完你的信后,得知你在·····有问题。
7 I wonder if you have considered the following tips.我想知道你是否考虑过以下方法。
8 As far as I'm concerned, it would be wise to take the following action.就我而言,采取以下行动是明智的。
写作 建议信-新高考英语应用文常用套句及真题案例分析
Fisrt, you should be brave and confident to speak Chinese when you communicate with others. We Chinese are very friendly, so you don’t be afraid to make any mistakes. Second, speak Chinese slowly and clearly when you talk to others. In this way, you can make yourself understood easily. Finally, you can use pictures or drawings and body language. As you know, most of body language is in common in the world.
Yours,
Li Hua
建议信讲义 2022届高考英语写作专题
英语写作专题----如何书写建议信A letter of Suggestion1.什么是建议信?建议信,属于一般功能性的社交书信,写信的目的是为了帮助对方,以便于对方进步,改进和增进彼此友谊或者情谊。
高考英语作文建议信的考点往往在于能否给对方提供一些指导和建议,因此在备考的过程中一些表示建议的语言表达的使用是非常重要的。
因为这种书信的实用性强、需要的普及性高,所以多次出现在高考题中。
考法有时为单纯的建议信的书写,有时会和其他的信体融合,如与求助信的融合等。
2.对接课文(人教版高二选修7 Unit1 A LETTER TO AN ARCHITECT)回顾课文,尝试运用课文中的语言完成下述作文假如你是李华,在报纸中得知Ms Sanders 将负责New Banks town cinema 的残障人士的特别设计,请你写信提出你的建议。
内容包括如下:1)轮椅通道(wheelchair access)2)卫生间3)座椅 (seating)3.书写过程好的作文,要有好的布局谋篇,对于建议信而言三段式非常合适。
第一段:自我介绍-引入主题第二段:详细建议第三段:礼貌结语第一段:自我介绍-引入主题精彩的第一段可以牢牢地吸引阅卷老师的眼球,因此在书写的过程中要谨记言简意赅,主题明确。
I am Li Hua, chairman of the student union, knowing that you are in charge of the designing the………. (人设铺垫)I hope you will not mind my/me writing to ask if you have thought about the needs of….(礼貌询问)So, I am writing to s hare some of my own suggestions. (引入主题)第二段:详细建议第二段考察的是如何给出建议,此段需要注意的问题是避免一直使用一样的句式,如,I suggest…The followings are the detailed suggestions that you could consider. (总述)To begin with/then/finally…(层次分明)*Referring to /regarding to /in terms of/upon…. * 就…而言… (具体阐述)I ‘d like to suggest thatMay I suggest t that….I would like to make a recommendation that… 建议的表达If I were you, I would ….第三段:礼貌结语本段为收尾段落做到礼貌结语即可。
专题08建议信--十年(2012-2021)高考英语真题满分作文技法研究
专题08建议信P a r t1精精准准审审题题【题目要求】(2018全国卷I) 假如你是李华, 你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客, 发邮件向你询问有关习俗, 请你回复邮件, 内容包括:1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪注意:1.词数不少于80;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【审题结构】体裁人称时态结构应用文第一二人称(主要为)一般现在时3段式主题内容关于去中国朋友家做客的建议P a r t2谋谋篇篇布布局局段落要点首段写信目的正文提出建议、说明原因结尾表达期望和祝愿P a r t3思思词词想想句句【常用词汇】1.gve/offer sb. some advice(on) 给某人提建议2.ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见3.as follows 如下4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view 在我看来5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用6.take part in/participate in... 参加7.follow/take/adopt one's advice 采纳某人的建议8.take sth. into account/consideration 把……考虑在内9.with regard to 关于;就10. put forward 提出11.in this regard/in this respect 在这点上/在这方面12.share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事13.with time going on 随着时间的推移14. Be faced with 面临15.take sth. seriously 重视;认真对待【常用句型】1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble ...很遗憾听说你在...有困难。
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专题九建议信经典案例假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom在观看中国改革开放四十周年晚会后,对学写中国汉字很感兴趣,但是感觉很难。
请你写信鼓励他并给他一些练字的建议。
注意:1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇:1. in time 最后,终于 2. be of some help to…… 对……有所帮助范文:Dear Tom,(说明写信缘由)I' m delighted to learn you are interested in learning Chinese characters after watching the gala of the 40th anniversary of reform and opening up. It is true that Chinese characters are difficult to write, especially for foreigners, (It is+ adj.+that主语从句,说明汉字书写困难) but don't worry. I'd like to offer you some practical suggestions.(陈述具体建议) First of all, practice with patience and you'll make progress in time. (“祈使句+and+简单句”结构,简单明了)Furthermore, as proper guidance will help you learn much more easily,it's a good idea to learn some basic writing skills either from a Chinese teacher or from teaching videos on the Internet. (either……or……并列句式,说明学习汉字书写技巧) What's more, I strongly suggest that you use copy books as we Chinese do at our beginning stage.(as引导方式状语从句,说明练习字帖的必要性)(表达愿望) I hope my advice will be of some help to you.Yours,Li Hua 题型分析:高分词汇:1.advice/tip/ suggestion n.建议2. advise/ suggest vt.建议3. beneficial adj.有益的4. benefit n.益处;v.受益于;使受益5. following adj.以下的6. practical adj. 实用的高分短语:1. as far as sb. be concerned 依某人看2. ask for sb's advice 征求某人的建议3. give/ offer sb. advice/tips/suggestions on sth. 在某方面给某人提建议4. have trouble/ difficulty with sth 在某方面有困难5. have trouble/difficulty (in)) doing sth. 做某事有困难6. have problems with sth. 在某方面有问题7. in one's view/opinion 某人认为8.make some suggestions/ advice 提出一些建议9. accept/take/follow one' s advice 接受某人的建议高分句型:一、夺人眼球开头句:1. I am sorry to learn/know/hear that you are now having trouble/difficulty communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.知道/听到现在您在与他人交流方面有些麻烦难,你也可能经常感到孤独,我很难过。
2. I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on……很高兴收到您就……征求建议的来信。
3. Here are/is some tips/suggestions/advice to help you.这里有帮助你的一些建议。
4. I think you can make it if you follow the following the advice below.如果您听从以下建议,我认为您会做到的。
二、亮点出彩的中间句1. Why not ……? If you do this, you can make friends.为什么不……?如果您这样做的话,就会交到朋友。
2. You may as well/had better do……您不妨/最好做……3. In addition, it would be a good idea/a wise choice if you read a book or listen to music. By doing this, you will calm yourself down.另外,看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意/明智的选择。
且通过这样做,您会使自己平静下来。
4. As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/In my view, there’s no need for you to……依我看/我认为,您没必要……5. I'd like to suggest/advise that you should……我建议您…6. Only in this way will you deepen your understanding of Chinese and adapt to the life here more easily.只有用这种方式,您才能加深对汉语的理解并更容易地适应这里的生活。
三、结尾句1. I hope you will find these ideas useful/practical /helpful.我希望您会发现这些办法有用/实用/有帮助2. As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the advice above.如果您遵从以上建议,随着时间的推移,人们会更加了解你,会愿意和您交朋友的。
3. I am certain that if you follow my advice, you'll get along well you’re your classmates.我相信,如果您听从我的建议,您会和同学们相处得很好的。
4. I believe, with your effort, you can manage to get over overcome these difficulties.我相信,通过您的努力,您会成功克服这些困难的。
满分巧模版:Dear _________,I'm delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to__________ (引出对方需要建议的主题)。
I'd like to make some suggestions. /I'm writing to……/ Here are a few suggestions (引出作者的建议).To begin with, you'd better /it is a good idea to_________________. Then, it also helps to_________________. Besides, doing_________________is also a good choice, as_________________. (可以根据要求用不同句式提出建议)I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful.Yours sincerely,Li Hua练习1(江淮名校联考)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter下个月要参加汉语水平考试(HSK),担心过不了,很是焦虑。
请你给他回封邮件,介绍些减压的方法。
1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua范文:Dear Peter,I'm sorry to learn that you are worried about the HSK.When it comes to exam anxiety. It is common among students. However, there are always some way to help you out.First of all, get well prepared before the exam. I suggest not only do you motivate yourself by keeping a positive attitude to it but also study with other diligent students who do the same. Furthermore, make sure you plan your study time well. Actually it is studying the night before or the morning of a test that can only make you tired out. Worse still, it's also stressful to memorize too much information on a tight schedule. More importantly, you'd better wake up a little earlier to have enough time to get ready and eat in the morning because rushing out the door can add to your stress.I hope you will find my suggestions helpful and good luck.YoursLi Hua练习2 假设你是李华,最近你的朋友小涛向你诉说他的困扰:父母不让他利用手机看英语新闻,认为看新闻会影响学习。