2021考前冲刺--短文改错二(解析版)

短文改错（二）专项训练一A few years before, my family went to a seafood festival in Florida. The food was delicious, the weather was lovely, but the boat ride was great. The last thing was to go on helicopter ride. My little sister was so young to go by herself, so I volunteered to accompany with her on the ride. When I got into the helicopter, I attempt to close the door. Airplanes have doors; so do a helicopter. Wrong! The pilot told me that there was no door as they went skywards . I had never been more frightening in my life. It's a good thing which the ride lasted for only 15minutes. No more air rides for me, I swear!【答案】1.【答案】before常与完成时连用，ago常与一般过去时连用。

句意：几年前，我们全家去佛罗里达参加了一次海鲜节。

2.【答案】海鲜好吃，天气很好，坐船的经历也很棒。

三个分句之间为顺承关系，而不是转折关系，故改but为and。

3. 【答案】句意：最后一件事就是乘坐直升机。

ride在句中意为“乘坐；搭乘”，为可数名词，此处表示泛指，故加冠词a。

4. 【答案】句意：我妹妹太小，不能独自前往，因此我主动提出陪她乘坐。

too...to.…意为“太……以至于不能……”。

5. 【答案】accompany“陪伴”为及物动词，故直接跟宾语。

6．【答案】由When引导的时间状语从句中的谓语动词的时态（一般过去时）,可推知主句谓语动词需用一般过去时，故将attempt改为attempted。

7．【答案】句意：飞机有门。

直升机也有门。

根据前一分句中的have可知本句用一般现在时态，主语a helicopter为第三人称单数，故将do改为does。

8. 【答案】“我”和妹妹也在直升机上，所以用代词we作主语。

9．【答案】frightening意为“吓人的；令人害怕的”；frightened意为“感到害怕的”。

错误处表示“感到害怕的”，故用形容词frightened作表语。

10. 【答案】本句中It为形式主语，主语从句为真正的主语，由that引导主语从句。

专项训练二The other day, as I walked to school, I passed small construction area . It was not far away in my school . I notice a man bringing a bunch of things; shoes, blankets, some canned food, and clothing. Perhaps the items were gathered from his family and some of his friend. He started laying it down for people to take. Certainly, I was curious about what things would be going . But I rushed there after school . I saw that much of the items were taken by others. I have read lots of inspired stories of kindness. This is probably the sweetest act of kindness I've been witnessed so far.【答案】1．【答案】句意：几天前，我走路去学校的时候，途经一处小建筑工地。

根据句意可知此处表示泛指，area(区域，领域）为可数名词，故small construction area前加a。

2．【答案】far away from...为固定短语，意为“距离……远”，故将in改为from。

3．【答案】根据首句中的时间状语The other day并结合语境可知，此处叙述过去的动作，故用一般过去时。

4．【答案】some of...意为……中的一些”，of后接可数名词复数形式或者不可数名词。

friend为可数名词，故将friend 改为friends。

5．【答案】此处替代上文提到的a bunch of things,在句中作宾语，故将it改为them。

6. 【答案】句意：当然，我对事情如何发展很好奇。

what在宾语从句中作主语，宾语等成分；how在宾语从句中作方式状语。

根据句意可知此处表示方式，故将what改为how。

7．【答案】作者对事情如何发展很好奇。

因此放学后匆忙赶往那里。

两句之间为因果关系而非转折关系，故将But改为So。

8．【答案】items为名词复数形式，故此处用many。

9．【答案】inspired 卓越的，激动人心的；inspiring鼓舞人心的。

此处修饰stories,故用inspiring。

10. 【答案】witness目睹；主语I与witness之间为主动关系，故将been删除。

专项训练三Dear Lucy,I am very excited to learn that you're coming to Zhangye for travel. Both my parents missed you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. May is best time of the year to visit Zhangye. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many place of interest I want to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves . My house is about three kilometers far away from Xianfu Street, where is full of local restaurants.Best regards,Janet【答案】1. 【答案】句意：我父母都非常想念你。

根据语境可知此处用一般现在时，故将missed改为miss。

2. 【答案】"So+be/助动词/情态动词+主语”意为“……也……”。

根据上句中的miss以及本句的主语our friend可知需将is改为does。

3. 【答案】形容词最高级前面要加the,故在best前加the。

4. 【答案】a few 修饰名词复数形式；a little修饰不可数名词。

rain在此处为不可数名词，故将few改为little。

5. 【答案】根据本句中的neither可推知需将or改为nor。

neither...nor...为固定搭配，意为“既不……也不……”。

6. 【答案】根据so many可知后面用名词复数形式，故将place改为places。

7. 【答案】like介词，意为“像……”，as介词，意为“作为”。

此处指“作为一名志愿者的工作”，故将like改为as。

8. 【答案】句意：你来之后可以和我们住在一起。

主语为you,宾语和主语人称不一致，故宾语不用反身代词，而改用宾格us。

9. 【答案】far away from...意为“离……遥远”；表示距离的数字+away from...意为“离……有多远”。

根据three kilometers 可知需删除far。

10. 【答案】本题考查非限制性定语从句。

先行词为Xianfu Street,关系词在定语从句中作主语，先行词指“物”，故将where 改为which。

专项训练四With time go by, Chris is now a senior three student that devotes himself in his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as a usual, he attended several classes. In the evening, he studied at home until deep into the night. He was too sleepy and tired on Sunday that he couldn't work effective. His father came up and advises him to have a break. Soon they came up with a good ideas. They bought a kite which they liked very much and then the family went to the suburbs Chris enjoyed himself fly the kite. The family had a picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On Monday, Chris was energetic and active in class.【答案】1. 【答案】在with的复合结构中，宾语time与goby“（时间等）流逝”为逻辑上的主动关系，故将go改为going。

2. 【答案】devote oneself to为固定结构，意为“致力于”，故将in改为to。

3. 【答案】as usual为固定短语，意为“像往常一样”，故删除a。

4. 【答案】根据that从句可知此句使用so...that...句型，意为“星期天他太困太累，不能有效地学习。