读后续写：Asurprisebirthdayparty课件高考英语复习备考
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Read for basic information
Basic elements of a story
Who (characters) my parents, friends and I
When (time) Where (place)
on my birthday this year; last Monday, eight o’clock in the evening
r_e_c_e_iv_e_/_o_p_e_n_/_c_o_u_n_t_/ _ta_k_e_s_t_o_c_k_o_fthe presents
_ad_m__ir_e_/_a_p_p_r_e_ci_a_te_/_s_t_a_re_…___ the decorations (colorful balloons, tables and chairs, sheets)
friends presents birthday fun received cheering at
parents surprise
special cake
The underlined words
Character Time
friends, parents birthday
Item
presents, cake
Writing tip 2: Words and expressions of inner feelings in diverse forms
can show the scene vividly.
9
Writing practice
c_u_t_/ _e_at_/_s_h_a_re__ the birthday cake What else is usually done in a birthday party?
Writing tip 1: Specific verbs can be used to show the atmosphere rather
This year, my birthday came off on last Monday. I didn't know that my parents had arranged a special party for me. At eight o'clock in the evening of my lucky birthday, I was alone at home complaining and frowning, and pitying myself for my misfortune. I thought it was going to be a special day filled with presents and fun, but all I received was a “Happy Birthday”.
What was everything?
How would these things be dealt with?
mSuadkdeeanlwy,isthhe lights were on and there stood my parents and friends cheering saitnmg einwaitchhothruesb“eHauatpifpuyl bpirrethsednatys ttoheyyouh”ad carefully prepared for me. It was a gsuivrperaisreoupnadrtyo!f aTphpelaruosoem was beautifully decorated with colorful balloons. bTlaobwletshaencdanchdaleirss were laid and covered with white and contrasting red sheets. tAakgei/gcalnictikc mbiartnhydapyicctuarkeeswas positioned on the innermost table.
A surprise birthday party
1
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Birthdays are typically the occasions for delight and feasting. Family and friends get together on the occasion and convey their regards with the beautiful presents they bring with themselves. I am personally a big fan of birthdays and wait for my birthday approximately a month prior to the day.
Out of the blue in that quiet night, I heard a sudden noise coming from downstairs. Startled and terribly shocked, I suspected that someone broke into the house. Immediately, I tried to phone my parents, but no one answered.
All of a sudden, the electricity was cut off and there was a complete darkness in the house. I couldn't do any thing. Therefore, I decided to go to sleep and end this unlucky day.
than tell directly.
8
Writing practice
Para.1 Now everything was ready and the party was set in motion.
What was my feeling? surprised happy
How to describe positive feelings and emotions?
in our basement
What (event) Why (purpose)
a surprise party to surprise and please me on my birthday
How (reaction)
?
4
Read for plot
After opening the door of
_th_e__b_a_s_e_m_e_n_t_, I found out
Climax
a surprise party organized by_m_y__p_a_r_e_n_ts__a_n_d_f_r_i_en__d.s
I was about to __g_o_t_o_s_l_ee_p_ when the electricity _w_a_s__cu__t _o_ff_ and a sudden
My eyes twinkled with excitement. 激动地两眼放光 My eyes danced with joy and sweetness.
My face/eyes lit up with the hope of…
欢呼雀跃 /高兴极了
We cheered and jumped with joy. It filled my mind with a bright light. A wave of happiness flooded over me. We started to scream with joy.
of fear, I started to calm down. Although in the meantime I heard more noises of people talking, I summoned up some courage and started heading for the basement. As I slowly drew closer to the basement, I guessed there were more than one person, but I found it hard to believe. There couldn't be a lot of people in our basement!
What was everything?
surprised
What is usually done in a birthday party?
What was my feeling?
happy
Para.2 The party was over and the guests began to head off.
Denouement
excited
As a big fan of _b_i_r_th_d_a_y_s_, I wait
for my birthday approximately a
setting month __p_r_io_r__to___ the day.
5
Read for development
Courageously, I opened the door of the basement. There was a complete darkness. There wasn't a single noise. However, as I approached, I heard some laughter and confirmed that there were people. Suddenly, the lights were on and there stood my parents and friends cheering at me with the beautiful presents they had carefully prepared for me. It was a surprise party! The room was beautifully decorated with colorful balloons. Tables and chairs were laid and covered with white and contrasting red sheets. A gigantic birthday cake was positioned on the innermost table.
Fsaullrinpgrised action
Resolution
noise came from dowRnisstainirgs.
action This year for my birthday, I disappointed
t“h_oi_nHu_gc_ahi_ptt_piIn_yr_geB_ci_ienr_itvc_he_iddd_a_eny_no_tth”i.ng but a
Action
received, cheering at
Feeling
special, fun, surprise
6
Read for development
excited disappointed
Para.1 Now everything was ready and the party was set in motion.
How did we say goodbye to the guest?
grateful
What’s my feeling?
satisfied
Theme?
Writing preparation
7
Writing practice
Para.1 Now everything was ready and the party was set in motion.
Read for basic information
Basic elements of a story
Who (characters) my parents, friends and I
When (time) Where (place)
on my birthday this year; last Monday, eight o’clock in the evening
r_e_c_e_iv_e_/_o_p_e_n_/_c_o_u_n_t_/ _ta_k_e_s_t_o_c_k_o_fthe presents
_ad_m__ir_e_/_a_p_p_r_e_ci_a_te_/_s_t_a_re_…___ the decorations (colorful balloons, tables and chairs, sheets)
friends presents birthday fun received cheering at
parents surprise
special cake
The underlined words
Character Time
friends, parents birthday
Item
presents, cake
Writing tip 2: Words and expressions of inner feelings in diverse forms
can show the scene vividly.
9
Writing practice
c_u_t_/ _e_at_/_s_h_a_re__ the birthday cake What else is usually done in a birthday party?
Writing tip 1: Specific verbs can be used to show the atmosphere rather
This year, my birthday came off on last Monday. I didn't know that my parents had arranged a special party for me. At eight o'clock in the evening of my lucky birthday, I was alone at home complaining and frowning, and pitying myself for my misfortune. I thought it was going to be a special day filled with presents and fun, but all I received was a “Happy Birthday”.
What was everything?
How would these things be dealt with?
mSuadkdeeanlwy,isthhe lights were on and there stood my parents and friends cheering saitnmg einwaitchhothruesb“eHauatpifpuyl bpirrethsednatys ttoheyyouh”ad carefully prepared for me. It was a gsuivrperaisreoupnadrtyo!f aTphpelaruosoem was beautifully decorated with colorful balloons. bTlaobwletshaencdanchdaleirss were laid and covered with white and contrasting red sheets. tAakgei/gcalnictikc mbiartnhydapyicctuarkeeswas positioned on the innermost table.
A surprise birthday party
1
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Birthdays are typically the occasions for delight and feasting. Family and friends get together on the occasion and convey their regards with the beautiful presents they bring with themselves. I am personally a big fan of birthdays and wait for my birthday approximately a month prior to the day.
Out of the blue in that quiet night, I heard a sudden noise coming from downstairs. Startled and terribly shocked, I suspected that someone broke into the house. Immediately, I tried to phone my parents, but no one answered.
All of a sudden, the electricity was cut off and there was a complete darkness in the house. I couldn't do any thing. Therefore, I decided to go to sleep and end this unlucky day.
than tell directly.
8
Writing practice
Para.1 Now everything was ready and the party was set in motion.
What was my feeling? surprised happy
How to describe positive feelings and emotions?
in our basement
What (event) Why (purpose)
a surprise party to surprise and please me on my birthday
How (reaction)
?
4
Read for plot
After opening the door of
_th_e__b_a_s_e_m_e_n_t_, I found out
Climax
a surprise party organized by_m_y__p_a_r_e_n_ts__a_n_d_f_r_i_en__d.s
I was about to __g_o_t_o_s_l_ee_p_ when the electricity _w_a_s__cu__t _o_ff_ and a sudden
My eyes twinkled with excitement. 激动地两眼放光 My eyes danced with joy and sweetness.
My face/eyes lit up with the hope of…
欢呼雀跃 /高兴极了
We cheered and jumped with joy. It filled my mind with a bright light. A wave of happiness flooded over me. We started to scream with joy.
of fear, I started to calm down. Although in the meantime I heard more noises of people talking, I summoned up some courage and started heading for the basement. As I slowly drew closer to the basement, I guessed there were more than one person, but I found it hard to believe. There couldn't be a lot of people in our basement!
What was everything?
surprised
What is usually done in a birthday party?
What was my feeling?
happy
Para.2 The party was over and the guests began to head off.
Denouement
excited
As a big fan of _b_i_r_th_d_a_y_s_, I wait
for my birthday approximately a
setting month __p_r_io_r__to___ the day.
5
Read for development
Courageously, I opened the door of the basement. There was a complete darkness. There wasn't a single noise. However, as I approached, I heard some laughter and confirmed that there were people. Suddenly, the lights were on and there stood my parents and friends cheering at me with the beautiful presents they had carefully prepared for me. It was a surprise party! The room was beautifully decorated with colorful balloons. Tables and chairs were laid and covered with white and contrasting red sheets. A gigantic birthday cake was positioned on the innermost table.
Fsaullrinpgrised action
Resolution
noise came from dowRnisstainirgs.
action This year for my birthday, I disappointed
t“h_oi_nHu_gc_ahi_ptt_piIn_yr_geB_ci_ienr_itvc_he_iddd_a_eny_no_tth”i.ng but a
Action
received, cheering at
Feeling
special, fun, surprise
6
Read for development
excited disappointed
Para.1 Now everything was ready and the party was set in motion.
How did we say goodbye to the guest?
grateful
What’s my feeling?
satisfied
Theme?
Writing preparation
7
Writing practice
Para.1 Now everything was ready and the party was set in motion.